Unit1-Unit6写作训练2025-2026学年沪教版（五四学制）英语八年级下册

该初中英语单元复习讲义围绕“艺术、发明、友情”等主题，通过分层梳理构建知识体系，从核心词汇、高分句型到个人素材，形成“词汇-句型-篇章”的递进脉络，用列表和仿写练习呈现语言要点，明确重难点内在联系。 讲义亮点在于“写前积累-篇章实战”的一体化设计，如Unit1中“高分衔接句仿写”训练，引导学生通过“Art brings... helping us...”句式提升语言表达能力，结合个人经历素材填空培养思维逻辑性，助力不同层次学生夯实基础或深化表达，为教师精准教学提供系统支持。

教师版 8B Unit1Art and artists写作训练 一、写前训练——备词句 核心词汇（中译英） 1. 绘画/素描 painting/sketching/drawing 2. 创造力 creativity 3. 视角/观点 perspective 4. 反思 reflection 5. 相互理解 mutual understanding 6. 丰富我们的精神世界 enrich our spirits 7. 表达深层情感 express deep feelings 8. 搭建桥梁 build a bridge / act as a bridge 高分衔接句（英译中+仿写） 1. Art brings endless beauty and fresh ideas to our daily lives, helping us discover unique perspectives to see the world. 翻译：艺术为我们的日常生活带来无尽的美与新鲜的想法，帮助我们发现看待世界的独特视角。 仿写：Music brings warmth and comfort to our daily lives, helping us find peace in busy days. 2. For me, drawing in my sketchbook after school is a precious way to relax and share my inner world. 翻译：对我来说，放学后在速写本上画画是一种放松和分享内心世界的珍贵方式。 仿写：For me, playing the guitar is a precious way to relieve stress and connect with friends. 3. Art not only enriches our spirits but also makes life more colourful and joyful. 翻译：艺术不仅丰富我们的精神世界，还能让生活更加多彩和愉悦。 仿写：Reading not only broadens our horizons but also helps us think more deeply. 个人经历素材填空 1. Last month, I painted a warm sunset glowing through my bedroom window, with soft clouds and golden light, and my family praised it warmly. 改写：Last weekend, I played the piano (弹钢琴) at my family party, and my relatives clapped and praised me.(鼓掌并称赞我). 2. When I feel stressed, I turn to painting—it helps me calm down and clear my mind. 改写：When I feel anxious/worried (焦虑), I turn to dancing (跳舞)—it helps me release stress(释放压力) and feel happy. (感到快乐). 结尾升华句背诵 1. In short, art not only enriches our spirits but also makes life more colourful and joyful. 2. No matter what form it takes, art will always be a bridge connecting people from different cultures. 3. That’s why I believe art is more than just beauty—it is a language everyone can understand. 二、篇章实战——写短文 写作主题：What does art mean to us? 写作情境：你受到邀请参加本期的校报专版约稿。本期专版的主题是“艺术对我们意味着什么？”请通过你感兴趣的艺术形式或者你所擅长的艺术专项，结合自身经历，表达你的看法。 写作目标： 1. 掌握与“艺术”相关的核心词汇与句型，积累常用衔接词。 2. 学会“引入主题-结合经历-表达感悟”的写作结构，写出逻辑清晰、内容充实的短文。 3. 能结合自身经历完成一篇不少于60词的约稿类作文。 写作引导： 1. 开头：如何自然引入主题 思路点拨：约稿类开头可以先呼应“校报约稿”的情境，再点明艺术的核心意义。 直接切入：Art is not just a subject in school—it is a way for us to speak our hearts. 呼应情境： When I got the invitation to write for our school newspaper, I immediately thought of how drawing has changed my daily life. 范文开头：Art brings endless beauty and fresh ideas to our daily lives, helping us discover unique perspectives to see the world. 2. 中间段：如何衔接经历与观点 思路点拨：先总述艺术的作用，再用衔接词引出个人经历，让段落逻辑更连贯。 常用衔接词承接观点：For me , As for myself , In my experience 引出经历：Last month , Once , When I was... 细节补充：Besides , What’s more , For example 范例参考：For me, drawing in my sketchbook after school is a precious way to relax and share my inner world. Last month, I painted a warm sunset glowing through my bedroom window, with soft clouds and golden light, and my family praised it warmly. 3. 结尾：如何升华感悟 思路点拨：总结艺术的价值，呼应开头，让文章结构完整。 总结升华：Art not only enriches our spirits but also makes life more colourful and joyful. 呼吁共鸣：No matter what form it takes, art connects us all and makes the world a warmer place. 呼应开头：That’s why I believe art is more than just beauty—it is a language everyone can understand. 范文 Art brings endless beauty and fresh ideas to our daily lives, helping us discover unique perspectives to see the world. Through painting, sketching or other creative forms, we can express deep feelings and subtle thoughts that are hard to put into words—joy, curiosity, or even quiet moments of reflection. Art also acts as a bridge connecting people from different cultures, teaching us to respect differences and build mutual understanding. For me, drawing in my sketchbook after school is a precious way to relax and share my inner world. Last month, I painted a warm sunset glowing through my bedroom window, with soft clouds and golden light, and my family praised it warmly. Art not only enriches our spirits but also makes life more colourful and joyful. 8B Unit2Great inventions and discoveries写作训练 一、写前训练——备词句 核心词汇（中译英） 1.发明 invention 2.突破 breakthrough 3.障碍 barrier 4.方便 convenience / convenient 5.改变我们的生活 change our lives 6.打破障碍 break barriers 7.保持联系 keep in touch (with sb.) / stay connected (with sb.) 8. 提供信息 provide information / offer information 高分衔接句（英译中+仿写） 1. I think the Internet is one of the greatest inventions in human history. 翻译：我认为互联网是人类历史上最伟大的发明之一。 仿写：I think the mobile phone is one of the greatest inventions in human history. 2. It breaks geographical barriers and connects people from all over the world closely. 翻译：它打破了地理障碍，将世界各地的人们紧密地联系在一起。 仿写：It breaks language barriers and helps people from different countries understand each other better. 3. It also makes daily life more convenient — we can shop online, order food, or book tickets without going out. 翻译：它还让日常生活变得更便捷——我们可以在线购物、点外卖或订票，无需出门。 仿写：It also makes learning more efficient — we can take online courses and watch educational videos without going to school. 个人经历素材填空 1. Besides, it brings fun like watching videos or playing games. 改写：Besides, it helps us learn new skills like learning programming (学习编程) or practising oral English.(练习英语口语). 2. So, the Internet is truly amazing and has become an important part of our lives! 改写：So, the mobile phone is truly practical / useful(实用的) and has become a part of our daily lives (我们日常生活的一部分). 结尾升华句背诵 1. In short, the Internet has truly changed the way we live and become an essential part of our lives. 2. That’s why I think the Internet is a great invention—it makes our world more connected and convenient. 3. Without the Internet, our lives would be much less efficient and colourful. 二、篇章实战——写短文 写作主题：What is a great invention or discovery in human history? 写作目标： 1.掌握与“发明/发现”相关的核心词汇与句型，积累常用衔接词。 2.学会“点明选择-阐述原因-总结升华”的写作结构，写出逻辑清晰、内容充实的短文。 3. 能结合具体作用完成一篇不少于60词的作文。 写作引导: 1. 开头：如何明确提出观点 思路点拨：直接点明你认为最伟大的发明/发现，用简洁有力的句子开篇。 直接切入：I think the Internet is one of the greatest inventions in human history. 对比引入：Among all the inventions, the Internet stands out as the most life-changing one for me. 设问引出：What is the invention that has changed our lives the most? For me, it is the Internet. 2. 中间段：如何衔接观点与原因 思路点拨：先总述发明的核心作用，再用衔接词引出具体功能，让段落层次分明。 常用衔接词引出功能：It breaks... , With just a few clicks, we can... , It also makes... 补充拓展:Besides , What’s more , In addition 举例说明:For example , Such as , Like 范例参考: It breaks geographical barriers and connects people from all over the world closely. With just a few clicks, we can easily get useful information, learn new knowledge through online courses, and chat or video-call friends who live far away. It also makes daily life more convenient — we can shop online, order food, or book tickets without going out. 3. 结尾：如何总结升华 思路点拨：总结发明的价值，呼应开头，让文章结构完整。 范例参考总结升华：So, the Internet is truly amazing and has become an important part of our lives! 强调影响： Without the Internet, our world would be much smaller and less convenient. 展望未来： As technology develops, the Internet will continue to shape our lives in more wonderful ways. 范文 I think the Internet is one of the greatest inventions in human history. It breaks geographical barriers and connects people from all over the world closely. With just a few clicks, we can easily get useful information, learn new knowledge through online courses, and chat or video-call friends who live far away. It also makes daily life more convenient — we can shop online, order food, or book tickets without going out. Besides, it brings fun like watching videos or playing games. So, the Internet is truly amazing and has become an important part of our lives! 8B Unit3Money写作训练 一、写前训练——备词句 核心词汇（中译英） 金钱 money 基本需求 basic needs 个人成长 personal growth 慈善捐赠charitable donations 财务规划 financial planning 满足基本需求 meet our basic needs 追求教育 pursue education 帮助有需要的人 help people in need / help those in need 高分衔接句（英译中+仿写） 1. Money is a powerful tool that opens many doors and creates countless opportunities in life. 翻译：金钱是一种强大的工具，它为我们打开了许多扇门，并在生活中创造了无数的机遇。 仿写：Money is a useful tool that helps us solve problems and brings us convenience in our daily life. 2. We can use money to meet our basic needs, such as buying food, clothing and shelter. 翻译：我们可以用金钱来满足基本需求，比如购买食物、衣物和住所。 仿写：We can use money to improve our quality of life, such as traveling around the world and enjoying fine dining. 3. Money allows us to pursue education and personal growth, which will benefit our future careers. 翻译：金钱让我们能够追求教育和个人成长，这将有利于我们未来的职业发展。 仿写：Travel allows us to broaden our horizons, which will enrich our life experience. 个人经历素材填空 1. Additionally, money enables us to help others through charitable donations or support family members in need. 改写：Additionally, we can use money to support educational programs (支持教育项目) or help children in poor areas (帮助贫困地区的孩子). 2. Smart financial planning teaches us responsibility and prepares us for adult life. 改写：Smart spending habits (消费习惯) teaches us financial awareness(理财意识) and prepares us for future challenges (未来的挑战). 结尾升华句背诵 1.In short, money is a valuable tool that can help us live better lives and make a positive impact on the world. 2.That’s why we should use money wisely—balancing our needs with our responsibilities to others. 3.With thoughtful spending and saving, money can truly enrich our lives and the lives of those around us. 二、篇章实战——写短文 写作主题：What can we do with money? 写作目标： 1.掌握与“金钱用途”相关的核心词汇与句型，积累常用衔接词。 2.学会“点明观点—分层阐述—辩证总结”的写作结构，写出逻辑清晰、内容充实的短文。 3.能结合具体用途完成一篇不少于70词的作文。 写作引导: 1. 开头：如何明确提出观点 思路点拨：直接点明金钱的工具属性，用简洁有力的句子开篇，为下文分层阐述做铺垫。 直接切入：Money is a powerful tool that opens many doors and creates countless opportunities in life. 对比引入：While some people think money is everything, I believe it is a valuable tool that can help us live better lives. 设问引出：What can we really do with money? It is far more than just buying things—it can shape our lives and the world around us. 学生练习：从以上范例中选择1句改写，或用自己的话写1个开头句。 2. 中间段：如何衔接观点与原因 思路点拨：先总述金钱的核心用途，再用衔接词引出具体功能，从“个人需求—个人发展—社会责任”三个维度展开，让段落层次分明。 常用衔接词 引出功能：First, ... / Second, ... / Furthermore, ... / It allows us to... 补充拓展：Additionally, ... / What’s more, ... / In addition 举例说明：such as... / For example, ... / like... 范文 Money is a powerful tool that opens many doors and creates countless opportunities in life. First, we can use money to meet our basic needs, such as buying food, clothing and shelter. These necessities ensure our survival and comfort. Second, money allows us to pursue education and personal growth. We can purchase books, pay for courses or invest in learning new skills that will benefit our future careers. Additionally, money enables us to help others through charitable donations or support family members in need. Furthermore, we can use money wisely by saving for future goals like college tuition or starting our own business. Smart financial planning teaches us responsibility and prepares us for adult life. However, it's important to remember that money should be spent thoughtfully rather than wastefully on unnecessary items. The best approach is balancing our immediate wants with long-term financial security and social responsibility. 8B Unit4Fashion写作训练 一、写前训练——备词句 核心词汇（中译英） 时尚 fashion 个人风格 personal style 社交媒体 social media 品牌服装 brand-name clothes 盲目跟风 blindly follow trends / blindly following trends 表达个性 express our personality / show our personality 融入朋友 fit in with friends / be accepted by friends 健康的态度 a healthy attitude 高分衔接句（英译中+仿写） 1. Fashion is important for teenagers, but it often creates problems for students like me. 翻译：时尚对青少年很重要，但它也常常给像我这样的学生带来困扰。 仿写：Social media is popular among teenagers, but it often brings unnecessary pressure for students like me. 2. Many classmates feel pressure to wear expensive brand-name clothes to fit in with their friends. 翻译：许多同学感到有压力，要穿昂贵的品牌服装来融入朋友的圈子。 仿写：Many students feel pressure to keep up with the latest trends to fit in with their classmates. 3. I believe we should choose clothes that suit our personal style rather than blindly following trends. 翻译：我认为我们应该选择适合自己个人风格的衣服，而不是盲目跟风。 仿写：I believe we should make our own choices rather than blindly follow others. 个人经历素材填空 1. Second, it's better to express our personality instead of copying others. 改写：Second, it's better to show our true selves (展现真实的自己) instead of copying others(模仿他人). 2. Most importantly, we should remember that confidence comes from our character, not from what we wear. 改写：Most importantly, we should remember that true beauty comes from our inner self / our heart (我们的内心), not from our appearance / what we look like (我们的外表). 结尾升华句背诵 1.In short, true fashion is about being comfortable in your own skin and expressing who you are, not about following the crowd. 2.When we stop chasing trends and start embracing our own style, fashion becomes a source of joy, not stress. 3.Confidence is the best accessory; it goes with every outfit and never goes out of style. 二、篇章实战——写短文 写作主题：My fashion attitude 写作目标： 内容目标：清晰表达对时尚的个人态度，分析时尚对青少年的影响（如压力、自我表达），并提出健康、理性的时尚观念，体现独立思考。 结构目标：掌握“引入问题—表达观点—分层论述—总结升华”的议论文结构，使用逻辑连接词使文章层次分明。 语言目标：运用与时尚、个人风格、社交媒体等相关的核心词汇和句型，表达准确、流畅，字数不少于70词。 写作引导: 1. 审题与构思 核心问题： 时尚对你和身边的同学意味着什么？ 追求时尚会带来哪些积极或消极的影响？ 你认为青少年应该如何树立健康的时尚观？ 真正的“时尚”是什么？ 2. 思路框架： 开头：引入话题，指出时尚在青少年中的普遍性及其带来的问题（如压力）。 主体1：分析追求时尚带来的困扰（如攀比、盲从社交媒体）。 主体2：阐述健康的时尚态度（如选择舒适、适合自己的风格，表达个性）。 3. 结尾：总结升华，强调自信和真实比追逐潮流更重要。 范文 Fashion is important for teenagers, but it often creates problems for students like me. Many classmates feel pressure to wear expensive brand-name clothes to fit in with their friends. This happens because we worry too much about what others think and are influenced by social media.I believe we should develop a healthier. First, we should choose clean, comfortable clothes that suit our personal style rather than blindly following trends. Second, it's better to express our personality instead of copying others. Most importantly, we should remember that confidence comes from our character, not from what we wear. In my opinion, fashion should be enjoyable and creative, not stressful. When we focus on expressing ourselves and respecting others' choices, we can appreciate fashion positively while concentrating on more meaningful things in life. 8B Unit5Natural disasters写作训练 一、写前训练——备词句 核心词汇（中译英） 洪水flood 持续20天last for 20 days 淹没主街cover Main Street 受损be damaged 电力中断cut off the power 避难所shelters 救援工作rescue work 当地居民local residents / affected people 高分衔接句（英译中+仿写） 1.A terrible flood hit Southbridge Town on 12 August, 2024. 翻译：一场可怕的洪水于2024年8月12日袭击了南桥镇。 仿写：A strong storm hit / struck the village last Saturday. 2.The serious flood was caused by heavy rain that lasted for 20 days. 翻译：这场严重的洪水是由持续了20天的大雨导致的。 仿写：The traffic accident was caused by careless driving yesterday. 3.Hundreds of shops and houses were damaged, and power was cut off to 2,000 families. 翻译：成百上千的商店和房屋受损，2000户家庭的电力被切断。 仿写：The roads were blocked, and the phones were cut off in the earthquake. 素材填空 1.Rescue work started immediately after the flood. 改写：Rescue work started at once after the flood (洪水过后立即)。 2.Soldiers helped people move to higher and safer places. 改写：Soldiers helped people move to safer places (转移到更安全的地方)。 3.Shelters, food, water and medicine were provided for the affected people. 改写：The government provided (为受灾群众提供) shelters, food, water and medicine. 4.Luckily, no deaths were reported in the flood. 改写：Luckily, no one was killed in the flood (无人在洪水中遇难)。 结尾升华句背诵 1.Thanks to the soldiers and the government, the rescue work went on smoothly. 2.The town is recovering step by step with everyone’s efforts. 3.Although the flood brought great damage, people showed their courage and unity in the face of the disaster. 二、篇章实战——写短文 写作主题：Flood hits the town 写作目标： 内容目标：能完整覆盖新闻报道的6大核心要素（时间、地点、起因、影响、措施、结果），做到信息准确、逻辑清晰。 语言目标：熟练运用一般过去时和被动语态，掌握灾害类话题的核心词汇和衔接句型。 结构目标：掌握新闻报道“倒金字塔”结构，即导语→主体→结尾，做到段落分明、过渡自然。 情感目标：通过描述灾害与救援，体会团结互助的精神，培养积极面对困难的态度。 写作引导: 1. 审题与构思 圈出关键信息：时间、地点、起因、影响、措施 2. 思路框架 第一段（导语）：一句话概括事件。 第二段（主体）：分述灾害的起因和造成的影响。 第三段（结尾）：介绍救援措施和事件结果。 3. 润色升级 加入过渡词：使用  What's worse ,  Luckily ,  Thanks to  等词，让文章更流畅。 范文 A flood hit Southbridge Town on 12 August, 2024. The flood lasted all three days. It rained for nearly 20 days in Southbridge Town. The rain started to fall and became heavy last night. One and a half metres of deep water covered the Main Street. Hundreds of shops and houses were in the water and damaged in some ways. The flood cut the power to 2000 families. Rescue work has started. Soldiers came quickly. They helped people to move to higher and safer places. Shelters, food, water and medicine have been provided by the government. Luckily, no death was reported. 8B Unit6Friendship写作训练 一、写前训练——备词句 核心词汇（中译英） 友情的魔力the magic power of friendship 黑暗中的暖光a warm light in dark times 给予勇气give us courage 想要放弃want to give up 分享自己的错误share one's own mistakes 帮助复习help sb. review 在某人的帮助下with one's help 建立在信任与关爱之上be built on trust and care 同甘共苦share joys and sorrows 让生活更明亮make life brighter 高分衔接句（英译中+仿写） 1.To me, the magic power of friendship is like a warm light in dark times. 翻译：对我来说，友情的魔力就像黑暗中的一束暖光。 仿写：To me, the power of love is like a soft song in lonely moments. 2.It gives us courage when we feel scared and strength when we want to give up. 翻译：它在我们恐惧时给予勇气，在我们想要放弃时给予力量。 仿写：Music gives us comfort when we feel down and inspiration when we need to move on. 3.With her help, I passed the next exam. That’s when I knew friendship’s magic — it turns sadness into hope. 翻译：在她的帮助下，我通过了下一次考试。就在那时，我明白了友情的魔力——它把悲伤变成了希望。 仿写：With his encouragement, I overcame my fear of public speaking.. That’s when I knew the power of support — it turns doubt into confidence. 素材填空 1.Friendship is powerful because it’s built on trust and care. 改写：Friendship is powerful because it is built on mutual understanding (建立在相互理解之上). 2.True friends stand by you, share joys and sorrows, and make life brighter. 改写：True friends support you (支持你), share your joys and sorrows (分享你的喜怒哀乐), and make your world warmer (让你的世界更温暖). 3.This magic makes us feel never alone, no matter how hard things get. 改写：This magic makes us feel never alone, no matter how big the difficulties are(无论遇到多大的困难). 结尾升华句背诵 1.True friendship is a magic that turns darkness into light and sadness into hope. 2.Friends are the ones who make our journey through life warmer and more meaningful. 3.The magic of friendship is not in grand gestures, but in the quiet, steady care that lasts a lifetime. 二、篇章实战——写短文 写作主题：The magic power of friendship 写作目标： 内容目标：能完整覆盖“友情的魔力是什么→如何帮助我→为什么强大”的三层逻辑，结合个人经历，做到情感真挚。 语言目标：熟练运用比喻句、过渡词和过去时叙事，掌握友情类话题的核心词汇和情感表达。 结构目标：掌握“观点引入→个人事例→总结升华”三段式结构，做到段落分明、过渡自然。 情感目标：通过描述友情的力量，体会信任与关爱的重要性，培养感恩与珍惜的情感。 写作引导: 1. 圈出关键信息： 核心问题：友情的魔力是什么？如何帮助你？为什么强大？ 文体要求：结合自身经历，不少于70词。 结构提示：观点→事例→总结。 2. 确定文章结构： 第一段（观点）：用比喻定义友情的魔力。 第二段（事例）：讲述一次朋友帮助自己的具体经历。 第三段（总结）：升华友情的意义，说明其强大的原因。 在过去的生活中,朋友的陪伴给我们的生活带来了美好的色彩。请结合自身经历，以“友情的魔力"为题，了一篇不少于70词的作文。 What does the "magic power" of friendship mean to you? How has this power helped you or someone you know? Why friendship is so powerful? 范文 To me, the magic power of friendship is like a warm light in dark times. It gives us courage when we feel scared and strength when we want to give up. Last term, I failed a maths exam and felt really sad. My friend noticed and sat beside me. She didn't say much but shared her own mistakes and helped me review every day. With her help, I passed the next exam. That’s when I knew friendship’s magic—it turns success into hope. Friendship is powerful because it built on trust and care. True friends stand by you, share joys and sorrows, and make life brighter. This magic makes us feel never alone, no matter how hard things get. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $