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朗朗晨读(十九) 2021·全国甲卷·完形填空
Ⅰ|复原完形语篇|习悟亮点表达|
It's the seaside birds that deserve at least part of the blame for getting Nick Burchill blacklisted at the Fairmont Empress Hotel in Victoria, Canada.
Burchill was staying at the hotel on business and planning to visit some friends in the area. They had asked him to bring some pepperoni (辣香肠) from back east. So he filled a suitcase full of pepperoni. As he was worried that it would be too warm, he laid_it out on the table near an open window. He thought his pepperoni was safe and well chilled (冷却) and he left.
That's when things went wrong. “I remember walking down the long hall and opening the door to my room to find an entire flock of seagulls,” Burchill said in a recent letter of apology to the 4-star hotel. “The seagulls immediately went wild. They rushed to the window, 30 or 40 birds all trying to get out at the same time, and pepperoni — everywhere.(动作描写:“rushed”“trying to get out”等动作描写,生动刻画了海鸥慌乱逃窜的情景。)The curtains were falling down; the lamps were falling down. It was a real mess.”(场景描写:通过“窗帘掉落、台灯倾倒”的细节描述,勾勒出海鸥逃窜出房间后的混乱场景。)
Older and wiser now, Burchill chalked up the incident to youthful indiscretion (莽撞).
“I have matured and I admit responsibility for my actions ,” he said in the letter. “I come to you, hat in hand, to apologize for the damage I had indirectly caused and to ask you to reconsider my lifetime ban from the hotel.”[语言描写:用词体现态度—— matured (成熟)、 admit responsibility (承担责任)、 hat in hand (谦卑),再结合语言描写,清晰传达出说话人反思过错、勇担责任且态度诚恳的良好品质。]
His letter worked. Banned from the hotel since 2001,Burchill is now welcome to come back, the Fairmont said.
Ⅱ|发掘语篇价值|实现深度学习|
(一)把握一词多义,提高理解的准确性
1.lay v.放置;下(蛋);产(卵);躺下(lie的过去式)
[语境辨义]
①As he was worried that it would be too warm, he laid it out on the table near an open window._____
放置
②The old hen in the backyard usually lays one egg each morning.
________
③After running five miles in the hot sun, she was so exhausted that she lay down on the cool grass under the tree to catch her breath.
______
下(蛋)
躺下
2.cause n.起因,原因;事业 v.造成
[语境辨义]
①I come to you, hat in hand, to apologize for the damage I had indirectly caused ...________
②The main cause of the fire is still under investigation.________
③She has dedicated her life to the cause of environmental protection._________
v.造成
n.起因
n.事业
(二)明辨熟词生义,强化思维的灵活性
work [熟义]n.工作;作品;著作[生义]v.起作用;运转;操作
[语境辨义]
①His letter worked.Banned from the hotel since 2001, Burchill is now welcome to come back, the Fairmont said. ___________
v.起作用
②After spending three hours sorting through the messy files, she finally finished the work that her boss had assigned early in the morning. _________
③Although my grandmother's old sewing machine is nearly fifty years old, it still works perfectly, and she uses it every week to make clothes for the family. _________
④The art exhibition displayed more than fifty works by the famous painter, including some rare sketches he created during his travels in Europe. ________
n.工作
v.运转
n.作品
(三)融通词形转换,提升表达的准确性
1.long adj.长的→________ n.长度
2.immediately adv.立即,立刻→__________ adj.立即的,立刻的
3.wise adj.充满智慧的,英明的→________ n.智慧,才智
4.youthful adj.年轻的,青春的→________ n.青春;青年
length
immediate
wisdom
youth
5.admit v.承认;接收→__________ n.承认;接收;入场费
6.responsibility n.责任→___________ adj.负责任的
7.apologize v.道歉→_________ n.道歉
8.indirectly adv.间接地→________ adj.间接的
admission
responsible
apology
indirect
Ⅲ|积累续写词汇|提升写作档次|
1.rush 跑;冲;奔/其同义词汇有
①dash v. 猛冲 ②race v. 疾走
③hurry v. 匆忙地走
[写美句子]
① I ____________________________ and found him, my dear teammate, lying on the bed, face pale.
我冲到医院,发现他,我亲爱的队友,正躺在床上,脸色苍白。
dashed/rushed to the hospital
②He whispered a hurried good-bye to his friends and _____________________the door.
他匆匆地向朋友们低声告别,然后向门口冲去。
③She had to ______________ the crowded subway station, clutching her bag tightly as she checked the time on her phone repeatedly.她不得不匆忙穿过拥挤的地铁站,紧紧抓着包,一边反复查看手机上的时间。
raced/dashed toward
hurry through
2.at the same time同时/其同义词汇有
①in the meanwhile
②in the meantime
③meanwhile/meantime
[写美句子]
①______________________________________________________ __________, he showed his talent for creative writing and wrote his first wonderful essay.
同时,他展现了自己的创作天赋,写下了第一篇优美的散文。
At the same time/In the meanwhile/In the meantime/Meanwhile/
Meantime
②She started cooking dinner, and _________________________ ____________________________, her kids finished their homework and waited in the kitchen.
她开始做晚饭,与此同时,孩子们完成了作业,在厨房等着。
in the meanwhile/in the
meantime/meanwhile/meantime
第二部分 背写作范文·品评中悟道高分缘由
(写作练后背)
本部分内容见 “40分写作限时增分练”写作题目后的[满分范文]
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