内容正文:
专题01 应用文写作技巧
目录
第一部分 风向速递 洞察考向,感知前沿
第二部分 分层突破 固本培优,精准提分
A组·保分基础练
题型01要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译 & 句式转换)
题型02应用文段落仿写练(针对不同体裁的开头、结尾、主体)
B组·抢分能力练
题型03重难创新练(模拟试题综合练)
第三部分 真题验证 对标高考,感悟考法
应用文写作是天津高考英语的固定题型,占据25分,分值高,考查学生综合语言输出能力。近五年天津卷的应用文呈现出以下核心风向:
1. 体裁相对稳定,话题贴近生活:书信/邮件始终是绝对主力(如2023年两次考查申请信和解释性邮件,2021年考查感谢信和建议信)。话题紧密围绕学生的校园生活(社团活动、成人礼、读书月)、文化交流(介绍中国文化、留学建议)以及个人成长(假期计划、学习分享)。
2. 内容提示明确,逻辑要求清晰:题目通常给出2-3个明确的要点提示。这要求考生具备将要点扩展成文的逻辑能力,不仅要说“是什么”,更要解释“为什么”(如2023年申请信要求阐述活动意义并说明原因)。
3. 语言考查综合,强调地道得体:除了基本的语法词汇正确外,高分作文更看重语言的地道性(如使用合适的连接词、高级词汇)、得体性(根据收信人身份选择恰当的语气)以及句式的丰富性(如使用非谓语动词、从句、特殊句式等)。
4. 天津特色隐现,关注本土文化:作为天津考生,在涉及文化介绍、校园活动等话题时,若能巧妙结合天津本地元素(如五大道、海河、传统曲艺等),将极大地提升文章的亮点和独特性。
01要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译 & 句式转换)
要求: 将下列中文要点翻译成地道、准确的英文,并根据括号内的要求进行句式升级。
1. 我写信是为了邀请你参加即将由学生会组织的“国际文化月”活动。(使用过去分词短语作定语)
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2. 这次活动意义重大,它不仅能够促进文化交流,还能加深中外学生之间的理解。(使用 `not only...but also...` 的倒装结构)
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3. (2025·天津市河东区二模·改编) 人工智能有潜力通过提供个性化的学习方式和即时反馈来彻底改变教育。(使用 `by doing` 结构)
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4. (2025·天津市河北区二模·改编) 我想感谢的人是我的英语老师,在我苦于英语口语时,她耐心地鼓励我。(使用 `when` 引导的时间状语从句)
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5. 为了表达我的感激之情,我计划给她写一封真挚的信,告诉她她的指导对我意义重大。(使用不定式作目的状语,并使用 `how much` 引导的宾语从句)
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6. 我们上个周末的志愿者活动是一次宝贵的经历,它教会了我努力工作的价值。(使用非限制性定语从句)
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7. 只有当我们准备好并采取积极行动时,我们才能迎接这些挑战。(使用 `only + 状语从句` 引起的倒装句)
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8. 我认为这个主意不仅紧扣比赛主题,而且提供了真正代表我们学校精神的实用产品。(使用 `not only...but also...` 连接并列谓语)
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02 应用文段落仿写练(针对不同体裁的开头、结尾、主体)
要求: 根据提供的天津高考真题或模拟题情境,仿照所给范例,完成相应段落的写作。
1. (2021·天津高考真题) 你在英国游学期间的寄宿家庭母亲Nancy祝贺你高中毕业,并询问你的假期安排。
仿写任务: 写一封回信的开头段,内容包括:①收到来信的喜悦;②表示感谢和问候。
参考范例: I am delighted to receive your letter and hear from you once again. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And I wish you all the best.
你的仿写:
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2. (2023·天津高考真题) 你校将举办“中国工坊”活动,主题涉及中华美食、传统手工艺等。你想申请去教授一项技能。
仿写任务: 写邮件的主体段,内容包括:①阐述你对活动意义的理解;②说明你想教授的技能及原因。
参考范例: I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. As a Chinese, I have a passion for making Chinese cuisine, for example dumplings. Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.
你的仿写:
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3. (2025·天津市九校高三下学期二模联考) 你在美国中学生来华交流文化营的闭幕式上做总结发言。
仿写任务: 写发言稿的结尾段,内容包括:①对未来的展望;②再次感谢。
参考范例: Looking ahead, I hope this camp is just the beginning. May our bond grow stronger, fostering more exchanges between Chinese and American youth. That's all for my speech. Thanks for your listening!
你的仿写:
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Passage 1
(2025·天津市和平区高三二模考试·改编)
假定你是晨光中学的学生李津。你刚刚在全国中学生英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖,并且将要在闭幕式上发表获奖感言。请根据以下提示,写一篇发言稿:
(1) 表达获奖的喜悦和感谢;
(2) 回顾备赛过程中的努力与收获;
(3) 鼓励同学们挑战自我,走出舒适区。
注意: (1) 词数不少于100;(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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Passage 2
(2025·天津市红桥区高三下学期二模英语试题·改编)
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你校英文报正面向全体高三毕业生征集毕业感言。请你按照以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿。内容包括:
(1) 表达你对学校的感激;
(2) 回顾你在校的生活(如:难忘的时刻,获得的知识,个人的成长等);
(3) 展望学校的未来,表达你的美好祝愿。
注意: (1) 词数不少于100;(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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Passage 1
(2025·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。5月18日为国际博物馆日,学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为“The Power of Museums”的征文活动。请根据你查询到的以下图表信息,写一篇稿件。
内容包括:
(1)简单说明图表反映的现象;
(2)简要分析该现象产生的原因(如展览多样、互动性强、丰富生活和学习等);
(3)鼓励大家走进博物馆。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100。
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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Passage 2
(2022·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员,口语社请你用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示,撰写视频的文字稿:
(1)向同学们发出入社邀请;
(2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动);
(3)分享本人入社以来的收获。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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Passage 3
(2021·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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Passage 4
(2019·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动,你校英语社团的微信 公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会,从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:
(1)推荐书籍的类型及特点;
(2)推荐的理由。 参考词汇:
科幻小说 science fiction 侦探小说 detective novel 魔幻小说 fantasy
传记文学 biography 科普读物 popular science
注意:
(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围;
(3)内容充实、行文连贯;
(4)题目已给出,不计入总词数。
March 22, 2019
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专题01 应用文写作技巧
目录
第一部分 风向速递 洞察考向,感知前沿
第二部分 分层突破 固本培优,精准提分
A组·保分基础练
题型01要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译 & 句式转换)
题型02应用文段落仿写练(针对不同体裁的开头、结尾、主体)
B组·抢分能力练
题型03重难创新练(模拟试题综合练)
第三部分 真题验证 对标高考,感悟考法
应用文写作是天津高考英语的固定题型,占据25分,分值高,考查学生综合语言输出能力。近五年天津卷的应用文呈现出以下核心风向:
1. 体裁相对稳定,话题贴近生活:书信/邮件始终是绝对主力(如2023年两次考查申请信和解释性邮件,2021年考查感谢信和建议信)。话题紧密围绕学生的校园生活(社团活动、成人礼、读书月)、文化交流(介绍中国文化、留学建议)以及个人成长(假期计划、学习分享)。
2. 内容提示明确,逻辑要求清晰:题目通常给出2-3个明确的要点提示。这要求考生具备将要点扩展成文的逻辑能力,不仅要说“是什么”,更要解释“为什么”(如2023年申请信要求阐述活动意义并说明原因)。
3. 语言考查综合,强调地道得体:除了基本的语法词汇正确外,高分作文更看重语言的地道性(如使用合适的连接词、高级词汇)、得体性(根据收信人身份选择恰当的语气)以及句式的丰富性(如使用非谓语动词、从句、特殊句式等)。
4. 天津特色隐现,关注本土文化:作为天津考生,在涉及文化介绍、校园活动等话题时,若能巧妙结合天津本地元素(如五大道、海河、传统曲艺等),将极大地提升文章的亮点和独特性。
01要点翻译与句式升级练(单句翻译 & 句式转换)
要求: 将下列中文要点翻译成地道、准确的英文,并根据括号内的要求进行句式升级。
1. 我写信是为了邀请你参加即将由学生会组织的“国际文化月”活动。(使用过去分词短语作定语)
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【答案】I am writing to invite you to participate in the upcoming "International Culture Month" event organized by the Student Union.
【解析】考查过去分词作定语。“由学生会组织的”修饰“活动”,与被修饰词之间是逻辑上的被动关系,故使用过去分词短语 `organized by the Student Union` 作后置定语,使句子更简洁高级。
2. 这次活动意义重大,它不仅能够促进文化交流,还能加深中外学生之间的理解。(使用 `not only...but also...` 的倒装结构)
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【答案】This activity is of great significance. Not only can it promote cultural exchange, but it can also deepen the understanding between Chinese and foreign students.
【解析】考查倒装句。`not only...but also...` 连接两个并列分句,且 `not only` 置于句首时,该分句需使用部分倒装,即把情态动词/助动词提到主语之前。
3. (2025·天津市河东区二模·改编) 人工智能有潜力通过提供个性化的学习方式和即时反馈来彻底改变教育。(使用 `by doing` 结构)
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【答案】Artificial intelligence has the potential to revolutionize education by providing personalized learning styles and instant feedback.
【解析】考查方式状语。“通过......”是典型的方式状语,用介词 `by` 加上动名词短语来表达,比用从句更加简练。
4. (2025·天津市河北区二模·改编) 我想感谢的人是我的英语老师,在我苦于英语口语时,她耐心地鼓励我。(使用 `when` 引导的时间状语从句)
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【答案】The person I want to thank is my English teacher, who patiently encouraged me when I was struggling with my spoken English.
【解析】考查定语从句和时间状语从句。将两个简单句合并成一个含有定语从句(`who...`)和状语从句(`when...`)的复合句,使句子结构紧凑,信息量大。
5. 为了表达我的感激之情,我计划给她写一封真挚的信,告诉她她的指导对我意义重大。(使用不定式作目的状语,并使用 `how much` 引导的宾语从句)
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【答案】To express my gratitude, I plan to write her a heartfelt letter, telling her how much her guidance means to me.
【解析】考查非谓语动词和宾语从句。不定式 `To express...` 作目的状语,置于句首起到强调作用。`telling her...` 是现在分词作伴随状语,其中包含一个 `how much` 引导的宾语从句。
6. 我们上个周末的志愿者活动是一次宝贵的经历,它教会了我努力工作的价值。(使用非限制性定语从句)
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【答案】Our volunteer activity last weekend was an invaluable experience, which taught me the value of hard work.
【解析】考查非限制性定语从句。`which` 指代前面整句话的内容,使上下文衔接更紧密,表达更流畅。
7. 只有当我们准备好并采取积极行动时,我们才能迎接这些挑战。(使用 `only + 状语从句` 引起的倒装句)
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【答案】Only when we are prepared and take positive actions can we meet these challenges.
【解析】考查倒装句。`Only + 状语从句` 置于句首时,主句需采用部分倒装,即 `can/will/should + 主语 + 动词原形`。这种结构能显著增强语气。
8. 我认为这个主意不仅紧扣比赛主题,而且提供了真正代表我们学校精神的实用产品。(使用 `not only...but also...` 连接并列谓语)
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【答案】I think this idea not only nails the competition theme but also offers a practical product that truly represents the spirit of our school.
【解析】考查并列结构。`not only...but also...` 用于连接两个并列的谓语动词 `nails` 和 `offers`,使句子富有节奏感。其中 `that truly...` 是定语从句,进一步提升了句式复杂度。
02 应用文段落仿写练(针对不同体裁的开头、结尾、主体)
要求: 根据提供的天津高考真题或模拟题情境,仿照所给范例,完成相应段落的写作。
1. (2021·天津高考真题) 你在英国游学期间的寄宿家庭母亲Nancy祝贺你高中毕业,并询问你的假期安排。
仿写任务: 写一封回信的开头段,内容包括:①收到来信的喜悦;②表示感谢和问候。
参考范例: I am delighted to receive your letter and hear from you once again. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And I wish you all the best.
你的仿写:
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【答案】How is everything going? I was so thrilled to receive your email, knowing that you are concerned about my graduation and future plans. Please accept my sincere gratitude for your warm wishes and for everything you did for me during my stay in the UK. My family and I often talk about the wonderful time we had together.
2. (2023·天津高考真题) 你校将举办“中国工坊”活动,主题涉及中华美食、传统手工艺等。你想申请去教授一项技能。
仿写任务: 写邮件的主体段,内容包括:①阐述你对活动意义的理解;②说明你想教授的技能及原因。
参考范例: I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. As a Chinese, I have a passion for making Chinese cuisine, for example dumplings. Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.
你的仿写:
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【答案】In my view, such an event serves as a wonderful bridge, enabling our British friends to gain a deeper insight into the essence of Chinese culture. Personally, I would like to teach Chinese calligraphy, a unique art form that I have been practicing for years. I believe the graceful strokes and the philosophy behind them are incredibly fascinating, and through teaching, I can help others appreciate the beauty and tranquility it brings.
3. (2025·天津市九校高三下学期二模联考) 你在美国中学生来华交流文化营的闭幕式上做总结发言。
仿写任务: 写发言稿的结尾段,内容包括:①对未来的展望;②再次感谢。
参考范例: Looking ahead, I hope this camp is just the beginning. May our bond grow stronger, fostering more exchanges between Chinese and American youth. That's all for my speech. Thanks for your listening!
你的仿写:
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【答案】As we bid farewell, I am filled with hope that the seeds of friendship planted here will blossom into a lasting connection between us. Let's carry the wonderful memories and understanding forward. Thank you all again for your participation and enthusiasm!
Passage 1
(2025·天津市和平区高三二模考试·改编)
假定你是晨光中学的学生李津。你刚刚在全国中学生英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖,并且将要在闭幕式上发表获奖感言。请根据以下提示,写一篇发言稿:
(1) 表达获奖的喜悦和感谢;
(2) 回顾备赛过程中的努力与收获;
(3) 鼓励同学们挑战自我,走出舒适区。
注意: (1) 词数不少于100;(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear teachers and classmates,
It's my honor to deliver my winning speech here. I am absolutely thrilled and deeply honored to have won the first prize in the National English Speech Contest.
First and foremost, I'd like to extend my heartfelt gratitude to my English teacher, Ms. Li, whose patient guidance and invaluable advice helped me polish my speech. I also owe a big thank you to my parents and friends for their unwavering support. Looking back on the preparation, it was a journey filled with countless hours of research, writing, and rewriting. There were moments of frustration when I felt overwhelmed, but every time I wanted to give up, I reminded myself that perseverance pays off. As a result, not only did my English proficiency improve significantly, but I also gained immense selfconfidence and the ability to tackle challenges headon.
My dear fellow students, don't be afraid to step out of your comfort zone. It is in those challenging moments that we truly grow. Embrace the discomfort, for it is where our potential lies.
Thank you all once again!
【详解】
本篇书面表达属于发言稿。要求考生以李津的身份,在演讲比赛获奖后发表感言。
1. 词汇积累
荣幸的:honored→privileged
衷心的:heartfelt→sincere
宝贵的:invaluable→priceless
巨大的:immense→enormous
坚持:perseverance→persistence
2. 句式拓展
原句:I am absolutely thrilled and deeply honored to have won the first prize.
拓展句:Words fail to convey how thrilled and honored I am to have been awarded the first prize.
3. 高分句型分析
【高分句型1】...whose patient guidance and invaluable advice helped me polish my speech. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】...not only did my English proficiency improve significantly, but I also gained immense selfconfidence... (运用了not only位于句首引起的部分倒装结构)
【高分句型3】It is in those challenging moments that we truly grow. (运用了强调句型)
Passage 2
(2025·天津市红桥区高三下学期二模英语试题·改编)
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你校英文报正面向全体高三毕业生征集毕业感言。请你按照以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿。内容包括:
(1) 表达你对学校的感激;
(2) 回顾你在校的生活(如:难忘的时刻,获得的知识,个人的成长等);
(3) 展望学校的未来,表达你的美好祝愿。
注意: (1) 词数不少于100;(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】
To My Dear School
As I am about to bid farewell to my beloved alma mater, waves of gratitude and nostalgia surge within me. This school has been more than just a place of learning; it has been my second home, nurturing me with knowledge and shaping my character.
Looking back, my school life is a treasure box of precious moments. I will never forget the heated discussions in class, the encouragement from teachers when I failed an exam, and the laughter shared with friends on the playground. Here, I not only acquired solid academic knowledge from my diligent teachers but also learned vital life skills such as teamwork, perseverance, and responsibility. These three years have witnessed my transformation from a shy freshman into a more confident and independent individual.
As I step into a new chapter, I am confident that my school will continue to thrive, fostering generations of brilliant students. May it always be a beacon of knowledge and a cradle of dreams. I wish my dear school an even more prosperous and glorious future!
【详解】
本篇书面表达属于征文稿。要求考生以高三毕业生的身份,向学校表达感激之情。
1. 词汇积累
告别:bid farewell to→say goodbye to
珍贵的:precious→valuable
获得:acquire→gain
繁荣:thrive→flourish
一代又一代:generations of→countless
2. 句式拓展
原句:This school has been my second home, nurturing me with knowledge and shaping my character.
拓展句:This school has been my second home, which has nurtured me with knowledge and shaped my character.
3. 高分句型分析
【高分句型1】As I am about to bid farewell to my beloved alma mater, waves of gratitude and nostalgia surge within me. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句和生动的比喻表达)
【高分句型2】I will never forget the heated discussions in class, the encouragement from teachers when I failed an exam, and the laughter shared with friends on the playground. (运用了排比结构,使句子富有节奏感)
【高分句型3】These three years have witnessed my transformation from a shy freshman into a more confident and independent individual. (运用了无灵主语句,表达更地道)
Passage 1
(2025·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。5月18日为国际博物馆日,学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为“The Power of Museums”的征文活动。请根据你查询到的以下图表信息,写一篇稿件。
内容包括:
(1)简单说明图表反映的现象;
(2)简要分析该现象产生的原因(如展览多样、互动性强、丰富生活和学习等);
(3)鼓励大家走进博物馆。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100。
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】范文
The Power of Museums
As vividly shown in the chart, there has been a remarkable increase in the number of visitors to museums in China. In 2014, the number was merely 720 million, while in 2024, it soared to 1.4 billion.
This trend can be attributed to several factors. Firstly, museums nowadays present a rich variety of exhibitions. They display not only historical relics but also artworks and modern scientific achievements, catering to diverse interests. Secondly, museums have enhanced interactivity. Visitors can engage in hands-on activities like virtual reality experiences and DIY workshops, making their visits more immersive and appealing.
Since museums are so attractive and beneficial, why not pay them a visit? Whether you’re a history enthusiast, an art lover, or simply eager to learn, museums have something for everyone. Let’s step into museums and explore the wonderful world they offer!
【导语】这是一篇图表作文。5月18日为国际博物馆日,学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为The Power Of Museums的征文活动,根据考生搜集的图表信息写一篇稿件。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
显著的:remarkable→notable
归因于:attribute ...to→owe... to
增强:enhance→strengthen
有吸引力的:appealing→attractive
2.句式拓展:
同义句
原句:Since museums are so attractive and beneficial, why not pay them a visit?
拓展句:Considering that museums are extremely charming and advantageous, you’d better pay them a visit.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】As vividly shown in the chart, there has been a remarkable increase in the number of visitors to museums in China.(运用了 as 引导的非限制性定语从句 )
【高分句型 2】Whether you’re a history enthusiast, an art lover, or simply eager to learn, museums have something for everyone.(运用了whether...or...引导的让步状语从句)
Passage 2
(2022·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员,口语社请你用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示,撰写视频的文字稿:
(1)向同学们发出入社邀请;
(2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动);
(3)分享本人入社以来的收获。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Jin, a member of the Spoken English Club of our school. I’m here to invite you to join us. This will be a good chance for all English lovers.
The club offers various interesting activities. We can participate in English speech contests, watch classic English movies, sing English songs and attend inspiring lectures. All of them help to stimulate our interest in learning English and make our school life much more enjoyable.
The club activities have benefited me a lot. I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends.
Now, it’s your turn to join us. We are looking forward to having you in the club!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为英语口语社的纳新视频写一段文字稿,向同学们发出邀请,并介绍口语社的主要活动,分享入社以来的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会:chance →opportunity
参加:participate in →take part in →join in
愉快的:enjoyable →joyful
激发:stimulate →motivate →activate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The club activities have benefited me a lot.
拓展句:The club activities which I have joined in have benefited me a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We are looking forward to having you in the club!(运用了动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends.
(运用了not only…but also…连接并列结构)
Passage 3
(2021·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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【答案】A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿,介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:说明文
时态: 一般现在时
结构:总分法
第一段是文章的总起段,说明四川省有很多著名的景点;第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程,第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。
要求:
1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点
①四川的地理位置:中国西南部
②著名景点:九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程
2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程
① 九寨沟是自然保护区
②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊,有很多珍稀动植物
③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前,现在仍然起着灌溉的作用
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受:九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be located in;world-famous;places of interest;a nature reserve ;impressive;multi-level waterfalls;have a chance to do…;rare animals;scenic spot;date from;play an important part in;be amazed by
第三步:连词成句
(1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China.
(2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
(3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province.
(4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.
(5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.
(6) There are many species of rare plants protected here.
(7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
(8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago.
(9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
(10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表递进关系:what is more
2.表转折关系:however
3.表示列举:such as, like
【点睛】[高分句型1]
What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.(what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2]
Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.(现在分词作状语)
Passage 4
(2019·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动,你校英语社团的微信 公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会,从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:
(1)推荐书籍的类型及特点;
(2)推荐的理由。 参考词汇:
科幻小说 science fiction 侦探小说 detective novel 魔幻小说 fantasy
传记文学 biography 科普读物 popular science
注意:
(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围;
(3)内容充实、行文连贯;
(4)题目已给出,不计入总词数。
March 22, 2019
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By Li Jin
【答案】March 22, 2019
Today I'd like to introduce a book to you which I like much——The Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history books.
The author selects important and famous figures and events in the history of China, which he organizes and cuts them according to historical materials, and writes in modern language to make them easy to understand.
This book opens a history gate to me and I feel more confident about my own country. I am proud that I am a Chinese and I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant.
I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience. I do hope you'll like it !Enjoy reading !
By Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一篇英语征文。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一篇英语征文;假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会,从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:(1)推荐书籍的类型及特点;(2)推荐的理由。人称应使用第一、三人称,时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:introduce a book to you(给你推荐一本书),belong to(属于),author(作者)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如定语从句Today I'd like to introduce a book to you which I like much——The Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history books…in the history of China, which he organizes and cuts them according to historical materials;不定式I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant.;宾语从句I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience.;强调句I do hope you'll like it!全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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