Unit 5 写作专项：Writing a Thank-you Email-2025-2026学年沪教版英语八年级上册

沪教（牛津）英语八上 Unit 5 写作专项 Writing a Thank-you Email 写作目标 结合本单元“交换旅行与文化体验”的核心目标，能写一封给寄宿家庭的感谢信，清晰表达感激之情并分享旅行收获。 1. 能正确使用现在完成时（present perfect）描述过去经历与现在的联系； 2. 能运用本单元表达感激与描述经历的词汇（如 grateful, fantastic, culture shock, keep in touch）撰写邮件； 3. 能遵循邮件格式，语言真诚、结构清晰，贴合“表达感谢”的写作场景，完成80–120词短文。 题目解析 1. 体裁：应用文（电子邮件），要求在交换旅行结束后，向寄宿家庭表达感谢，分享旅行中的难忘经历与所学所感，契合本单元“体验新文化”的目标。 2. 人称：以第一人称（I, my）和第二人称（you）为主，表达个人感受与对对方的感谢。 3. 时态：核心用现在完成时（描述至今的经历和感受）；用一般过去时（回忆旅行中的具体事件）。 4. 核心要求 · 内容：写清感谢的原因（对方的照顾、陪伴）、旅行中最享受的事、学到的东西，以及回国后的近况和思念。 · 格式：包含邮件标题、称呼、正文（问候+感谢+回忆+近况+祝福）、落款等邮件基本部分。 · 字数：80–120词，句子以简单句和复合句为主，适当运用本单元所学的现在完成时。 典型例题 你刚从北京的交换旅行回到伦敦。请你以 Thank-you Email to My Host Family 为题，写一封80–120词的电子邮件，感谢你的寄宿家庭。 思路点拨 1. 开篇问候：首先拟定邮件标题和称呼，开门见山表达问候，并点明写信目的是表达感谢。 2. 正文回忆：接着回忆旅行中最感激的事（如对方的照顾）、最享受的活动（如学围棋、逛胡同），以及学到的中国文化知识，运用现在完成时增强表达。 3. 结尾祝福：最后分享回国后的近况，表达思念，并送上祝福，期待再次联系。 写作模板（逐段拆解，贴合单元目标） 第一段：开篇问候 写作目的：问候对方，点明写信目的。 必写要素：问候 + 写信目的（感谢） 基础句式：Dear [Host Family], I hope you are well. I’m writing to thank you for your kindness during my exchange trip. 示例：Dear Mr and Mrs Li, I hope you are well. I’m writing to thank you for your wonderful hospitality during my stay in Beijing. 第二段：正文回忆 写作目的：分享旅行经历，表达感激，运用本单元语法。 必写要素：感激的事 + 享受的活动 + 学到的东西 基础句式：I will never forget how you made me feel like part of the family. I have learnt so much about Chinese culture, especially ... I still remember the day when we ... 示例：I will never forget how you made me feel like part of the family. I have learnt so much about Chinese history and culture, especially how to play Go. I still remember the day when we visited the Great Wall together. 第三段：结尾祝福 写作目的：分享近况，表达思念，送上祝福。 必写要素：近况 + 思念 + 祝福 基础句式：Since I returned to London, I have told all my friends about my fantastic experience. I miss you very much and hope we can keep in touch. 示例：Since I returned to London, I have told all my friends about my fantastic experience. I miss you very much and hope we can keep in touch. 范文 英文 Thank-you Email to My Host Family To: Mr Li, Mrs Li Subject: Thank you Dear Mr and Mrs Li, I hope you are well. I’m writing to thank you for your wonderful hospitality during my stay in Beijing.（开篇问候，点明目的） I will never forget how you made me feel like part of the family. I have learnt so much about Chinese history and culture, especially how to play Go. I still remember the day when we visited the Great Wall together. It was an experience I will cherish forever.（正文回忆，运用现在完成时） Since I returned to London, I have told all my friends about my fantastic experience. I miss you very much and hope we can keep in touch. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Eric 中文翻译 致寄宿家庭的感谢信 收件人： 李先生、李太太 主题： 感谢 亲爱的李先生、李太太： 希望你们一切都好。我写这封信是为了感谢我在北京期间你们的盛情款待。 我永远不会忘记你们如何让我感觉像家庭的一员。我学到了很多关于中国历史和文化的知识，尤其是如何下围棋。我仍然记得我们一起游览长城的那一天。这是一段我将永远珍惜的经历。 回到伦敦后，我已经把我的奇妙经历告诉了我所有的朋友。我非常想念你们，希望我们能保持联系。期待很快收到你们的消息。 你的， 埃里克 素材积累 短语 1. wonderful hospitality — 盛情款待 2. feel like part of the family — 感觉像家庭的一员 3. cherish forever — 永远珍惜 4. keep in touch — 保持联系 5. look forward to hearing from you — 期待收到你的消息 6. fantastic experience — 奇妙的经历 7. tell my friends about — 告诉我的朋友关于…… 8. culture shock — 文化冲击 基础句型 基础句型 仿写句子 I’m writing to thank you for ... I’m writing to thank you for your help. I have learnt so much about ... I have learnt so much about local customs. Since I returned, I have ... Since I returned, I have missed you very much. I hope we can keep in touch. I hope we can keep in touch forever. 好句集锦 1. Your kindness has left an indelible mark on my heart, and I will carry the memories of our time together always.（你们的善意在我心中留下了不可磨灭的印记，我将永远珍藏我们在一起的时光。） 2. This exchange trip was not just a journey to a new place, but a journey to a new understanding of the world and myself.（这次交换旅行不仅仅是一次去新地方的旅行，更是一次对世界和自我的新认知之旅。） 3. Thank you for opening your home and your hearts to me. I will never forget the warmth and love I felt in Beijing.（感谢你们向我敞开了家门和心扉。我永远不会忘记在北京感受到的温暖和爱。） 学生写作填空练习版 Thank-you Email to My Host Family To: [Host Family Names] Subject: Thank you Dear [Host Family Names], I hope you are well. I’m writing to thank you for [] during my stay in []. I will never forget how you made me feel like part of the family. I have learnt so much about [], especially []. I still remember the day when we [ ] together. It was an experience I will cherish forever. Since I returned to [ ], I have told all my friends about my fantastic experience. I miss you very much and hope we can keep in touch. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, [Your Name] ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $