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2025-2026学年下学期七年级英语单元知识基础巩固(外研版2024)
Unit 3 Food matters写作讲练
目录
第一部分 写作主题阐释锁定基础 高效学习
第二部分 必备词句积累用法精析 变式巩固
第三部分 写作强化训练深度优化 扫清盲区
◇Part 01 写作主题阐释
一、写作话题
1. 主题内涵
本单元写作话题核心围绕“健康饮食”展开,引导学生关注自身饮食生活,学会用英语清晰描述个人三餐安排,同时树立健康饮食的意识。通过写作,不仅能巩固英语词汇、句型的运用,还能培养学生观察生活、表达自我的能力,体现“人与自我”中“关注自身生活质量、养成良好习惯”的核心内涵,让学生在语言实践中理解饮食与健康的关系,传递积极健康的生活理念。
2.审题要点
(1) 核心内容:需包含两部分——自身三餐的饮食习惯(早餐、午餐、晚餐分别吃什么、怎么吃);对“健康饮食”的看法(提出具体的健康饮食建议)。
(2) 语言要求:使用七年级上册核心词汇和句型,语法正确(一般现在时为主,主谓一致),表达流畅,无明显拼写错误;句式以简单句、并列句为主,可适当运用简单的复合句(如if、because引导的句子)。
(3) 语境要求:以“向他人介绍”为语境,语气亲切、自然,符合初中生的表达特点,避免使用复杂、生僻的词汇和句式。
二、写作框架
采用“总—分—总”结构,清晰呈现个人饮食习惯和健康饮食建议,具体框架示例如下:
1. 开头(总起):引出话题,简要说明自己重视饮食健康
开门见山,点明主题,用简单句表达自己对饮食的态度。
例:I have a healthy eating habit because I think good food can help me study better.(我有一个健康的饮食习惯,因为我认为好的食物能帮助我更好地学习。)
2. 中间(分述):分两点展开,详细介绍相关内容
(1) 介绍个人三餐饮食习惯:分别说明早餐、午餐、晚餐的食物、进食时间或相关习惯,用连贯的句子衔接。
例:For breakfast, I usually eat a bowl of porridge, an egg and a glass of milk. It’s quick and healthy. For lunch, I have rice, some vegetables and a little meat at school. For dinner, I often eat noodles or dumplings with my family.(早餐,我通常吃一碗粥、一个鸡蛋和一杯牛奶,既快捷又健康。午餐,我在学校吃米饭、一些蔬菜和一点肉。晚餐,我经常和家人一起吃面条或饺子。)
(2) 提出健康饮食的建议:用简单的句式列举2-3条具体建议,贴合初中生的认知。
例:In my opinion, we should eat more vegetables and fruits every day. We shouldn’t eat too much junk food like chips or hamburgers. Also, we need to eat on time and not skip any meals.(在我看来,我们应该每天多吃蔬菜和水果。我们不应该吃太多像薯片或汉堡这样的垃圾食品。而且,我们需要按时吃饭,不跳过任何一餐。)
3. 结尾(总结):呼应开头,强调健康饮食的重要性
简洁总结,再次表达对健康饮食的重视,升华主题。
例:A healthy eating habit is important for our body and study. I will keep my good habit and hope everyone can have healthy meals too.(健康的饮食习惯对我们的身体和学习都很重要。我会保持我的好习惯,也希望每个人都能吃健康的食物。)
◇Part 02 必备词句积累
1. 主题词汇
(1) 三餐类词汇
breakfast 早餐:I have breakfast at 7 o’clock every morning.(我每天早上7点吃早餐。)
lunch 午餐:My mother makes delicious lunch for me every day.(我妈妈每天给我做美味的午餐。)
dinner 晚餐:We often have dinner together as a family.(我们经常一家人一起吃晚餐。)
meal 一餐,一顿饭:I eat three meals a day regularly.(我每天规律地吃三顿饭。)
breakfast time 早餐时间:Breakfast time is from 7:00 to 7:30 in our family.(我们家的早餐时间是7点到7点半。)
lunch break 午休,午餐时间:We have a 40-minute lunch break at school.(我们在学校有40分钟的午休时间。)
(2) 食物类词汇(主食、蔬菜、水果、肉类、饮品等)
rice 米饭:I eat a bowl of rice for lunch every day.(我每天午餐吃一碗米饭。)
noodles 面条:My favorite food for dinner is noodles.(我晚餐最喜欢的食物是面条。)
dumplings 饺子:We eat dumplings on some important days.(我们在一些重要的日子吃饺子。)
porridge 粥:Porridge is easy to eat and good for our stomach.(粥容易消化,对我们的胃有好处。)
bread 面包:I often eat a piece of bread with milk for breakfast.(我经常早餐吃一片面包加牛奶。)
egg 鸡蛋:An egg a day is good for our health.(一天一个鸡蛋对我们的健康有好处。)
vegetable 蔬菜:We should eat different kinds of vegetables every day.(我们应该每天吃各种各样的蔬菜。)
tomato 西红柿:I like eating tomatoes because they are fresh and delicious.(我喜欢吃西红柿,因为它们新鲜又美味。)
potato 土豆:My mother often makes potato chips for me on weekends.(我妈妈经常在周末给我做薯片。)
carrot 胡萝卜:Carrots are good for our eyes.(胡萝卜对我们的眼睛有好处。)
cabbage 卷心菜,白菜:Cabbage is a common vegetable in our daily life.(白菜是我们日常生活中常见的蔬菜。)
spinach 菠菜:Spinach is rich in nutrition.(菠菜富含营养。)
fruit 水果:Eating more fruit can make us healthy.(多吃水果能让我们健康。)
apple 苹果:I eat an apple every afternoon as a snack.(我每天下午吃一个苹果当零食。)
banana 香蕉:Bananas are easy to carry and delicious.(香蕉容易携带,而且美味。)
orange 橙子:Oranges are full of vitamin C.(橙子富含维生素C。)
grape 葡萄:I like red grapes because they are sweet.(我喜欢红葡萄,因为它们很甜。)
pear 梨:Pears are good for relieving thirst.(梨有助于解渴。)
strawberry 草莓:Strawberries are my favorite fruit.(草莓是我最喜欢的水果。)
meat 肉:We need to eat a little meat every day for energy.(我们每天需要吃一点肉来获取能量。)
chicken 鸡肉:Chicken is a kind of healthy meat.(鸡肉是一种健康的肉类。)
beef 牛肉:Beef is rich in protein.(牛肉富含蛋白质。)
pork 猪肉:My family often eats pork for dinner.(我们家经常晚餐吃猪肉。)
fish 鱼:Eating fish is good for our brain.(吃鱼对我们的大脑有好处。)
milk 牛奶:I drink a glass of milk every morning.(我每天早上喝一杯牛奶。)
juice 果汁:I like drinking orange juice for breakfast.(我喜欢早餐喝橙汁。)
water 水:We should drink enough water every day.(我们每天应该喝足够的水。)
tea 茶:My father likes drinking tea after dinner.(我爸爸喜欢晚餐后喝茶。)
(3) 健康饮食相关词汇
healthy 健康的:I have a healthy eating habit.(我有一个健康的饮食习惯。)
unhealthy 不健康的:Eating too much junk food is unhealthy.(吃太多垃圾食品是不健康的。)
nutritious 有营养的:Vegetables and fruits are nutritious.(蔬菜和水果是有营养的。)
fresh 新鲜的:We should buy fresh vegetables and fruits.(我们应该买新鲜的蔬菜和水果。)
delicious 美味的:My mother’s cooking is always delicious.(我妈妈做的饭总是很美味。)
junk food 垃圾食品:We shouldn’t eat too much junk food.(我们不应该吃太多垃圾食品。)
snack 零食:I eat a small snack between lunch and dinner.(我在午餐和晚餐之间吃一点零食。)
balance 平衡:We need a balance of different kinds of food.(我们需要各种食物的平衡。)
regularly 规律地:I eat meals regularly every day.(我每天规律地吃饭。)
on time 按时:We must eat breakfast on time.(我们必须按时吃早餐。)
skip 跳过:Don’t skip breakfast, it’s very important.(不要跳过早餐,它非常重要。)
enough 足够的:We need to drink enough water every day.(我们每天需要喝足够的水。)
too much 太多:Don’t eat too much meat.(不要吃太多肉。)
a little 一点:I eat a little meat for lunch.(我午餐吃一点肉。)
a lot of 许多:I eat a lot of vegetables every day.(我每天吃很多蔬菜。)
2. 主题句式
(1) 描述个人三餐饮食习惯的句式
1. I usually eat + 食物 + for breakfast/lunch/dinner. 我通常早餐/午餐/晚餐吃……
例:I usually eat an egg and a glass of milk for breakfast. 译文:我通常早餐吃一个鸡蛋和一杯牛奶。
2. For breakfast/lunch/dinner, I often + 动作 + 食物. 早餐/午餐/晚餐,我经常……(食物)。
例:For lunch, I often have rice and some vegetables. 译文:午餐,我经常吃米饭和一些蔬菜。
3. My breakfast/lunch/dinner is + 食物. 我的早餐/午餐/晚餐是……
例:My dinner is noodles and vegetables. 译文:我的晚餐是面条和蔬菜。
4. I like eating + 食物 + for + 三餐. 我喜欢早餐/午餐/晚餐吃……
例:I like eating dumplings for dinner. 译文:我喜欢晚餐吃饺子。
5. I don’t like eating + 食物 + for + 三餐. 我不喜欢早餐/午餐/晚餐吃……
例:I don’t like eating hamburgers for lunch. 译文:我不喜欢午餐吃汉堡。
6. I have + 食物 + at + 时间 + for + 三餐. 我在……点吃……作为早餐/午餐/晚餐。
例:I have breakfast at 7:00 a.m. every day. 译文:我每天早上7点吃早餐。
7. Sometimes I eat + 食物 + for + 三餐. 有时候我早餐/午餐/晚餐吃……
例:Sometimes I eat bread for breakfast. 译文:有时候我早餐吃面包。
8. I often eat + 三餐 + with my family. 我经常和家人一起吃……
例:I often eat dinner with my family. 译文:我经常和家人一起吃晚餐。
9. My favorite food for + 三餐 + is + 食物. 我早餐/午餐/晚餐最喜欢的食物是……
例:My favorite food for breakfast is milk. 译文:我早餐最喜欢的食物是牛奶。
10. I usually have a + 形容词 + breakfast/lunch/dinner. 我通常吃一顿……的早餐/午餐/晚餐。
例:I usually have a healthy and quick breakfast. 译文:我通常吃一顿健康又快捷的早餐。
11. I never eat + 食物 + for + 三餐. 我从来不吃……作为早餐/午餐/晚餐。
例:I never eat junk food for breakfast. 译文:我从来不吃垃圾食品作为早餐。
12. After + 三餐, I often + 动作. 吃完早餐/午餐/晚餐后,我经常……
例:After dinner, I often drink a cup of tea. 译文:吃完晚餐后,我经常喝一杯茶。
(2) 表达健康饮食建议的句式
1. In my opinion, we should + 动词原形. 在我看来,我们应该……
例:In my opinion, we should eat more vegetables. 译文:在我看来,我们应该多吃蔬菜。
2. We shouldn’t + 动词原形. 我们不应该……
例:We shouldn’t eat too much junk food. 译文:我们不应该吃太多垃圾食品。
3. It’s important for us to + 动词原形. 对我们来说,……是很重要的。
例:It’s important for us to have a healthy eating habit. 译文:对我们来说,有一个健康的饮食习惯是很重要的。
4. We need to + 动词原形. 我们需要……
例:We need to eat on time every day. 译文:我们需要每天按时吃饭。
5. We should eat + 数量 + 食物. 我们应该吃……(数量)的……(食物)。
例:We should eat a lot of fruits every day. 译文:我们应该每天吃很多水果。
6. Don’t + 动词原形. 不要……
例:Don’t skip breakfast. 译文:不要跳过早餐。
7. We had better + 动词原形. 我们最好……
例:We had better drink enough water every day. 译文:我们最好每天喝足够的水。
8. Eating + 食物 + is good for our health. 吃……对我们的健康有好处。
例:Eating fish is good for our health. 译文:吃鱼对我们的健康有好处。
9. We should have a balanced diet. 我们应该有均衡的饮食。
例:We should have a balanced diet, not just eat one kind of food. 译文:我们应该有均衡的饮食,不要只吃一种食物。
10. It’s not good for us to + 动词原形. 对我们来说,……是不好的。
例:It’s not good for us to eat too much meat. 译文:对我们来说,吃太多肉是不好的。
11. We can eat + 食物 + instead of + 食物. 我们可以吃……来代替……
例:We can eat fruits instead of junk food as snacks. 译文:我们可以吃水果来代替垃圾食品当零食。
12. We should eat different kinds of + 食物. 我们应该吃各种各样的……(食物)。
例:We should eat different kinds of vegetables every day. 译文:我们应该每天吃各种各样的蔬菜。
(3) 衔接与总结句式
1. First, ... Second, ... Finally, ... 首先……,其次……,最后……
例:First, we should eat more vegetables. Second, we shouldn’t eat junk food. Finally, we need to eat on time. 译文:首先,我们应该多吃蔬菜。其次,我们不应该吃垃圾食品。最后,我们需要按时吃饭。
2. Because + 句子, ... 因为……,所以……
例:Because I want to be healthy, I have a good eating habit. 译文:因为我想保持健康,所以我有一个良好的饮食习惯。
3. So, ... 所以,……
例:Eating healthy food makes us strong, so we should keep a good eating habit. 译文:吃健康的食物让我们强壮,所以我们应该保持良好的饮食习惯。
4. In a word, ... 总之,……
例:In a word, a healthy eating habit is important for everyone. 译文:总之,健康的饮食习惯对每个人都很重要。
5. I think that + 句子. 我认为……
例:I think that eating on time is good for our stomach. 译文:我认为按时吃饭对我们的胃有好处。
6. Also, / Besides, ... 而且,此外……
例:We should eat more fruits. Also, we need to drink enough water. 译文:我们应该多吃水果。而且,我们需要喝足够的水。
7. Therefore, ... 因此,……
例:We need to keep a healthy eating habit. Therefore, we should avoid junk food. 译文:我们需要保持健康的饮食习惯。因此,我们应该避免垃圾食品。
巩|固|练|习
根据中文提示,完成下列英语句子,每空一词(含缩写)。
1. 我通常早餐吃一个鸡蛋和一杯牛奶。
I usually ______ an egg and a glass of milk ______ breakfast.
2. 在我看来,我们应该多吃蔬菜和水果。
In my opinion, we ______ ______ more vegetables and fruits.
3. 吃太多垃圾食品对我们的健康不好。
Eating too much junk food ______ ______ ______ our health.
4. 我们每天需要喝足够的水。
We ______ ______ drink enough water every day.
5. 我的晚餐最喜欢的食物是面条。
My favorite food ______ ______ is noodles.
【答案】
1. eat; for 2. should eat 3. is bad for 4. need to 5. for dinner
【解析】
1. 考查“吃某物作为某餐”的固定表达,“eat sth for + 三餐”,主语I为第一人称,时态为一般现在时,故第一空填eat,第二空填for。
2. 考查“应该做某事”的句式,“should + 动词原形”,“吃”为eat,故填should eat。
3. 考查“对……不好”的固定短语,“be bad for”,主语为动名词短语(Eating too much junk food),视为单数,时态为一般现在时,故填is bad for。
4. 考查“需要做某事”的句式,“need to + 动词原形”,主语we为复数,时态为一般现在时,故填need to。
5. 考查“某餐最喜欢的食物”的表达,“favorite food for + 三餐”,“晚餐”为dinner,故填for dinner。
范|文|例|析
范文
简析
①More and more people get sick because of eating habits.
I think I have a healthy eating habit.I often eat eggs, bread and milk for breakfast.②And for lunch, I often eat vegetables and rice. I eat carrots and fish for dinner.If you want to have a healthy eating habit, first ③you should eat more vegetables, more fruit and less meat. Second, you should eat more home-made food instead of junk food outside.
④All in all, if you want to be healthy, you should have a good eating habit. You should sleep well and exercise more.Health is the most important thing in our life.⑤I wish you are healthy.
①开篇引出话题。
②灵活恰当地运用表示并列的连词and。
③运用比较级表示要健康饮食。
④运用条件状语从句表达决心。
⑤运用wish表达祝愿,收篇结尾。
【优化策略】
1. 词汇优化:准确运用,丰富表达
(1) 避免重复:描述三餐食物时,避免反复使用“eat”,可替换为“have”(如have breakfast/lunch/dinner),使表达更丰富。
(2) 精准运用:区分“a little”(修饰不可数名词,如a little meat)和“a few”(修饰可数名词复数,如a few vegetables),避免语法错误;正确使用健康饮食相关形容词(如healthy, fresh, nutritious),增强语言的准确性。
(3) 适当拓展:在基础词汇的基础上,适当加入简单的高频短语(如a balanced diet, on time, skip meals),提升文章的丰富度,贴合单元主题。
2. 句式优化:简洁流畅,多样表达
(1) 避免单一:不要通篇使用简单句,可适当运用并列句(用and, but连接)和简单复合句(如because, if引导的从句),使句式更灵活。例如,将“I have a healthy eating habit. Good food can help me study better.”改为“I have a healthy eating habit because good food can help me study better.”
(2) 规范句式:严格按照写作要求,正确使用“描述三餐”和“提出建议”的核心句式,避免句式混淆(如区分“should do”和“need to do”)。
(3) 衔接自然:合理使用衔接词(如first, second, also, besides, in a word),使文章段落之间、句子之间衔接流畅,逻辑更清晰。
3. 结构优化:框架清晰,重点突出
(1) 紧扣框架:严格遵循“总—分—总”结构,开头引出话题,中间分两点(个人三餐、健康建议)展开,结尾总结,不遗漏核心内容。
(2) 详略得当:中间分述部分,个人三餐的描述可稍详细(说明具体食物、时间或习惯),健康建议部分列举2-3条即可,避免详略失衡。
(3) 首尾呼应:开头提出“重视健康饮食”,结尾再次强调“健康饮食的重要性”,使文章结构更完整,主题更突出。
4. 内容优化:贴合学情,真实具体
(1) 贴合生活:描述个人三餐时,选择初中生熟悉的食物(如米饭、面条、鸡蛋、牛奶等),避免使用生僻、复杂的食物名称,使内容更真实、贴近生活。
(2) 具体可感:提出健康饮食建议时,避免空泛表述,要具体可行(如“多吃蔬菜和水果”“按时吃饭”“不吃太多垃圾食品”),贴合七年级学生的认知水平。
(3) 避免错误:检查内容是否符合逻辑,避免出现矛盾(如“我不吃蔬菜”却建议“多吃蔬菜”);同时检查语法、拼写错误,确保文章规范、流畅。
◇Part 03 写作强化训练
提|升|练|习
1.健康饮食是保持身体健康一个重要的部分。假设你是Teng Fei,请根据要点提示,以“My Three Meals a Day”为题,写一篇英语短文介绍你一日三餐的饮食,并对健康饮食提出建议。
要点提示:
1. What do you have for three meals a day?
2. What do you think of your three meals a day?
3. What’s your advice for healthy eating?
注意事项:
1. 内容必须包含要点提示,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 书写工整,卷面整洁,句子流畅;
3. 文中不得透露个人信息;
4. 词数80左右。文章开头已经给出,但不计入总词数。
My Three Meals a Day
Hello! My name is Teng Fei. I’d like to tell you something about my three meals a day.
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2.假如你是李华,近日你的英国笔友Rose发来电子邮件,诉说自己容易感冒,不爱运动及体型肥胖的烦恼。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回一封邮件,谈一谈你对这些问题的看法。词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:confident adj.自信的;stay away from 远离;believe in 相信
Dear Li Hua,
I’m not happy these days because of my poor health. I often catch a cold. I don’t like exercising and I’m too heavy. Next month, we will move (搬) to a new city and I’ll go to a new school. I am afraid (担心) that the students in the new school will laugh at (嘲笑) me. Can you help me?
Dear Rose,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re not happy these days. Here is some advice for you.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
3.假设你是李华,Ben是你新认识的美国笔友。他最近给你发来邮件,想了解你的个人情况。请根据以下提示,给他回一封邮件。要求不少于70词(开头已给出,不计入总词数),语句通顺,句意连贯,语法正确,包含以下方面,可适当发挥:
1.你的爱好和特长(如运动等);
2.你的日常生活习惯(要求使用频率副词);
3.你喜欢的动物及其原因;
4.你喜欢的食物及其原因(如健康、美味等)。
Dear Ben,
Thanks for your email. I am happy to tell you about myself.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.健康的生活方式终身有益。我校英文报健康版面现征稿,假如你是林慧,打算写一篇以“My healthy lifestyle”为话题的稿件投稿。请你根据以下提示内容,分享在日常生活中你是如何保持健康的生活方式的。
Every day
Always
Often
Hardly ever
要求:
1.包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.70词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Keeping a healthy lifestyle is important to every one of us. Here is how I keep fit in my daily life.
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5.当今社会人们的生活越来越丰富,这也使得人们越来越重视健康问题,许多人开始追求健康的生活方式,作为一名中学生,你是如何保持健康的?请你以“Keep Fit”为题,写一篇短文,介绍一下自己保持健康的方式。
要求: (1) 不少于80词; (2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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6.假设你校英文俱乐部正在举办一个以“合理饮食,吃出健康”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 健康饮食的重要性;
2. 介绍你的饮食习惯(包括吃和喝至少两个方面);
3. 号召大家养成健康的饮食习惯。
注意:1. 词数为80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇:eating habit (饮食习惯),be good for,energy (精力,活力)
Eat well, keep healthy
Now, more and more students are too heavy. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.你校将开展“How to be a healthy student”的演讲比赛,假如你是李华,请结合以下思维导图写一篇短文,进行演讲。
内容包括:
1. 举行此次演讲比赛的主题;
2. 从饮食习惯、运动、心情等方面给出建议,请再添加一方面。
注意:
1. 短文需包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80左右(文章开头、结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
How to be a healthy student
Hello, everyone! I’m happy to give a talk here.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
8.假如你是张鹏,被学校评为“行为习惯优秀之星”,请你根据以下提示,向同学们介绍你的优秀行为习惯,号召大家端正日常行为,争做文明学生。
内容:
你的喜好
喜欢的动物及原因
你的健康生活方式
饮食习惯、运动项目及频率
你需要遵守的校规、家规
在校:不能使用手机、专注于学习等
在家:先完成作业、晚上不和朋友闲逛等
要求:
1. 不少于70词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 书写工整、规范:
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
参考词汇:introduce v. 介绍
Hello, boys and girls. My name’s Zhang Peng. It’s my honour to be a Star of Excellent Behaviors and Habits. Let me introduce myself.
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9.假如你是李明,这学期被评为“阳光健康好少年”,请根据下面提示,从运动和饮食等方面介绍你自己健康的生活习惯。
1. 必须包含所有提示要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确,条理清楚,字迹工整;
3. 不少于70词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Hello, boys and girls. My name is Li Ming. It’s my honor to be a Sunshine Healthy teenager.
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10.假如你叫李华,下周你校英语社团将要举办一次主题为“My healthy life”的演讲活动。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,用英文写一篇80词左右的演讲稿介绍自己的生活方式,可适当拓展。
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参考答案
1.
My Three Meals a Day
Hello! My name is Teng Fei. I’d like to tell you something about my three meals a day. For breakfast, I have noodles and milk. Sometimes I have bread and porridge. I also have an apple or a banana. I have lunch at school. I usually have rice, meat and vegetables. I like Gongbao chicken best. What about dinner? I have rice, tomato soup and Mapo tofu. After dinner, I have some fruit. I think my three meals a day are healthy and delicious. If we want to keep fit, we must have good eating habits and a balanced diet. And we must eat healthy food.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,介绍自己的饮食习惯并提出健康饮食的建议。
②时态:一般现在时为主。
③提示:文章应包括三方面:一日三餐饮食内容、对三餐的看法、关于健康饮食的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开头点明写作目的,介绍三餐饮食。
第二步:分别介绍早餐、午餐和晚餐的内容,适当加入喜欢的食物。
第三步:表明对自己三餐的看法。
第四步:提出健康饮食的建议并作总结。
[亮点词汇]
①For breakfast 早餐
②have lunch 吃午餐
③balanced diet 均衡饮食
④keep fit 保持健康
[高分句型]
①I usually have rice, meat and vegetables, and I like Gongbao chicken best.(and连接并列句)
②I think my three meals a day are healthy and delicious.(宾语从句结构)
③If we want to keep fit, we must have good eating habits and a balanced diet.(if引导条件状语从句)
2.
Dear Rose,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re not happy these days. Here is some advice for you.
First, to stay away from colds, drink warm water every morning and eat fruit like apples and oranges. They give you vitamins and make your body strong. Second, don’t be afraid of sports. Doing exercise can help you keep fit and make you feel happy. You can choose a sport you like. When you move to your new city, join the school sports club. You will meet friendly classmates who will believe in you and never laugh at you. Lastly, you should be confident. Believe in yourself and try to make more friends in the new school.
I hope my advice will help you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示信息写作,注意不要遗漏要点,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,安慰对方;
第二步,提出具体建议;
第三步,希望建议有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid of害怕
②believe in相信
③laugh at嘲笑
[高分句型]
①Doing exercise can help you keep fit and make you feel happy.(动名词作主语)
②When you move to your new city, join the school sports club.(时间状语从句)
3.
Dear Ben,
Thanks for your email. I am happy to tell you about myself.
I like sports very much, especially playing basketball. I’m quite good at it. In my daily life, I always get up early. I often run for half an hour in the morning. I usually go to bed before 10 p.m. to stay healthy. My favorite animal is the dog. I think it is very loyal and friendly. They can be good friends. As for food, I love eating fruits best, like apples. They are not only delicious but also very healthy. They give me energy.
What about you? Please write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍一些个人情况;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①very much 非常
②get up early 早起
③stay healthy 保持健康
④As for 至于
[高分句型]
①I think it is very loyal and friendly.(宾语从句)
②They are not only delicious but also very healthy.(并列结构)
4.
Keeping a healthy lifestyle is important to every one of us. Here is how I keep fit in my daily life.
I have a regular sleep schedule. I go to bed at 10:00 p.m. and get up at 6:30 a.m. every day. I always play sports with my friends, like running and skipping rope. It makes me energetic. I often eat a lot of fruits and vegetables, which are good for my health. And I hardly ever have junk food such as hamburgers and French fries.
By keeping these healthy habits, I stay healthy and full of energy. I can focus well on my study and enjoy my daily life. I believe that a healthy lifestyle is the key to a happy life, and I will keep it.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:需涵盖表格中“Every day、Always、Often、Hardly ever”对应的健康习惯要点,注意语言简洁连贯,符合词数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图;
第二步:具体阐述内容。按表格分类,依次描述;
第三步:书写结语。总结健康习惯带来的积极结果,强化主题。
[亮点词汇]
①keep a healthy lifestyle保持健康生活方式
②have junk food吃垃圾食品
③stay energetic保持精力充沛
[高分句型]
①I often eat a lot of fruits and vegetables, which are good for my health.(which引导的定语从句)
②I believe that a healthy lifestyle is the key to a happy life, (that引导的宾语从句)
5.
Keep Fit Nowadays, many people care about health. As a middle school student, I try my best to keep fit.
First, I eat healthily. I have bread and milk for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, I eat vegetables and some meat, and never too much junk food like chips. Second, I exercise often. I play basketball with classmates after school. On weekends, I sometimes walk with my family in the park. Third, I sleep well. I go to bed at 9:30 pm and get up at 6:30 am. Enough sleep helps me study and stay energetic.
Keeping fit is easy. Stick to these habits, and we can all stay healthy.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:围绕 “饮食、运动、睡眠” 展开,有具体细节,要点无遗漏。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借 “人们关注健康” 引入,以中学生身份过渡到自身健康做法;
第二步,具体介绍保持健康的方法;
第三步,书写总结,发表感想。
[亮点词汇]
①junk food垃圾食品
②energetic精力充沛的
③stick to坚持
[高分句型]
①For lunch and dinner, I eat vegetables and some meat, and never too much junk food like chips.(and连接并列成分)
②Stick to these habits, and we can all stay healthy.(祈使句 + and 句式)
6.
Eat well, keep healthy
Now more and more students are too heavy. This is often because of unhealthy eating habits. Eating well is very important for our health. It gives us energy and helps us study better.
For me, I try to have a balanced diet. I eat fruits and vegetables daily. For drinks, I mostly drink water or milk. I avoid eating too much fast food and sugary drinks.
Let’s all develop good eating habits. Choose healthy foods and drinks. Remember, a healthy body leads to a healthy mind.
Thank you.
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇演讲稿,主题是健康饮食,面向同学们提出建议和号召。
② 时态:以一般现在时为主,既说明饮食习惯的重要性,也介绍个人习惯和建议。
③ 提示:需涵盖三部分——健康饮食的重要性、个人饮食习惯(吃+喝)、号召大家保持健康饮食。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开头点题,引出健康饮食的重要性;
第二步:结合自身情况介绍饮食习惯;
第三步:总结并号召同学们保持良好的饮食习惯。
[亮点词汇]
① have a balanced diet 均衡饮食
② too much 太多
③ leads to 导致
[高分句型]
① It gives us energy and helps us study better.(并列结构)
② I avoid eating too much fast food and sugary drinks.(动名词作宾语)
7.
How to be a healthy student
Hello, everyone! I’m happy to give a talk here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice.
First, we should have healthy living habits. Washing hands often before meals is a good habit. Second, we should do sports every day. We can play basketball, football, run and so on. Third, we should have healthy eating habits and we should have more fruit and vegetables. Breakfast gives us energy for the morning. Also, we should drink enough water every day. Last, we should be happy. Happiness is important for our health.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要交代举行此次演讲比赛的目的;
第二步,具体交代如何成为一名健康的学生;
第三步,总结自己的观点并表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①be important for对……很重要
②energy能量
③do sports做运动
[高分句型]
①Washing hands often before meals is a good habit. (动名词作主语)
②Third, we should have healthy eating habits and we should have more fruit and vegetables. (and并列连接两个简单句)
8.
Hello, boys and girls. My name’s Zhang Peng. It’s my honour to be a Star of Excellent Behaviors and Habits. Let me introduce myself.
I love animals, especially dogs because they are loyal and friendly. For a healthy life, I eat vegetables and fruit every day. I never eat unhealthy food. I also run for half an hour three times a week.
At school, I follow the rules. I never use my phone in class and always listen to teachers carefully. At home, I finish my homework first and never hang out with friends at night.
Good habits make us better. Let’s follow the rules and be excellent students together! We can do it!
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步、根据提示,介绍自己的喜好、健康生活方式以及需要遵守的校规、家规;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce myself自我介绍
②follow the rules遵守规则
③listen to听
[高分句型]
I love animals, especially dogs because they are loyal and friendly. (because引导原因状语从句)
9.
Hello, boys and girls. My name is Li Ming. It’s my honor to be a Sunshine Healthy teenager. In my daily life, I like doing sports because they make me strong. I go swimming twice a week because it makes me relax.
I also go to bed early every night and get up early in the morning, which makes me feel energetic. As for my diet, I have three meals on time and enjoy healthy food such as vegetables and fruits. I seldom eat sweet food. These habits help me stay happy and healthy every day.
Although these rules are strict, I believe they are beneficial to me.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,引出主题;
第二步,根据题干的要点,介绍自己健康的生活习惯;
第三步,总结并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①go swimming游泳
②as for至于
[高分句型]
①II go swimming twice a week because it makes me relax.(原因状语从句)
②I also go to bed early every night and get up early in the morning, which makes me feel energetic.(非限制性定语从句)
10.
Today, I’m very happy to share my healthy lifestyle with all of you.
First, I have a healthy eating habit. I stay away from snacks with too much fat or salt. Instead, I eat lots of fruit and vegetables. A balanced diet makes me feel good. Then, I do sports every day. It makes me strong and healthy. Sports also bring me joy and teach me not to give up. What’s more, I try to be happy. I always look on the bright side of life. I also help others, just as Plato said, “Doing good makes us happy.”
Try to have a healthy lifestyle before it’s too late!
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据思维导图的提示介绍自己的生活方式,并呼吁大家养成健康的生活方式,内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,表达介绍自己的生活方式;
第二步,从饮食、运动等方面具体介绍自己的生活方式;
第三步,呼吁大家养成健康的生活方式并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth, with sb,和某人分享某物
②stay away from远离
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①Try to have a healthy lifestyle before it’s too late! (祈使句)
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Unit 3 Food matters写作讲练
目录
第一部分 写作主题阐释锁定基础 高效学习
第二部分 必备词句积累用法精析 变式巩固
第三部分 写作强化训练深度优化 扫清盲区
◇Part 01 写作主题阐释
一、写作话题
1. 主题内涵
本单元写作话题核心围绕“健康饮食”展开,引导学生关注自身饮食生活,学会用英语清晰描述个人三餐安排,同时树立健康饮食的意识。通过写作,不仅能巩固英语词汇、句型的运用,还能培养学生观察生活、表达自我的能力,体现“人与自我”中“关注自身生活质量、养成良好习惯”的核心内涵,让学生在语言实践中理解饮食与健康的关系,传递积极健康的生活理念。
2.审题要点
(1) 核心内容:需包含两部分——自身三餐的饮食习惯(早餐、午餐、晚餐分别吃什么、怎么吃);对“健康饮食”的看法(提出具体的健康饮食建议)。
(2) 语言要求:使用七年级上册核心词汇和句型,语法正确(一般现在时为主,主谓一致),表达流畅,无明显拼写错误;句式以简单句、并列句为主,可适当运用简单的复合句(如if、because引导的句子)。
(3) 语境要求:以“向他人介绍”为语境,语气亲切、自然,符合初中生的表达特点,避免使用复杂、生僻的词汇和句式。
二、写作框架
采用“总—分—总”结构,清晰呈现个人饮食习惯和健康饮食建议,具体框架示例如下:
1. 开头(总起):引出话题,简要说明自己重视饮食健康
开门见山,点明主题,用简单句表达自己对饮食的态度。
例:I have a healthy eating habit because I think good food can help me study better.(我有一个健康的饮食习惯,因为我认为好的食物能帮助我更好地学习。)
2. 中间(分述):分两点展开,详细介绍相关内容
(1) 介绍个人三餐饮食习惯:分别说明早餐、午餐、晚餐的食物、进食时间或相关习惯,用连贯的句子衔接。
例:For breakfast, I usually eat a bowl of porridge, an egg and a glass of milk. It’s quick and healthy. For lunch, I have rice, some vegetables and a little meat at school. For dinner, I often eat noodles or dumplings with my family.(早餐,我通常吃一碗粥、一个鸡蛋和一杯牛奶,既快捷又健康。午餐,我在学校吃米饭、一些蔬菜和一点肉。晚餐,我经常和家人一起吃面条或饺子。)
(2) 提出健康饮食的建议:用简单的句式列举2-3条具体建议,贴合初中生的认知。
例:In my opinion, we should eat more vegetables and fruits every day. We shouldn’t eat too much junk food like chips or hamburgers. Also, we need to eat on time and not skip any meals.(在我看来,我们应该每天多吃蔬菜和水果。我们不应该吃太多像薯片或汉堡这样的垃圾食品。而且,我们需要按时吃饭,不跳过任何一餐。)
3. 结尾(总结):呼应开头,强调健康饮食的重要性
简洁总结,再次表达对健康饮食的重视,升华主题。
例:A healthy eating habit is important for our body and study. I will keep my good habit and hope everyone can have healthy meals too.(健康的饮食习惯对我们的身体和学习都很重要。我会保持我的好习惯,也希望每个人都能吃健康的食物。)
◇Part 02 必备词句积累
1. 主题词汇
(1) 三餐类词汇
breakfast 早餐:I have breakfast at 7 o’clock every morning.(我每天早上7点吃早餐。)
lunch 午餐:My mother makes delicious lunch for me every day.(我妈妈每天给我做美味的午餐。)
dinner 晚餐:We often have dinner together as a family.(我们经常一家人一起吃晚餐。)
meal 一餐,一顿饭:I eat three meals a day regularly.(我每天规律地吃三顿饭。)
breakfast time 早餐时间:Breakfast time is from 7:00 to 7:30 in our family.(我们家的早餐时间是7点到7点半。)
lunch break 午休,午餐时间:We have a 40-minute lunch break at school.(我们在学校有40分钟的午休时间。)
(2) 食物类词汇(主食、蔬菜、水果、肉类、饮品等)
rice 米饭:I eat a bowl of rice for lunch every day.(我每天午餐吃一碗米饭。)
noodles 面条:My favorite food for dinner is noodles.(我晚餐最喜欢的食物是面条。)
dumplings 饺子:We eat dumplings on some important days.(我们在一些重要的日子吃饺子。)
porridge 粥:Porridge is easy to eat and good for our stomach.(粥容易消化,对我们的胃有好处。)
bread 面包:I often eat a piece of bread with milk for breakfast.(我经常早餐吃一片面包加牛奶。)
egg 鸡蛋:An egg a day is good for our health.(一天一个鸡蛋对我们的健康有好处。)
vegetable 蔬菜:We should eat different kinds of vegetables every day.(我们应该每天吃各种各样的蔬菜。)
tomato 西红柿:I like eating tomatoes because they are fresh and delicious.(我喜欢吃西红柿,因为它们新鲜又美味。)
potato 土豆:My mother often makes potato chips for me on weekends.(我妈妈经常在周末给我做薯片。)
carrot 胡萝卜:Carrots are good for our eyes.(胡萝卜对我们的眼睛有好处。)
cabbage 卷心菜,白菜:Cabbage is a common vegetable in our daily life.(白菜是我们日常生活中常见的蔬菜。)
spinach 菠菜:Spinach is rich in nutrition.(菠菜富含营养。)
fruit 水果:Eating more fruit can make us healthy.(多吃水果能让我们健康。)
apple 苹果:I eat an apple every afternoon as a snack.(我每天下午吃一个苹果当零食。)
banana 香蕉:Bananas are easy to carry and delicious.(香蕉容易携带,而且美味。)
orange 橙子:Oranges are full of vitamin C.(橙子富含维生素C。)
grape 葡萄:I like red grapes because they are sweet.(我喜欢红葡萄,因为它们很甜。)
pear 梨:Pears are good for relieving thirst.(梨有助于解渴。)
strawberry 草莓:Strawberries are my favorite fruit.(草莓是我最喜欢的水果。)
meat 肉:We need to eat a little meat every day for energy.(我们每天需要吃一点肉来获取能量。)
chicken 鸡肉:Chicken is a kind of healthy meat.(鸡肉是一种健康的肉类。)
beef 牛肉:Beef is rich in protein.(牛肉富含蛋白质。)
pork 猪肉:My family often eats pork for dinner.(我们家经常晚餐吃猪肉。)
fish 鱼:Eating fish is good for our brain.(吃鱼对我们的大脑有好处。)
milk 牛奶:I drink a glass of milk every morning.(我每天早上喝一杯牛奶。)
juice 果汁:I like drinking orange juice for breakfast.(我喜欢早餐喝橙汁。)
water 水:We should drink enough water every day.(我们每天应该喝足够的水。)
tea 茶:My father likes drinking tea after dinner.(我爸爸喜欢晚餐后喝茶。)
(3) 健康饮食相关词汇
healthy 健康的:I have a healthy eating habit.(我有一个健康的饮食习惯。)
unhealthy 不健康的:Eating too much junk food is unhealthy.(吃太多垃圾食品是不健康的。)
nutritious 有营养的:Vegetables and fruits are nutritious.(蔬菜和水果是有营养的。)
fresh 新鲜的:We should buy fresh vegetables and fruits.(我们应该买新鲜的蔬菜和水果。)
delicious 美味的:My mother’s cooking is always delicious.(我妈妈做的饭总是很美味。)
junk food 垃圾食品:We shouldn’t eat too much junk food.(我们不应该吃太多垃圾食品。)
snack 零食:I eat a small snack between lunch and dinner.(我在午餐和晚餐之间吃一点零食。)
balance 平衡:We need a balance of different kinds of food.(我们需要各种食物的平衡。)
regularly 规律地:I eat meals regularly every day.(我每天规律地吃饭。)
on time 按时:We must eat breakfast on time.(我们必须按时吃早餐。)
skip 跳过:Don’t skip breakfast, it’s very important.(不要跳过早餐,它非常重要。)
enough 足够的:We need to drink enough water every day.(我们每天需要喝足够的水。)
too much 太多:Don’t eat too much meat.(不要吃太多肉。)
a little 一点:I eat a little meat for lunch.(我午餐吃一点肉。)
a lot of 许多:I eat a lot of vegetables every day.(我每天吃很多蔬菜。)
2. 主题句式
(1) 描述个人三餐饮食习惯的句式
1. I usually eat + 食物 + for breakfast/lunch/dinner. 我通常早餐/午餐/晚餐吃……
例:I usually eat an egg and a glass of milk for breakfast. 译文:我通常早餐吃一个鸡蛋和一杯牛奶。
2. For breakfast/lunch/dinner, I often + 动作 + 食物. 早餐/午餐/晚餐,我经常……(食物)。
例:For lunch, I often have rice and some vegetables. 译文:午餐,我经常吃米饭和一些蔬菜。
3. My breakfast/lunch/dinner is + 食物. 我的早餐/午餐/晚餐是……
例:My dinner is noodles and vegetables. 译文:我的晚餐是面条和蔬菜。
4. I like eating + 食物 + for + 三餐. 我喜欢早餐/午餐/晚餐吃……
例:I like eating dumplings for dinner. 译文:我喜欢晚餐吃饺子。
5. I don’t like eating + 食物 + for + 三餐. 我不喜欢早餐/午餐/晚餐吃……
例:I don’t like eating hamburgers for lunch. 译文:我不喜欢午餐吃汉堡。
6. I have + 食物 + at + 时间 + for + 三餐. 我在……点吃……作为早餐/午餐/晚餐。
例:I have breakfast at 7:00 a.m. every day. 译文:我每天早上7点吃早餐。
7. Sometimes I eat + 食物 + for + 三餐. 有时候我早餐/午餐/晚餐吃……
例:Sometimes I eat bread for breakfast. 译文:有时候我早餐吃面包。
8. I often eat + 三餐 + with my family. 我经常和家人一起吃……
例:I often eat dinner with my family. 译文:我经常和家人一起吃晚餐。
9. My favorite food for + 三餐 + is + 食物. 我早餐/午餐/晚餐最喜欢的食物是……
例:My favorite food for breakfast is milk. 译文:我早餐最喜欢的食物是牛奶。
10. I usually have a + 形容词 + breakfast/lunch/dinner. 我通常吃一顿……的早餐/午餐/晚餐。
例:I usually have a healthy and quick breakfast. 译文:我通常吃一顿健康又快捷的早餐。
11. I never eat + 食物 + for + 三餐. 我从来不吃……作为早餐/午餐/晚餐。
例:I never eat junk food for breakfast. 译文:我从来不吃垃圾食品作为早餐。
12. After + 三餐, I often + 动作. 吃完早餐/午餐/晚餐后,我经常……
例:After dinner, I often drink a cup of tea. 译文:吃完晚餐后,我经常喝一杯茶。
(2) 表达健康饮食建议的句式
1. In my opinion, we should + 动词原形. 在我看来,我们应该……
例:In my opinion, we should eat more vegetables. 译文:在我看来,我们应该多吃蔬菜。
2. We shouldn’t + 动词原形. 我们不应该……
例:We shouldn’t eat too much junk food. 译文:我们不应该吃太多垃圾食品。
3. It’s important for us to + 动词原形. 对我们来说,……是很重要的。
例:It’s important for us to have a healthy eating habit. 译文:对我们来说,有一个健康的饮食习惯是很重要的。
4. We need to + 动词原形. 我们需要……
例:We need to eat on time every day. 译文:我们需要每天按时吃饭。
5. We should eat + 数量 + 食物. 我们应该吃……(数量)的……(食物)。
例:We should eat a lot of fruits every day. 译文:我们应该每天吃很多水果。
6. Don’t + 动词原形. 不要……
例:Don’t skip breakfast. 译文:不要跳过早餐。
7. We had better + 动词原形. 我们最好……
例:We had better drink enough water every day. 译文:我们最好每天喝足够的水。
8. Eating + 食物 + is good for our health. 吃……对我们的健康有好处。
例:Eating fish is good for our health. 译文:吃鱼对我们的健康有好处。
9. We should have a balanced diet. 我们应该有均衡的饮食。
例:We should have a balanced diet, not just eat one kind of food. 译文:我们应该有均衡的饮食,不要只吃一种食物。
10. It’s not good for us to + 动词原形. 对我们来说,……是不好的。
例:It’s not good for us to eat too much meat. 译文:对我们来说,吃太多肉是不好的。
11. We can eat + 食物 + instead of + 食物. 我们可以吃……来代替……
例:We can eat fruits instead of junk food as snacks. 译文:我们可以吃水果来代替垃圾食品当零食。
12. We should eat different kinds of + 食物. 我们应该吃各种各样的……(食物)。
例:We should eat different kinds of vegetables every day. 译文:我们应该每天吃各种各样的蔬菜。
(3) 衔接与总结句式
1. First, ... Second, ... Finally, ... 首先……,其次……,最后……
例:First, we should eat more vegetables. Second, we shouldn’t eat junk food. Finally, we need to eat on time. 译文:首先,我们应该多吃蔬菜。其次,我们不应该吃垃圾食品。最后,我们需要按时吃饭。
2. Because + 句子, ... 因为……,所以……
例:Because I want to be healthy, I have a good eating habit. 译文:因为我想保持健康,所以我有一个良好的饮食习惯。
3. So, ... 所以,……
例:Eating healthy food makes us strong, so we should keep a good eating habit. 译文:吃健康的食物让我们强壮,所以我们应该保持良好的饮食习惯。
4. In a word, ... 总之,……
例:In a word, a healthy eating habit is important for everyone. 译文:总之,健康的饮食习惯对每个人都很重要。
5. I think that + 句子. 我认为……
例:I think that eating on time is good for our stomach. 译文:我认为按时吃饭对我们的胃有好处。
6. Also, / Besides, ... 而且,此外……
例:We should eat more fruits. Also, we need to drink enough water. 译文:我们应该多吃水果。而且,我们需要喝足够的水。
7. Therefore, ... 因此,……
例:We need to keep a healthy eating habit. Therefore, we should avoid junk food. 译文:我们需要保持健康的饮食习惯。因此,我们应该避免垃圾食品。
巩|固|练|习
根据中文提示,完成下列英语句子,每空一词(含缩写)。
1. 我通常早餐吃一个鸡蛋和一杯牛奶。
I usually ______ an egg and a glass of milk ______ breakfast.
2. 在我看来,我们应该多吃蔬菜和水果。
In my opinion, we ______ ______ more vegetables and fruits.
3. 吃太多垃圾食品对我们的健康不好。
Eating too much junk food ______ ______ ______ our health.
4. 我们每天需要喝足够的水。
We ______ ______ drink enough water every day.
5. 我的晚餐最喜欢的食物是面条。
My favorite food ______ ______ is noodles.
范|文|例|析
范文
简析
①More and more people get sick because of eating habits.
I think I have a healthy eating habit.I often eat eggs, bread and milk for breakfast.②And for lunch, I often eat vegetables and rice. I eat carrots and fish for dinner.If you want to have a healthy eating habit, first ③you should eat more vegetables, more fruit and less meat. Second, you should eat more home-made food instead of junk food outside.
④All in all, if you want to be healthy, you should have a good eating habit. You should sleep well and exercise more.Health is the most important thing in our life.⑤I wish you are healthy.
①开篇引出话题。
②灵活恰当地运用表示并列的连词and。
③运用比较级表示要健康饮食。
④运用条件状语从句表达决心。
⑤运用wish表达祝愿,收篇结尾。
【优化策略】
1. 词汇优化:准确运用,丰富表达
(1) 避免重复:描述三餐食物时,避免反复使用“eat”,可替换为“have”(如have breakfast/lunch/dinner),使表达更丰富。
(2) 精准运用:区分“a little”(修饰不可数名词,如a little meat)和“a few”(修饰可数名词复数,如a few vegetables),避免语法错误;正确使用健康饮食相关形容词(如healthy, fresh, nutritious),增强语言的准确性。
(3) 适当拓展:在基础词汇的基础上,适当加入简单的高频短语(如a balanced diet, on time, skip meals),提升文章的丰富度,贴合单元主题。
2. 句式优化:简洁流畅,多样表达
(1) 避免单一:不要通篇使用简单句,可适当运用并列句(用and, but连接)和简单复合句(如because, if引导的从句),使句式更灵活。例如,将“I have a healthy eating habit. Good food can help me study better.”改为“I have a healthy eating habit because good food can help me study better.”
(2) 规范句式:严格按照写作要求,正确使用“描述三餐”和“提出建议”的核心句式,避免句式混淆(如区分“should do”和“need to do”)。
(3) 衔接自然:合理使用衔接词(如first, second, also, besides, in a word),使文章段落之间、句子之间衔接流畅,逻辑更清晰。
3. 结构优化:框架清晰,重点突出
(1) 紧扣框架:严格遵循“总—分—总”结构,开头引出话题,中间分两点(个人三餐、健康建议)展开,结尾总结,不遗漏核心内容。
(2) 详略得当:中间分述部分,个人三餐的描述可稍详细(说明具体食物、时间或习惯),健康建议部分列举2-3条即可,避免详略失衡。
(3) 首尾呼应:开头提出“重视健康饮食”,结尾再次强调“健康饮食的重要性”,使文章结构更完整,主题更突出。
4. 内容优化:贴合学情,真实具体
(1) 贴合生活:描述个人三餐时,选择初中生熟悉的食物(如米饭、面条、鸡蛋、牛奶等),避免使用生僻、复杂的食物名称,使内容更真实、贴近生活。
(2) 具体可感:提出健康饮食建议时,避免空泛表述,要具体可行(如“多吃蔬菜和水果”“按时吃饭”“不吃太多垃圾食品”),贴合七年级学生的认知水平。
(3) 避免错误:检查内容是否符合逻辑,避免出现矛盾(如“我不吃蔬菜”却建议“多吃蔬菜”);同时检查语法、拼写错误,确保文章规范、流畅。
◇Part 03 写作强化训练
提|升|练|习
1.健康饮食是保持身体健康一个重要的部分。假设你是Teng Fei,请根据要点提示,以“My Three Meals a Day”为题,写一篇英语短文介绍你一日三餐的饮食,并对健康饮食提出建议。
要点提示:
1. What do you have for three meals a day?
2. What do you think of your three meals a day?
3. What’s your advice for healthy eating?
注意事项:
1. 内容必须包含要点提示,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 书写工整,卷面整洁,句子流畅;
3. 文中不得透露个人信息;
4. 词数80左右。文章开头已经给出,但不计入总词数。
My Three Meals a Day
Hello! My name is Teng Fei. I’d like to tell you something about my three meals a day.
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2.假如你是李华,近日你的英国笔友Rose发来电子邮件,诉说自己容易感冒,不爱运动及体型肥胖的烦恼。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回一封邮件,谈一谈你对这些问题的看法。词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:confident adj.自信的;stay away from 远离;believe in 相信
Dear Li Hua,
I’m not happy these days because of my poor health. I often catch a cold. I don’t like exercising and I’m too heavy. Next month, we will move (搬) to a new city and I’ll go to a new school. I am afraid (担心) that the students in the new school will laugh at (嘲笑) me. Can you help me?
Dear Rose,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re not happy these days. Here is some advice for you.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
3.假设你是李华,Ben是你新认识的美国笔友。他最近给你发来邮件,想了解你的个人情况。请根据以下提示,给他回一封邮件。要求不少于70词(开头已给出,不计入总词数),语句通顺,句意连贯,语法正确,包含以下方面,可适当发挥:
1.你的爱好和特长(如运动等);
2.你的日常生活习惯(要求使用频率副词);
3.你喜欢的动物及其原因;
4.你喜欢的食物及其原因(如健康、美味等)。
Dear Ben,
Thanks for your email. I am happy to tell you about myself.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.健康的生活方式终身有益。我校英文报健康版面现征稿,假如你是林慧,打算写一篇以“My healthy lifestyle”为话题的稿件投稿。请你根据以下提示内容,分享在日常生活中你是如何保持健康的生活方式的。
Every day
Always
Often
Hardly ever
要求:
1.包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.70词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Keeping a healthy lifestyle is important to every one of us. Here is how I keep fit in my daily life.
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5.当今社会人们的生活越来越丰富,这也使得人们越来越重视健康问题,许多人开始追求健康的生活方式,作为一名中学生,你是如何保持健康的?请你以“Keep Fit”为题,写一篇短文,介绍一下自己保持健康的方式。
要求: (1) 不少于80词; (2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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6.假设你校英文俱乐部正在举办一个以“合理饮食,吃出健康”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 健康饮食的重要性;
2. 介绍你的饮食习惯(包括吃和喝至少两个方面);
3. 号召大家养成健康的饮食习惯。
注意:1. 词数为80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇:eating habit (饮食习惯),be good for,energy (精力,活力)
Eat well, keep healthy
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7.你校将开展“How to be a healthy student”的演讲比赛,假如你是李华,请结合以下思维导图写一篇短文,进行演讲。
内容包括:
1. 举行此次演讲比赛的主题;
2. 从饮食习惯、运动、心情等方面给出建议,请再添加一方面。
注意:
1. 短文需包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80左右(文章开头、结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
How to be a healthy student
Hello, everyone! I’m happy to give a talk here.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
8.假如你是张鹏,被学校评为“行为习惯优秀之星”,请你根据以下提示,向同学们介绍你的优秀行为习惯,号召大家端正日常行为,争做文明学生。
内容:
你的喜好
喜欢的动物及原因
你的健康生活方式
饮食习惯、运动项目及频率
你需要遵守的校规、家规
在校:不能使用手机、专注于学习等
在家:先完成作业、晚上不和朋友闲逛等
要求:
1. 不少于70词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 书写工整、规范:
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
参考词汇:introduce v. 介绍
Hello, boys and girls. My name’s Zhang Peng. It’s my honour to be a Star of Excellent Behaviors and Habits. Let me introduce myself.
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9.假如你是李明,这学期被评为“阳光健康好少年”,请根据下面提示,从运动和饮食等方面介绍你自己健康的生活习惯。
1. 必须包含所有提示要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确,条理清楚,字迹工整;
3. 不少于70词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Hello, boys and girls. My name is Li Ming. It’s my honor to be a Sunshine Healthy teenager.
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10.假如你叫李华,下周你校英语社团将要举办一次主题为“My healthy life”的演讲活动。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,用英文写一篇80词左右的演讲稿介绍自己的生活方式,可适当拓展。
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