Unit 1 People around us Period 5 Writing课件-2025-2026学年沪教版英语七年级下册

Unit 1 People around us Period 5 Writing 一、写作词组 (汉译英) 1. 在我们社区里 ___________________ 2. 帮忙 ___________________ 3. 教某人做某事 ___________________ 4. 在去……的路上 ___________________ 5. 英语演讲比赛 ___________________ in our community help out teach sb. to do sth. on the way to... English speaking competition Learn how to write the person I love from others’ works; Learning objectives Learn to write details to support the topic; Writing an article about a person you like 写一篇关于你喜欢的人的文章 The school website is calling for articles on the topic “a person I like”. Which person would you write about, and what are you going to write about him / her? 学校网站正在征集主题为“我喜欢的人”的文章。你想写哪一个人？你打算写关于他/她的什么内容。 1 Wang Yao organized her ideas by asking herself some questions about the topic. Look at the questions and read her article. a Who am I going to write about? (e.g, a family member / a teacher / some one in the community) b What is he / she like? e What does he / she do? d What does he / she often say? e What do think of him / her? characteristics actions words What I like about him / her. 1. 范文及写作技巧学习 My nice neighbour Yao Yuan Yao Yuan is my neighbour and schoolmate. He is kind and hard-working. Yao Yuan is very active in our community. At the weekend, he often helps out at a local retirement home. He teaches retired people to use computers and smartphones. He says, “I’m always happy to help!” Who personality often say Writing tip 1: Use supporting details to enrich your article! 举例证明观点！ Writing tip 2: Use words to enrich your article! 引用话语证明观点！ Yao Yuan also uses his time wisely. Every day, he gets up at six and exercises for half an hour before breakfast. Then he listens to English programmes on the way to school. He won the school English speaking competition last year Yao Yuan is an amazing person, and I wish I could be like him! My opinion Writing tip 1: Use supporting details to enrich your article! 举例证明观点！ Writing tip 3: Use adj. and exclamation to show your opinion! 使用形容词和感叹语气来表明评价/观点！ 1.Circle the adjectives used to describe Yao Yuan. 2.How does Wang Yao show how kind and hard-working Yao Yuan is? topic sentence supporting details 2. 写作技巧训练 Have a try! My teacher Mr Zhang is a very _____ person. helpful patient brave friendly easy-going … Write 1 or 2 examples to support the topic and share in class. 这一步可以分小组进行，每一个小组选一个词来写支撑的细节； 写完后可以让学生分享 Have a try! Write 1 or 2 examples to support the topic and share in class. My teacher Mr Zhang is a very patient person. He never gets angry when we make mistakes. Instead, he encourages us to learn from them. He is also creative, and his classes are always full of fun. 3. 写作语言提升技巧 I like my father. He is 1.73 metres tall. He has short black hair. He takes care of our family. He is strict with me. He is a busy engineer. He sometimes goes to work all day and all night. He often tells jokes. Our family are often full of fun. I always watch TV and play with him . I love my father very much. Let’s make some comments! 评一评 About the language About the language I like my father. He is a 1.73 metres tall. He has short black hair. He takes care of our family. He is strict with me. I like my father. He is a 1.73-metre-tall man with short black hair. He takes care of our family, and he is strict with me. Problem：句式单调！ Solution：使用连词； 改变表达方式 About the language He is a busy engineer. He sometimes goes to work all day and all night. He often tells jokes. Our family are often full of fun. I always watch TV and play with him . He is a busy engineer. He sometimes goes to work all day and all night. He often tells jokes, so our family are often full of fun. When he is free, he always spends time watching TV or playing games with me . Solution：使用过渡词、句 （时间、when，if）; 使用更多的词组，丰富语言表达。 Can you give a better ending? I like my father. He is a 1.73-metre-tall man with short black hair. He takes care of our family, and he is strict with me. He is a busy engineer. He sometimes need to work all day and all night. He often tells jokes, so our family are often full of fun. In the weekend,/ When he is free, he always spends time with me watching TV or playing games. I love my father very much. My dad is hard-working and humorous . He loves me and I love my good dad! 4. 写作任务实战训练 19 主题：人与社会——社会服务与人际关系 文体：说明文 人称： 以_____________ 人称为主 时态：以 _____________ 为主 第三 一般现在时 Step 1: 题干细审 Appearance: 02 01 03 Characteristics: Hobbies: Step 2: 谋篇布局 Comment:… Who : Step 3: 句子提升 常用的连接词： ________________ (不仅……而且……) 高分表达： in one’s free time; what’s more; make sth. + adj. When/Wherever… If… encourage sb. to do… She….with… not only ... but also ... The person I like 　The person I like is my best friend Lily. She is a tall girl. She has big eyes and short black hair. She likes playing the piano. And she also likes to play soccer when she is not busy. 　Lily is very kind and patient. She is good at English. When I have problems with my English homework, she always explains everything to me patiently. And she is helpful. She often helps her teachers and classmates after school. She is also funny and often makes me laugh. 　Lily is a nice girl. I hope we can remain friends forever. 基础版范文: 23 The person I like 　The person I like is my best friend Lily. She is a tall girl with big, bright eyes and short black hair. She enjoys playing the piano and playing soccer in her free time. 　What makes me like her so much is her kindness and patience. She is always ready to help others. She is good at English. When I have problems with my English homework, she explains everything to me again and again until I understand. She never gets angry. What’s more, she is very funny and often tells interesting stories that make me laugh. 　In my eyes, Lily is not only a friend but also a great role model. I feel lucky to have such a great friend. She makes my life more colorful and meaningful. I believe we will be best friends forever. 进阶版范文： 24 感谢聆听！ $