内容正文:
陕西
英 语
主题写作培优册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
主题5 促进中学生“五育并举”的发展&勤于动手,乐于
实践,敢于创新
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中考命题角度探究
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教材单元主题链接
人教版
八(上)U8 Cooking 八(下)U8 Literature and
music
八(下)U3 Chores and
permission 九(全)U9 Music and
movies
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开头句 1. I suppose tree planting is very important work.
It’s also a great way to learn about nature.
2. There are many kinds of music in the world.
Music makes people happy. Good music brings
people comfort and peace of mind. Everyone loves
music but different people have different tastes.
3. To live more healthily and happily, we are
supposed to learn more new life skills.
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中
间
句 劳
动
实
践 1. Doing chores helps to develop children’s
independence and teaches them how to look after
themselves. [人教八(下)U3]
2. I think it is important for children to learn how to do chores. [人教八(下)U3改编]
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中
间
句 劳
动
实
践 3. Since students live in one house with their parents,
they should know that everyone should do their part
in keeping it clean and tidy. [人教八(下)U3]
4. I often do some cleaning at home and I like a
clean and tidy house.[外研七(下)M2改编]
5. Students are able to learn necessary life skills by
taking cleaning or cooking lessons in school.
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中
间
句 劳
动
实
践 6. It seems that doing some housework such as
cooking and cleaning is good for us.
7. Some students are interested in taking part in
social practice activities while others plan to do
housework.
8. It’s important to learn some basic life skills, like
cooking, washing clothes and tidying up our rooms.
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中间
句 美育
知识 1. I like smooth music that helps me relax after
a long week at work. [人教九(全)U9]
2. It’s our duty to value and spread Chinese
culture.
3. The reason why we plan a visit to a tea house is that we can learn a lot about tea culture there.
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中间
句 智育
(学
习方
法) 1. Daniel always thinks carefully when he works.
He plans everything well.[译林牛津七(下)M7]
2. We should deal with the difficulties we meet
wisely. It can help us become better persons.
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结尾
句 1. Carrying out labor education makes school life more colorful and meaningful.
2. Learning life skills is necessary for us, because what
we depend on is what we learn.
3. I’m sure the earlier we learn to be independent, the
better our future will be.
4. Instead of being afraid of challenges, we should try
our best to solve the problems in our study and life.
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◆句子翻译
1. 小组学习也是了解合作的好方法。(Tip: It’s also a great way
to learn about…)
________________________________________________________
_____________________
It’s also a great way to learn about working together
through group study.
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2. 学生们应该参加一些劳动活动,比如打扫教室或种树。
(Tip: be supposed to do sth.)
________________________________________________________
___________________________________________
Students are supposed to take part in some labor activities, like cleaning the classroom or planting trees.
3. 参加志愿活动使我们能够学会更关心他人和社会。
(Tip: be able to do sth.)
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______________________________
Taking part in volunteer activities makes us be able to care more about others and society.
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4. 学着管理自己的时间和事务能培养我们的独立性。(Tip: devel
op one’s independence)
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__________________
Learning to manage our own time and things can develop
our independence.
5. 我认为对我们学生来说,在家做家务很重要。(Tip: I think it
is important for sb. to do sth.)
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I think it is important for us students to do housework at
home.
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6. 学生们应该在保持教室整洁方面尽自己的一份力。(Tip: do
one’s part in)
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Students should do their part in keeping the classroom clean.
7. 尊重老师、帮助有困难的同学是我们的责任。(Tip: It’s our d
uty to do sth.)
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It’s our duty to respect our teachers and help classmates in need.
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8. 我们应该在美术课上尽力创作优美的作品。(Tip: try one’s
best to do sth.)
________________________________________________________
________
We should try our best to create beautiful works in art
classes.
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◆句式升格
9. We should take art classes seriously. Art classes teach us to
find beauty.(Tip: The reason why… is that…)
________________________________________________________
____________________________
The reason why we should take art classes seriously is that they teach us to find beauty.
10. We should try different methods. We solve math problems.
(Tip: when)
________________________________________________________
__________
We should try different methods when we solve math
problems.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德。作为中学生,我们要积极参加
劳动实践。你校英语报发起了以“Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life”为主
题的征文活动,请你根据写作要求,简单介绍你经常参加的劳动,
从中得到的收获和你的建议,认真完成写作任务。
●The labor you do at school, at home or in the community
(cleaning the classroom, cooking and washing dishes, helping
the elderly, …);#1.1
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●The things you get from labor (learning skills, a sense
of pride, …);
●Your suggestion.
Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
It is well-known that loving labor is a traditional Chinese
virtue. ___#2.1
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审题四要素:
审体裁: 记叙文
审人称: 第一人称为主
审时态: 一般现在时为主
审要点: 在学校、家里或社区做的劳动,劳动中取得的收获和你
的建议#3.4
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一、构思:框架导图&参考表达
As a middle school student, I often take part in labor activities in everyday life.
I do volunteer work to help the elderly and the disabled.
I have not only got a strong feeling of pride but also become more and more independent and responsible.
Let’s take an active part in labor activities.
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二、落笔:连句成篇&独立写作
Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
It is well-known that loving labor is a traditional Chinese
virtue. ____
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Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
It is well-known that loving labor is a traditional
Chinese virtue.
As a middle school student, I often take part in labor
activities in everyday life. For example, I clean the classroom
and playground with my classmates at school. I do some
cooking, wash clothes and tidy rooms at home. And in the
community, I do volunteer work to help the elderly and the
disabled.
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By doing these, I’ve learnt some basic life skills to take
care of myself. Besides, I have not only got a strong feeling
of pride but also become more and more independent and
responsible.
All in all, I believe that labor education is important
for our development and I encourage all teenagers to
actively experience labor activities. Let’s take an active part
in labor activities.
三阶 写作实战提能力
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一、“恰同学少年,风华正茂;书生意气,挥斥方遒。” 为践行
教育部提出的“五育并举”,培养“德、智、体、美、劳”全面发展
的时代新人,学校开展争当“五星少年”的活动。假如你是李华,
请你根据写作要求,写一份英文自荐报告。
1. 你已得到德智体三颗星,请说明理由(如严于律己,友爱
互助;努力学习;健康饮食等);
2. 对于还未得到的美劳两颗星,你将怎么做(如你准备学习
一门艺术,学会做家务等)。
参考词汇:morality(道德), intelligence(才智)
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要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考
词汇,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地
名);
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
How to Become a Five-star Student
I’m Li Hua. I want to be a five-star student. Here is my
report. ___
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How to Become a Five-star Student
I’m Li Hua. I want to be a five-star student. Here is
my report.
I have already got three stars. First, I am strict with
myself and always help others, so I have the star of
morality. Second, I study hard, read many books and get
good grades, so I get the star of intelligence. Third, I eat
healthily and do sports every day, so I am strong and get
the star of health.
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However, I still need to work hard for the stars of art
and labor. I am going to learn painting to improve my sense
of beauty. I will also do more housework at home, such as
cooking and cleaning.
I will try my best to be a five-star student.
二、自主学习不仅是获取知识的重要方式,更是一种终身学习的
态度。为了帮助同学们了解自主学习的重要性,激发学习的热情,
你校英语社团将组织以“The Power of Self-directed Learning”
为题的经验交流会,你将作为班级代表发言,请你根据写作要求,
用英语写一篇发言稿。
●What is the meaning of self-directed learning? (choosing
knowledge to learn, interests)
●What self-directed learning experiences have you had?
●What do you think of self-directed learning?
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要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考
词汇,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地
名);
4. 词数:不少于70。 (标题已给出,但不计入总词数。)
The Power of Self-directed Learning
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The Power of Self-directed Learning
In my opinion, self-directed learning means choosing
what to learn by ourselves, rather than having someone
make us learn it. It’s all about seeking knowledge according
to our own interests.
I have an experience of self-directed learning. I was
really interested in making model planes. Since there was no
such class at school, I decided to learn it by myself.
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I read lots of books about how planes work, watched many
online videos, and tried making models time after time.
During this period, I ran into many problems, but I kept
finding ways to solve them on my own.
Self-directed learning helps us become better learners
and make good preparations for future challenges. Let’s start
self-directed learning and find out how much we can do!
Reflecting
How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very
well ____________
OK ____________
Needs work
●I can keep my writing paper
clean.(2分)
●I can use correct English
expressions in writing.(5分)
●I can write all the points.(5分)
●My article is clearly structured
and well organized.(3分) □
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How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very well ____________
OK ____________
Needs work
Overall
comment Self-assessment
Peer review
Teacher’s
assessment
Total score: ___/15
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