内容正文:
陕西
英 语
主题写作培优册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与社会
主题9 科学技术与工程,人类发明与创新&航天事业的
发展
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中考命题角度探究
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教材单元主题链接
人教版
九(全)U5 Things made in China 九(全)U6 Inventions
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开头句 1. There are many inventions that have changed the
world.[人教九(全)U6改编]
2.With the development of science and technology,
people have been used to the life with the Internet.
3. Nowadays, people spend much time on the
Internet. They can do many things with the Internet.
4. As we all know, smart products have changed our
lives greatly.
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中
间
句 某发
明/
科技
的功
能 1. I listen to music or watch movies on the computer
every Friday night.[外研七(上)M7]
2. Today, with the invention of the computer and
electronic technology, it’s easy to get information on
the Internet.[外研九(上)M9]
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中
间
句 某发
明/
科技
的功
能 3. I came up with a good idea for my invention. It’s
a special box which is used for holding waste. It can
move and speak different languages. As soon as
people throw away waste on the street, they will be
cleaned up by the box at once.
4. Home robots help with housework so that people
have more time to do things they enjoy.
5. The electric car can not only save energy but also
protect the environment.
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中
间
句 人工
智能
的利
弊 1. Artificial Intelligence can chat with people, and it
can help people solve problems.
2. However, it also has many disadvantages. If we
always depend on it, it will make our minds lazy.
And its appearance will reduce people’s job
opportunities.
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中
间
句 个人
隐私
与网
络安
全 1. First, if you have accounts on different apps,
make sure you use strong passwords.[新人教八
(上)U8]
2. Second, be careful when you talk to strangers
online. Not every person online is friendly or telling
the truth about themselves.[新人教八(上)U8]
3. Third, if you want to post anything online, think
it over. Once it is out there, it is hard to know
who sees it.[新人教八(上)U8]
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结尾句 1. We will live more happily and more conveniently
with the help of AI.
2. All in all, smart products have both advantages and disadvantages. I believe that if we use them correctly, they will bring us a more convenient life in the future.
3. As a student, I will study hard to get into a top
university. Only in this way can I get more chances
to make a great contribution to China’s science and
technology industry.
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俗语谚
语 1. Everything has two sides.凡事都有两面性。
2. The question mark is the key to any science.问号是
开启任何一门科学的钥匙。
3. Technology is a double-edged sword.科技是把双刃
剑。
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◆句子翻译
1. 随着人工智能技术的发展,人们的日常生活变得更容易。
(Tip: with the development of…)
________________________________________________________
____________________
With the development of AI technology, people’s daily lives
have become easier.
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2. 智能手表被用来帮助学生查看时间和记录运动。(Tip: be used
to do sth.)
________________________________________________________
_____________________
Smartwatches are used to help students check the time and record their exercise.
3. 科学家们在专业网站上有账号,用于分享太空研究成果。
(Tip: have accounts on sth.)
________________________________________________________
______________________
Scientists have accounts on professional websites to share
space research results.
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4. 借助人工智能翻译工具,翻译外语变得很容易。(Tip: It’s
easy to do sth.)
________________________________________________________
______
It’s easy to translate foreign languages with AI translation
tools.
5. 老师们多次检查在线作业系统,以确保其运行顺畅。
(Tip: make sure)
________________________________________________________
_______________________________
Teachers check online homework systems many times to
make sure they work smoothly.
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6. 我们应该努力学习,以便未来能为科技做贡献。(Tip: make a
contribution to…)
________________________________________________________
_________________________
We should study hard to make a contribution to science and technology in the future.
7. 在 AI 的帮助下,我们能轻松发现作业里的错误。(Tip: with
the help of…)
________________________________________________________
________________
With the help of AI, we can easily find out the mistakes in our homework.
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8. 我们班想出了一个小发明来节约用水。(Tip: come up with)
______________________________________________________
Our class came up with a small invention to save water.
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◆句式升格
9. The bell rings. The smart blackboard starts showing the lesson
notes.(Tip: as soon as)
________________________________________________________
_________________________
As soon as the bell rings, the smart blackboard starts
showing the lesson notes.
10. We use AI tools to solve difficult problems. We should still
think independently.(Tip: when)
________________________________________________________
________________________
We should still think independently when we use AI tools to solve difficult problems.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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假如你是李伟,这个周五你们英语老师布置的家庭作业是观
看发射神舟二十一号载人飞船(Shenzhou ⅩⅪ spaceship)的节
目,并就此写一篇英文日记。请你根据以下提示完成英语作业。#1
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When it comes to this week’s news, the most exciting one
was about Shenzhou ⅩⅪ spaceship.____#1.2
Friday,October 31st#1.1.1
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审题四要素:
审体裁: 应用文
审人称: 第一人称为主
审时态: 一般过去时为主
审要点: 神舟二十一号载人飞船发射时间、地点、宇航员以及观
看节目的感受和得到的收获#1.3.4
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一、构思:框架导图&参考表达
When it comes to this week’s news, the most exciting one is related to Shenzhou ⅩⅪ spaceship.
It’s known that they have prepared for a long time for this task.
The three astronauts have set a great example for us.
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二、落笔:分阶范文&对比赏析
初阶范文 高阶范文
Friday, October 31st
When it comes to this
week’s news, the most
exciting one was about
Shenzhou ⅩⅪ spaceship. Friday, October 31st
When it comes to this week’s
news, the most exciting one was
about Shenzhou ⅩⅪ spaceship.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
Tonight my family and I
waited to see the great task. At
23:44, the spaceship was sent
into space by a rocket in
Jiuquan, Gansu Province. We felt
nervous while watching it.
Zhang Lu, Wu Fei and Zhang
Hongzhang were in the
spaceship. Tonight my family and I
waited in front of TV to see
the great task. At 23:44, the
spaceship was sent into space
by a rocket in Jiuquan,
Gansu Province. We felt
nervous until it went into
space successfully and
safely.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
It’s known that they have
prepared for a long time
for this task. And they
will work on the space
station for about six
months. There are three astronauts in
the spaceship: Zhang Lu, Wu Fei
and Zhang Hongzhang. It’s known
that they have spent a long time
preparing for this task. And they
will work on the space station for
about six months.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
We are really proud
of these. The three
astronauts have set a great
example for me. I will
work hard to achieve my
dream in the future. We are really proud that our
country has become stronger and
stronger. The three astronauts have
set a great example for us. I will
try my best to achieve my dream
in the future.
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_________ 对比赏析:
1. 内容维度:高阶范文在关键情节处补充了细节,使画面感和完整性更强。
2. 逻辑维度:将对三位宇航员姓名介绍平淡的陈述,升格为运用冒号进行解释说明,使句子主次分明,逻辑更严谨。
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3. 亮点表达:①词汇上:“try my best to”(尽我所能)替换
“work hard”,表达了更坚定的决心;
②句式上:使用了“until”(时间状语从句)“there be句
型”“spend time (in) doing sth.”等,让表达更丰富。
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三阶 写作实战提能力
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智慧科技赋能学习创新。随着科技的发展,人工智能(AI)
将越来越多地被应用于课堂。学校广播站邀请你分享“AI Can
Help Me Learn”的经验。请你根据写作要求,给同龄朋友分享AI
工具(如Doubao、DeepSeek等)的使用心得和建议,并鼓励同学
善用AI,做学习的主人。
●How does AI help you study?
●What experiences do you have with AI?(solve problems,
prepare for exams, …)
●What influence does AI have on you?
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要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考
词汇,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地
名);
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
AI Can Help Me Learn
AI can greatly help me in my learning. ____
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AI Can Help Me Learn
AI can greatly help me in my learning. As a student,
keeping up with all the information can be challenging, but
AI helps me a lot by providing study plans based on my
weaknesses.
When I have trouble in doing my homework, AI offers
clear solutions and explanations. Also, it suggests the best
way for me to study, helping me focus on areas needing
improvement.
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AI can help me prepare for exams. It can provide me
with practice tests based on my past performance and areas
of weaknesses. By taking these practice tests, I can see more
topics that I need to review to improve my chances of
success in the real exam.
In short, AI makes learning more efficient and helps me
achieve my goals.
Reflecting
How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very
well ____________
OK ____________
Needs
work
●I can keep my writing paper
clean.(2分)
●I can use correct English
expressions in writing.(5分)
●I can write all the points.(5分)
●My article is clearly structured
and well organized.(3分) □
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How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very well ____________
OK ____________
Needs work
Overall
comment Self-assessment
Peer review
Teacher’s
assessment
Total score:__/15
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