内容正文:
福建
英 语
主题写作册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与社会
主题七 科技与创新(2019)
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中考主题角度解读
1.福建近8年真题:2019年考查学生对机器人的看法。
2.近3年全国真题考查角度:①个人隐私与网络安全;②科技发
明对人类生活的影响。
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教材主题单元链接
八(上)Unit 4 Topic 3 网络
对生活的影响 九(上)Unit 4 Topic 3 P101
电脑带给人们便利
九(上)Unit 4 Topic 3 P103
对机器人发展的担忧 九(下)Unit 6 Topic 1 P33
电视给我们带来的影响
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一阶 素材积累
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词块积累
1.个人隐私与网络安全
in public在公共场合
personal information个人信息
make friends online网上交友
protect ourselves保护我们自己
pay attention to注意 useless messages垃圾信息
get into trouble陷入困境 keep calm保持冷静
ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助 be careful当心
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1.个人隐私与网络安全
be bad for/be harmful to/do harm to对……有害
keep clear of… 不和……接触;远离……
stay away from远离
in danger处于危险中
in time及时
with one’s help在某人的帮助下
protect online privacy保护网络隐私
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2.科技发明对人类生活的影响
change people’s lives改变人们的生活 deal with应对;处理
change…for the better使……变好;改善……
make full use of/take full advantage of充分利用……
improve living standards提高生活水平
change our way of life改变我们的生活方式
be amazed at对……感到惊讶 mobile payment移动支付
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2.科技发明对人类生活的影响
send messages发信息
in place of代替
draw people’s attention引起人们的关注
make a contribution/contributions to为……做贡献
be made of由……制成(可看出原材料)
be good at/do well in擅长
one of the most important inventions最重要的发明之一
impact of technological inventions科技发明的影响
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2.科技发明对人类生活的影响
search for information on the Internet在互联网上搜索信息
make life more comfortable使生活更加舒适
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好句积累与仿写
1.The Internet is changing the world.[仁爱八(上)U4 P101]
2.Among many inventions, I think the bicycle is the most useful
for me.
3.The invention of ChatGPT has made AI a hot topic among
people in our society.
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4.With the development of science and technology, people have
been used to the life with the Internet.
5.Nowadays, people spend much time on the Internet. They can
do many things through the Internet.
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角度1 个人隐私与网络安全
1.Telling others our ID numbers is bad for online privacy.
(be bad for对……有害)
经常使用不安全的无线网络对我们的网络信息有害。
_________________________________________________________
Using unsafe Wi-Fi often is bad for our online information.
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2.We need to lock phones so that no one steals our private
data.(so that以便,为了,引导目的状语从句)
我们必须先检查链接,以便避开不良的网络风险。
________________________________________________________
_______
We must check links first so that we can avoid bad online
risks.
3.I believe that keeping personal information private is very
important.(I believe that… 我相信……)
我相信不在网上分享身份证号能保护我们的私人生活。
________________________________________________________
________________
I believe that not sharing ID numbers online can protect
our private life.
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角度2 科技发明对人类生活的影响
4.With the development of phones, people can easily talk to
others far away.(with the development of… 随着……的发展)
随着人工智能技术的发展,人们的日常生活变得更容易。
________________________________________________________
____________________
With the development of AI technology, people’s daily lives
have become easier.
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5.It’s easy to find information online with modern technology.
(It’s easy to do sth.做某事是容易的)
借助人工智能翻译工具,翻译外语变得很容易。
________________________________________________________
______
It’s easy to translate foreign languages with AI translation
tools.
6.With the help of robots, people can finish housework faster.
(with the help of… 在……的帮助下)
在AI的帮助下,我们能轻松检查作业里的错误。
________________________________________________________
____________
With the help of AI, we can easily check mistakes in our
homework.
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7.Nowadays, as soon as we send messages online, others can
get them quickly.(as soon as一……就……)
我们一在网上点好餐,食物很快就会送到家里。
________________________________________________________
____________
As soon as we order food online, it will be delivered to our home soon.
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1.We will live a happier and more convenient life with the
help of AI.
2.All in all, smart products have both advantages and
shortcomings. I believe that if we use them correctly, they will
bring us a more comfortable and convenient life in the future.
3.As a student, I will study hard to get into a top university.
In this way, I can get more chances to make a great
contribution to China’s science and technology industry.
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1.Everything has two sides. 凡事都有两面性。
2.The question mark is the key to any science. 问号是开启任何
一门科学的钥匙。
3.Technology is a double-edged sword. 科技是把双刃剑。
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二阶 典例探究
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(2019福建)假定你是李华,收到英国笔友Harry的邮件,获悉
他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。
词数80左右。#1.1
To: Lihua2019@163.com
From: Harry@hotmail.com
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Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just won the first place in a
robot-making competition. I love robots! They bring me great
fun.
What do you think of robots? Do you want to have your
own robot? Why?
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Harry
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参考词汇:congratulation祝贺#1.1.2
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一、细审题
①主题:给朋友回复有关“机器人”的邮件
②文体: ________
③人称:介绍自己对机器人的看法,以 __________为主
④时态:以 ____________为主
⑤要点:对机器人的看法、是否想拥有机器人以及原因
应用文
第一人称
一般现在时
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注意事项:
1.回复邮件时可适当发挥,邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
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Dear Harry,
_______________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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二、拟提纲
play more important roles
move easily
do some housework
cleaning the house
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三、成篇章
基础范文 高阶范文
Dear Harry,
Congratulations!
How glad I am to
share your good news!
I think robots are
helpful in many ways. Dear Harry,
Congratulations! How glad I am
to share your good news!
I think robots are helpful in
many ways.
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基础范文 高阶范文
①And in the future,
they will play more
important roles in our
daily life. ①_______________________________
_________________________________
__________________(用believe+宾语
从句升格句子)
And I believe they will play
more important roles in our daily
life in the future.
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基础范文 高阶范文
②Personally, I want to
have a robot of my
own. I can make it
take care of my
grandparents when my
family are not at home. ②_______________________________
_________________________________
______________________________
(用because引导的原因状语从句补充介绍想拥有机器人的主要原因) I can have it take care of my grandparents when my family are not at home.
Personally, I want to have a robot of my own because it will help me do many things in my home.
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基础范文 高阶范文
③You see, my
grandparents are old
and can’t move easily.
It can help them do
some housework, such
as cooking and cleaning
the house. ③_______________________________
____________________(用too…to…
结构升格句子) It can help them do
some housework, such as cooking and
cleaning the house.
You see, my grandparents are too old to move easily.
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基础范文 高阶范文
Hope you will
make greater progress.
Yours,
Li Hua Hope you will make greater
progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
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三阶 写作训练
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假定你是李华,你们学校的科创小组开发了一款解决老人
购物难的手机应用。作为校英文报小记者,你采访了开发小组成员,请
根据以下采访笔记,写一则英文简讯。词数80左右。#1
App Name: “EasyBuy”
Process:
●Surveyed elderly people to find out their needs:
1. large buttons
2.voice instructions
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●15 elderly people tested it for 2 weeks
Result: Ordered food successfully
User Thoughts: “Like a kind guide in my phone”
(Grandma Li, 78)
Team Leader: Real power of technology—We used our
coding(编程) skills to help our community.
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注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总
词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
A New App to Help Elderly Shop
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I’m a reporter for our school
newspaper.____
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A New App to Help Elderly Shop
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I’m a reporter for our school
newspaper.I just interviewed the science and technology
group in our school. They made an app called “EasyBuy” to
help the elderly with shopping.
First, they talked to some old people and found out
what they needed. The old people said they needed large
buttons and voice instructions. Then, 15 old people tried the
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app for two weeks. They all ordered food successfully.
Grandma Li, 78 years old, said, “It’s like a kind guide in
my phone.” The team leader said, “We used our coding
skills to help our community. This is the real power of
technology.”
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