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专题03 告知信+道歉信+慰问信
目录
第一部分 风向速递 洞察考向,感知前沿
第二部分 分层突破 固本培优,精准提分
A组·保分基础练
题型01 告知信要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译)
题型02 道歉信要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译)
题型03 慰问信要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译)
题型04 告知信段落仿写练(开头、结尾、主体)
题型05 道歉信段落仿写练(开头、结尾、主体)
题型06 慰问信段落仿写练(开头、结尾、主体)
B组·抢分能力练
题型07 重难创新练(告知信综合练)
题型08 重难创新练(道歉信综合练)
题型09 重难创新练(慰问信综合练)
第三部分 真题验证 对标高考,感悟考法
告知信、道歉信和慰问信是天津高考英语应用文写作中重要且实用的书信类型,虽然近年天津卷直接考查的频率不如邀请信和求助信高,但在各区模拟题中频繁出现,体现了对考生交际能力和语言得体性的全面考查。通过分析天津卷及模拟题,可总结出以下核心风向:
1. 告知信注重信息的清晰性与完整性:告知信的核心是传递信息(如活动安排、变更通知、考试信息等)。天津考题常结合校园生活(如社团活动时间调整、考试安排告知),要求考生用简洁明了的语言将时间、地点、内容等要素交代清楚,同时语气要恰当,既不能过于生硬,也不能过于随意。
2. 道歉信强调真诚与补救措施:道歉信往往因失约、迟到、未能及时回复等而起。天津卷命题倾向于设置真实语境(如因故不能参加朋友的聚会、未能按时归还物品等),考查学生能否真诚地表达歉意,并说明原因、提出补救措施。得体的道歉信能体现考生的情商和语言素养。
3. 慰问信体现共情与鼓励:慰问信通常用于对朋友或他人的不幸(如生病、考试失利、遭遇困难)表示关心和安慰。天津模拟题中曾出现慰问生病的外教、鼓励受挫的同学等情境。这类书信要求语言温暖、真诚,既要表达同情,更要给予鼓励和支持。
4. 天津特色隐现:无论哪种书信,背景常与校园生活(学习压力、社团活动、同学生病)或城市文化(五大道旅游、天津博物馆活动)相关。考生应积累相关词汇,使内容更接地气,更具真实感。
01告知信要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译)
要求: 将下列中文要点翻译成地道、准确的英文,并根据括号内的要求进行句式升级。
1. 我写这封信是为了告诉你一个好消息:我们学校的英语演讲比赛将于下周五下午三点在报告厅举行。(使用同位语从句)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 请注意,由于天气原因,明天的运动会将推迟到下周举行。(使用 `due to` 和被动语态)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 如果你有任何问题,请随时与我联系。(使用 `feel free to do` 和 `do not hesitate to do` 两种表达)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 我们很高兴地通知您,您已被我校英语俱乐部录取为正式成员。(使用 `inform` 和 `that` 从句)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 随信附上本次夏令营的详细日程安排,请查收。(使用 `attached to this email`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 02道歉信要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译)
要求: 将下列中文要点翻译成地道、准确的英文,并根据括号内的要求进行句式升级。
1. 我写信是为昨天没能按时归还你的词典而道歉。(使用 `apologize for not doing`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我深感抱歉,因为突然生病,我不能参加你的生日派对了。(使用 `due to` 和 `be unable to`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 这完全是我的过错,我希望你能接受我的道歉。(使用 `It is entirely my fault` 和 `accept my apology`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 为了弥补我的过失,我下周末可以请你吃饭。(使用 `make up for` 和 `invite you to dinner`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 如果你能给我一个弥补的机会,我将不胜感激。(使用 `I would appreciate it if...`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 03 慰问信要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译)
要求: 将下列中文要点翻译成地道、准确的英文,并根据括号内的要求进行句式升级。
1. 听说你生病住院了,我感到非常难过。(使用 `I am sorry to hear that...`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 请别太担心你的功课,等你康复后我会帮你补上的。(使用 `Don't worry too much about...` 和 `help you catch up`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 希望你早日康复,重返校园。(使用 `a speedy recovery`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 如果你需要任何帮助,请随时告诉我。(使用 `if you need any help, please don't hesitate to let me know`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 我们所有的老师和同学都在想念你,期待你早日归来。(使用 `miss you` 和 `look forward to`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 04 告知信段落仿写练(开头、结尾、主体)
要求: 根据所给情境,仿照范例完成段落写作。
1. 你校英语俱乐部下周将举办英语电影配音比赛,请你写一则通知,告知会员们比赛的时间、地点和报名方式。
仿写任务: 写告知信的开头段,说明目的并引出具体信息。
参考范例: I am writing to inform you of some important information regarding the upcoming English Film Dubbing Contest.
你的仿写:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 告知你的英国朋友Chris,因学校临时安排考试,你不能如期去机场接他了。
仿写任务: 写告知信的主体段,说明变更情况并表达歉意。
参考范例: I regret to inform you that due to a sudden exam arranged by the school, I will not be able to pick you up at the airport as planned. I am very sorry for any inconvenience this may cause.
你的仿写:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 告知参加夏令营的同学,集合地点改为学校南门,时间不变。
仿写任务: 写告知信的结尾段,提醒注意事项并表达祝愿。
参考范例: Please make sure to arrive on time. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me. Wish you a wonderful summer camp!
你的仿写:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
05 道歉信段落仿写练(开头、结尾、主体)
要求: 根据所给情境,仿照范例完成段落写作。
1. 你答应周末陪朋友去逛五大道,但因为家里临时有事不能去了。
仿写任务: 写道歉信的开头段,表达歉意并说明原因。
参考范例: I am writing to apologize for not being able to accompany you to the Five Great Avenues this weekend. Something urgent has come up in my family.
你的仿写:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 你不小心弄丢了朋友借给你的英语笔记,非常内疚。
仿写任务: 写道歉信的主体段,详细说明情况并提出补救措施。
参考范例: I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the English notes you lent me. I searched everywhere but couldn't find them. To make up for my carelessness, I would like to buy you a new notebook or help you reorganize the notes.
你的仿写:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 因为没能及时回复朋友的邮件,你写信道歉。
仿写任务: 写道歉信的结尾段,再次道歉并期待谅解。
参考范例: I hope you can forgive my negligence. I value our friendship greatly and will be more careful in the future. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
你的仿写:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
06 慰问信段落仿写练(开头、结尾、主体)
要求: 根据所给情境,仿照范例完成段落写作。
1. 你的同学李华在运动会上受伤了,在家休养。
仿写任务: 写慰问信的开头段,表达关心和难过。
参考范例: I was so sorry to hear that you got injured during the sports meeting. I can only imagine how painful and frustrating it must be for you.
你的仿写:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 你的外国朋友Chris因为考试没考好而情绪低落。
仿写任务: 写慰问信的主体段,安慰他并鼓励他不要灰心。
参考范例: Don't be too hard on yourself. Everyone has ups and downs, and this is just a small setback. I'm sure you will do much better next time with your hard work.
你的仿写:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 你的笔友所在的城市遭遇了洪水,你写信慰问。
仿写任务: 写慰问信的结尾段,表达愿意帮助并送上祝福。
参考范例: If there's anything I can do to help, please let me know. Take care of yourself and your family. Wish you all the best.
你的仿写:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 1(告知信综合练)
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津。学校将组织一次“天津文化一日游”活动,邀请国际部的外国学生参加。请你根据以下提示,写一封告知信,内容包括:
(1) 活动时间:5月20日(周六)全天;
(2) 活动地点:五大道、天津博物馆、古文化街;
(3) 活动安排:上午参观五大道,中午品尝天津小吃,下午参观博物馆和古文化街;
(4) 集合时间地点:早上8:00学校南门;
(5) 注意事项:穿舒适鞋子,带相机。
注意: (1) 词数不少于100;(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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Passage 2(道歉信综合练)
假设你是晨光中学的李津。你的英国朋友Chris上个月来天津旅游时,借给你一本英文原版小说。你答应一个月后归还,但由于学业繁忙,你不仅没来得及看,还不小心把书弄丢了。请给Chris写一封道歉信,内容包括:
(1) 说明情况并表示歉意;
(2) 解释原因(学业忙,疏忽大意);
(3) 提出补救措施(买一本新的寄给他,或者赔偿损失)。
注意: (1) 词数不少于100;(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 3(慰问信综合练)
假设你是晨光中学的李津。你的英国笔友Chris最近在邮件中告诉你,他因为一次意外摔伤了腿,需要在家休养一个月,因此错过了他期待已久的学校足球比赛。请你给他写一封慰问信,内容包括:
(1) 得知消息后的难过心情;
(2) 安慰他不要灰心,健康第一,以后还有机会;
(3) 鼓励他好好休养,并祝愿他早日康复。
注意: (1) 词数不少于100;(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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Passage 1
(2024·天津市和平区高三一模·改编) 假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,你校将举办“中国传统文化节”活动,请你代表学生会给国际部的外国学生写一封告知信,内容包括:
(1) 活动时间:6月15日下午2:005:00;
(2) 活动地点:学校体育馆;
(3) 活动内容:书法展示、剪纸体验、民乐表演、茶艺品尝;
(4) 欢迎他们参加,并告知如有兴趣请提前报名。
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Passage 2
(2023·天津市南开区高三模拟·改编) 假设你是晨光中学的李津,你的英国朋友Chris上个月来天津时送给你一本关于英国历史的书,你非常喜欢。但你在上周搬家时不慎将书丢失。请给Chris写一封道歉信,内容包括:
(1) 表达对礼物的喜爱和感激;
(2) 说明丢失的经过并道歉;
(3) 提出补救措施。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 3
(2022·天津市河西区高三二模·改编) 假设你是晨光中学的李津,你的美国笔友Tom因为父母工作调动,即将随家人搬到另一个城市,他因此不得不离开现在的学校和朋友,感到非常难过。请给他写一封慰问信,内容包括:
(1) 表示理解和同情;
(2) 安慰他新环境也会有新朋友和新机会;
(3) 鼓励他保持联系,并邀请他以后来天津玩。
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专题03 告知信+道歉信+慰问信
目录
第一部分 风向速递 洞察考向,感知前沿
第二部分 分层突破 固本培优,精准提分
A组·保分基础练
题型01 告知信要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译)
题型02 道歉信要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译)
题型03 慰问信要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译)
题型04 告知信段落仿写练(开头、结尾、主体)
题型05 道歉信段落仿写练(开头、结尾、主体)
题型06 慰问信段落仿写练(开头、结尾、主体)
B组·抢分能力练
题型07 重难创新练(告知信综合练)
题型08 重难创新练(道歉信综合练)
题型09 重难创新练(慰问信综合练)
第三部分 真题验证 对标高考,感悟考法
告知信、道歉信和慰问信是天津高考英语应用文写作中重要且实用的书信类型,虽然近年天津卷直接考查的频率不如邀请信和求助信高,但在各区模拟题中频繁出现,体现了对考生交际能力和语言得体性的全面考查。通过分析天津卷及模拟题,可总结出以下核心风向:
1. 告知信注重信息的清晰性与完整性:告知信的核心是传递信息(如活动安排、变更通知、考试信息等)。天津考题常结合校园生活(如社团活动时间调整、考试安排告知),要求考生用简洁明了的语言将时间、地点、内容等要素交代清楚,同时语气要恰当,既不能过于生硬,也不能过于随意。
2. 道歉信强调真诚与补救措施:道歉信往往因失约、迟到、未能及时回复等而起。天津卷命题倾向于设置真实语境(如因故不能参加朋友的聚会、未能按时归还物品等),考查学生能否真诚地表达歉意,并说明原因、提出补救措施。得体的道歉信能体现考生的情商和语言素养。
3. 慰问信体现共情与鼓励:慰问信通常用于对朋友或他人的不幸(如生病、考试失利、遭遇困难)表示关心和安慰。天津模拟题中曾出现慰问生病的外教、鼓励受挫的同学等情境。这类书信要求语言温暖、真诚,既要表达同情,更要给予鼓励和支持。
4. 天津特色隐现:无论哪种书信,背景常与校园生活(学习压力、社团活动、同学生病)或城市文化(五大道旅游、天津博物馆活动)相关。考生应积累相关词汇,使内容更接地气,更具真实感。
01告知信要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译)
要求: 将下列中文要点翻译成地道、准确的英文,并根据括号内的要求进行句式升级。
1. 我写这封信是为了告诉你一个好消息:我们学校的英语演讲比赛将于下周五下午三点在报告厅举行。(使用同位语从句)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I am writing to tell you some good news that the English Speech Contest of our school will be held in the lecture hall at 3 p.m. next Friday.
【解析】“一个好消息”的具体内容用 `that` 引导的同位语从句解释,使信息更完整。
2. 请注意,由于天气原因,明天的运动会将推迟到下周举行。(使用 `due to` 和被动语态)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Please note that the sports meeting tomorrow will be put off until next week due to the weather.
【解析】“由于”用 `due to` 更正式;“推迟”用 `put off` 或 `postponed`。
3. 如果你有任何问题,请随时与我联系。(使用 `feel free to do` 和 `do not hesitate to do` 两种表达)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me. / do not hesitate to contact me.
【解析】两种都是告知信结尾常用的礼貌用语。
4. 我们很高兴地通知您,您已被我校英语俱乐部录取为正式成员。(使用 `inform` 和 `that` 从句)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted as a formal member of our English Club.
【解析】`inform sb. that...` 是正式告知的常用结构。
5. 随信附上本次夏令营的详细日程安排,请查收。(使用 `attached to this email`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Attached to this email is the detailed schedule of the summer camp. Please check it.
【解析】倒装结构强调附件内容,是邮件通知的常用表达。
02道歉信要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译)
要求: 将下列中文要点翻译成地道、准确的英文,并根据括号内的要求进行句式升级。
1. 我写信是为昨天没能按时归还你的词典而道歉。(使用 `apologize for not doing`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I am writing to apologize for not returning your dictionary on time yesterday.
【解析】`apologize for (not) doing` 是道歉信的经典结构。
2. 我深感抱歉,因为突然生病,我不能参加你的生日派对了。(使用 `due to` 和 `be unable to`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I am terribly sorry that, due to a sudden illness, I will be unable to attend your birthday party.
【解析】`due to` 引出原因,`be unable to` 比 `can't` 更正式。
3. 这完全是我的过错,我希望你能接受我的道歉。(使用 `It is entirely my fault` 和 `accept my apology`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】It is entirely my fault. I hope you can accept my apology.
【解析】坦诚承认错误是道歉信的关键。
4. 为了弥补我的过失,我下周末可以请你吃饭。(使用 `make up for` 和 `invite you to dinner`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】To make up for my mistake, I would like to invite you to dinner next weekend.
【解析】提出补救措施,用不定式作目的状语。
5. 如果你能给我一个弥补的机会,我将不胜感激。(使用 `I would appreciate it if...`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance to make it up to you.
【解析】道歉信结尾常用此句型,语气诚恳。
03 慰问信要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译)
要求: 将下列中文要点翻译成地道、准确的英文,并根据括号内的要求进行句式升级。
1. 听说你生病住院了,我感到非常难过。(使用 `I am sorry to hear that...`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I am sorry to hear that you are ill and in hospital.
【解析】慰问信开头常用此表达关心。
2. 请别太担心你的功课,等你康复后我会帮你补上的。(使用 `Don't worry too much about...` 和 `help you catch up`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Don't worry too much about your schoolwork. I will help you catch up after you recover.
【解析】安慰对方并提供实际帮助,体现真诚。
3. 希望你早日康复,重返校园。(使用 `a speedy recovery`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I wish you a speedy recovery and an early return to school.
【解析】`a speedy recovery` 是慰问信的常用祝福语。
4. 如果你需要任何帮助,请随时告诉我。(使用 `if you need any help, please don't hesitate to let me know`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】If you need any help, please don't hesitate to let me know.
【解析】表达愿意提供帮助,体现关心。
5. 我们所有的老师和同学都在想念你,期待你早日归来。(使用 `miss you` 和 `look forward to`)
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】All the teachers and classmates miss you and look forward to your early return.
【解析】用集体情感温暖对方。
04 告知信段落仿写练(开头、结尾、主体)
要求: 根据所给情境,仿照范例完成段落写作。
1. 你校英语俱乐部下周将举办英语电影配音比赛,请你写一则通知,告知会员们比赛的时间、地点和报名方式。
仿写任务: 写告知信的开头段,说明目的并引出具体信息。
参考范例: I am writing to inform you of some important information regarding the upcoming English Film Dubbing Contest.
你的仿写:
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【答案】Dear members, I am writing to inform you that our English Club will hold an English Film Dubbing Contest next Saturday. The following are the key details you need to know.
2. 告知你的英国朋友Chris,因学校临时安排考试,你不能如期去机场接他了。
仿写任务: 写告知信的主体段,说明变更情况并表达歉意。
参考范例: I regret to inform you that due to a sudden exam arranged by the school, I will not be able to pick you up at the airport as planned. I am very sorry for any inconvenience this may cause.
你的仿写:
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【答案】Unfortunately, I have to tell you that something unexpected has come up – our school has just announced an important exam on the same day you arrive. Therefore, I won't be able to meet you at the airport. I'm really sorry about the change of plan.
3. 告知参加夏令营的同学,集合地点改为学校南门,时间不变。
仿写任务: 写告知信的结尾段,提醒注意事项并表达祝愿。
参考范例: Please make sure to arrive on time. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me. Wish you a wonderful summer camp!
你的仿写:
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【答案】Please note the change of meeting point and be at the South Gate on time. Should you have any difficulty, feel free to call me. Hope you all have a great time!
05 道歉信段落仿写练(开头、结尾、主体)
要求: 根据所给情境,仿照范例完成段落写作。
1. 你答应周末陪朋友去逛五大道,但因为家里临时有事不能去了。
仿写任务: 写道歉信的开头段,表达歉意并说明原因。
参考范例: I am writing to apologize for not being able to accompany you to the Five Great Avenues this weekend. Something urgent has come up in my family.
你的仿写:
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【答案】Dear Xiao Ming, I'm writing to offer my sincere apologies for breaking my promise to go to the Five Great Avenues with you this weekend. My parents need me to help with some family matters unexpectedly.
2. 你不小心弄丢了朋友借给你的英语笔记,非常内疚。
仿写任务: 写道歉信的主体段,详细说明情况并提出补救措施。
参考范例: I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the English notes you lent me. I searched everywhere but couldn't find them. To make up for my carelessness, I would like to buy you a new notebook or help you reorganize the notes.
你的仿写:
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【答案】I feel really awful to tell you that I've lost the English notes you were kind enough to lend me. I've looked everywhere, but they're just gone. I know this has caused you trouble, so I'd like to buy a new notebook and copy the notes from a classmate, or do whatever I can to make it up to you.
3. 因为没能及时回复朋友的邮件,你写信道歉。
仿写任务: 写道歉信的结尾段,再次道歉并期待谅解。
参考范例: I hope you can forgive my negligence. I value our friendship greatly and will be more careful in the future. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
你的仿写:
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【答案】Once again, I apologize for not replying to your email sooner. I hope you understand and forgive me. Please write back when you have time – I'd love to hear from you.
06 慰问信段落仿写练(开头、结尾、主体)
要求: 根据所给情境,仿照范例完成段落写作。
1. 你的同学李华在运动会上受伤了,在家休养。
仿写任务: 写慰问信的开头段,表达关心和难过。
参考范例: I was so sorry to hear that you got injured during the sports meeting. I can only imagine how painful and frustrating it must be for you.
你的仿写:
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【答案】Dear Li Hua, I was deeply saddened to learn that you were injured in the sports meet and have to stay at home for a while. I know how much you love sports, so this must be really hard for you.
2. 你的外国朋友Chris因为考试没考好而情绪低落。
仿写任务: 写慰问信的主体段,安慰他并鼓励他不要灰心。
参考范例: Don't be too hard on yourself. Everyone has ups and downs, and this is just a small setback. I'm sure you will do much better next time with your hard work.
你的仿写:
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【答案】Chris, please don't feel too discouraged. One exam doesn't define your ability. You are a hardworking person, and I believe you will learn from this experience and achieve better results next time. Remember, failure is the mother of success.
3. 你的笔友所在的城市遭遇了洪水,你写信慰问。
仿写任务: 写慰问信的结尾段,表达愿意帮助并送上祝福。
参考范例: If there's anything I can do to help, please let me know. Take care of yourself and your family. Wish you all the best.
你的仿写:
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【答案】If you need any help, whether it's something I can send or just someone to talk to, please don't hesitate to tell me. My thoughts are with you and your city. Stay safe and take care.
Passage 1(告知信综合练)
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津。学校将组织一次“天津文化一日游”活动,邀请国际部的外国学生参加。请你根据以下提示,写一封告知信,内容包括:
(1) 活动时间:5月20日(周六)全天;
(2) 活动地点:五大道、天津博物馆、古文化街;
(3) 活动安排:上午参观五大道,中午品尝天津小吃,下午参观博物馆和古文化街;
(4) 集合时间地点:早上8:00学校南门;
(5) 注意事项:穿舒适鞋子,带相机。
注意: (1) 词数不少于100;(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear international students,
I am Li Jin, president of the Student Union. I am writing to inform you of an exciting upcoming event – a oneday tour of Tianjin culture, specially organized for our international students.
The tour will take place on Saturday, May 20th. We will visit some of Tianjin's most famous attractions: the Five Great Avenues, Tianjin Museum, and the Ancient Culture Street. The schedule is as follows: In the morning, we will explore the historic Five Great Avenues, admiring the unique architecture. Around noon, we will enjoy a variety of local Tianjin snacks for lunch. In the afternoon, we will head to Tianjin Museum to learn about the city's rich history, followed by a visit to the Ancient Culture Street, where you can shop for traditional crafts and souvenirs.
Please gather at the school's South Gate at 8:00 a.m. sharp. The bus will leave promptly at 8:15. Remember to wear comfortable shoes as we will be walking a lot, and don't forget to bring your camera to capture the beautiful sights!
If you have any questions, feel free to contact me. We look forward to a wonderful day exploring Tianjin together!
Best regards,
Li Jin
【详解】
本篇书面表达属于告知信。要求考生以学生会主席的身份,向国际部学生告知“天津文化一日游”活动的具体安排。
1. 词汇积累
告知:inform → notify / let sb. know
即将到来的:upcoming → forthcoming
景点:attractions → scenic spots / places of interest
日程安排:schedule → itinerary
准时地:promptly → on time / sharp
2. 句式拓展
原句:We will visit some of Tianjin's most famous attractions: the Five Great Avenues, Tianjin Museum, and the Ancient Culture Street.
拓展句:Our tour will cover several iconic landmarks of Tianjin, including the Five Great Avenues, Tianjin Museum, and the Ancient Culture Street, each offering a unique glimpse into the city's charm.
3. 高分句型分析
【高分句型1】I am writing to inform you of an exciting upcoming event... (不定式作目的状语,直接点明写信目的)
【高分句型2】Please gather at the school's South Gate at 8:00 a.m. sharp. (使用`sharp`强调准时,语气清晰有力)
【高分句型3】If you have any questions, feel free to contact me. (结尾常用礼貌用语,简洁得体)
Passage 2(道歉信综合练)
假设你是晨光中学的李津。你的英国朋友Chris上个月来天津旅游时,借给你一本英文原版小说。你答应一个月后归还,但由于学业繁忙,你不仅没来得及看,还不小心把书弄丢了。请给Chris写一封道歉信,内容包括:
(1) 说明情况并表示歉意;
(2) 解释原因(学业忙,疏忽大意);
(3) 提出补救措施(买一本新的寄给他,或者赔偿损失)。
注意: (1) 词数不少于100;(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
I am writing this letter with a heavy heart to offer my sincere apologies for losing the English novel you lent me last month.
I know you trusted me with your book, and I promised to return it within a month. Unfortunately, due to the heavy pressure of my studies and my own carelessness, I forgot to read it and somehow misplaced it. I have searched everywhere but failed to find it. I feel terribly sorry for my negligence and for breaking my promise.
To make up for my mistake, I would like to buy a new copy of the same book from an online store and have it shipped to you directly. If you prefer, I can also compensate you with the equivalent value. Please let me know which option you would prefer.
I know this has caused you inconvenience, and I sincerely hope you can forgive me. Your friendship means a lot to me, and I promise to be more careful in the future.
Once again, I apologize for any trouble I've caused.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【详解】
本篇书面表达属于道歉信。考生因弄丢朋友的书而写信道歉,需表达歉意、解释原因并提出补救措施。
1. 词汇积累
道歉:apologize → express regret / offer an apology
沉重的:heavy → burdened
疏忽:negligence → carelessness / oversight
弥补:make up for → compensate for
赔偿:compensate → reimburse
2. 句式拓展
原句:I know this has caused you inconvenience, and I sincerely hope you can forgive me.
拓展句:I am fully aware of the inconvenience this has caused you, and I earnestly hope that you can find it in your heart to forgive me.
3. 高分句型分析
【高分句型1】I am writing this letter with a heavy heart to offer my sincere apologies... (`with a heavy heart`生动表达沉重心情,增强感染力)
【高分句型2】To make up for my mistake, I would like to buy a new copy... (不定式作目的状语,引出补救措施)
【高分句型3】Your friendship means a lot to me, and I promise to be more careful in the future. (强调友谊,表达诚意)
Passage 3(慰问信综合练)
假设你是晨光中学的李津。你的英国笔友Chris最近在邮件中告诉你,他因为一次意外摔伤了腿,需要在家休养一个月,因此错过了他期待已久的学校足球比赛。请你给他写一封慰问信,内容包括:
(1) 得知消息后的难过心情;
(2) 安慰他不要灰心,健康第一,以后还有机会;
(3) 鼓励他好好休养,并祝愿他早日康复。
注意: (1) 词数不少于100;(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
I was deeply saddened to learn from your last email that you had an accident and broke your leg. I can only imagine how painful and frustrating it must be for you, especially missing the school football match you had been looking forward to.
Please don't be too discouraged. Health is the most important thing, and right now your focus should be on resting and recovering fully. There will be more matches in the future, and I'm sure you'll get your chance to shine on the field again once you're back on your feet. Remember, a temporary setback doesn't define your ability or passion for the sport.
While you're recovering, try to keep yourself occupied with things you enjoy, like reading, watching movies, or maybe even learning some new skills online. If you need any recommendations for good books or films, I'd be happy to share.
I sincerely wish you a speedy recovery and hope to see you back on the football field soon. Take good care of yourself!
Best wishes,
Li Jin
【详解】
本篇书面表达属于慰问信。考生得知英国笔友受伤后写信表示关心和安慰。
1. 词汇积累
难过的:saddened → distressed / grieved
挫折:setback → obstacle / difficulty
完全地:fully → completely / entirely
祝愿:wish → hope / desire
康复:recovery → recuperation / healing
2. 句式拓展
原句:I was deeply saddened to learn from your last email that you had an accident and broke your leg.
拓展句:It came as a great shock to me when I read your email and learned about your accident and the broken leg. I was truly saddened by the news.
3. 高分句型分析
【高分句型1】I can only imagine how painful and frustrating it must be for you... (用`I can only imagine`表达共情,自然得体)
【高分句型2】...a temporary setback doesn't define your ability or passion for the sport. (用`define`一词富有哲理,鼓励性强)
【高分句型3】If you need any recommendations for good books or films, I'd be happy to share. (主动提供帮助,体现真诚关怀)
Passage 1
(2024·天津市和平区高三一模·改编) 假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,你校将举办“中国传统文化节”活动,请你代表学生会给国际部的外国学生写一封告知信,内容包括:
(1) 活动时间:6月15日下午2:005:00;
(2) 活动地点:学校体育馆;
(3) 活动内容:书法展示、剪纸体验、民乐表演、茶艺品尝;
(4) 欢迎他们参加,并告知如有兴趣请提前报名。
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Dear international students,
I am Li Jin from the Student Union. I'm pleased to inform you that our school will hold a Chinese Traditional Culture Festival on the afternoon of June 15th.
The festival will take place in the school gymnasium from 2:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. A variety of activities have been prepared, including calligraphy demonstrations, papercutting workshops, traditional Chinese music performances, and a tea ceremony where you can taste different kinds of Chinese tea.
This is a wonderful opportunity for you to experience the richness of Chinese culture firsthand. If you are interested in attending, please register by sending an email to studentunion@chengguang.edu before June 10th.
We look forward to welcoming you to the festival!
Best regards,
Li Jin
Passage 2
(2023·天津市南开区高三模拟·改编) 假设你是晨光中学的李津,你的英国朋友Chris上个月来天津时送给你一本关于英国历史的书,你非常喜欢。但你在上周搬家时不慎将书丢失。请给Chris写一封道歉信,内容包括:
(1) 表达对礼物的喜爱和感激;
(2) 说明丢失的经过并道歉;
(3) 提出补救措施。
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Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to express my sincere apologies for losing the wonderful book on British history that you gave me last month.
I absolutely loved the book and had been reading it every evening. It meant a lot to me, not only because of its content but also because it was a gift from you. Unfortunately, when I moved to a new apartment last week, the book somehow got lost during the packing and moving process. I've searched everywhere but haven't been able to find it.
I feel terrible about this and want to make it up to you. I've ordered a new copy online and would like to send it to you as a replacement. Alternatively, if you prefer, I can send you something else from China that you might like. Please let me know what you would prefer.
I'm really sorry for my carelessness. Thank you for your understanding.
Yours,
Li Jin
Passage 3
(2022·天津市河西区高三二模·改编) 假设你是晨光中学的李津,你的美国笔友Tom因为父母工作调动,即将随家人搬到另一个城市,他因此不得不离开现在的学校和朋友,感到非常难过。请给他写一封慰问信,内容包括:
(1) 表示理解和同情;
(2) 安慰他新环境也会有新朋友和新机会;
(3) 鼓励他保持联系,并邀请他以后来天津玩。
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Dear Tom,
I was sorry to hear that you are feeling down about your family's move to another city. I can totally understand how hard it is to leave behind your friends and the school you love.
However, I want you to know that moving to a new place also brings new opportunities. You'll meet new people, make new friends, and experience a different way of life. And remember, true friendship doesn't fade with distance. We can always stay in touch through emails, calls, or video chats.
I hope you'll keep a positive attitude and embrace this new chapter in your life. And who knows, maybe someday you can visit me in Tianjin and we can explore this beautiful city together!
Take care and best of luck with your move. I'm here if you ever need to talk.
Yours,
Li Jin
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