内容正文:
一战成名目
Writing 2
One rainy day,Mary was in a rush to school,feeling sad and
upset.But on the way,she noticed raindrops hitting the ground
ants moving around quickly,and plants looking fresh.Several
students,wearing raincoats and carrying umbrellas,were playing in
the puddles.They jumped like frogs and had a lot of fun.Mary
joined them and felt much better.
When Mary reached school,there was a class talent show.She
performed well and got hugs,praises,and even a present,which
made her surprised and happy.She realized that instead of being
troubled by the rain,she should see the bright side.Just like in a
story or a painting,there are always different sides.She learned not
to let small things bother her and to enjoy every moment.
Writing 3
Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to hear that you have some problems with your
parents.I know you're worried about how to show love to your
parents.Here is some advice for you.
Firstly,try to put yourself in your parents'shoes and understand
their feelings.They love you and want the best for you.Secondly,
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communicate with them more often.Share your daily life,happiness
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and sadness with them.It can help you get closer.Besides,do
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something for them,like helping with housework.They'll feel your
love.Finally,remember their birthdays and prepare small gifts.
They'll be moved.
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I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you
Yours,
Li Hua
子主题2志愿服务与公共服务
主题阅读促写作
Task 1:It's about some suggestions to help students find volunteer
activities during summer vacation.
Task 2:Find the right type of volunteer work,look for local
opportunities and volunteer with friends.
Task3:略
Task 4:
1.I usually take part in volunteer work about animal protection on
weekends.
2.I will design the poster for this volunteer activity in person.
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3.Doing volunteer activities can make your life more meaningful.
主题写作指导
典例剖析
【细审题】
1.分享志愿活动经历
2.记叙文
3.第一人称
4.一般过去时
【要点解析】
1.Some made eco-friendly products.
2.Some gave out reusable water bottles and bags.
3.I worked at the learning stalls.
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参考答案与重天
【搭框架写句子】
中间:
DWe gathered at the entrance of Hongxing Park at 9 o'clock in the
moming.
2Some made eco-friendly products.Others gave out reusable water
bottles and bags we made.
3I went all out to work at the leaming stalls.
结尾:
DI shared what I knew with others through the activity.
2I wish that everyone could care about our community and the
earth.
实战演练
Writing 1
Dear Mr Wang,
I'm Li Hua.I'm really willing to be a volunteer to help the
foreign students from our sister school and introduce Chinese
traditional festivals to them.
I have several advantages.Firstly,I'm good at communicating
and my English is fluent,which helps me explain festival stories and
customs clearly.Moreover,I have a deep understanding of festivals
like the Spring Festival and the Mid-Autumn Festival.I can share
interesting traditions,such as making dumplings during the Spring
Festival and admiring the moon at the Mid-Autumn Festival.
I sincerely hope to become one of the volunteers.It would be a
valuable opportunity for me to spread Chinese culture and make
foreign friends better understand our traditions.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Writing 2
Recently,I took part in a school volunteer program.It was
aimed at developing our sense of responsibility.The activity taught
me many valuable skills.
During the event,I organized games for children and helped
plant trees in a park.Through these tasks,I learned how to
communicate patiently with others and work as a team.What
impressed me most was a first-aid course.I learned something to
save people.
This experience made me realize that volunteering is not just
about giving but also about growing.I felt proud to contribute to
society.And I also understood the importance of kindness.Even
small actions can make a big difference.I'll continue to help others
whenever possible!
子主题3人际交往与团队合作
主题阅读促写作
Task 1:It is about how to better communicate with others and get
valuable information.
Task 2:
Para.1:Provide a way to change this situation.
Paras.2~4:Three steps to find out what others really think and
feel.
题解析·英语一战成名目
子主题2志愿服务与公共服务
主题词句积累
gentleman先生;绅士;男士
sir先生;长官
Ms(Ms.)夫人;女士
称
lady女士;女子;夫人;小姐
Mr(Mr.)先生
Miss小姐;老师
谓
madam女士
Mrs(Mrs.)太太;夫人
我来补充:
voluntary自愿的;志愿的
decide决定;选定
give away捐赠
volunteer志愿者;自愿做
offer提供;供应
raise money筹款
charity慈善
include包括
serve as充当;担任
skil技能
raise募集;养育
call on号召
museum博物馆
report报告;报道;调查报告
throw out the rubbish扔垃圾
society社会;社团
responsible有责任心的
look after the old照顾老人
hospital医院
training训练;培训
in person亲自
neighbour/neighbor街区
excellent优秀的;杰出的;极好的
in need有困难的,有需要的
志
patient病人;有耐心的
community service社区服务
be ready to do sth.愿意做某事
务
join加入
volunteer work志愿者工作
make a difference有影响,起作用
notice通知
set up建立
play a role in在…中发挥作用
organize组织
put up张贴
take an active part in积极参加
speech演说
fixp修理
help sb.with sth.在某方面帮助
opening开幕式
clean up the house打扫房子
某人
prepare准备
pick up捡起
donate捐赠,赠送
hand/give out分发
常用表达:We can take part in volunteer activities,such as..(visiting the old,cleaning the streets..)
会
我来补充:
help sb.out帮助某人摆脱困境
clean up the city parks打扫城市公园
put up posters/,signs/notices张贴海报/标牌/通知
give/hand out food at the food bank在食品救济站分发食物
公
raise money for homeless people为无家可归的人募捐
set up a group to help disabled people建立组织来帮助残疾人
务
give away money/.old clothes/,old toys to sb.把钱/旧衣服/旧玩具捐赠给某人
work in an old people's home to care for them在敬老院工作来照顾老人
visit sick kids in the hospital to cheer them up看望医院里生病的孩子使他们振作起来
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dialogue对话;对白
hug拥抱
return回来;返回
neighbour/neighbor邻居
kiss亲吻;吻
support支持
admire钦佩;赞赏
refuse拒绝
serve接待;服务;提供
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doubt疑惑;疑问;怀疑
stand容忍;忍受;站立
service服务;接待
会
express表达;表示
suggest建议;提议
guest客人;宾客
为
lead带路;通往;领导
attend出席;参加;上(学)
host主持人;主人;主持
lend借出;借给
say说;讲
hostess女主持人;女主人
meet遇见;相遇;相逢;结识
see明白;看见;看到;理解
chat聊天;交谈
nod点头
sound声音;声响;听起来好像
encourage鼓励;激励
主题写作提升练·英语
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一战成名目
续表
excuse原谅;借口;理由
joke开玩笑;笑话
smile微笑
explain解释;说明
laugh笑;发笑
treat对待;招待;请(客);医治;
会行为
help帮助
promise承诺;诺言
治疗
invite邀请
我来补充
praise赞扬;称赞
excited兴奋的
in the end最终
proud自豪的
call on号召
come true实现
ired疲倦的
cheer up使…振奋
come up with提出
感
happy高兴的
hep..out帮助…摆脱困境
受
take part in参与
helpful有帮助的
at the beginning of..在…开thanks for..因…而感谢
satisfied满意的
始时
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◆温馨提示:写作佳句及优秀范文见《主题词句篇诵读》P35
主题阅读促写作
Read the passage and finish the following tasks.[2025天津南开区二模]
Summer vacation is an excellent chance for students to take part in volunteer activities.Here are some
suggestions to help you find the one that suits you
Find the right type of volunteer work.
人与社
Whether it's helping animals,supporting the elderly,or working on environmental projects,find something
that you are interested in and good at.For example,if you are good at English,you may help kids with their
English homework.It will make your summer holiday meaningful.
Look for local opportunities.
Many places,like community centers,libraries,and non-profit(非营利性的)groups need volunteers,
especially during the summer.Check their websites,visit them in person,or ask around in your community to find
out how you can help.Volunteering close to home is easy and lets you see the difference you're making.
Volunteer with friends.
Volunteering with friends can make the experience more enjoyable.You can support each other,share ideas,
and enjoy the happiness of making a difference together.Working as a team can also help you build stronger
relationships and create lasting memories.
Volunteering helps you learn new skills and make new friends.Enjoy your summer and make a positive
difference!
Task 1:What's the main idea of the passage?
Task 2:Please list the suggestions about finding volunteer activities according to the passage.
Task3:Circle the linking words and underline the useful sentences.(圈出连接词并在有用的句子下画线)
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主题写作提升练·英语
一战成名目
Task4:mitative writing.(仿写)
L.我通常周末参加关于保护动物的志愿活动。(用take part in仿写句子)
2.我将亲自设计这次志愿活动的海报。(用in person仿写句子)
3.做志愿活动可以使你的生活更有意义。(用make sth..+ad.比较级仿写句子)
主题写作指导
®典例剖析
[2024包头]你校英语报社组织同学们分享自己在社区进行志愿活动的经历,请你根据以下提示写一
篇短文投稿
内容包括:L.简要描述;
2.体验和感受。
Topic
Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
Time
last Sunday
made eco-friendly(环保的)products
Activities
gave out reusable water bottles and bags
worked at the learning stalls(摊位)
注意:1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
人与社会
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称:
Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer.
细审题
1.主题:
3.人称:
2.文体:
4.时态:
要点解析
【要点扩句】
1.一些人制作环保产品。
2.一些人分发可重复使用的水瓶和袋子。
3.我在学习摊位上工作。
主题写作提升练·英语
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一战成名
搭框架写句子
简要介绍活动发生的时间、地点和任务
开头
参考句型:work in,hold,take place,as,last Sunday,during the time,some funny jobs
写句子:上周天我在红星社区做志愿者。
Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer.(已给出)
具体讲述做志愿者活动的经过
参考句型:divide into,give out,.how to do sth.,at the entrance of,some..others.,go all out to
写句子:①早上九点钟我们在红星公园的人口集合。
中间
②一些人制作环保产品,另外一些人分发我们制作的可重复使用的水瓶和袋子。
③我全力以赴地在学习摊位工作。
表达活动后的感受
参考句型:share sth..with sb.,care about
写句子:①我通过这个活动与他人分享了我所知道的知识。
结尾
②我希望人人能够关心我们的社区和地球。
人与社
连句成篇
Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer.
Before the event began,we gathered at the entrance of Hongxing Park at 9 o'clock in the morning.After a
while,we started our work.Some made eco-friendly products.Others gave out reusable water bottles and bags we
made.I went all out to work at the learning stalls,teaching neighbors how to properly recycle and how to reduce
trash here in town.
I shared what I knew with others through the activity.Sharing is caring.I wish that everyone could care about
our community and the earth.
范文升级
Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer.
Before the event began,we gathered at the entrance of Hongxing Park at 9 o'clock in the morning.After a
while,we started our work.First,our group made eco-friendly products like recycled paper notebooks.Then
we gave out reusable water bottles and bags we made to residents,explaining how they reduced plastic waste.
Finally,I went all out to work at the learning stalls,teaching neighbors how to properly recycle and how to
reduce trash here in town.
I shared what I knew with others through the activity.Seeing people use our reusable items and children's
excitement at recycling crafts showed me that great things come from small beginnings.Sharing is caring.I
truly wish that everyone could care about our community and the earth.
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主题写作提升练·英语
一战成名目
【亮点赏析】
亮点①:善用“First,Then,Finally'”衔接词,使文章脉络清晰,便于读者理解;
亮点②:用动名词作主语,突出作者所观察的这两件事:
亮点③:巧用谚语总结作者对于此次活动的收获,语言表达恰当得体;
亮点④:用that引导宾语从句,表达作者呼吁大家关注社区、关心地球的期望。
@实战演练
Writing1[2025泸州]
暑期将至,一批来自姊妹学校的外国学生将到你校参观交流,他们想了解中国的传统节日。为此,你校英
语社团面向全校征集志愿者。假如你是李华,请根据下图内容,用英语给社团负责人王老师写一封自荐信。
表明意愿
介绍优势
善于沟通、英语流利、
表达期望
愿意担任……
熟悉中国传统节日…
希望成为…
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范:
2.必须包含所给提示,并作适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名:
4.词数100左右。
Dear Mr Wang,
人与社
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Writing2[2025安徽合肥蜀山区琥珀教育集团三模]
假定你是李辉,最近在学校开展的志愿者服务活动中学到了很多,请你写一篇英语短文,给校英文报投
稿,分享你的经历。
要点如下:1.活动目的;
2.活动内容:
3.你的体会。
注意:1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数:80-100。
主题写作提升练·英语
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