内容正文:
Unit 3 Homes and places
⭐ -Writing写作知识清单
一、写作主题与任务
· 主题:My Dream Home(我梦想中的家)
· 场景:参加青少年英语写作比赛,描述自己理想中的家
· 核心问题:
1. Where is your dream home?(位置)
2. What are inside and outside your dream home?(内部 / 外部设施)
3. What’s special about your dream home?(特别之处)
二、文章结构(Structure)
1. 三段式框架(对应 Daniel 的范文)
段落
核心内容
对应问题
Para. 1
位置 + 环境感受
C: Where is the dream home?
Para. 2
外部 + 内部设施
A: What are inside and outside?
Para. 3
房间 / 家的特别之处
B: What’s special about your home?
2. 写作大纲模板(Outline)
1. 开头:介绍家的位置 + 环境特点(安静、空气清新等)
2. 中间:先写外部(花园、树木等),再写内部(房间、功能区)
3. 结尾:写家 / 房间的特别之处(魔法功能、美丽风景等)
三、核心语言点(Language)
1. 描述位置(Location)
· 句型:My dream home is in/next to/on/near…
· 例句:My dream home is in a forest. / My dream home is near a lake.
2. 描述内部 / 外部设施(Inside/Outside)
· 核心句型:There be… 句型(描述 “有……”)
· Outside, there is a big garden (with many plants and flowers).
· Inside, there are two bedrooms and a big library.
· There is also a living room with a big window.
· 补充描述:用 with… 补充细节(带有……)
3. 描述特别之处(Special features)
· 想象类表达:
· The desk can walk. / The clock can talk.
· From the window, I can see the forest, clouds, birds…
· 感受类表达:It’s fantastic! / It’s quiet and the air is fresh.
4. Sentence Builder 汇总
功能
常用句型
位置
My dream home is in/next to/near…
外部 / 内部
Outside/Inside, there is/are… (with…)
特别之处
…can… / From the window, I can see…
环境感受
It’s quiet/beautiful, and the air is fresh/clean.
⭐范文
假设你将参加学校举办的 “My Dream Home” 英语写作大赛。请根据以下提示,写一篇短文介绍你梦想中的家。
写作要点:
1. 位置:你的梦想家园在哪里?(如:在海边、在森林里、在城市附近等)
2. 内外设施:家的外面和里面分别有什么?(使用 there be 句型)
3. 特别之处:你的梦想家有什么特别的地方?(发挥想象)
要求:
· 词数:80-100 词。
· 内容完整,语句通顺,语法正确。
· 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
📄 参考范文
My Dream Home
My dream home is in a beautiful village near a big lake. It is very quiet and the air is fresh.
Outside my home, there is a big garden with many flowers and green trees. There is also a swimming pool, so I can swim in summer. Inside my home, there are three bedrooms, a big kitchen and a study room. I have a computer and many books in the study.
My dream home is very special. The desk can walk and talk with me. From my window, I can see the blue sky and lovely fish in the lake. I love my dream home!
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