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北师大版英语七上Unit3 写作专项
My Dream Home
写作目标
结合本单元“描述房屋布局、运用There be句型和方位介词”的核心目标,能写一篇短文描述梦想的家,涵盖位置、内外环境、专属特色。
1. 能正确使用There be句型描述物品存在,灵活用方位介词(in/on/next to等)表位置;
2. 能运用本单元家居词汇(garden/balcony/study等)写作;
3. 逻辑描述空间布局,语言简洁,字数80–120词,贴合七年级写作要求。
题目解析
1. 体裁:描述性短文,可适度想象,重点体现空间描述能力;
2. 人称:第一人称(I/my),围绕“我的梦想之家”展开;
3. 时态:一般现在时,客观描述布局、陈设和环境;
4. 核心要求:写清位置、内外环境、最特别的地方;结构清晰,以简单句和There be句型为主。
典型例题
以 My Dream Home 为题写一篇短文,80–120词。内容需涵盖:
1. 梦想之家的位置;
2. 内外的核心陈设/环境;
3. 最特别的地方及你的感受。
思路点拨
1. 开篇点题:一句话点明梦想之家的位置+整体氛围,简洁开门见山;
2. 主体描述:用There be句型+方位介词,简单说外部1个亮点、内部2–3个核心房间/陈设;
3. 结尾点睛:一句话说明最特别的地方+简单感受,收尾利落。
写作模板(逐段拆解,贴合单元目标)
第一段:开篇点题
必写要素:位置+整体感受
基础句式:My dream home is ______. It’s ______ and nice. I love the environment there.
示例:My dream home is by the sea. It’s quiet and nice. I love the environment there.
第二段:主体描述
必写要素:外部环境+There be句型(内部陈设)+方位介词
基础句式:Outside, there is a ______. Inside, there is a ______ next to ______. There are ______ on ______.
示例:Outside, there is a small garden with flowers. Inside, there is a study next to my bedroom. There are many books on the shelf in the study.
第三段:结尾点睛
必写要素:专属特色+个人感受
基础句式:My ______ is special. I can ______ there. It’s my ideal home and I love it.
示例:My bedroom is special. I can watch the sea from the big window there. It’s my ideal home and I love it.
范文
英文
My Dream Home
My dream home is by the sea. It’s quiet and nice. I love the fresh air there.(开篇点题,地点+氛围)
Outside, there is a small garden with colourful flowers. Inside, there is a bright study next to my bedroom. There are many storybooks on the shelf in the study.(There be+方位介词,本单元核心语法)
My bedroom is the most special part. There is a big window in it, and I can watch the blue sea and flying seagulls every day. It’s my warm and perfect home.
中文翻译
我的梦想之家
我的梦想之家在海边,那里安静又美好,我喜欢那里清新的空气。
外面有一个种着五颜六色花朵的小花园,里面有一间明亮的书房挨着我的卧室,书房的书架上有很多故事书。
我的卧室是最特别的地方,里面有一扇大窗户,我每天都能看到蓝色的大海和飞翔的海鸥。这是我温暖又完美的家。
素材积累
短语
1. by the sea — 在海边
2. a small garden — 一个小花园
3. next to my bedroom — 挨着我的卧室
4. on the shelf — 在书架上
5. a big window — 一扇大窗户
6. warm and perfect home — 温暖又完美的家
基础句型
基础句型
仿写句子
My dream home is by the sea.
My dream home is near a park.
There is a study next to my bedroom.
There is a living room next to the kitchen.
There are many books on the shelf.
There are some toys on the bed.
好句集锦
1. My dream home is small, but it’s warm and comfortable.
2. I can see beautiful stars from the window in my bedroom at night.
3. There is a small balcony outside, and I can sit there and rest.
谚语
East or west, home is the best.(金窝银窝,不如自己的狗窝。)
学生写作填空练习版
My Dream Home
My dream home is ______ (位置,如near a park). It’s ______ (形容词,如warm) and nice. I love the environment there.
Outside, there is a ______ (外部设施,如small yard). Inside, there is a ______ (房间,如bedroom) next to ______ (房间,如the study). There are many ______ (物品,如toys) on ______ (位置,如the desk).
My ______ (房间,如bedroom) is special. I can ______ (动作,如read books) there. It’s my ideal home and I love it.
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