内容正文:
一战成名目
实战演练
Writing 3
Writing 1
Hello,everyone,I'm Li Hua from Group One.Below,on
Alice,a student from abroad,had a PE class in our school last
behalf of our group,I will report on our discussion.Cindy's favorite
Friday.She learned many things about ping-pong,such as the
sport is volleyball.She often plays volleyball with her friends.By
history and rules of the game.Alice tried her best to learn skills and
playing volleyball,she has become more confident and healthier.
she practiced ping-pong for nearly 20 minutes.And then she shared
Frank loves riding a bicycle best.By riding a bicycle,his body has
her school life.At last,she said the PE teacher was very patient and
become stronger and stronger.I like playing basketball.If I have
she expressed her thanks to the teacher.She also said the students
time,I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on
were very lovely and friendly."I'm so lucky to have the chance to
weekends.Playing basketball has taught me the spirit of teamwork
take the PE class,she said excitedly.
and never giving up.
Writing 2
That's all.Thank you.
What does Music Bring to Me?
Writing 4
Music is like a key,which opens a door to the world for me.It
Art is colorful and full of power.My favorite art form is
makes me full of courage to live in the world positively.
calligraphy,which became a turning point in my life.Last year when
Music brings me hope and strength during hard times,offering
I felt stressed about exams,my teacher suggested I try calligraphy to
words of wisdom that guide me through life's challenges.Music helps
relax
me build a good relationship.When I was young,I used to be shy.
At first,my hands shook while holding the brush.But as I
As I took up playing the guitar to deal with my shyness,I made lots
practiced more,the smooth movements and beautiful characters light
of friends.Besides,music opens my eyes.Through music,I can
up my heart.I came to realize that like calligraphy,life requires
broaden my horizons,sharpen my mind,and deepen my
patience and exactness.Each stroke must be carefully planned,just
understanding.
like our daily choices.
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Also,music reminds me of some happy memories.It makes me
Calligraphy inspires me to stay calm and focused.Now
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remember the love and care my teachers and friends have given me.
whenever I feel anxious,I write poems with brush and ink.The
It tells me the best things in life are free.
creativity flows as the characters dance on paper.It's important to
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Overall,music enriches my life,making it more meaningful
find an art that speaks to your soul,because art isn't just about
and satisfying.I hope all of us will value music and make it a part of
beauty-it helps us grow stronger inside
our life.
主题五
历史、社会与文化
子主题1家乡和社会的变迁、发展和未来提示句回答:
主题阅读促写作
1.I want to live and work in Shanghai
2.My wife and I will have a son and a daughter.
Task 1:It is about some changes in the writer's hometown.
3.I'm going to read more books which I like in my free time.
Task 2:B
【搭框架写句子】
Task3:略
开头:
Task 4:
Let me take you on a journey to imagine what the future might look
1.Although my hometown was small in the past,it has become
like.
much bigger and more modem now.
中间:
2.Thanks to the new school buildings,students can study in
生话:In25 years,I would like to live in a beautiful city.
brighter and cleaner classrooms.
工作:I can use my skills and knowledge to contribute to the
3.The improvement of transportation has had a big impact on travel,
development of new technologies.
making trips to other cities much faster.
家庭:
主题写作指导
DMy family will be full of love and warmth,and we will have a good
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典例剖析
time together on weekends and holidays.
【细审题】
2In my free time,I will go for walks in the park near my
1.描绘25年后你的生活
community,or travel to some famous places of interest to
2.记叙文
experience different cultures.
3.第一人称
结尾:
4.一般将来时
In conclusion,I will keep working hard and follow my dream to make
【要点解析】
my future life much better.
提示句翻译:
实战演练
1.你想在哪里生活和工作?
Writing 1
2.你的家庭会是什么样子?
Dear Amy,
3.你将如何度过你的空闲时间?
It's exciting to know you are going to travel in China soon.
4.关于你未来生活的更多方面。
Knowing you love Chinese culture and delicious food,I warmly
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参考答案与重难题解析·英语
一战成名目
recommend Tea House in my hometown!It's the perfect place for2.When you get a message from a stranger,think twice before
you.Here,you can watch exciting Beijing opera shows with colorful
clicking any links.
costumes and exciting stories-it's like stepping into history!You
3.If you follow these rules,you'll stay much safer on the Internet!
can enjoy graceful tea art performances where masters pour tea with
主题写作指导
beautiful movements.You can also taste many kinds of wonderful
典例剖析
tea,like fragrant jasmine or rich oolong,often served with traditional
【细审题】
sweet or tasty snacks.
1.文明出游
It truly brings Chinese traditions to life in one comfortable
2.应用文
place.Let's explore its magic together!
3.第一人称
Yours,
4.一般现在时
Li Hua
【要点解析】
Writing 2
Core Skills for the Future
1.Wait in line at stations or airports.
In the age of Al,it is not enough to master textbook knowledge.
2.Avoid making loud noises in public./Keep quiet in public
I believe two core skills are important for the future:communicating
3.Never draw on walls,take your rubbish away and put it into
skills and technological skills.
dustbins.
First,communicating skills help us work with others.For
4.Follow the rules.If taking photos is not allowed,please don't do
example,building relationships with people from differen
that
backgrounds allows us to share ideas and solve problems together.If
【搭框架写句子】
we can express ourselves clearly,we can avoid misunderstandings.
中间:
Additionally,offering help to others creates trust,which is important
DWhen we are on a bus,we should offer our seats to the old or the
in teamwork.Second,technological skills are necessary to keep up
woman with a child.
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with AI development.Learning to search information online helps us
2Meanwhile,please avoid playing music loudly in public places.If
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find answers quickly.More importantly,using AI tools to solve
you want to listen to music,you can use headphones.
problems saves time.AI can analyze data faster than humans,so
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knowing how to use it will make us more efficient.
If everyone does these,our trips will be more enjoyable,and we'll
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In a word,both skills help us get used to changes.
leave beautiful places to future generations.
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Communication connects people,while technology improves our
实战演练
abilities.By focusing on these,we can prepare for the future.
Sharing Life on the Internet
Writing 3
Nowadays,many people enjoy sharing their lives online,such
Our Life Has Become Much Better
as posting photos of food,travel places,or daily moments on social
With the development of society,now parents spend more time
media.This helps them connect with friends and family,even if they
with their children.In this way,children can enjoy a better
live far away.It also allows people to learn useful skills or get
education.There are buses,subways and airplanes everywhere,and
inspiration from others'experiences.
they make traveling very easy.We used to live in a very small
However,there are some risks.Sharing too much personal
house,but now we live in a very large house.There are many
information might lead to privacy problems.For example,strangers
activities in people's free time,such as mountain climbing,fishing
could misuse your photos or data.Besides,spending too much time
and so on.There are many high-quality programs on TV,such as
online can waste valuable time
Beijing opera and A Bite of China.
In my opinion,I think sharing life on the Internet is helpful,
In a word,our life is better today and we eat better and live
but we should be careful.We must protect our privacy and use social
better.We appreciate the improvements and look forward to a much
media wisely.
brighter future.
子主题3对世界、国家、人民和
子主题2公共秩序、法律法规与信息安全
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主题阅读促写作
社会进步有突出贡献的人物
Task 1:
主题阅读促写作
1.It is about some rules to stay safe online.
Task 1:It tells the story of Xie Binrong,who volunteered to teach in
2.Protect your passwords,be careful with personal information,
the remote mountainous area of Daliang,Sichuan.
don't click on strange links,use safe websites and talk to adults
Task 2:She used her money to improve the teaching conditions of
if something feels wrong.
the schools and raised money to help the villagers
Task 2:B
Task3:略
Task3:略
Task 4:
Task 4:
1.He offers some shelters to the homeless children.
1.We'd better not share personal information with others in our daily
2.With the help of him,these children's life becomes better and
life.
better.
参考答案与重难题解析·英语
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主题五历史、社会与文化
子主题1家乡和社会的变迁、发展和未来
主题词句积累
century百年;世纪
society社会
corner角;街角;拐角;角落
era时代;年代;纪元
village村庄;村镇
crowded人多的;拥挤的;挤满的
modern当代的;现代的
hometown家乡;故乡
street大街;街道
convenient便利的;方便的
capital首都;国都;省会
the home of..…的发源地
new初来乍到的;新的;刚出现的
city都市;城市
have a large population人口众多
now现在;目前
central中央的;主要的;中心的
ancient wall古城墙
past过去的
centre(center)中心;中心区;中央
one of the most suitable living
present现在(的);礼物
house房子;住宅
cities最宜居的城市之一
社会变
recent近来的;新近的
huge巨大的;极多的;庞大的
show sb.around带某人参观
usual通常的;寻常的
population人口;全体居民
wide and clean street宽阔干净的
become开始变得;变成;成为
citizen公民;市民
街道
change零钱;变化
state陈述;州;邦
high and bright building高大明亮
continue持续;继续;继续存在
bridge桥
的建筑
人与社
rapid迅速的;快速的
tower塔;塔楼
convenient transportation便利的
countryside农村;乡村;乡下
town镇;市镇;城镇
交通
local本地的;当地的;地方的
road路;道路;公路
live a hard life过着艰苦的生活
social社交的;社会的
station站;所;局;火车站
be rich in富含/盛产…
我来补充:
imagine想象;设想
would(表示意愿)愿意
magic魔法;魔术;神奇的;有魔力的
later以后;后来
purpose目的;意图;目标
maybe//perhaps可能;大概;也许
want需要;想要
may可以;也许;可能
wish祝愿;希望;愿望
really确实;的确;真正地;非常
未来的畅
wonder想知道;感到惊讶
travel around the world环游世界
forward向前;面向未来的
enjoy oneself过得愉快
possible可能;可能存在或发生的
achieve one's dream实现某人的梦想
likely可能的;预料的;有希望的
make great achievements in many fields在许多领域
future未来;将来
取得巨大成就
especially尤其;特别;格外
the most developed country最发达的国家
我来补充:
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主题写作提升练·英语
一战成名目
主题阅读促写作
Read the passage and finish the following tasks.
Changes in My Hometown
My hometown has changed a lot in the past ten years.When I was in primary school,our school was an old
building with small classrooms.There was just dirt on the playground,so we got dirty when we played sports.
Although the school facilities were simple,we had a lot of fun playing together.There was no library,and we had
to share textbooks with classmates.
Now,everything is different!Our school has a new big building with bright classrooms and a modern library.
We can borrow books and use computers there.The playground has a plastic track,so it's safer to run and play.
Buses go to school every day,which saves time for students like me.Thanks to the improved transportation,we
can have more time to rest or study,which makes our daily life more efficient and enjoyable.
The streets used to be narrow and crowded.Now they're wide and clean.A new park was built last year.
After school,I often go there to play basketball or ride my bike.There are also more shops and cafes.On
weekends,my friends and I like to study at the coffee shop with free Wi-Fi.
Life is easier now,but I miss the simple days.Before,we played card games outside all day.Now,many
kids stay at home to play video games.These changes have had a big impact on our social lives and health.We
used to interact face-to-face more often,which helped us build stronger relationships.Nowadays,with everyone
glued to their screens,we have fewer opportunities to connect in person.Also,spending more time indoors can
affect our physical health.But I'm happy to see my hometown grow.It makes me proud to live here!
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Task 1:What's the main idea of the passage?
Task 2:What was the playground like when the writer was in primary school?
A.It had a plastic track.
B.It was made of dirt.
Task3:Circle the linking words and underline the useful sentences..(圈出连接词并在有用的句子下画线)
Task4:mitative writing.(仿写)
1.虽然我的家乡过去很小,但现在它已经变得更大、更现代化了。(用lthough引导让步状语从句仿写句
子)
2.多亏了新的教学楼,学生们可以在更明亮、更干净的教室里学习。(用thanks to仿写句子)
3.交通工具的改善对旅行产生了巨大影响,使前往其他城市的旅程变得更快。(用have a big impact on仿
写句子)
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主题写作指导
®典例剖析
[2024武汉]本周英语课学习围绕主题“Tomorrow's Life”展开,请你根据以下提示问题从生活、工作、家
庭等方面,写一篇英语作文,描绘25年后你的生活。
Where do you want to live and work?
What will your family be like?
How are you going to spend your free time?
Something more about your future life.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息:词数100词左右:开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My life will be very different in 25 years.
细审题
1.主题:
3.人称:
2.文体:
4.时态:
要点解析
【提示句翻译】
1.Where do you want to live and work?
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2.What will your family be like?
3.How are you going to spend your free time?
4.Something more about your future life.
【提示句回答】
1.Where do you want to live and work?
2.What will your family be like?
3.How are you going to spend your free time?
搭框架写句子
直接点明25年后你的生活会大不相同,引出主题。
参考句型:be different,,be full of exciting changes,look like,take sb.on a journey
开头
写句子:让我带你踏上一次想象之旅,看看未来可能会是什么样子。
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具体描述未来的生活、工作和家庭
参考句型:live in,contribute to,come across a lot of people,go for walks,do some reading,take a
trip
★生话
写句子:25年后,我想要住在一座美丽的城市。
★工作
中间
写句子:我可以运用我的技能和知识为新技术的发展做出贡献。
★家庭
写句子:①我的家庭将充满爱与温暖,我们会在周末和节假日一起度过美好时光。
②在我的空闲时间,我会去社区附近的公园散步,或游览一些著名的名胜古迹体验不
同的文化。
展望未来并总结全文
参考句型:continue to do sth.,work hard,.follow one's dream,get better and better,wonderful
结尾
future,keep improving,in conclusion,in a word,to sum up,all in all
写句子:总之,我将继续努力,追寻我的梦想,让我的未来生活更加美好。
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连句成篇
My life will be very different in 25 years.Let me take you on a journey to imagine what the future might look
like.
In 25 years,I would like to live in a beautiful city.There I can enjoy the fresh wind and beautiful scenery.
I will work in a high-tech company.I can use my skills and knowledge to contribute to the development of new
technologies.My family will be full of love and warmth,and we will have a good time together on weekends and
holidays.In my free time,I will go for walks in the park near my community,or travel to some famous places of
interest to experience different cultures.Thinking about my future life,I'm hopeful and excited.I believe that hard
work can create a wonderful life for myself and my family.
In conclusion,I will keep working hard,follow my dream and make my future life much better.
范文升级
My life will be very different in 25 years.Let me take you on a journey to imagine what the future might look
like.
In 25 years,I would like to live in a beautiful city where I can enjoy the fresh wind and beautiful scenery.
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一战成名目
I will work in a high-tech company,using my skills and knowledge to contribute to the development of new
technologies.My family will be full of love and warmth,and we will spend quality time together on weekends
and holidays.In my free time,I will go for walks in the park near my community,or travel to some famous places
of interest to experience different cultures.Looking ahead to my future life,I'm hopeful and excited.I believe
that hard work can create a wonderful life for myself and my family.
In conclusion,I will continue to work hard and follow my dream to make my future life much better.
【亮点赏析】
亮点①:巧用where引导定语从句,整合句意,使句子结构紧凑;
亮点②:用短语“spend quality time”升格句子,提升句子表达水平;
亮点③:用tat引导宾语从句,指出作者相信努力工作可以创造美好生活:
亮点④:巧用动词不定式作目的状语,作者期盼自己的未来生活更美好。
@实战演练
Writing1[2025浙江温州二中三模]
假设你是李华,你的英国好友Ay暑假将来你的城市游玩。请你根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向
她推荐一处合适的旅游打卡地。
I'm interested in
Chinese culture.Also.
enjoy shows and food
人与社
Amy
Night Market
Tea House
·colorful lights
·Beijing opera
·street shows
·Tea Art Show
·local snacks
·all kinds of tea
注意:1.邮件需要包含所选地点的至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
2.词数80词左右,短文首句已给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Amy,
It's exciting to know you are going to travel in China soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing2[2025黑龙江哈尔滨南岗区二模]
在人工智能快速发展的时代,仅掌握书本知识已远远不够。请以“Core(核心)Skills for the Future'”为
题,根据以下提示,选择或自拟2-3项你认为最关键的技能,写一篇英语短文,并阐述你的理由。
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主题写作提升练·英语
一战成名目
Learning skills
Learn from books
Build relationships with different people
Communicating skills
Express ourselves
Core Skills for the Future
Offer help to others
Searching information
Technological skills
Using AI to solve problems
注意:1.词数120左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Core Skills for the Future
Writing3[2025广东湛江赤坎区二模改编]
人与社
这些年,随着社会的发展,我们的生活也发生了很大变化。请以“Our Life Has Become Much Better”为
题,根据以下思维导图内容提示,写一篇英语短文。
我们的生活变好了
教育的变化
交通方式的变化
生活的变化
1.到处都是公
1.过去居住在小房
对这些变化的看法
孩子可以享受
共交通工具
子里,现在…
1.当今的生活变好了
更好的教育
2.…
2.…
2.…
注意:1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名;
3.语句连贯,词数80左右。
Our Life Has Become Much Better
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