内容正文:
一战成名目
主题写作指导
典例剖析
【细审题】
1.亲近自然
2.记叙文
3.第一人称
4.一般过去时:一般现在时
【要点解析】
1.你何时亲近过自然?
Last spring.
2.你做了什么?
I had a spring outing and flew kites with my friends
3.这次经历你感受如何?
I feel very enjoyable and comfortable.
【搭框架写句子】
开头:
There are quite a few interesting memories of getting close to
nature.
2I would like to share one of them with you.
中间:
主
DBecause it was sunny last weekend,I planned to go camping with
my friends.
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2There were a lot of tall trees and colorful flowers when we got
there.
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3Besides,there was a beautiful lake and we enjoyed the natural
view while riding bikes around it.
结尾:
DAlthough we were a little tired,we all had a good time.
2I look forward to having more chances to get close to nature in the
future.
主题八
主题阅读促写作
Task 1:
1.It's about some suggestions about protecting the environment.
2.Energy-saving products.
Task 2:B
Task3:略
Task 4:
1.In order to save electricity,we'd better turn off the unnecessary
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lights.
2.I would like to use waste newspapers to practice handwriting in
my spare time.
3.In our daily life,we should pay attention to recycling items
主题写作指导
典例剖析
【细审题】
1.保护长江
2.说明文
3第三人称
4.一般现在时
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参考答案与重
实战演练
Writing 1
Dear classmates,
My name is Li Hua who is interested in photography.Here I
would like to share my picture with you.
The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in
April,which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green
grass.If you are careful enough,you will also find a few birds
jumping in the grass in the picture.How cute they are!
It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic
contest.Actually,it also shows us the harmony between the animals
and nature.Taking part in this competition makes me realize the
beauty of nature and let us protect our Earth together!
That'sall!Thank you!
Writing 2
Dear Chairperson,
I'm Nancy.I would like to join the Bird-watching Club.I'm a
middle school student.My favorite subject is biology.I love nature
and I'm interested in plants and animals,especially all kinds of
birds.I am a kind and patient girl.I am good at taking photos.I
can write reports.I want to have more chances to learn knowledge
about birds.Also,I hope to do something to protect them.For
example,I will tell the people around to love birds.I promise to
take part in the club activities on time.I will try my best to do
something for the club
I will be happy if I can become a member of your club.I'm
looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Nancy
环境保护
【搭框架写句子】
开头:
①The Yangtze River,China's“mother river”,provides water,
enough food and convenient transport for millions of people.
2Water pollution from factories and plastic waste harms fish and
plants.
3Many animals like the Yangtze finless porpoises are disappearing
because of overfishing.
中间:
DFactories should treat waste water properly.
2People must stop throwing rubbish into the river.
3 Fishing bans in certain areas can help wildlife animals survive.
4More and more volunteers can organize some activities about
protecting wildlife in the Yangtze River.
结尾:
All in all,let's work together to protect the Yangtze River-it's our
shared home!
实战演练
Writing 1
Dear teachers and classmates,
It's my great honor to stand here and give a speech on "Green
题解析·英语
Life,Youth Action".The earth is our only home.Environmental
protection is very important because a good environment ensures our
survival and well-being.Without it,we'll face disasters like extreme
weather.
In daily life,we can take action.Choose to walk or ride bikes
instead of driving cars to cut down carbon emissions.Save water by
reusing it,like using water from washing vegetables to water flowers.
Also,use reusable bags and bottles to reduce plastic waste.
I imagine a future with carbon neutrality.The sky will be
clearer,rivers will be cleaner,and the air will be fresher.We'll live
in harmony with nature,enjoying a healthy and beautiful world.
Let's act now for this green future!
Thank you!
Writing 2
Save the Earth:Let's Do Our Part!
Protecting the environment is very important because it keeps
our planet healthy and safe.If we don't take care of the Earth,we
will face problems like pollution,climate change,and the loss of
natural resources.
To save the earth,we can do many things.We can grow more
trees to keep the air fresh.We can save water by turning off the tap
when we brush our teeth.We can also recycle paper,plastic and
主题九
主题阅读促写作
Task 1:It's about some suggestions on how to avoid a fire and what
to do if a fire breaks out.
Task 2:Prepare early,pay attention to kitchen fire safety,close the
bedroom door when sleeping,build an escape way and call
for help correctly.
Task3:賂
Task 4:
1.The firefighters put out the fire quickly.
2.It's necessary to learn how to use a fire extinguisher.
主题写作指导
典例剖析
【细审题】
1.如何在灾害中保障自身安全
2.说明文
3.第一人称
4.一般现在时
【要点解析】
1.When heavy rain occurs in the mountains,mudslides are likely to
happen
2.The flood destroyed many people's houses,leaving them
homeless.
3.Avoid using electrical appliances outdoors when it's raining.
【搭框架写句子】
开头:
DRainstorm may cause serious mudslides or floods.
2When such a terrible thing happens,we should learn to protect
ourselves.
参考答案与重子
一战成名目
glass to reduce waste.Another way is to use public transportation or
ride a bike instead of taking a car.To encourage more people to join
in,we can organize clean-up activities in our community or at
school.We can also share information about environmental
protection on social media to raise awareness.
Let's work together to protect our Earth.Every small action
counts,and if everyone does their part,we can make a big
difference!
Writing 3
Fellow students.
In recent years,our environment has got worse.It's time for us
to take action.Let's start with small things.
First,it's very important to save water and energy in our daily
life.Don't forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room.
Second,we are supposed to reuse the plastic bags when shopping.
What's more,we shouldn't throw rubbish everywhere.Third,we'd
better walk,ride a bike or take the bus when we go to school or go
shopping.Last but not least,we need to plant more trees and flowers
to make the environment more beautiful.
How important it is for us to protect the environment!If we
keep doing these things,I believe the environment will be better and
主
better.Let's do it together from now on.
写
灾害防范
中间:
提
在室内:
练
DWe also need to close doors and windows tightly to prevent rain
from entering.
2We'd better avoid using electrical appliances if lightning is near.
在户外:
When we are outdoors,we should stay at a safe place and be far
away from tall trees.
其他:
DWe should keep calm because we need to find better ways to
protect ourselves.
Our schools should teach us some ways to protect ourselves.
3Parents should also tell their children something about safety rules
during a rainstorm.
结尾
DWe should remember that safety comes first!
2By following these rules,we can protect ourselves during
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rainstorms./We can protect ourselves during rainstorms by
following these rules.
实战演练
Writing 1
Last week,our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities.
The purpose was to draw our attention to fire safety.Among the
activities,how to use a fire extinguisher interested me most.
When we use a fire extinguisher,we should first shake it after
picking it up,and then pull off the safety pin quickly.As soon as we
point the tube at the root of the fire,we are expected to press down
on the handle until we put out the fire.During the period,we should
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主题八
环境保护
主题词句积累
air/water//ocean/noise/light pollution空气/水/海洋/噪音/光污染
environmental pollution环境污染
in danger处于危险中
climate change气候变化
run out(of)用光,耗尽
环
endangered animal濒危动物
lose their homes失去它们的家园
human activity人类活动
health problems健康问题
题
waste water废水
greenhouse effect温室效应
cut down trees砍伐树木
global warming全球变暖
响
throw litter/rubbish around乱扔垃圾
deserts expansion沙漠I扩大
lead to导致
be harmful to对…有害
die out灭绝
have an influence on对…有影响
我来补充:
environment环境
advantage优势;有利条件;优点
dirty脏的
recycle回收利用;再利用
环
pollute污染
reduce减少;缩小
现
benefit使受益
rubbish垃圾;废弃物
常用表达l:become(s)worse and worse..
及
常用表达2:.,is/are in great danger..
因
常用表达3:It can cause.…
常用表达4:There is less/are fewer..
我来补充:
plastic塑料;塑料的
recycle waste回收废弃物
problem困难;难题
live a low-.carbon life过低碳生活
waste浪费;滥用;废弃物
plant trees植树
cause造成;引起
ride bicycles骑自行车
save节约;救助;拯救;保存
shut off electricity切断电源;停止供电
环
recycle回收利用
reuse shopping bags重复使用购物袋
use public transportation使用公共交通
暴
protect the environment保护环境
的
reduce the waste减少浪费
use both sides of paper使用纸张的两面
施
use cars less减少用车
turn off the lights before leaving离开前关灯
garbage sorting垃圾分类
stop using wooden chopsticks停止使用木筷子
develop/make laws制定法律
pick up rubbish捡,起垃圾
save energy节约能源
take the bus or subway instead of driving乘公共汽车或地铁而不是开车
take action/take measures/take steps采取行动/措施
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续表
常用表达l:We'd better...(recycle the water,use both sides of paper...)
境
常用表达2:We're supposed to..(reuse the plastic bags,recycle paper and waste products.)
常用表达3:Don't.(throw rubbish everywhere,use disposable chopsticks.)
的
常用表达4:We shouldn't..(kill animals,cut down trees..…)
常用表达5:..is a good way to..
我来补充:
call on号召;呼吁
have an influence on对…有影响
take an active part in积极参与
pul/work together齐心协力;通力合作
play a role/.part in参与
try our best to protect the environment尽我们的最大
保
make a difference有影响;起作用
努力保护环境
环
常用表达l:.should play a part in.…
境
常用表达2:It's time for us to..
常用表达3:As long as we pull together,·will become..
我来补充:
A温馨提示:写作佳句及优秀范文见《主题词句篇诵读》P54
主题阅读促写作
Read the passage and finish the following tasks.[2025广东连州北山中学一模改编]
In order to protect the environment,it is very important to learn about the environment.There are many ways
to understand how to protect the environment,such as reading books,asking someone and volunteering.As
students,you can read as many books as you can in your spare time.Books in the library are worth reading.They
will help you learn more about protecting the environment.You can ask your classmates for some suggestions.They
may have some good ideas.You can also get information about the environment on the Internet.Besides,I have
some suggestions for you.
In our daily life,some people save energy by driving together in one car.For example,three or four persons
can drive together in one car instead of driving three or four cars to work.Usually it is time-saving and easy to
carpool with their neighbors to go to work or take their children to school.
On the other hand,we should use energy-saving products.Some products like environment-friendly new
energy cars are made specially to save energy.These cars can travel longer than common ones.They produce less
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pollution,too.Some new products like computers and TVs are made to save energy in efficient ways.Also,we
should turn off the lights,the TV,the computer and so on when we don't use them.
Finally,we should buy recyclable products instead of non-recyclable ones.Recyclable products usually take
less energy.When we go shopping,pay attention to the recycle mark on the products.
Task 1:Read the passage and answer the questions.
1.What's the main idea of the passage?
2.What is mainly talked about in Paragraph 3?
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Task 2:How can students learn more about protecting the environment?
A.By going shopping.
B.By reading books.
Task3:Circle the linking words and underline the useful sentences.(圈出连接词并在有用的句子下画线)
Task4:mitative writing..(仿写)
1.为了节约用电,我们最好关掉不需要的灯。(用in order to仿写句子)
2.在空闲时间,我喜欢用废旧报纸练习书法。(用in one's spare time仿写句子)
3.在日常生活中,我们应当注意物品循环利用。(用pay attention to仿写句子)
主题写作指导】
®典例剖析
长江是中国重要的河流,但目前面临生态环境问题。某英语杂志社开展“保护长江”主题征文活动,请
以“Ways to Protect the Yangtze River'”为题写一篇短文,介绍保护长江的措施,并呼吁大家参与。
写作要求:1.内容需包括:长江的重要性、面临的主要问题(至少2点),保护措施(至少2点)、呼吁行动;
2.词数80-100:
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
Ways to Protect the Yangtze River
细审题
1.主题:
3.人称:
2.文体:
4.时态:
搭框架写句子
人与自然
简要介绍长江目前的现状和面临的问题
参考句型:provide sth.for sb.,water pollution,the Yangtze finless porpoise,due to,because of,be
harmful to
写句子:①长江,中国的“母亲河”,为千百万人们提供水源、充足的食物和便利的交通。
开头
②工厂排放和塑料垃圾造成的水污染危害着鱼类和植物。
③由于过度捕捞,许多动物如长江江豚正在消失。
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根据长江目前面临的问题,具体介绍保护长江的措施
参考句型:take action,stop doing sth.,throw..into.,pour..into..,ban,help sb.(to)do sth.
写句子:①工厂应妥善处理废水。
②人们必须停止向河流倾倒垃圾。
中间
③特定区域的禁渔措施有助于野生动物生存。
④越来越多的志愿者可以组织一些保护长江野生动物的活动。
总结主题,呼吁人们在实践中保护长江
结尾
参考句型:all in all,play/do a part in,protect the environment
写句子:总而言之,让我们携手保护长江一这是我们共同的家!
连句成篇
Ways to Protect the Yangtze River
The Yangtze River,China's "mother river",provides water,enough food and convenient transport for
millions of people.Sadly,it now faces serious problems.First,water pollution from factories and plastic waste
harms fish and plants.Second,many animals like the Yangtze finless porpoises are disappearing because of
overfishing.
To protect it,we must take action.First of all,to reduce pollution,factories should treat waste water
properly,and people must stop throwing rubbish into the river.Secondly,to protect wildlife,fishing bans in
certain areas can help wildlife animals survive.What's more,more and more volunteers can organize some
activities about protecting wildlife in the Yangtze River.
All in all,let's work together to protect the Yangtze River-it's our shared home!
范文升级
Ways to Protect the Yangtze River
The Yangtze River,China's "mother river",provides water,enough food and convenient transport for
millions of people.Sadly,it now faces serious problems.First,water pollution from factories and plastic waste
自然
harms fish and plants.Second,many animals like the Yangtze finless porpoises are disappearing due to
overfishing.
To protect it,we must take action from now on.First of all,to reduce pollution,factories should treat
waste water properly,and people must stop throwing rubbish into the river.Secondly,to protect wildlife,fishing
bans in certain areas can help wildlife animals survive.What's more,more and more volunteers can organize
some activities about protecting wildlife in the Yangtze River to make the living things live happily.
All in all,let's work together!Join in clean-up activities,save water,and spread the words.Every small
effort counts.Protect the Yangtze River-it's our shared home!
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【亮点赏析】
亮点①:巧用due to引导原因状语,升格表达,说明许多动物消失的原因;
亮点②:用“First of all,Secondly,What's more”等衔接词,分点介绍保护长江的措施;
亮点③:善用不定式作目的状语,进一步强调组织保护长江野生动物活动的目的:
亮点④:巧用谚语点题,保护长江的生态环境需要更多人的力量凝聚在一起。
®实战演练
Writing1[2025山东济南天桥区三模]
地球是人类唯一的家园,面对气候变化挑战,中国承诺力争2060年前实现碳中和。这不仅是国家战略
目标,更是全民参与的绿色行动。我校英语社团现举办“绿色生活、青春同行”主题演讲比赛,请你写一篇
英语演讲稿。
内容包括:1.你对环境保护重要性的理解;
2.结合日常生活,提出可行的环保建议;
3.畅想碳中和目标实现后的生活愿景。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
提示词:carbon neutrality碳中和(碳中和是指一段时间内,特定组织或整个社会活动产生的二氧化碳,通过
植树造林、海洋吸收、工程封存等自然、人为手段被吸收和抵消掉,实现人类活动二氧化碳相对“零排放”。)
人与自然
Writing2[2025湖南湘潭岳塘区湘钢二中三模]
随着“一带一路”绿色发展国际联盟大会的召开,人们对于环境污染和气候变化的关注越来越多。为
号召大家保护环境,倡导绿色生活,学校决定开展一次征文比赛。请根据以下提示,以“Save the Earth:Let's
Do Our Part!”为题,用英语写一篇征文稿。
要点提示:
Why should we protect the earth?
How can we protect the earth?
Grow more trees,save water,
ride a bike,recycle...
Call on people to join you.
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要求:1.80词左右;
2.包含以上所有要点并适当拓展;
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
参考词汇:rubbish bins垃圾桶;sort分类;plastic bag塑料袋;awareness意识,认知
Save the Earth:Let's Do Our Part!
Writing3[2025山东枣庄四十一中-模]
近年来,环境恶化导致的问题日益凸显。请你写一篇演讲稿向同学们发出倡议,呼吁大家从小事做起,
为保护环境尽一份力。
措施:1.节约水电;
2.少用塑料袋,不乱扔垃圾:
3.绿色出行,如乘公交车、骑自行车、步行上学或购物等;
4.提出希望…
注意:1.100词左右:
2.参考提示,可适当增加内容,行文连贯,字迹工整,段落清晰,表达清楚:
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Fellow students,
人与自然
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