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专题08 书面表达
参考答案
题●型●训●练
基础过关
(一)
【答案】例文:
Dear Eric,
Thank you for your trust! I’m glad to help with your study on school life. Here’s what I can share about lunch breaks in my school.
Our lunch break lasts about 50 minutes, from 12:10 p.m. to 1:00 p.m. Most students bring meals from home or buy food in the school cafeteria, which offers a variety of dishes like rice, noodles, and vegetables. After eating, some friends chat together, while others take a short walk outside to relax. Personally, I enjoy reading a book or listening to music quietly in the classroom during this time—it helps me recharge for afternoon classes.
If you need more details or have other questions, feel free to ask! I’d be happy to assist further.
Wish your study a great success!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要点齐全,可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接回应对方需求。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。描述午休时长、用餐方式、活动内容和个人感受。
第三步,书写结语。表达持续帮助的意愿,体现友好态度。
[亮点词汇]
① variety多样性
② recharge恢复精力
③ personally就个人而言
[高分句型]
① Most students bring meals from home or buy food in the school cafeteria, which offers a variety of dishes like rice, noodles, and vegetables. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(二)
【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you about an exciting project that my club is planning for the summer vacation. We are going to design and build model airplanes.
Since I know you have a great interest in aviation, I thought you might want to join us. It would be wonderful if you could share your ideas and skills with us. Please let me know what you think about this plan. Your participation would mean a lot to us.
Look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,并告诉对方你的暑期打算;
第二步,询问对方的想法;
第三步,期待对方的回复,并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be going to do sth. 打算做某事
②share sth. with sb. 与某人分享……
③have a great interest in 对……有极大的兴趣
[高分句型]
①I’m writing to tell you about an exciting project that my club is planning for the summer vacation.(that引导的定语从句)
②It would be wonderful if you could share your ideas and skills with us.(if引导的条件状语从句)
(三)
【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
We are going to go to the community to be volunteers, because some people there need our help.
We will meet at the gate of our school at eight o’clock this Saturday morning. Then we will go there by bus. Please remember to bring a plastic bag with you, because we will help to collect the rubbish on the street. Besides, we will help to clean the chairs on the square. What’s more, we will help to grow some flowers and trees.
I hope all of you can take part in this volunteer activity. I believe you will have a meaningful day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头介绍本次活动的发起缘由;
第二步,介绍本次活动的具体安排和活动意图;
第三步,表达自己的感受,呼吁全体同学积极踊跃参加社区活动。
[亮点词汇]
①remember to do sth.记得做某事
②what’s more更重要的是
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①I hope all of you can take part in this volunteer activity.(宾语从句)
②I believe you will have a meaningful day.(宾语从句)
(四)
【答案】示例:
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hui, a 9th-grade student. I have learned that Shenyang Imperial Palace needs English-speaking volunteer guides. I’m eager to apply for this role.
I have several strengths. First, I’m fluent in English and have won prizes in school English speech competitions. Second, I’m familiar with Shenyang’s history, especially the stories behind the Imperial Palace, which I’ve studied through books and documentaries. Additionally, I’m good at communicating with others and enjoy sharing knowledge.
I believe I can serve foreign visitors well and help them appreciate the beauty of Chinese culture. I’m looking forward to your reply and the opportunity to contribute as a volunteer.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,提出申请,介绍自己的基本信息;
第二步,具体介绍自己的优势;
第三步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be eager to do渴望做某事
②be familiar with对……熟悉
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①Second, I’m familiar with Shenyang’s history, especially the stories behind the Imperial Palace, which I’ve studied through books and documentaries.(定语从句)
②I believe I can serve foreign visitors well and help them appreciate the beauty of Chinese culture.(宾语从句)
(五)
【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
I hope this letter finds you well.
Thanks for asking about my ideas on future life. I think it’ll be amazing. Robots will handle most housework, like cleaning and cooking, giving us more free time. We might live in smart homes where everything is controlled by our voices. Travel could be easier too—maybe flying cars will make commutes faster. Also, clean energy like solar power will be widely used to protect the environment.
I’m really looking forward to such a life. What do you think? Write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:主要使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达问候;
第二步,具体介绍对未来生活的畅想;
第三步:表达期待和希望收到对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①be used to do sth.被用来做某事
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①We might live in smart homes where everything is controlled by our voices.(定语从句)
(六)
【答案】例文
I’d like to invent a new kind of clothes for the old.
I was very close to my grandma when I was growing up. Now she is 80 years old. When the weather changes, she usually catches a cold easily. I love her so much, so I hope she is always healthy. The clothes will be made from special material. It will change with the weather. It will be warm when the weather is cold and it will be cool when the weather is hot. I hope the old will live a healthier life with it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文,创意分享类说明文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:需按要求分享创意,包括想发明的东西及要解决的问题,不能遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明想发明的东西 —— 一种给老人的新衣服;
第二步,阐述想解决的问题:通过讲述奶奶因天气变化易感冒,引出发明能随天气变化调节温度的衣服这一创意,说明衣服材质特殊及功能;
第三步,表达期望,即希望老人能借此过上更健康的生活。
[亮点词汇]
① be close to 与……关系亲密
② catch a cold 感冒
③ be made from 由……制成
[高分句型]
① I was very close to my grandma when I was growing up.(when引导时间状语从句 )
② I hope the old will live a healthier life with it.(hope后为省略了that的宾语从句)
(七)
【答案】例文
Dear David,
How is everything going? I’m so glad you’re interested in our school-leavers’ party! It will be held in the school hall on June 25th. We’ve planned some wonderful activities, including watching a video about our 3-year school life and giving speeches to thank our teachers and parents. There will be some performances and delicious food as well.
I’m going to design a “Dream Tree” for the party. Everyone can write their future dreams on paper leaves and hang them on the tree. It’ll be a good chance to show my painting skills.
What are the British school leavers’ party like? Do students wear traditional clothes? Are parents invited to attend the celebrations?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,按题目要求叙述毕业派对的活动安排及自己想为派对做的事情。
第二步,询问David英国毕业派对的活动形式。
[亮点词汇]
①as well 也
②invite sb to do 邀请某人去做
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①There will be some performances and delicious food as well. (There be句型)
②It’ll be a good chance to show my painting skills. (it作形式主语)
(八)
【答案】One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. I come from Baiyangdian, Hebei. Baiyangdian is a very beautiful lake, especially in summer, and it is famous throughout the country. Every year, many tourists come for a visit. You can enjoy the beautiful lotuses and green reeds. You can also row a boat on the river. This river is very clear, and you can see many fish swimming inside.
I have lived here since I was born. I love my hometown very much. I hope you can come here when you have free time. I believe you will have a good time here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:本文以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:题目要求根据提示介绍一下自己的家乡,包括介绍家乡的情况、表达情感,并表示欢迎。写作时注意适当增加细节,不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题;
第二步,根据所给要点,介绍家乡的情况;
第三步,最后表达情感,并表示欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①come for a visit来参观
②row a boat去划船
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I have lived here since I was born.(since引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope you can come here when you have free time.(省略that的宾语从句;when引导的时间状语从句)
(九)
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
It’s great to hear from you. I am so glad that you are interested in my school life. Let me share my school life with you.
My school starts at 8:00 am and ends at 6:00 pm. We study various subjects like Chinese, math, English, and science. My favorite subject is English because it helps me communicate with friends like you! After class, I often join activities, such as basketball and the school band. They make my life colorful and fun.
Would you like to visit my school? I’d love to show you around and introduce you to my friends. Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示要点介绍自己的学校生活,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己的学校生活;
第二步,介绍学校的时间表、学习科目以及课外活动;
第三步,表达自己想邀请他来参观学校。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某事
②communicate with sb.和某人交流
③after class课后
[高分句型]
My favorite is English because it helps me communicate with friends like you! (because引导原因状语从句)
(十)
【答案】例文
Dear Mr Smith,
How is everything going? I’m writing to cordially invite you to our Campus Culture Week starting next Monday.
The event will last from March 18th to 22nd, featuring diverse activities. On Monday, traditional art exhibitions will be held on the school playground, followed by international culture displays on Tuesday. Additionally, a talent show is scheduled for Thursday evening in the auditorium. We sincerely hope you can attend the closing ceremony on Friday afternoon, where students will present drama and music performances. Your presence would greatly enrich our event!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头,引出话题,发出邀请;
第二步、介绍活动安排;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①from…to…从……到……
②followed by其次是
③the closing ceremony闭幕式
[高分句型]
We sincerely hope you can attend the closing ceremony on Friday afternoon, where students will present drama and music performances.(where引导非限制性定语从句)
能力进阶
(一)
【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
How is everything going? Our school is going to hold the Science and Technology Festival. I heard that you want to participate in this activity. Let me introduce it to you.
The Science and Technology Festival will last for two days, from next Monday to Tuesday. On the first day, there will be a lecture by a famous scientist, who will share the latest scientific achievements. The next day, we can participate in various hands-on activities, where we can make simple robots by ourselves.
I know you’re interested in it. What do you think of these arrangements? What activity do you want to participate in?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本题是一封电子邮件;
②时态:本文用一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:向美国交换生Eric介绍科技节的安排,询问他的想法,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问候,说明科技节即将举行,引出下文;
第二步,介绍科技节的安排,注意细节充分,行文流畅;
第三步,询问对方的想法,注意用词准确;
第四步,表达期待对方回信。
[亮点词汇]
①participate in… 参加……
②be interested in… 对……感兴趣
③think of 认为
[高分句型]
①On the first day, there will be a lecture by a famous scientist, who will share the latest scientific achievements.(定语从句)
②I know you’re interested in it.(宾语从句)
(二)
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. Now I’m talking about saving our world. Our world is facing many problems. Pollution is harming our air, water, and soil. Forests are being cut down, and many animals are losing their homes. It’s time for us to take action.
To protect our world, we can start with small actions. First, reduce plastic use by carrying reusable bags and bottles. Second, save energy and water by turning off lights when not in use. Third, practice recycling and support tree-planting activities.
Let’s work together! Start today, inspire others, and make Earth Day every day. Remember, the future of our world lies in our hands. Let’s join hands and make a difference!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:本文以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,说明拯救地球的重要性;
第二步,提出建议,如减少使用塑料袋、节约能源和水等;
第三步,表达呼吁,大家一起保护地球。
[亮点词汇]
①cut down砍倒
②turn off关闭
③take action采取行动
④lie in在于
[高分句型]
①It’s time for us to take action.(it作形式主语)
②Second, save energy and water by turning off lights when not in use.(祈使句;when引导的时间状语从句)
(三)
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
How’s it going? I have some good news to tell you. Recently, our school has extended the break time between classes from 10 minutes to 15 minutes. My classmates and I have more time to enjoy ourselves. I think this change is great. It has many benefits. First of all, we now have enough time to truly relax. We can do more outdoor activities, which helps us get more energy. Also, we can chat more with our classmates, sharing interesting stories and having more chances to make new friends. Moreover, it allows us enough time to prepare for the next class, such as getting the textbooks ready and having a quick review.
What about the break time in your school? Do you have long enough breaks to enjoy your school life?
What about your feeling?
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“课间时间延长”这一变化及其相关感受、活动和好处的介绍,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“告知课间时间延长这一变化”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“感受、课间活动及其好处”几个方面重点介绍课间时间延长后的情况;
第三步,书写结语。询问“Tom所在学校的课间时长及他的感受”,表达交流的意愿。
[亮点词汇]
①extend...from...to...把……从……延长到……
②enjoy oneself过得愉快,玩得开心
③have enough time to do sth.有足够的时间做某事
④chances to do sth.有机会做某事
[高分句型]
①We can do more outdoor activities, which helps us get more energy.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(四)
【答案】例文:
Bright View around Us
Our campus is a lovely place with green trees, colorful flowers, and clean paths. The air is fresh, and the sky above often looks bright blue. Classrooms are tidy, with desks and chairs in order. We all feel happy studying here.
To keep it beautiful, I always pick up litter when I see it and throw it into dustbins. I also help water the plants in the school garden. During activities, I remind classmates not to write on walls or damage trees.
Let’s work together! Protecting our clean and bright campus needs everyone’s effort. Small actions like saving water, recycling waste, and keeping our desks neat can make a big difference. Join me to create a greener, more beautiful school!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为征文投稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主,部分描述过去做过的事情可以用“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“描述校园环境”“做过哪些事情”“发出号召”这三个要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。以“Bright view around us”为主题,引出对校园环境的描述;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。先描述校园环境的优美,如“碧水蓝天”“窗明几净”等;接着列举同学们为保护校园环境做过的事情,如“捡拾垃圾”“爱护花草树木”等;
第三步,书写结语。发出号召,呼吁同学们共同保护校园环境,让校园更加美丽。
[亮点词汇]
①a lovely place 一个可爱的地方
②colorful flowers 色彩鲜艳的花朵
③in order 整齐有序
④make a big difference 有很大影响;起很大作用
[高分句型]
①Our campus is a lovely place with green trees, colorful flowers, and clean paths.(“with + 名词短语”作后置定语,描述校园环境)
②Protecting our clean and bright campus needs everyone’s effort.(动名词短语“Protecting our clean and bright campus”作主语)
(五)
【答案】Dear Mike,
Thank you for your email and welcome to China! Let me tell you how to behave properly here.
When you meet someone for the first time, you’re supposed to shake hands. And you should always bring a small gift when you show up at someone’s house for the first time. When you’re eating at the table, it’s impolite to start eating first if there are older people at the table. And you’re not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Would you like to live with my family while you’re here? My family are all very nice and helpful. And we hope to be your host family.
Bye for now and I look forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。对Mike即将来学校做交换生表示欢迎;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。给Mike介绍一些中国的风俗;
第三步,书写结语。邀请Mike来家里生活并期待双方的见面。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
②show up露面,出现
③hope to希望
[高分句型]
①When you meet someone for the first time, you’re supposed to shake hands. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②When you’re eating at the table, it’s impolite to start eating first if there are older people at the table. (when引导的时间状语从句;if引导的条件状语从句;it作形式主语)
(六)
【答案】例文
I really don’t think it’s right for students to say dirty words. Dirty words are harmful to both the speakers and listeners. Listeners will feel uncomfortable while speakers will surely leave a bad impression on others. Nobody is willing to make friends with those impolite students.
To help dirty words speakers stop this bad habit, we have much to do. First of all, family members and teachers can have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm. What’s more, we can make rules to help them. When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them. By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍为什么我们不能说脏话;
第二步,介绍怎样才能帮助他人不再说脏话。
[亮点词汇]
①be harmful to 对……有害
②leave a bad impression on others 给他人留下不好的印象
③make friends with 和……交朋友
④What’s more 此外
[高分句型]
①When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!(省略that的宾语从句)
(七)
【答案】例文
A Healthy Diet
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “A Healthy Diet”.
As we all know, a healthy diet plays a vital role in our life. It can provide us with enough energy to study and play. Also, it helps build up our bodies and makes us stronger.
However, some bad eating habits are common among us. Many students love eating sweet food, which is bad for our teeth. And fried food is popular too, but it can make us fat easily.
So how can we have a healthy diet? First, we should eat regularly. Second, we are supposed to eat more fruits and vegetables, which are rich in vitamins. Third, drink more milk and water instead of sugary drinks. Last but not least, control the amount of food we eat and avoid overeating.
Let’s start from now on and form a good eating habit. Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy a happy life.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章写作需要围绕“健康饮食”展开,涵盖健康饮食的重要性、常见的不良饮食习惯及健康饮食的方法,考生应注意条理清晰地阐述观点,适当补充具体例子,不要遗漏任何要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山说明演讲主题是“健康饮食”,并指出健康饮食在生活中的重要作用;
第二步,具体分析内容。先阐述健康饮食的益处,再列举学生中常见的不良饮食习惯,最后给出健康饮食的具体建议;
第三步,书写结语。呼吁大家从现在开始养成良好的饮食习惯,以保持健康、享受幸福生活,并结束演讲。
[亮点词汇]
①vital role 重要作用
②build up our bodies 增强体质
③fried food 油炸食品
④be rich in vitamins 富含维生素
⑤sugary drinks 含糖饮料
⑥avoid overeating 避免暴饮暴食
[高分句型]
①As we all know, a healthy diet plays a vital role in our life.(as引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Many students love eating sweet food, which is bad for our teeth.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
③Second, we are supposed to eat more fruits and vegetables, which are rich in vitamins.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
④Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy a happy life.(only+介词短语置于句首引起的部分倒装句)
(八)
【答案】范文
Dear John,
Knowing that you’re interested in optional courses in our school, I’m writing to tell you something about them.
This term, our school offers three courses: Calligraphy, Martial Art and Vegetable-planting. They are all popular among students. I chose Calligraphy. It is held every Tuesday and Thursday afternoon in the art room. Our teacher is an experienced calligrapher who teaches us basic brush techniques and how to write different styles of characters.
I picked Calligraphy because I’ve always been interested in Chinese traditional culture. Through this course, I can not only improve my writing skills but also learn more about the history behind Chinese characters.
What do you think of these courses? Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容(本学期开设的三门课程、自己选择的课程及开课情况、选择该课程的原因),适当添加细节,确保内容完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明写信目的,介绍学校本学期开设的三门课后服务课程;
第二步,具体说明自己选择的课程及其开课情况;
第三步,阐述选择这门课程的原因,最后以询问对方看法作结尾,呼应开头。
[亮点词汇]
①offer 提供
②experienced 有经验的
③basic techniques 基本技巧
④traditional culture 传统文化
[高分句型]
① Our teacher is an experienced calligrapher who teaches us basic brush techniques and how to write different styles of characters.(who引导的定语从句)
② Through this course, I can not only improve my writing skills but also learn more about the history behind Chinese characters.(not only...but also... 连接并列成分)
(九)
【答案】例文:
My Career Plan
I want to be an English teacher when I grow up. There are two main reasons for my choice. First, I love English and enjoy sharing knowledge with others. Second, teachers can help shape young minds, which is very meaningful.
To achieve my goal, I will work hard to improve my English skills by reading more English books. I also plan to practice public speaking to become a better communicator. With these efforts, I believe I can make my dream come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:这是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要用一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:要根据题干内容写短文谈谈自己的职业规划,包含职业选择、两点理由和两条措施。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明职业选择并阐述两点理由;
第二步,提出两条措施并表达信心。
[亮点词汇]
①shape young minds 塑造年轻心灵
②public speaking 公开演讲
③communicator 交流者
④make one’s dream come true 实现某人的梦想
[高分句型]
①There are two main reasons for my choice. (There be句型)
②Second, teachers can help shape young minds, which is very meaningful. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
③With these efforts, I believe I can make my dream come true.(省略that的宾语从句)
(十)
【答案】参考范文:
Dear John,
I’m so excited to talk with you about our English speech competition that was held yesterday.
It took place on the school playground at 3 p.m. 20 students took an active part in this wonderful event. All the students gathered to be the listeners. The speeches covered many subjects and most of the “competitors” performed well.
One of my classmates shared his thoughts about protecting our earth. He talked about it so deeply that all of us realised the importance of protecting the environment. No wonder he won the first prize.
This competition helps us improve spoken English and learn more knowledge at the same time. We all look forward to joining it next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件。
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,考生应注意要点齐全,并可适当补充细节描述。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。说明写信的目的是与John分享昨天的英语演讲比赛。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍这次演讲比赛的信息。
第三步,书写结语。表达这次比赛对提升英语口语和学习知识的帮助,以及大家对下次比赛的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①competition比赛
②performed表演,表现
③realised意识到
[高分句型]
①He talked about it so deeply that all of us realised the importance of protecting the environment. (so…that…引导的结果状语从句)
真题实战
(一)
【答案】One possible version:
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. My dream library would be a modern, interactive space with cozy reading corners, e-books, and even VR stations to explore books in new ways. It could also have a recommendation system to help students find books matching their interests.
This kind of library would make reading more fun and engaging. Students could experience stories in different styles, discover new types, and develop a lifelong love for books. Let’s make reading an exciting adventure.
I hope my dream will come true. Thanks.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:表示设想,主要用虚拟语气,形式为“would/could do”;
③提示:内容提示已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,不可遗漏任何信息提示,适当添加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接已给出的开头,直入主题,描述自己设想中的图书馆,包括其风格与设备;
第二步,介绍该图书馆的益处;
第三步,书写结语(已给出)。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
② this kind of 这种类型的
③ let sb. do sth. 让某人做某事
[高分句型]
① It could also have a recommendation system to help students find books matching their interests. (动词不定式作后置定语)
② Let’s make reading an exciting adventure. (祈使句)
(二)
【答案】
例文
Dear John,
Glad to hear from you. Here is the picture I’ve chosen for your photo show. It shows a traditional Chinese dragon dance during the Spring Festival. In the photo, a team of performers is lifting a long, colorful dragon. Crowds of people are watching cheerfully, with red lanterns hanging in the background.
I picked this picture because the dragon dance is a symbol of good luck and prosperity in Chinese culture. It not only reflects the vibrancy of our festivals but also showcases teamwork and traditional art. I believe it will help your classmates feel the joy of Chinese cultural celebrations.
Hope your exhibition is a great success!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”、“现在完成时”和“现在进行时”;
③提示:文章写作需要围绕提供的照片展开,涵盖照片内容、选图原因及对摄影展的祝愿,考生应注意清晰描述画面细节,适当补充文化内涵,注意字数要求和语法拼写正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。以回应对方开篇,说明已为摄影展选好照片,并点明照片主题是春节期间的中国传统舞龙;
第二步,具体阐述内容与原因。先详细描述照片中的场景,再解释选这张照片的原因;
第三步,书写结语。表达对摄影展圆满成功的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional Chinese dragon dance中国传统舞龙
②Spring Festival春节
③colorful dragon彩色长龙
④crowds of people一群群人
⑤symbol of good luck and prosperity吉祥与繁荣的象征
⑥vibrancy of festivals节日的活力
[高分句型]
I believe it will help your classmates feel the joy of Chinese cultural celebrations.(宾语从句)
(三)
【答案】
例文:
Dear Teacher,
My name is Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 9. I am writing to recommend myself for “the Most Beautiful Middle School Student”.
I am always friendly to my classmates. When they have problems, I try my best to help them. Besides, I study hard and often get good grades. I also take an active part in activities inside and outside the school, such as volunteer work and sports meetings.
I hope I can be selected. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【总体分析】①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态主要使用一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要点齐全。
【写作步骤】第一步:开头表明身份和写信目的;
第二步:分点说明自身优点,适当补充细节;
第三步:结尾表达期望和感谢。
【亮点词汇】①friendly友善的
②take an active part in积极参与
③volunteer work志愿活动
【高分句型】When they have problems, I try my best to help them.(when引导的时间状语从句)
(四)
【答案】
例文:
In order to create a green school, we can take the following measures. First, each class can collect recyclable waste and use the money from selling it to help students in poor areas. Second, we should learn and use energy-saving methods at home to reduce waste. I think creating a green school is very meaningful. It not only protects our environment but also teaches us to be responsible and caring. Let's work together to make our school greener and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:根据所给三点提示,先说明创建“绿色学校”的两项具体措施,再阐述个人看法,并适当补充细节使内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:用总起句引出措施;
第二步:用First、Second分别介绍两项措施;
第三步:用I think引出个人看法,并说明意义,最后发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①recyclable可回收的
②energy-saving节能的
③meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
①I think creating a green school is very meaningful.(运用了动名词短语作主语)
②It not only protects our environment but also teaches us to be responsible and caring.(运用了not only ... but also ...并列结构)
(五)
【答案】例文
Boys and girls,
I am Li Hua. Our school is holding an activity named “A Greener Life for You and Me”. I’m here to call on everybody to take part in this activity and live a greener life.
First of all, we should clear our plates while having meals. Wasting food is not a good habit. Besides, it is a good idea to reuse the old books. Instead of throwing away those used books, we’d better give them away to the students who are in need. Last but not least, turn off the lights before leaving. We should try our best to save energy.
Let’s take action now and start with the little things around us!
Thanks!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇广播稿;
②时态:主要运用“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中的每一项内容,适当添加细节,如阐述这些行为的意义,并突出写作重点,即号召全校同学厉行节约,绿色生活。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图;
第二步:分别从节约粮食、旧书再利用、节约能源等角度,列举一系列具体且可行的环保行动,并适当阐述意义;
第三步:书写结语,发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①call on号召
②instead of而不是
③turn off关闭
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①I’m here to call on everybody to take part in this activity and live a greener life.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②Instead of throwing away those used books, we’d better give them away to the students who are in need.(who引导的定语从句)
③Let’s take action now and start with the little things around us!(祈使句)
(六)
【答案】范文1
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to apply to work as a volunteer to show the visitors from New Zealand around our campus.
In my opinion, I’m qualified for the position. To begin with, Smart Campus is quite familiar to me. Both teachers and students can surf the Internet on campus. What’s more, I am fond of communicating with others and have a good command of English. Finally, I have some related experience since I have worked as a volunteer several times during junior high school.
I hope I can improve my ability to communicate with others and become more confident. I hope I can get the chance.
Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文2
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to apply to work as a volunteer to show the visitors from New Zealand around our campus. I believe I am suitable for the job with the following advantages.
I am quite familiar with our Smart Campus, where students and teachers can surf the Internet in the classroom. Besides, I am good at communicating and capable of speaking fluent English, which will ensure that I can interact with them well. Last, I have participated in voluntary work several times.
I expect my confidence as well as my social ability can be enhanced. I would appreciate it if you would take my application into consideration.
Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析](以范文1为例)
①题材:本文是一封书信(自荐信);
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于个人优势、期待的收获以及希望获得机会的内容,需适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山表明目的(申请志愿者);
第二步:分点介绍个人优势;
第三步:表达期待收获和希望获得机会。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion以我来看
②be fond of喜爱
③have a good command of熟练掌握
[高分句型]
Finally, I have some related experience since I have worked as a volunteer several times during junior high school. (since引导的原因状语从句)
(七)
【答案】例文
Enjoy Sports, Keep Fit!
I strongly suggest that we teenagers engage in jogging and ball games. These two forms of exercise are easy to start and boost both our physical and mental health.
First, jogging can be done almost anywhere, helping us build patience and improve our heart health. Second, ball games such as basketball help us develop teamwork and communication skills. By taking part in such sports, we can reduce stress from our studies and enjoy quality time with friends.
Let’s encourage everyone around us to participate in sports and create a healthier community together!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己的选择;
第二步,具体陈述理由;
第三步,发出运动倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①engage in 参与
②such as 例如
③participate in 参加
[高分句型]
①I strongly suggest that we teenagers engage in jogging and ball games.(宾语从句)
②By taking part in such sports, we can reduce stress from our studies and enjoy quality time with friends.(动名词作宾语和并列结构)
(八)
【答案】范文:
Hello, my friends! Welcome to China!
I’d like to recommend Guilin, a pearl in southern China. Located in Guangxi Province, this city is renowned for its breathtaking scenery, especially the Li River with its emerald waters and karst mountains.
Here, you can be immersed in nature by cycling through rice terraces or taking a bamboo raft ride. Not only can you explore ancient towns like Xingping, but you also have the chance to taste authentic cuisine such as Guilin rice noodles. For photography lovers, the sunset at Elephant Trunk Hill is a must-visit spot.
My advice? Visit between April and October for the best weather, and try learning basic Chinese phrases to connect with locals.
I’m waiting for you here in this beautiful city!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇面试发言稿;
②时态:主要时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据流程图提示介绍城市特色、活动及建议,语言需流畅且有感染力,注意句式多样性。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山推荐城市;
第二步:分点说明城市特色与活动;
第三步:给出实用建议并热情结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①breathtaking scenery令人惊叹的风景
②be immersed in沉浸于
③authentic cuisine地道美食
④must-visit spots必游景点
[高分句型]
①Located in Guangxi Province, this city is renowned for its breathtaking scenery, especially the Li River with its emerald waters and karst mountains.(非谓语动词作状语)
②Not only can you explore ancient towns like Xingping, but you also have the chance to taste authentic cuisine such as Guilin rice noodles.(倒装句)
(九)
【答案】例文
Dear Photography Club,
I am Xiao Na. Knowing that your club is collecting advice about our graduation video, I am writing to offer my suggestions.
First, I suggest including beautiful campus scenery, such as the playground, library, and classroom buildings. These places hold many memories for us. Second, it would be great to shoot some warm moments. We can show teachers explaining questions patiently and helping us sincerely. Also, we shouldn’t forget classmates discussing problems and helping each other. Finally, for the wishes part, teachers and students could express sincere wishes for everyone’s bright future. This will be very meaningful.
I hope my ideas are helpful. I’m looking forward to seeing the wonderful video!
Yours,
Xiao Na
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,对视频录制内容提出具体建议;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②each other 彼此
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①We can show teachers explaining questions patiently and helping us sincerely.(并列结构)
②I hope my ideas are helpful.(省略that的宾语从句)
(十)
【答案】【作答示例】
(1)
Zero Waste Makes a Difference
Zero waste means reducing rubbish and making the most of what we have. It’s important because it helps protect our planet.
What can we do? First, only buy what you need. Second, choose and use environmentally friendly products. Third, recycle or reuse as many things as possible. Finally, find new uses for old things instead of throwing them away. Spreading the idea of zero waste is also important.
If we just learn to live in green and smart ways, we can make a difference.
(2)
Zero Waste Makes a Difference
As life becomes easier, people often throw things away too quickly. Zero waste means using less and being smart about how we use resources. It’s important because it helps protect the earth and sets a good example for future generations.
Here are some ways to start. At home, instead of throwing broken items away, we can learn to repair them—for example, mending clothes or fixing toys. At school, students can organize events to exchange old books, toys, or clothes. Online, sharing ideas about zero waste can also inspire others to help the planet.
Zero waste isn’t just recycling; it’s a way of life that shows how much we care about our world. If we all make small changes to our daily lives, we can truly make a difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:内容要点已给出,考生需围绕“零废弃”的定义、必要性及行动建议展开,注意逻辑清晰、语言简洁,可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,定义“Zero Waste”,并说明其重要性;
第二步,给出具体的行动建议;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①make the most of充分利用
②instead of而不是
③make a difference产生影响
[高分句型]
①Zero waste means reducing rubbish and making the most of what we have.(what引导的宾语从句)
②It’s important because it helps protect our planet.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③If we just learn to live in green and smart ways, we can make a difference.(if引导的条件状语从句)
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专题08 书面表达
内●容●导●航
第一部分 题型解码 高屋建瓴,掌握全局
题型概述 技巧点拨
第二部分 题型训练 整合应用,模拟实战
题●型●解●码
题型概述
辽宁省中考英语书面表达是英语科目核心必考题型,分值占比高、综合性强,是考查学生英语语言综合运用能力的关键题型,在中考英语中占据至关重要的地位。该题型以应用文写作为主,高频考查类型包含邀请函、通知、活动安排、建议信、倡议书、留言条、电子邮件等,贴近学生校园与日常生活场景,注重实用性与交际性。
考查要点
1. 格式规范:掌握通知、邀请函、书信等不同应用文的固定格式与结构;
2. 内容完整:涵盖题目要求的所有要点,无遗漏、无偏离;
3. 语言准确:词汇、语法、时态、句式使用正确,语句通顺;
4. 逻辑清晰:行文连贯,使用恰当连接词,层次分明;
5. 字数达标:符合中考规定词数要求,书写工整规范。
技巧点拨
第一步:精准审题 圈画题目中的写作类型、写作对象、时间、地点、核心要点、字数要求、人称与时态限制,明确写作任务,避免跑题。
第二步:搭建框架 依据应用文固定格式分段构思,如通知包含标题、正文、落款;邀请函包含称呼、事由、具体信息、结束语、署名,梳理逻辑顺序。
第三步:动笔写作 使用简单准确的基础句型,搭配课本核心词汇,合理运用and、but、so等连接词,确保语句通顺、要点齐全,优先使用熟悉句式,减少语法错误。
第四步:检查修改 通读全文,检查格式、拼写、语法、时态、要点是否完整,修正错误,保持卷面整洁。
常见失分点
1. 应用文格式错误,如缺少称呼、落款、标题;
2. 遗漏题目关键信息要点,内容不完整;
3. 语法错误较多,时态、人称、单复数混用;
4. 语句生硬缺乏连接,逻辑混乱;
5. 字数不足或超标,书写潦草涂改。
备考方向
1. 熟记各类应用文标准模板与常用句型;
2. 积累校园生活、活动、建议类高频词汇与短语;
3. 限时练习真题,强化审题与格式规范意识;
4. 养成写完检查的习惯,提升语言准确性。
题●型●训●练
基础过关
(一)
(2025·辽宁·中考真题)
假定你是李辉,你的外国好友Eric给你发来一封邮件。请仔细阅读这封邮件并写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)感谢信任;(2)介绍午休情况;(3)愿意继续提供帮助。
To: Li Hui
From: Eric
Dear Li Hui,
I’m doing a set of studies on school life in different countries. Now I’m collecting information about lunch breaks. Could you tell me how you manage your lunch breaks? Many thanks!
Yours,
Eric
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
(二)
(2024·辽宁·中考真题)
假定你是李辉,你组建的社团打算在暑假期间设计、制作飞机模型。得知你的英国朋友 Eric有意参与。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)告知你的打算;(2)询问他的想法;(3)期待回复。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
(三)
(2025·辽宁沈阳于洪区·二模)
本周六,学校组织学生们到社区当志愿者。请你写一份倡议书,呼吁全体同学积极踊跃参加社区活动。并提出活动要求。
内容提示:
1. 本次活动发起缘由;2. 本次活动具体安排;3. 本次活动意图与自身感受。
要求:1) 短文应包括所有要点,可以适当发挥,使文章连贯;
2) 词数80左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear classmates,
We are going to go to the community to be volunteers,___________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(四)
(2025·辽宁沈阳铁西区·二模)
沈阳故宫为了满足不断增长的外国游客需求,现面向全市中学招聘暑期英文讲解志愿者。假定你是九年级学生李辉,请你用英文写一封电子邮件。内容包括:
(1)提出申请;(2)个人优势;(3)表达期待。
注意:
(1)词数为80-100;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hui, a 9th-grade student. I have learned that Shenyang Imperial Palace needs English-speaking volunteer guides.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(五)
(2025·辽宁沈阳大东区·二模)
假定你是李辉,你的英国笔友Jim向你了解你对未来人类生活的设想,请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表达问候;2.介绍设想;3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数70—80,开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
I hope this letter finds you well. ____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
(六)
(2025·辽宁大连·一模)
假定你是李辉,学校正在开展以“创新无处不在,用创意点亮生活”为主题的“Campus Brain Game”创意大赛,请你用英文写一篇短文,积极参与投稿,分享你的创意。内容包括:
(1)What would you like to invent?
(2)What problem do you want to solve with it?
注意: (1)词数80-100;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(七)
(2025·辽宁大连·二模)
假定你是李辉。初中毕业在即,你的英国笔友David对你校即将举办的毕业派对 (school-leavers’ party) 很感兴趣,请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1) 你校毕业派对的活动安排;
(2) 你想为派对做的事情;
(3) 询问David英国毕业派对的活动形式。
注意:
(1) 词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear David,
How is everything going?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
LiHui
(八)
(2024·辽宁大连·二模)
假如你是李辉,你校英语社团即将举办主题为“我为家乡代言”的短视频征集活动。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,为录制视频做准备。内容包括:
(1)介绍家乡;(2)表达情感;(3)表示欢迎。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. I come from _________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(九)
(2025·辽宁大连沙河口区·一模)
假如你是李辉,你的英国笔友Peter对你的学校生活感兴趣,向你发来咨询邮件。请你给Peter回复一封邮件,介绍你的学校生活,并邀请他来参观你的学校。
内容包括:
(1) 你的学校生活 (timetable, subjects, activities…) 及你的感受;(2) 发出邀请。
注意:
(1) 词数为80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Peter,
It’s great to hear from you. I am so glad that you________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
(十)
(2025·辽宁大连甘井子区·一模)
假定你是李辉,下周你们学校即将举行“校园文化周| Campus Culture Week”活动。作为学生代表,请你给外教Mr Smith写一封邮件邀请他参加活动。内容包括:
(1)发出邀请;(2)告知活动安排。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Mr Smith,
How is everything going?
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
能力进阶
(一)
(2025·辽宁大连西岗区·一模)
假如你是李辉。你所在的学校要举办科技节“The Science and Technology Festival”。美国交换生Eric有意参加。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
要点如下:
(1)科技节的安排;(2)询问他的想法;(3)期待回复。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)信中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;
(3)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
(二)
(2025·辽宁大连中山区·一模)
每年的4月22日是“World Earth Day”,值此时节,你校英语社团将开展以“Save Our World”为主题的短视频征集活动。假如你是李辉,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,为录制视频做准备。
内容包括:
(1)说明重要性;(2)提出建议;(3)表达呼吁。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数内;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. Now I’m talking about saving our world. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(三)
(2025·辽宁锦州·一模)
假定你是李华,学校最近将课间休息时间从10分钟延长到了15分钟。你觉得这个改变很有意义,想和你的英国笔友Tom分享这件事。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.告知课间时间延长这一变化和你的感受;
2.谈谈你和同学们在课间变化后的活动及其好处:
3.询问 Tom所在学校的课间时长及他的感受。
注意:
1.词数80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
2 .可适当增加细节。以使行文连贯:
3.邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
4. 参考词汇: extend (v、延长), the break time between classes, benefit (益处)
Dear Tom.
How’s it going? I have some good news to tell you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
(2025·辽宁营口·一模)
碧水蓝天是我们共同的憧憬,而窗明几净的校园环境需要同学们的共同保护。校英语社团开展“Bright view around us”征文活动,请你投稿。
内容包括:
(1)描述校园环境;(2)做过哪些事情;(3)发出号召。
注意:
(1)词数80~100;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Bright View around Us
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(五)
(2025·辽宁本溪·二模)
假定你是李辉,你的英国笔友Mike要来我们学校做交换生,他对这里的一切都不了解,于是向你咨询。请你给他回邮件,内容包括:
1.关于风俗方面的建议;2.邀请他到你家生活;3.期待见面。
注意:
1.词数80~100,开头已给出,不记入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件中不能出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Mike,
Thank you for your email and welcome to China! Let me tell you how to behave properly here.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
(六)
(2025·江苏常州·中考真题)假如你校英文报发起了关于学生说脏话现象的讨论,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你对他人说脏话的观点和建议。
提示:
1. Why shouldn’t we say dirty words?
2. How can we help others stop saying dirty words?
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
I really don’t think it’s right for students to say dirty words. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(七)
(2025·江苏宿迁·中考真题)
学校英语角开展以“健康饮食”为主题的演讲比赛,假如你是李华,请你以“A Healthy Diet”为题写一份英语演讲稿。要求:参照下表,阐述健康饮食的重要性,列举不良饮食习惯及危害,并给出合理的建议。
A Healthy Diet
健康饮食的重要性
1.提供能量
2.强壮身体
不良饮食习惯及危害
1.甜食:对牙齿有害
2.油炸食品(fried food):使身体变胖
合理的建议
1.按时吃饭
2.多吃水果、蔬菜
3.……(补充2点)
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
A Healthy Diet
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “A Healthy Diet”.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
(八)
(2024·四川攀枝花·中考真题)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友John来信说对你校课后服务课程很感兴趣,请你给他写一封回信。
内容包括:
1. 本学期开设的三门课程:Calligraphy(书法),Martial Art(武术),Vegetable-planting;
2. 你选择的其中一门课程及其开课情况(如上课时间、地点等);
3. 你选择这门课程的原因。
要求:
1. 词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 要点提示均须涉及,有恰当的结尾,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯合理;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear John,
Knowing that you’re interested in optional courses in our school, I’m writing to tell you something about them.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
(九)
(2025·四川资阳·中考真题)
你校微信公众号英语专栏正开展以“我的职业规划”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.你想从事的职业;
2.你选择该职业的理由(至少两点);
3.你实现职业规划的措施(至少两条)。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息;
3.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
My Career Plan
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(十)
(2025·四川乐山·中考真题)
假定你是李华,昨日你校举办了学生英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示,写一封邮件,向你的朋友John介绍本次活动。
1.比赛时间;2.比赛地点;3.比赛情况;
4.比赛结果;5.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数80词左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.根据提示要点写作,并适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校名等信息。
参考词汇:英语演讲比赛English speech competition
Dear John,
I’m so excited to talk with you about our English speech competition that was held yesterday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
真题实战
(一)
(2025·北京·中考真题)
假设你是李华,你校正在开展“书香校园”活动,英语社团公众号打算做一期以“Dream Library”为主题的推送,为此在校内征集想法。请用英语给公众号留言,提出你的设想,并简要说明它会带来哪些好处。
提示词语:recommend, new, experience, explore, interest
内容提示:
●What is your dream library like?
●How can students benefit from your idea?
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. __________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my dream will come true. Thanks.
(二)
(2025·山东日照·中考真题)
假如你是李华,你的美国朋友John所在的学校要举办主题为“多彩文化”的图片展览活动,他来信希望你提供一张关于中国文化的图片。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,并附上所选图片。邮件内容包括:
1.描述图片内容;2.说明选择原因。
注意:
1.词数:90左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear John,
Glad to hear from you. Here is the picture I’ve chosen for your photo show.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
(2025·黑龙江哈尔滨·中考真题)
假如你是九年一班的学生李平,你校英语网站正在评选“最美中学生(the Most Beautiful Middle School Student)”,请你用英语给负责此项活动的老师写一封自荐信。
写作要点:
1.对同学友善;2.努力学习;3.积极参加校内外活动。
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3.字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰。
4.词数100左右。
参考词汇: select(vt.评选), activities inside and outside the school(校内外活动)
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(四)
(2025·山东聊城·中考真题)
2016年我国颁布实施了《全国环境宣传教育工作纲要》,提出在全国逐步开展创建“绿色学校”活动。请你根据下面的提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈创建“绿色学校”可采取什么措施以及你对创建“绿色学校”的看法。
提示:
1. 每个班都收集可回收利用的废品,然后用卖废品的钱去帮助贫困地区的学生。
2. 学生学会家庭节约能源的方法,并使用它们以减少浪费。
3. 你对创建“绿色学校”的看法。
注意:
1. 短文词数:80左右。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容,但可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
4. 短文的开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
In order to create a green school, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(五)
(2025·四川绵阳·中考真题)
假定你是校英文广播站主持人李华,学校正在开展“绿色生活,有你有我”主题活动。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文广播稿,号召全校同学厉行节约,绿色生活。
clear your plate
reuse the books
...
注意:1. 短文需包含所有提示信息,并补充至少一点倡议;
2. 词数100左右,首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:call on号召
Boys and girls,
I am Li Hua. Our school is holding an activity named “A Greener Life for You and Me”.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks!
(六)
(2023·广东深圳·中考真题)
假定你是李华。下周五,新西兰教育考察团将访问你校,了解学校“智慧校园”的建设情况。学校委托外教Mr. Brown在学生中招募志愿者来接待考察团。请你给Mr. Brown写一封自荐信,内容包括:
1.个人优势:①熟知“智慧校园”,如师生能在教室上网;
②乐于交流;
③擅长英语; ④……;
2.期待的收获;
3.希望获得机会。
注意:
1.词数为80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.要点齐全,可适当增加细节;
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4.条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
参考词汇:智慧校园Smart Campus 上网surf the internet
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to apply to work as a volunteer to show the visitors from New Zealand around our campus. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
(七)
(2025·山东济南·中考真题)
假定你是李华,你校英语社团发起了关于“激励青少年进行体育运动”的主题论坛活动。请你根据思维导图做出两种最佳选择,并用英语写一篇文章,发表在论坛上。内容包括:
1. 你的选择;
2. 陈述理由;
3. 发出倡议。
注意:1. 词数100左右,题目已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:encouraging激励人的
Enjoy Sports, Keep Fit!
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(八)
(2025·江苏无锡·中考真题)
随着免签政策的实施,外国游客纷至沓来。为传播中华文化,讲好中国故事,某旅游服务机构正在招募一批志愿者,要求报名者面试时用英语推荐国内任意一个有特色的城市。假设你是李华,你想报名参加面试,并已绘制了如下流程图,请根据图示内容完成面试发言稿。
注意事项:1. 发言稿内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于90个,发言稿开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 发言稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Hello, my friends Welcome to China!
I’d like to recommend… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m waiting for you here in this beautiful city.
(九)
(2025·黑龙江大庆·中考真题)
假定你是红星中学的学生小娜,毕业在即,学校摄影社团拟制作“成长印记·青春映像”毕业纪念视频,现面向全体同学征集拍摄建议。请你用英语写一封邮件,对视频录制内容提出建议。
写作提示:
1. 校园之美:校园风景、建筑等;
2. 温暖瞬间:老师耐心答疑、真诚帮助等;同学间讨论问题、互帮互助等;
3. 成长祝福:……
参考词汇:shoot a video(拍摄视频) campus scenery(校园风景)
explain questions patiently(耐心答疑) express sincere wishes(表达真诚的祝福)
写作要求:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
2. 写作词数应为90个左右(首段已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 不得泄露个人信息。
Dear Photography Club,
I am Xiao Na. Knowing that your club is collecting advice about our graduation video, I am writing to offer my suggestions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Xiao Na
(十)
(2025·广东广州·中考真题)
你校英文报下期征稿的主题为“零废弃 (Zero Waste)”。请根据以下征稿启事写一篇短文投稿。
Articles Wanted: Zero Waste Makes a Difference
● Zero Waste: Making less rubbish and using everything around us in a smart way.
● Your article should include:
1. What is “zero waste”?
2. Why is it necessary?
3. What can we do?
Send your article to sunshineschoolweekly@123.com before July 3, 2025.
注意:
1.短文需包含征稿要求的三点内容,并可适当拓展信息;
2.写作词数80左右;
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Zero Waste Makes a Difference
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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专题08 书面表达
内●容●导●航
第一部分 题型解码 高屋建瓴,掌握全局
题型概述 技巧点拨
第二部分 题型训练 整合应用,模拟实战
题●型●解●码
题型概述
辽宁省中考英语书面表达是英语科目核心必考题型,分值占比高、综合性强,是考查学生英语语言综合运用能力的关键题型,在中考英语中占据至关重要的地位。该题型以应用文写作为主,高频考查类型包含邀请函、通知、活动安排、建议信、倡议书、留言条、电子邮件等,贴近学生校园与日常生活场景,注重实用性与交际性。
考查要点
1. 格式规范:掌握通知、邀请函、书信等不同应用文的固定格式与结构;
2. 内容完整:涵盖题目要求的所有要点,无遗漏、无偏离;
3. 语言准确:词汇、语法、时态、句式使用正确,语句通顺;
4. 逻辑清晰:行文连贯,使用恰当连接词,层次分明;
5. 字数达标:符合中考规定词数要求,书写工整规范。
技巧点拨
第一步:精准审题 圈画题目中的写作类型、写作对象、时间、地点、核心要点、字数要求、人称与时态限制,明确写作任务,避免跑题。
第二步:搭建框架 依据应用文固定格式分段构思,如通知包含标题、正文、落款;邀请函包含称呼、事由、具体信息、结束语、署名,梳理逻辑顺序。
第三步:动笔写作 使用简单准确的基础句型,搭配课本核心词汇,合理运用and、but、so等连接词,确保语句通顺、要点齐全,优先使用熟悉句式,减少语法错误。
第四步:检查修改 通读全文,检查格式、拼写、语法、时态、要点是否完整,修正错误,保持卷面整洁。
常见失分点
1. 应用文格式错误,如缺少称呼、落款、标题;
2. 遗漏题目关键信息要点,内容不完整;
3. 语法错误较多,时态、人称、单复数混用;
4. 语句生硬缺乏连接,逻辑混乱;
5. 字数不足或超标,书写潦草涂改。
备考方向
1. 熟记各类应用文标准模板与常用句型;
2. 积累校园生活、活动、建议类高频词汇与短语;
3. 限时练习真题,强化审题与格式规范意识;
4. 养成写完检查的习惯,提升语言准确性。
题●型●训●练
基础过关
(一)
(2025·辽宁·中考真题)
假定你是李辉,你的外国好友Eric给你发来一封邮件。请仔细阅读这封邮件并写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)感谢信任;(2)介绍午休情况;(3)愿意继续提供帮助。
To: Li Hui
From: Eric
Dear Li Hui,
I’m doing a set of studies on school life in different countries. Now I’m collecting information about lunch breaks. Could you tell me how you manage your lunch breaks? Many thanks!
Yours,
Eric
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文:
Dear Eric,
Thank you for your trust! I’m glad to help with your study on school life. Here’s what I can share about lunch breaks in my school.
Our lunch break lasts about 50 minutes, from 12:10 p.m. to 1:00 p.m. Most students bring meals from home or buy food in the school cafeteria, which offers a variety of dishes like rice, noodles, and vegetables. After eating, some friends chat together, while others take a short walk outside to relax. Personally, I enjoy reading a book or listening to music quietly in the classroom during this time—it helps me recharge for afternoon classes.
If you need more details or have other questions, feel free to ask! I’d be happy to assist further.
Wish your study a great success!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要点齐全,可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接回应对方需求。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。描述午休时长、用餐方式、活动内容和个人感受。
第三步,书写结语。表达持续帮助的意愿,体现友好态度。
[亮点词汇]
① variety多样性
② recharge恢复精力
③ personally就个人而言
[高分句型]
① Most students bring meals from home or buy food in the school cafeteria, which offers a variety of dishes like rice, noodles, and vegetables. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(二)
(2024·辽宁·中考真题)
假定你是李辉,你组建的社团打算在暑假期间设计、制作飞机模型。得知你的英国朋友 Eric有意参与。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)告知你的打算;(2)询问他的想法;(3)期待回复。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you about an exciting project that my club is planning for the summer vacation. We are going to design and build model airplanes.
Since I know you have a great interest in aviation, I thought you might want to join us. It would be wonderful if you could share your ideas and skills with us. Please let me know what you think about this plan. Your participation would mean a lot to us.
Look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,并告诉对方你的暑期打算;
第二步,询问对方的想法;
第三步,期待对方的回复,并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be going to do sth. 打算做某事
②share sth. with sb. 与某人分享……
③have a great interest in 对……有极大的兴趣
[高分句型]
①I’m writing to tell you about an exciting project that my club is planning for the summer vacation.(that引导的定语从句)
②It would be wonderful if you could share your ideas and skills with us.(if引导的条件状语从句)
(三)
(2025·辽宁沈阳于洪区·二模)
本周六,学校组织学生们到社区当志愿者。请你写一份倡议书,呼吁全体同学积极踊跃参加社区活动。并提出活动要求。
内容提示:
1. 本次活动发起缘由;2. 本次活动具体安排;3. 本次活动意图与自身感受。
要求:1) 短文应包括所有要点,可以适当发挥,使文章连贯;
2) 词数80左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear classmates,
We are going to go to the community to be volunteers,___________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
We are going to go to the community to be volunteers, because some people there need our help.
We will meet at the gate of our school at eight o’clock this Saturday morning. Then we will go there by bus. Please remember to bring a plastic bag with you, because we will help to collect the rubbish on the street. Besides, we will help to clean the chairs on the square. What’s more, we will help to grow some flowers and trees.
I hope all of you can take part in this volunteer activity. I believe you will have a meaningful day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头介绍本次活动的发起缘由;
第二步,介绍本次活动的具体安排和活动意图;
第三步,表达自己的感受,呼吁全体同学积极踊跃参加社区活动。
[亮点词汇]
①remember to do sth.记得做某事
②what’s more更重要的是
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①I hope all of you can take part in this volunteer activity.(宾语从句)
②I believe you will have a meaningful day.(宾语从句)
(四)
(2025·辽宁沈阳铁西区·二模)
沈阳故宫为了满足不断增长的外国游客需求,现面向全市中学招聘暑期英文讲解志愿者。假定你是九年级学生李辉,请你用英文写一封电子邮件。内容包括:
(1)提出申请;(2)个人优势;(3)表达期待。
注意:
(1)词数为80-100;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hui, a 9th-grade student. I have learned that Shenyang Imperial Palace needs English-speaking volunteer guides.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】示例:
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hui, a 9th-grade student. I have learned that Shenyang Imperial Palace needs English-speaking volunteer guides. I’m eager to apply for this role.
I have several strengths. First, I’m fluent in English and have won prizes in school English speech competitions. Second, I’m familiar with Shenyang’s history, especially the stories behind the Imperial Palace, which I’ve studied through books and documentaries. Additionally, I’m good at communicating with others and enjoy sharing knowledge.
I believe I can serve foreign visitors well and help them appreciate the beauty of Chinese culture. I’m looking forward to your reply and the opportunity to contribute as a volunteer.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,提出申请,介绍自己的基本信息;
第二步,具体介绍自己的优势;
第三步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be eager to do渴望做某事
②be familiar with对……熟悉
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①Second, I’m familiar with Shenyang’s history, especially the stories behind the Imperial Palace, which I’ve studied through books and documentaries.(定语从句)
②I believe I can serve foreign visitors well and help them appreciate the beauty of Chinese culture.(宾语从句)
(五)
(2025·辽宁沈阳大东区·二模)
假定你是李辉,你的英国笔友Jim向你了解你对未来人类生活的设想,请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表达问候;2.介绍设想;3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数70—80,开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
I hope this letter finds you well. ____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
I hope this letter finds you well.
Thanks for asking about my ideas on future life. I think it’ll be amazing. Robots will handle most housework, like cleaning and cooking, giving us more free time. We might live in smart homes where everything is controlled by our voices. Travel could be easier too—maybe flying cars will make commutes faster. Also, clean energy like solar power will be widely used to protect the environment.
I’m really looking forward to such a life. What do you think? Write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:主要使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达问候;
第二步,具体介绍对未来生活的畅想;
第三步:表达期待和希望收到对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①be used to do sth.被用来做某事
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①We might live in smart homes where everything is controlled by our voices.(定语从句)
(六)
(2025·辽宁大连·一模)
假定你是李辉,学校正在开展以“创新无处不在,用创意点亮生活”为主题的“Campus Brain Game”创意大赛,请你用英文写一篇短文,积极参与投稿,分享你的创意。内容包括:
(1)What would you like to invent?
(2)What problem do you want to solve with it?
注意: (1)词数80-100;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】例文
I’d like to invent a new kind of clothes for the old.
I was very close to my grandma when I was growing up. Now she is 80 years old. When the weather changes, she usually catches a cold easily. I love her so much, so I hope she is always healthy. The clothes will be made from special material. It will change with the weather. It will be warm when the weather is cold and it will be cool when the weather is hot. I hope the old will live a healthier life with it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文,创意分享类说明文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:需按要求分享创意,包括想发明的东西及要解决的问题,不能遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明想发明的东西 —— 一种给老人的新衣服;
第二步,阐述想解决的问题:通过讲述奶奶因天气变化易感冒,引出发明能随天气变化调节温度的衣服这一创意,说明衣服材质特殊及功能;
第三步,表达期望,即希望老人能借此过上更健康的生活。
[亮点词汇]
① be close to 与……关系亲密
② catch a cold 感冒
③ be made from 由……制成
[高分句型]
① I was very close to my grandma when I was growing up.(when引导时间状语从句 )
② I hope the old will live a healthier life with it.(hope后为省略了that的宾语从句)
(七)
(2025·辽宁大连·二模)
假定你是李辉。初中毕业在即,你的英国笔友David对你校即将举办的毕业派对 (school-leavers’ party) 很感兴趣,请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1) 你校毕业派对的活动安排;
(2) 你想为派对做的事情;
(3) 询问David英国毕业派对的活动形式。
注意:
(1) 词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear David,
How is everything going?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
LiHui
【答案】例文
Dear David,
How is everything going? I’m so glad you’re interested in our school-leavers’ party! It will be held in the school hall on June 25th. We’ve planned some wonderful activities, including watching a video about our 3-year school life and giving speeches to thank our teachers and parents. There will be some performances and delicious food as well.
I’m going to design a “Dream Tree” for the party. Everyone can write their future dreams on paper leaves and hang them on the tree. It’ll be a good chance to show my painting skills.
What are the British school leavers’ party like? Do students wear traditional clothes? Are parents invited to attend the celebrations?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,按题目要求叙述毕业派对的活动安排及自己想为派对做的事情。
第二步,询问David英国毕业派对的活动形式。
[亮点词汇]
①as well 也
②invite sb to do 邀请某人去做
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①There will be some performances and delicious food as well. (There be句型)
②It’ll be a good chance to show my painting skills. (it作形式主语)
(八)
(2024·辽宁大连·二模)
假如你是李辉,你校英语社团即将举办主题为“我为家乡代言”的短视频征集活动。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,为录制视频做准备。内容包括:
(1)介绍家乡;(2)表达情感;(3)表示欢迎。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. I come from _________________________________________________
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【答案】One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. I come from Baiyangdian, Hebei. Baiyangdian is a very beautiful lake, especially in summer, and it is famous throughout the country. Every year, many tourists come for a visit. You can enjoy the beautiful lotuses and green reeds. You can also row a boat on the river. This river is very clear, and you can see many fish swimming inside.
I have lived here since I was born. I love my hometown very much. I hope you can come here when you have free time. I believe you will have a good time here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:本文以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:题目要求根据提示介绍一下自己的家乡,包括介绍家乡的情况、表达情感,并表示欢迎。写作时注意适当增加细节,不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题;
第二步,根据所给要点,介绍家乡的情况;
第三步,最后表达情感,并表示欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①come for a visit来参观
②row a boat去划船
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I have lived here since I was born.(since引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope you can come here when you have free time.(省略that的宾语从句;when引导的时间状语从句)
(九)
(2025·辽宁大连沙河口区·一模)
假如你是李辉,你的英国笔友Peter对你的学校生活感兴趣,向你发来咨询邮件。请你给Peter回复一封邮件,介绍你的学校生活,并邀请他来参观你的学校。
内容包括:
(1) 你的学校生活 (timetable, subjects, activities…) 及你的感受;(2) 发出邀请。
注意:
(1) 词数为80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Peter,
It’s great to hear from you. I am so glad that you________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
It’s great to hear from you. I am so glad that you are interested in my school life. Let me share my school life with you.
My school starts at 8:00 am and ends at 6:00 pm. We study various subjects like Chinese, math, English, and science. My favorite subject is English because it helps me communicate with friends like you! After class, I often join activities, such as basketball and the school band. They make my life colorful and fun.
Would you like to visit my school? I’d love to show you around and introduce you to my friends. Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示要点介绍自己的学校生活,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己的学校生活;
第二步,介绍学校的时间表、学习科目以及课外活动;
第三步,表达自己想邀请他来参观学校。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某事
②communicate with sb.和某人交流
③after class课后
[高分句型]
My favorite is English because it helps me communicate with friends like you! (because引导原因状语从句)
(十)
(2025·辽宁大连甘井子区·一模)
假定你是李辉,下周你们学校即将举行“校园文化周| Campus Culture Week”活动。作为学生代表,请你给外教Mr Smith写一封邮件邀请他参加活动。内容包括:
(1)发出邀请;(2)告知活动安排。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Mr Smith,
How is everything going?
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Mr Smith,
How is everything going? I’m writing to cordially invite you to our Campus Culture Week starting next Monday.
The event will last from March 18th to 22nd, featuring diverse activities. On Monday, traditional art exhibitions will be held on the school playground, followed by international culture displays on Tuesday. Additionally, a talent show is scheduled for Thursday evening in the auditorium. We sincerely hope you can attend the closing ceremony on Friday afternoon, where students will present drama and music performances. Your presence would greatly enrich our event!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头,引出话题,发出邀请;
第二步、介绍活动安排;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①from…to…从……到……
②followed by其次是
③the closing ceremony闭幕式
[高分句型]
We sincerely hope you can attend the closing ceremony on Friday afternoon, where students will present drama and music performances.(where引导非限制性定语从句)
能力进阶
(一)
(2025·辽宁大连西岗区·一模)
假如你是李辉。你所在的学校要举办科技节“The Science and Technology Festival”。美国交换生Eric有意参加。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
要点如下:
(1)科技节的安排;(2)询问他的想法;(3)期待回复。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)信中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;
(3)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
How is everything going? Our school is going to hold the Science and Technology Festival. I heard that you want to participate in this activity. Let me introduce it to you.
The Science and Technology Festival will last for two days, from next Monday to Tuesday. On the first day, there will be a lecture by a famous scientist, who will share the latest scientific achievements. The next day, we can participate in various hands-on activities, where we can make simple robots by ourselves.
I know you’re interested in it. What do you think of these arrangements? What activity do you want to participate in?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本题是一封电子邮件;
②时态:本文用一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:向美国交换生Eric介绍科技节的安排,询问他的想法,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问候,说明科技节即将举行,引出下文;
第二步,介绍科技节的安排,注意细节充分,行文流畅;
第三步,询问对方的想法,注意用词准确;
第四步,表达期待对方回信。
[亮点词汇]
①participate in… 参加……
②be interested in… 对……感兴趣
③think of 认为
[高分句型]
①On the first day, there will be a lecture by a famous scientist, who will share the latest scientific achievements.(定语从句)
②I know you’re interested in it.(宾语从句)
(二)
(2025·辽宁大连中山区·一模)
每年的4月22日是“World Earth Day”,值此时节,你校英语社团将开展以“Save Our World”为主题的短视频征集活动。假如你是李辉,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,为录制视频做准备。
内容包括:
(1)说明重要性;(2)提出建议;(3)表达呼吁。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数内;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. Now I’m talking about saving our world. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. Now I’m talking about saving our world. Our world is facing many problems. Pollution is harming our air, water, and soil. Forests are being cut down, and many animals are losing their homes. It’s time for us to take action.
To protect our world, we can start with small actions. First, reduce plastic use by carrying reusable bags and bottles. Second, save energy and water by turning off lights when not in use. Third, practice recycling and support tree-planting activities.
Let’s work together! Start today, inspire others, and make Earth Day every day. Remember, the future of our world lies in our hands. Let’s join hands and make a difference!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:本文以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,说明拯救地球的重要性;
第二步,提出建议,如减少使用塑料袋、节约能源和水等;
第三步,表达呼吁,大家一起保护地球。
[亮点词汇]
①cut down砍倒
②turn off关闭
③take action采取行动
④lie in在于
[高分句型]
①It’s time for us to take action.(it作形式主语)
②Second, save energy and water by turning off lights when not in use.(祈使句;when引导的时间状语从句)
(三)
(2025·辽宁锦州·一模)
假定你是李华,学校最近将课间休息时间从10分钟延长到了15分钟。你觉得这个改变很有意义,想和你的英国笔友Tom分享这件事。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.告知课间时间延长这一变化和你的感受;
2.谈谈你和同学们在课间变化后的活动及其好处:
3.询问 Tom所在学校的课间时长及他的感受。
注意:
1.词数80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
2 .可适当增加细节。以使行文连贯:
3.邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
4. 参考词汇: extend (v、延长), the break time between classes, benefit (益处)
Dear Tom.
How’s it going? I have some good news to tell you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
How’s it going? I have some good news to tell you. Recently, our school has extended the break time between classes from 10 minutes to 15 minutes. My classmates and I have more time to enjoy ourselves. I think this change is great. It has many benefits. First of all, we now have enough time to truly relax. We can do more outdoor activities, which helps us get more energy. Also, we can chat more with our classmates, sharing interesting stories and having more chances to make new friends. Moreover, it allows us enough time to prepare for the next class, such as getting the textbooks ready and having a quick review.
What about the break time in your school? Do you have long enough breaks to enjoy your school life?
What about your feeling?
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“课间时间延长”这一变化及其相关感受、活动和好处的介绍,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“告知课间时间延长这一变化”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“感受、课间活动及其好处”几个方面重点介绍课间时间延长后的情况;
第三步,书写结语。询问“Tom所在学校的课间时长及他的感受”,表达交流的意愿。
[亮点词汇]
①extend...from...to...把……从……延长到……
②enjoy oneself过得愉快,玩得开心
③have enough time to do sth.有足够的时间做某事
④chances to do sth.有机会做某事
[高分句型]
①We can do more outdoor activities, which helps us get more energy.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(四)
(2025·辽宁营口·一模)
碧水蓝天是我们共同的憧憬,而窗明几净的校园环境需要同学们的共同保护。校英语社团开展“Bright view around us”征文活动,请你投稿。
内容包括:
(1)描述校园环境;(2)做过哪些事情;(3)发出号召。
注意:
(1)词数80~100;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Bright View around Us
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【答案】例文:
Bright View around Us
Our campus is a lovely place with green trees, colorful flowers, and clean paths. The air is fresh, and the sky above often looks bright blue. Classrooms are tidy, with desks and chairs in order. We all feel happy studying here.
To keep it beautiful, I always pick up litter when I see it and throw it into dustbins. I also help water the plants in the school garden. During activities, I remind classmates not to write on walls or damage trees.
Let’s work together! Protecting our clean and bright campus needs everyone’s effort. Small actions like saving water, recycling waste, and keeping our desks neat can make a big difference. Join me to create a greener, more beautiful school!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为征文投稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主,部分描述过去做过的事情可以用“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“描述校园环境”“做过哪些事情”“发出号召”这三个要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。以“Bright view around us”为主题,引出对校园环境的描述;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。先描述校园环境的优美,如“碧水蓝天”“窗明几净”等;接着列举同学们为保护校园环境做过的事情,如“捡拾垃圾”“爱护花草树木”等;
第三步,书写结语。发出号召,呼吁同学们共同保护校园环境,让校园更加美丽。
[亮点词汇]
①a lovely place 一个可爱的地方
②colorful flowers 色彩鲜艳的花朵
③in order 整齐有序
④make a big difference 有很大影响;起很大作用
[高分句型]
①Our campus is a lovely place with green trees, colorful flowers, and clean paths.(“with + 名词短语”作后置定语,描述校园环境)
②Protecting our clean and bright campus needs everyone’s effort.(动名词短语“Protecting our clean and bright campus”作主语)
(五)
(2025·辽宁本溪·二模)
假定你是李辉,你的英国笔友Mike要来我们学校做交换生,他对这里的一切都不了解,于是向你咨询。请你给他回邮件,内容包括:
1.关于风俗方面的建议;2.邀请他到你家生活;3.期待见面。
注意:
1.词数80~100,开头已给出,不记入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件中不能出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Mike,
Thank you for your email and welcome to China! Let me tell you how to behave properly here.
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Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】Dear Mike,
Thank you for your email and welcome to China! Let me tell you how to behave properly here.
When you meet someone for the first time, you’re supposed to shake hands. And you should always bring a small gift when you show up at someone’s house for the first time. When you’re eating at the table, it’s impolite to start eating first if there are older people at the table. And you’re not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Would you like to live with my family while you’re here? My family are all very nice and helpful. And we hope to be your host family.
Bye for now and I look forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。对Mike即将来学校做交换生表示欢迎;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。给Mike介绍一些中国的风俗;
第三步,书写结语。邀请Mike来家里生活并期待双方的见面。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
②show up露面,出现
③hope to希望
[高分句型]
①When you meet someone for the first time, you’re supposed to shake hands. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②When you’re eating at the table, it’s impolite to start eating first if there are older people at the table. (when引导的时间状语从句;if引导的条件状语从句;it作形式主语)
(六)
(2025·江苏常州·中考真题)假如你校英文报发起了关于学生说脏话现象的讨论,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你对他人说脏话的观点和建议。
提示:
1. Why shouldn’t we say dirty words?
2. How can we help others stop saying dirty words?
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
I really don’t think it’s right for students to say dirty words. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I really don’t think it’s right for students to say dirty words. Dirty words are harmful to both the speakers and listeners. Listeners will feel uncomfortable while speakers will surely leave a bad impression on others. Nobody is willing to make friends with those impolite students.
To help dirty words speakers stop this bad habit, we have much to do. First of all, family members and teachers can have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm. What’s more, we can make rules to help them. When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them. By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍为什么我们不能说脏话;
第二步,介绍怎样才能帮助他人不再说脏话。
[亮点词汇]
①be harmful to 对……有害
②leave a bad impression on others 给他人留下不好的印象
③make friends with 和……交朋友
④What’s more 此外
[高分句型]
①When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!(省略that的宾语从句)
(七)
(2025·江苏宿迁·中考真题)
学校英语角开展以“健康饮食”为主题的演讲比赛,假如你是李华,请你以“A Healthy Diet”为题写一份英语演讲稿。要求:参照下表,阐述健康饮食的重要性,列举不良饮食习惯及危害,并给出合理的建议。
A Healthy Diet
健康饮食的重要性
1.提供能量
2.强壮身体
不良饮食习惯及危害
1.甜食:对牙齿有害
2.油炸食品(fried food):使身体变胖
合理的建议
1.按时吃饭
2.多吃水果、蔬菜
3.……(补充2点)
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
A Healthy Diet
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “A Healthy Diet”.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
【答案】例文
A Healthy Diet
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “A Healthy Diet”.
As we all know, a healthy diet plays a vital role in our life. It can provide us with enough energy to study and play. Also, it helps build up our bodies and makes us stronger.
However, some bad eating habits are common among us. Many students love eating sweet food, which is bad for our teeth. And fried food is popular too, but it can make us fat easily.
So how can we have a healthy diet? First, we should eat regularly. Second, we are supposed to eat more fruits and vegetables, which are rich in vitamins. Third, drink more milk and water instead of sugary drinks. Last but not least, control the amount of food we eat and avoid overeating.
Let’s start from now on and form a good eating habit. Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy a happy life.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章写作需要围绕“健康饮食”展开,涵盖健康饮食的重要性、常见的不良饮食习惯及健康饮食的方法,考生应注意条理清晰地阐述观点,适当补充具体例子,不要遗漏任何要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山说明演讲主题是“健康饮食”,并指出健康饮食在生活中的重要作用;
第二步,具体分析内容。先阐述健康饮食的益处,再列举学生中常见的不良饮食习惯,最后给出健康饮食的具体建议;
第三步,书写结语。呼吁大家从现在开始养成良好的饮食习惯,以保持健康、享受幸福生活,并结束演讲。
[亮点词汇]
①vital role 重要作用
②build up our bodies 增强体质
③fried food 油炸食品
④be rich in vitamins 富含维生素
⑤sugary drinks 含糖饮料
⑥avoid overeating 避免暴饮暴食
[高分句型]
①As we all know, a healthy diet plays a vital role in our life.(as引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Many students love eating sweet food, which is bad for our teeth.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
③Second, we are supposed to eat more fruits and vegetables, which are rich in vitamins.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
④Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy a happy life.(only+介词短语置于句首引起的部分倒装句)
(八)
(2024·四川攀枝花·中考真题)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友John来信说对你校课后服务课程很感兴趣,请你给他写一封回信。
内容包括:
1. 本学期开设的三门课程:Calligraphy(书法),Martial Art(武术),Vegetable-planting;
2. 你选择的其中一门课程及其开课情况(如上课时间、地点等);
3. 你选择这门课程的原因。
要求:
1. 词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 要点提示均须涉及,有恰当的结尾,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯合理;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear John,
Knowing that you’re interested in optional courses in our school, I’m writing to tell you something about them.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】范文
Dear John,
Knowing that you’re interested in optional courses in our school, I’m writing to tell you something about them.
This term, our school offers three courses: Calligraphy, Martial Art and Vegetable-planting. They are all popular among students. I chose Calligraphy. It is held every Tuesday and Thursday afternoon in the art room. Our teacher is an experienced calligrapher who teaches us basic brush techniques and how to write different styles of characters.
I picked Calligraphy because I’ve always been interested in Chinese traditional culture. Through this course, I can not only improve my writing skills but also learn more about the history behind Chinese characters.
What do you think of these courses? Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容(本学期开设的三门课程、自己选择的课程及开课情况、选择该课程的原因),适当添加细节,确保内容完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明写信目的,介绍学校本学期开设的三门课后服务课程;
第二步,具体说明自己选择的课程及其开课情况;
第三步,阐述选择这门课程的原因,最后以询问对方看法作结尾,呼应开头。
[亮点词汇]
①offer 提供
②experienced 有经验的
③basic techniques 基本技巧
④traditional culture 传统文化
[高分句型]
① Our teacher is an experienced calligrapher who teaches us basic brush techniques and how to write different styles of characters.(who引导的定语从句)
② Through this course, I can not only improve my writing skills but also learn more about the history behind Chinese characters.(not only...but also... 连接并列成分)
(九)
(2025·四川资阳·中考真题)
你校微信公众号英语专栏正开展以“我的职业规划”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.你想从事的职业;
2.你选择该职业的理由(至少两点);
3.你实现职业规划的措施(至少两条)。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息;
3.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
My Career Plan
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
My Career Plan
I want to be an English teacher when I grow up. There are two main reasons for my choice. First, I love English and enjoy sharing knowledge with others. Second, teachers can help shape young minds, which is very meaningful.
To achieve my goal, I will work hard to improve my English skills by reading more English books. I also plan to practice public speaking to become a better communicator. With these efforts, I believe I can make my dream come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:这是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要用一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:要根据题干内容写短文谈谈自己的职业规划,包含职业选择、两点理由和两条措施。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明职业选择并阐述两点理由;
第二步,提出两条措施并表达信心。
[亮点词汇]
①shape young minds 塑造年轻心灵
②public speaking 公开演讲
③communicator 交流者
④make one’s dream come true 实现某人的梦想
[高分句型]
①There are two main reasons for my choice. (There be句型)
②Second, teachers can help shape young minds, which is very meaningful. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
③With these efforts, I believe I can make my dream come true.(省略that的宾语从句)
(十)
(2025·四川乐山·中考真题)
假定你是李华,昨日你校举办了学生英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示,写一封邮件,向你的朋友John介绍本次活动。
1.比赛时间;2.比赛地点;3.比赛情况;
4.比赛结果;5.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数80词左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.根据提示要点写作,并适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校名等信息。
参考词汇:英语演讲比赛English speech competition
Dear John,
I’m so excited to talk with you about our English speech competition that was held yesterday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文:
Dear John,
I’m so excited to talk with you about our English speech competition that was held yesterday.
It took place on the school playground at 3 p.m. 20 students took an active part in this wonderful event. All the students gathered to be the listeners. The speeches covered many subjects and most of the “competitors” performed well.
One of my classmates shared his thoughts about protecting our earth. He talked about it so deeply that all of us realised the importance of protecting the environment. No wonder he won the first prize.
This competition helps us improve spoken English and learn more knowledge at the same time. We all look forward to joining it next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件。
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,考生应注意要点齐全,并可适当补充细节描述。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。说明写信的目的是与John分享昨天的英语演讲比赛。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍这次演讲比赛的信息。
第三步,书写结语。表达这次比赛对提升英语口语和学习知识的帮助,以及大家对下次比赛的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①competition比赛
②performed表演,表现
③realised意识到
[高分句型]
①He talked about it so deeply that all of us realised the importance of protecting the environment. (so…that…引导的结果状语从句)
真题实战
(一)
(2025·北京·中考真题)
假设你是李华,你校正在开展“书香校园”活动,英语社团公众号打算做一期以“Dream Library”为主题的推送,为此在校内征集想法。请用英语给公众号留言,提出你的设想,并简要说明它会带来哪些好处。
提示词语:recommend, new, experience, explore, interest
内容提示:
●What is your dream library like?
●How can students benefit from your idea?
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. __________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my dream will come true. Thanks.
【答案】One possible version:
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. My dream library would be a modern, interactive space with cozy reading corners, e-books, and even VR stations to explore books in new ways. It could also have a recommendation system to help students find books matching their interests.
This kind of library would make reading more fun and engaging. Students could experience stories in different styles, discover new types, and develop a lifelong love for books. Let’s make reading an exciting adventure.
I hope my dream will come true. Thanks.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:表示设想,主要用虚拟语气,形式为“would/could do”;
③提示:内容提示已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,不可遗漏任何信息提示,适当添加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接已给出的开头,直入主题,描述自己设想中的图书馆,包括其风格与设备;
第二步,介绍该图书馆的益处;
第三步,书写结语(已给出)。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
② this kind of 这种类型的
③ let sb. do sth. 让某人做某事
[高分句型]
① It could also have a recommendation system to help students find books matching their interests. (动词不定式作后置定语)
② Let’s make reading an exciting adventure. (祈使句)
(二)
(2025·山东日照·中考真题)
假如你是李华,你的美国朋友John所在的学校要举办主题为“多彩文化”的图片展览活动,他来信希望你提供一张关于中国文化的图片。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,并附上所选图片。邮件内容包括:
1.描述图片内容;2.说明选择原因。
注意:
1.词数:90左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear John,
Glad to hear from you. Here is the picture I’ve chosen for your photo show.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
例文
Dear John,
Glad to hear from you. Here is the picture I’ve chosen for your photo show. It shows a traditional Chinese dragon dance during the Spring Festival. In the photo, a team of performers is lifting a long, colorful dragon. Crowds of people are watching cheerfully, with red lanterns hanging in the background.
I picked this picture because the dragon dance is a symbol of good luck and prosperity in Chinese culture. It not only reflects the vibrancy of our festivals but also showcases teamwork and traditional art. I believe it will help your classmates feel the joy of Chinese cultural celebrations.
Hope your exhibition is a great success!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”、“现在完成时”和“现在进行时”;
③提示:文章写作需要围绕提供的照片展开,涵盖照片内容、选图原因及对摄影展的祝愿,考生应注意清晰描述画面细节,适当补充文化内涵,注意字数要求和语法拼写正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。以回应对方开篇,说明已为摄影展选好照片,并点明照片主题是春节期间的中国传统舞龙;
第二步,具体阐述内容与原因。先详细描述照片中的场景,再解释选这张照片的原因;
第三步,书写结语。表达对摄影展圆满成功的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional Chinese dragon dance中国传统舞龙
②Spring Festival春节
③colorful dragon彩色长龙
④crowds of people一群群人
⑤symbol of good luck and prosperity吉祥与繁荣的象征
⑥vibrancy of festivals节日的活力
[高分句型]
I believe it will help your classmates feel the joy of Chinese cultural celebrations.(宾语从句)
(三)
(2025·黑龙江哈尔滨·中考真题)
假如你是九年一班的学生李平,你校英语网站正在评选“最美中学生(the Most Beautiful Middle School Student)”,请你用英语给负责此项活动的老师写一封自荐信。
写作要点:
1.对同学友善;2.努力学习;3.积极参加校内外活动。
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3.字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰。
4.词数100左右。
参考词汇: select(vt.评选), activities inside and outside the school(校内外活动)
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
例文:
Dear Teacher,
My name is Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 9. I am writing to recommend myself for “the Most Beautiful Middle School Student”.
I am always friendly to my classmates. When they have problems, I try my best to help them. Besides, I study hard and often get good grades. I also take an active part in activities inside and outside the school, such as volunteer work and sports meetings.
I hope I can be selected. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【总体分析】①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态主要使用一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要点齐全。
【写作步骤】第一步:开头表明身份和写信目的;
第二步:分点说明自身优点,适当补充细节;
第三步:结尾表达期望和感谢。
【亮点词汇】①friendly友善的
②take an active part in积极参与
③volunteer work志愿活动
【高分句型】When they have problems, I try my best to help them.(when引导的时间状语从句)
(四)
(2025·山东聊城·中考真题)
2016年我国颁布实施了《全国环境宣传教育工作纲要》,提出在全国逐步开展创建“绿色学校”活动。请你根据下面的提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈创建“绿色学校”可采取什么措施以及你对创建“绿色学校”的看法。
提示:
1. 每个班都收集可回收利用的废品,然后用卖废品的钱去帮助贫困地区的学生。
2. 学生学会家庭节约能源的方法,并使用它们以减少浪费。
3. 你对创建“绿色学校”的看法。
注意:
1. 短文词数:80左右。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容,但可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
4. 短文的开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
In order to create a green school, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
例文:
In order to create a green school, we can take the following measures. First, each class can collect recyclable waste and use the money from selling it to help students in poor areas. Second, we should learn and use energy-saving methods at home to reduce waste. I think creating a green school is very meaningful. It not only protects our environment but also teaches us to be responsible and caring. Let's work together to make our school greener and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:根据所给三点提示,先说明创建“绿色学校”的两项具体措施,再阐述个人看法,并适当补充细节使内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:用总起句引出措施;
第二步:用First、Second分别介绍两项措施;
第三步:用I think引出个人看法,并说明意义,最后发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①recyclable可回收的
②energy-saving节能的
③meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
①I think creating a green school is very meaningful.(运用了动名词短语作主语)
②It not only protects our environment but also teaches us to be responsible and caring.(运用了not only ... but also ...并列结构)
(五)
(2025·四川绵阳·中考真题)
假定你是校英文广播站主持人李华,学校正在开展“绿色生活,有你有我”主题活动。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文广播稿,号召全校同学厉行节约,绿色生活。
clear your plate
reuse the books
...
注意:1. 短文需包含所有提示信息,并补充至少一点倡议;
2. 词数100左右,首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:call on号召
Boys and girls,
I am Li Hua. Our school is holding an activity named “A Greener Life for You and Me”.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks!
【答案】例文
Boys and girls,
I am Li Hua. Our school is holding an activity named “A Greener Life for You and Me”. I’m here to call on everybody to take part in this activity and live a greener life.
First of all, we should clear our plates while having meals. Wasting food is not a good habit. Besides, it is a good idea to reuse the old books. Instead of throwing away those used books, we’d better give them away to the students who are in need. Last but not least, turn off the lights before leaving. We should try our best to save energy.
Let’s take action now and start with the little things around us!
Thanks!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇广播稿;
②时态:主要运用“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中的每一项内容,适当添加细节,如阐述这些行为的意义,并突出写作重点,即号召全校同学厉行节约,绿色生活。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图;
第二步:分别从节约粮食、旧书再利用、节约能源等角度,列举一系列具体且可行的环保行动,并适当阐述意义;
第三步:书写结语,发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①call on号召
②instead of而不是
③turn off关闭
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①I’m here to call on everybody to take part in this activity and live a greener life.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②Instead of throwing away those used books, we’d better give them away to the students who are in need.(who引导的定语从句)
③Let’s take action now and start with the little things around us!(祈使句)
(六)
(2023·广东深圳·中考真题)
假定你是李华。下周五,新西兰教育考察团将访问你校,了解学校“智慧校园”的建设情况。学校委托外教Mr. Brown在学生中招募志愿者来接待考察团。请你给Mr. Brown写一封自荐信,内容包括:
1.个人优势:①熟知“智慧校园”,如师生能在教室上网;
②乐于交流;
③擅长英语; ④……;
2.期待的收获;
3.希望获得机会。
注意:
1.词数为80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.要点齐全,可适当增加细节;
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4.条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
参考词汇:智慧校园Smart Campus 上网surf the internet
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to apply to work as a volunteer to show the visitors from New Zealand around our campus. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文1
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to apply to work as a volunteer to show the visitors from New Zealand around our campus.
In my opinion, I’m qualified for the position. To begin with, Smart Campus is quite familiar to me. Both teachers and students can surf the Internet on campus. What’s more, I am fond of communicating with others and have a good command of English. Finally, I have some related experience since I have worked as a volunteer several times during junior high school.
I hope I can improve my ability to communicate with others and become more confident. I hope I can get the chance.
Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文2
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to apply to work as a volunteer to show the visitors from New Zealand around our campus. I believe I am suitable for the job with the following advantages.
I am quite familiar with our Smart Campus, where students and teachers can surf the Internet in the classroom. Besides, I am good at communicating and capable of speaking fluent English, which will ensure that I can interact with them well. Last, I have participated in voluntary work several times.
I expect my confidence as well as my social ability can be enhanced. I would appreciate it if you would take my application into consideration.
Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析](以范文1为例)
①题材:本文是一封书信(自荐信);
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于个人优势、期待的收获以及希望获得机会的内容,需适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山表明目的(申请志愿者);
第二步:分点介绍个人优势;
第三步:表达期待收获和希望获得机会。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion以我来看
②be fond of喜爱
③have a good command of熟练掌握
[高分句型]
Finally, I have some related experience since I have worked as a volunteer several times during junior high school. (since引导的原因状语从句)
(七)
(2025·山东济南·中考真题)
假定你是李华,你校英语社团发起了关于“激励青少年进行体育运动”的主题论坛活动。请你根据思维导图做出两种最佳选择,并用英语写一篇文章,发表在论坛上。内容包括:
1. 你的选择;
2. 陈述理由;
3. 发出倡议。
注意:1. 词数100左右,题目已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:encouraging激励人的
Enjoy Sports, Keep Fit!
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Enjoy Sports, Keep Fit!
I strongly suggest that we teenagers engage in jogging and ball games. These two forms of exercise are easy to start and boost both our physical and mental health.
First, jogging can be done almost anywhere, helping us build patience and improve our heart health. Second, ball games such as basketball help us develop teamwork and communication skills. By taking part in such sports, we can reduce stress from our studies and enjoy quality time with friends.
Let’s encourage everyone around us to participate in sports and create a healthier community together!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己的选择;
第二步,具体陈述理由;
第三步,发出运动倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①engage in 参与
②such as 例如
③participate in 参加
[高分句型]
①I strongly suggest that we teenagers engage in jogging and ball games.(宾语从句)
②By taking part in such sports, we can reduce stress from our studies and enjoy quality time with friends.(动名词作宾语和并列结构)
(八)
(2025·江苏无锡·中考真题)
随着免签政策的实施,外国游客纷至沓来。为传播中华文化,讲好中国故事,某旅游服务机构正在招募一批志愿者,要求报名者面试时用英语推荐国内任意一个有特色的城市。假设你是李华,你想报名参加面试,并已绘制了如下流程图,请根据图示内容完成面试发言稿。
注意事项:1. 发言稿内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于90个,发言稿开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 发言稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Hello, my friends Welcome to China!
I’d like to recommend… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m waiting for you here in this beautiful city.
【答案】范文:
Hello, my friends! Welcome to China!
I’d like to recommend Guilin, a pearl in southern China. Located in Guangxi Province, this city is renowned for its breathtaking scenery, especially the Li River with its emerald waters and karst mountains.
Here, you can be immersed in nature by cycling through rice terraces or taking a bamboo raft ride. Not only can you explore ancient towns like Xingping, but you also have the chance to taste authentic cuisine such as Guilin rice noodles. For photography lovers, the sunset at Elephant Trunk Hill is a must-visit spot.
My advice? Visit between April and October for the best weather, and try learning basic Chinese phrases to connect with locals.
I’m waiting for you here in this beautiful city!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇面试发言稿;
②时态:主要时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据流程图提示介绍城市特色、活动及建议,语言需流畅且有感染力,注意句式多样性。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山推荐城市;
第二步:分点说明城市特色与活动;
第三步:给出实用建议并热情结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①breathtaking scenery令人惊叹的风景
②be immersed in沉浸于
③authentic cuisine地道美食
④must-visit spots必游景点
[高分句型]
①Located in Guangxi Province, this city is renowned for its breathtaking scenery, especially the Li River with its emerald waters and karst mountains.(非谓语动词作状语)
②Not only can you explore ancient towns like Xingping, but you also have the chance to taste authentic cuisine such as Guilin rice noodles.(倒装句)
(九)
(2025·黑龙江大庆·中考真题)
假定你是红星中学的学生小娜,毕业在即,学校摄影社团拟制作“成长印记·青春映像”毕业纪念视频,现面向全体同学征集拍摄建议。请你用英语写一封邮件,对视频录制内容提出建议。
写作提示:
1. 校园之美:校园风景、建筑等;
2. 温暖瞬间:老师耐心答疑、真诚帮助等;同学间讨论问题、互帮互助等;
3. 成长祝福:……
参考词汇:shoot a video(拍摄视频) campus scenery(校园风景)
explain questions patiently(耐心答疑) express sincere wishes(表达真诚的祝福)
写作要求:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
2. 写作词数应为90个左右(首段已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 不得泄露个人信息。
Dear Photography Club,
I am Xiao Na. Knowing that your club is collecting advice about our graduation video, I am writing to offer my suggestions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Xiao Na
【答案】例文
Dear Photography Club,
I am Xiao Na. Knowing that your club is collecting advice about our graduation video, I am writing to offer my suggestions.
First, I suggest including beautiful campus scenery, such as the playground, library, and classroom buildings. These places hold many memories for us. Second, it would be great to shoot some warm moments. We can show teachers explaining questions patiently and helping us sincerely. Also, we shouldn’t forget classmates discussing problems and helping each other. Finally, for the wishes part, teachers and students could express sincere wishes for everyone’s bright future. This will be very meaningful.
I hope my ideas are helpful. I’m looking forward to seeing the wonderful video!
Yours,
Xiao Na
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,对视频录制内容提出具体建议;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②each other 彼此
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①We can show teachers explaining questions patiently and helping us sincerely.(并列结构)
②I hope my ideas are helpful.(省略that的宾语从句)
(十)
(2025·广东广州·中考真题)
你校英文报下期征稿的主题为“零废弃 (Zero Waste)”。请根据以下征稿启事写一篇短文投稿。
Articles Wanted: Zero Waste Makes a Difference
● Zero Waste: Making less rubbish and using everything around us in a smart way.
● Your article should include:
1. What is “zero waste”?
2. Why is it necessary?
3. What can we do?
Send your article to sunshineschoolweekly@123.com before July 3, 2025.
注意:
1.短文需包含征稿要求的三点内容,并可适当拓展信息;
2.写作词数80左右;
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Zero Waste Makes a Difference
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】【作答示例】
(1)
Zero Waste Makes a Difference
Zero waste means reducing rubbish and making the most of what we have. It’s important because it helps protect our planet.
What can we do? First, only buy what you need. Second, choose and use environmentally friendly products. Third, recycle or reuse as many things as possible. Finally, find new uses for old things instead of throwing them away. Spreading the idea of zero waste is also important.
If we just learn to live in green and smart ways, we can make a difference.
(2)
Zero Waste Makes a Difference
As life becomes easier, people often throw things away too quickly. Zero waste means using less and being smart about how we use resources. It’s important because it helps protect the earth and sets a good example for future generations.
Here are some ways to start. At home, instead of throwing broken items away, we can learn to repair them—for example, mending clothes or fixing toys. At school, students can organize events to exchange old books, toys, or clothes. Online, sharing ideas about zero waste can also inspire others to help the planet.
Zero waste isn’t just recycling; it’s a way of life that shows how much we care about our world. If we all make small changes to our daily lives, we can truly make a difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:内容要点已给出,考生需围绕“零废弃”的定义、必要性及行动建议展开,注意逻辑清晰、语言简洁,可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,定义“Zero Waste”,并说明其重要性;
第二步,给出具体的行动建议;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①make the most of充分利用
②instead of而不是
③make a difference产生影响
[高分句型]
①Zero waste means reducing rubbish and making the most of what we have.(what引导的宾语从句)
②It’s important because it helps protect our planet.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③If we just learn to live in green and smart ways, we can make a difference.(if引导的条件状语从句)
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