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课标高频主题三阶写作指导
主题1丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
中考主题角度
1.广西近6年中考:暂未考查
2.全国视野&近三年全国考查角度:①假期旅行计划与感受:②让周末生活或者暑期生活过得更充实且有意
义的建议
主题教材链接
版本
单元主题
版本
模块主题
七(上)U2 The family
七(上)M6 A trip to the zoo
七(下)U3 Transportation
七(下)M3 Plans and arrangements
七(下)U6 Everyday activities
七(下)M6 Living environment&travel
人教版七(下)Ul2 Weekend activities
外研版七(下)Ml0 Travel and transport
八(上)UI Holidays and vacations
八(下)M8 Tourism and nature
八(上)U2 Free time activities
九(上)MI Nature and travel
九(下)MI Travel
课本句型促写作
©课本句型积累
开头句
1.'m having a great time visiting my aunt in Guangxi..[人教七(下)U7改编]
2.We visited the science museum and it was really interesting..[人教七(下)Ull]
3.It's necessary for you to plan the trip carefully so that you can make good use of your time and visit all the
places you want to see.
中间句
角度1日常活动
L.We had a wonderful party last night and everybody had a good time.[外研七(下)Ml0]
2.Every year,my family and I take a photo together under the big tree in our village.I like taking photos because
they help me remember fun times with my family.[新人教七(上)U7]
3.I go swimming two or three times a week.Swimming is good for me because it keeps me healthy.
(下)U3]
角度2假期活动
l.I think it's better to have our picnic at the top of the hill in Beihai Park.[外研八(下)U8]
2.We went camping last month.It was very interesting..[译林牛津七(下)U6]
3.At the end of the day,we watched the fireworks in front of Sleeping Beauty Castle.[译林牛津八(下)U2]
4.There are lots of ways to relax and have fun.However,the most important part of a holiday is to rest your
mind and body.[新人教八(上)U1]
结尾句
L.My holiday is very colourful.The most important thing is to learn something and have fun.[人教八(上)U3]
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2.You'll make mistakes along the way,but the key is to learn from your mistakes and never give up.
(全)U14]
3.No matter how many difficulties we have,I believe all problems can be solved in the end.[人教九(全)U7]
4.Although all of us felt very tired,we got the happiest memory
俗语谚语
1.Life is what you make it.你的生活由你创造。
2.Well begun is half done.好的开始是成功的一半。
3.Time flies when you're having fun..快乐的时光,总是飞逝。
日课本句型变式练
◆句子翻译
1.上周末,我们在滨海公园放风筝,玩得非常开心。(Tip:have a great time)
2.我喜欢在假期爬山,因为这让我感到放松。(Tip:because;it makes sb.feel..)
3.周末最好和父母到乡下去接近自然。(Tip:It's better to do sth.;get close to)
4.我们可以参加很多有意义的活动,比如读书和做志愿工作。(Tip:such as)
5.参加社团活动时,最重要的事情是与他人友好相处。(Tip:the most important thing is to..)
6.当我们和父母一起旅行时,保持安全和开心是关键。(Tip:the key is to.…)
7.在我去桂林旅行期间,我参观了很多名胜古迹。(Tip:places of interest)
8.寒假的最后,我们全家一起看了一部令人放松的电影。(Tip:at the end of)
◆句式升格
9.Students go on a trip.The trip can help students open their minds.(Tip:It's necessary for...;so that)
10.We meet many troubles on vacation.The beautiful scenery always makes us forget troubles.(Tip:No matter how
many troubles...)
典例探究明思路
快节奏的数字生活易让人迷失方向,而沉淀心灵,拓宽视野的真实
体验正成为当代青少年成长的关键密码。学校英语社推出“探索世
审题四要素:
界,成长自我”主题征文活动,请你以“An Unforgettable Travel
审体裁:记叙文
Experience”为题用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍令你难忘的一次旅行经
审人称:第一人称为主
历。内容包括:
审时态:一般过去时为主
1.介绍旅行目的地的基本情况(地点、风景名胜、美食等);
审要点:旅行目的地的基本情况,
2.你认为旅行中最有意义的活动(保护环境等):
.........
旅行中最有意义的活动,感悟或
3.你的感悟或收获。
收获
An Unforgettable Travel Experience
My most unforgettable travel experience was
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2写作剖析
一、构思框架
Beginning-一点明
主题,介绍旅行
参考句型:①It's
例:The water was so clear.We could see fish swimming.(用so.
目的地的基本情
a beautiful city
that.连接)
况:地点、风景
with..;②so.
名胜、美食等
that.…
参考句型:①the
例:我们总是把垃圾扔进垃圾桶,这已经成为我们的一个好
Body一旅行中最
most meaningful
习惯。(翻译)
有意义的活动:
thing is to.;②lt
保护环境、随手
has become a good
捡起垃圾等
habit of..;③feel
proud to...
Ending一你的感
参考句型:①not
Travelling is for having fun.Travelling is for protecting the
悟或收获
only...but alo...;
environment.(用not only..but also..连接)
②hope+that从句
二、分阶范文
初阶范文
高阶范文
An Unforgettable Travel Experience
An Unforgettable Travel Experience
My most unforgettable travel experience
My most unforgettable travel experience was last summer,when I
was last summer.I went to Guilin with my
visited Guilin with my family.It's a beautiful city with green mountains
family.It's a beautiful city with green
and clear rivers.We took a bamboo boat along the Li River and enjoyed
mountains and clear rivers.We took a
the amazing views.
bamboo boat along the Li River and saw nice
so...that...).We also tried local food like Guilin
views.The water was clear,and we could
rice noodles.They tasted really delicious!
see fish swimming.We also ate Guilin rice
During the trip,I thought the most meaningful thing was to protect
noodles-they were delicious!
the environment.
During the trip,we always put rubbish
It has become a good habit of...).I felt proud to help
in bins.It's a good habit.
keep the environment clean.
This trip was fun,and I learned to
This trip made me know that
protect the environment.I hope more people
_(用not only..but also..).I hope that
will love Guilin too.
more people will love this place when travelling.
写作剖析答案:The water was so clear that we could see fish swimming;It has become a good habit of ours to
always put our rubbish in bins;travelling is not only for having fun but also for protecting the environment
写作实战提能力
一、秀甲天下,壮美广西。随着中国过境免签政策的推行,越来越多的外国人来到中国,感受东方之旅的独特
魅力。学校英文报正在以“Most Beautiful Under Heaven,Grand Guangxi”为题进行征文活动,请你用英语写一
篇短文投稿,介绍广西的秀美风光和人文特色,为家乡的旅游做宣传。内容包括:
1.概况:地理位置(位于祖国南部);
2.著名旅游景点以及特色美食(桂林山水,北海涠洲岛,螺蛳粉,桂林米粉等);
3.表示欢迎。
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注意:1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Most Beautiful Under Heaven,Grand Guangxi
二、目前,很多学生不知道如何明智地安排空余时间。学校英语角将举办题为“How to Spend Free Time
Wisely”的征稿活动,请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,给同学们提出合理的建议。内容包括:
1.放松的方式(听音乐等);
2.家庭陪伴(多交流、分担家务等);
3.志愿活动(清理公园垃圾等);
4.自我提升(学习一项技能等)。
注意:1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称:
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Spend Free Time Wisely
Hello,everyone!Nowadays,many students don't know how to spend their free time wisely.Today I'd like to
share some ideas about how to make good use of our free time.
Reflecting
Check list:how well can you do these things?
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Overall comment
Peer review
Teacher's assessment
Total score:
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16微技能二写出正确的句子
针对训练
1.father后加is2.book前加a/the3.child改为children
4.tomato改为tomatoes5.are改为is6.was改为were7.
aren't改为dont8.sings改为sing9.his改为her10.has改
为hadl1.wrote改为written12.plant改为are planted 13.cat
black改为black cat 14.delicious something改为something deli-
cious 15.red beautiful改为beautiful red16.eal改为really
17.I改为me18.mine改为my19.any改为some20.inter-
esting改为interested
21.to改为in22.fom改为of23.删除on24.wait后加for
25.a改为an26.an改为a27.piano前加the28.best前加
the29.five改为ffth30.Thousand改为Thousands
微技能三如何组织段落
针对训练
训练一:Summer holiday is coming!I would like to make it
meaningful and fun
First,I plan to take part in community activities.I will volunteer
at the local library.This will teach me responsibility and allow me to
help others.
Second,I want to learn a basic life skill.I'm going to leam how
to cook some simple Chinese dishes from my grandma.I believe it's
important to know this skill and I can also make delicious food for my
family!
I'm sure my summer holiday will be both colorful and meaning-
fl!
训练二:Good moming.,everybody!Today I want to talk about“How
to Be Happy".The following are my suggestions.
First of all,we must keep healthy.Without good health,we will
lose everything.So we should have good living habits and try our best
to take exercise every day.Next,we should have good hobbies.Some
colorful hobbies can also bring us joy.Finally,we are supposed to be
ready to help others.When we help those in trouble,we can get much
happiness.
I believe if we do so,we can have a happy life.That's what I
want to share with you.
Thank you!
训练三:Learning Some Skills Is Important
It's important for us to leam some skills.As for me,I always
cook for my parents when I'm free.
A year ago,my parents always went out for work,so I decided
to cook a meal for them.First,I washed all kinds of vegetables and
cut them into pieces.And then after watching some videos on the
Internet,I followed the steps carefully.Finally,I did it well.My par
ents were very happy.
From this experience,I knew that we should always try
something new to enrich our life.
第二部分
课标高步
主题1丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.Last weekend,we had a great time flying kites in Binhai Park.
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微技能四拓展写作内容
针对训练
1.Reading makes a big difference to my learning.
2.She has a strong interest in painting.
3.We should make good use of time.
4.They would like to watch a movie.
5.You are supposed to finish your homework first.
6.She made a decision to learn dancing.
7.My friend is a hard-working student in our school
8.Technology is important.For example,it helps us study online easily.
9.He was late for school today because there was a heavy traffic jam
on the road.
10.She saves money every month to buy a special gift for her mom's
birthday.
11.He leams English by watching English movies.
12.I'm Lucy,a middle school student who loves painting.
微技能五语言表达的丰富性
针对训练
1.We not only have classes but also take part in clubs.
2.I love English because it opens a window to know different cultures
around the world.
3.I believe that hard work leads to success in the coming exam.
4.The girl who sits next to me always encourages me when I feel
down.
5.There is a small garden behind the library.
6.It's important for us students to balance our study and hobbies.
7.Although the task is hard,I will try my best to complete it.
8.I practice speaking English every day so that I can communicate
with foreigners confidently.
9.The summer camp that I joined last year changed me a lot.
10.How wonderful the journey of growing up is!
11.Not only did I get knowledge,but I also built my character during
the process
12.I wonder how we can spread Chinese culture to the world widely.
微技能六语言表达的逻辑性
针对训练
-1.In my opinion,reading is one of the best ways to relax
2.I didn't understand the problem until he explained it clearly.
3.Thanks to the good weather,we had a wonderful picnic in the
park.
4.On the one hand,study is important.On the other hand,health is
more important.
5.I started to leam painting this term.It makes me feel relaxed.What's
more,it helps me find the beauty in daily life.
二、主题1:l.because2.Compared with3.For example4.h
my opinion
主题2:1.First of all2.Then3.not only4.but also5.
Finally 6.All in all
顶主题三阶写作指导
2.I love climbing mountains during the holidays because it makes me
feel relaxed.
3.It's better to go to the countryside with parents on weekends to get
close to nature.
4.We can take part in many meaningful activities,such as reading
books and doing volunteer work.
5.When taking part in club activities,the most important thing is to
get along well with others.
6.When we travel with our parents,the key is to stay safe and happy.
7.During my trip to Guilin,I visited many places of interest.
8.At the end of the winter holiday,my whole family watched a rela-
xing movie together.
9.It's necessary for students to go on a trip so that it can help them
open their minds.
10.No matter how many troubles we meet on vacation,the beautiful
scenery always makes us forget them.
三阶写作实战提能力
一、
Most Beautiful Under Heaven,Grand Guangxi
Guangxi lies in southem China and has a long history with rich
cultural traditions.It's well-known for its fantastic natural views.
Guilin's scenery is famous all over the world-clear Li River winds
around special mountains,just like a living painting.Weizhou Island
in Beihai is another great place,where you can walk on soft white
beaches and enjoy the blue sea.
When it comes to local food,don't miss Liuzhou luosifen,which
tastes delicious,and Guilin rice noodles with fresh food materials
Many local people and visitors all like them.
Welcome to Guangxi!You're sure to have an unforgettable trip
here.
二、
How to Spend Free Time Wisely
Hello,everyone!Nowadays,many students don't know how to
spend their free time wisely.Today I'd like to share some ideas about
how to make good use of our free time.
First,relaxation is necessary for us.We can listen to music and
hang out with friends on weekends.Sometimes,we can read
interesting books.Second,improving the parent-child relationship is
important.We should communicate with our parents often,and it's
our duty to do housework.We can also take a walk after dinner
together.What's more,volunteer work is meaningful.We can clean
up parks with friends and help the people in need.Besides,we can
give away old books to others.Finally,self-improvement is always
with us.Leaming a skill like cooking is useful to us,and we must de-
velop our independence.We can also take up a new hobby during
the holiday.
Let's act now and live wisely!
主题2多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.We will have a school trip to visit the science museum next month.
2.I'm sure that I can get good grades in the final exam.
3.Reading aloud is one of the good ways of learning English well.
4.We were all full of excitement and thirsty for interesting stories in
the books.
5.My teacher always encourages me and helps me to become a better
person.
6.I take an active part in the school's English corner to practice
speaking.
7.If we make full use of the school library,we can read more good
books after class.
8.In order to win the basketball match,our team practices hard every
afternoon.
9.Even though the math exam was difficult,I tried my best to finish
all the questions.
10.As long as we listen carefully in class,we can understand the
knowledge easily.
三阶写作实战提能力
一、
My School Library
My favourite place in my school is the library.Our school library
is on the second floor of the teaching building.It is bright and quiet,
with shelves full of different kinds of books,such as storybooks,sci-
ence books,and magazines.
The library has helped me a lot.I often read there after class,
which improves my reading skills and broadens my knowledge.It is
also a perfect place to study and do homework.To give it back,I
want to volunteer in the library,helping to organize books and keep it
clean.I also plan to give away some interesting books to share with
others.
I love our school library and hope it becomes even better!
二、
A Sweet Moment with My Classmates
One of my sweetest memories with my classmates was during our
school's Sports Day last year.We took part in a relay race together.
Though we weren't the fastest team,we encouraged each other,
laughing and cheering until the very end.
What made the moment special was the teamwork and the
support we showed.When one of us met trouble,others immediately
helped him or her out.Even though we didn't win,we felt proud of
our effort and team spirit.
This experience taught me the value of friendship and
cooperation.It reminded me that success isn't just about winning but
also about enjoying the journey with others.I'll always value this warm
memory with my classmates.
主题3身心健康,抗挫能力,珍爱生命的意识
&日常体育活动,重大体育赛事,体育精神
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.Students should pay much more attention to daily exercise.
2.It is necessary for teenagers to leam to face difficulties bravely.
3.Teamwork in sports activities is of great importance to students.
4.It is a good choice for us students to go to bed and get up early.
5.There is no doubt that doing sports makes our bodies strong.
6.We should be friendly to our classmates and be brave to try new
sports with them.
7.Playing ball games with friends can keep us in a good mood.
8.When we feel upset,we can spend time with our teachers or good
friends.
9.The more we take part in outdoor sports,the healthier our bodies
and minds will be.
10.We should never give up exercising because it's hard to stay
healthy both in body and mind without it.
三阶写作实战提能力
一、
Colorful 30-Minute Break
The 30-minute break plays an important role in our school life.It
not only helps us relax after busy classes but also keeps our bodies
active and healthy.
During this time,the 30-minute break at school is filled with
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