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专题23 写作话题之应用交际
目录
01·考情剖析·命题前瞻 1
02·时空导航·网络构建 4
03·题型通关·靶向突破 4
维度一 书信邮件类 4
维度二 通知及演讲稿 7
维度三 倡议书 10
维度四 日记 13
04·优题精选·练能提分 16
题型
考查形式
2025年
2024年
2023年
知识运用之写作(应用交际)
□选择题
☑非选择题
湖南省卷
湖南省卷
岳阳卷;郴州卷;株洲卷;永州卷均考察过该维度
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通过对2023-2025年湖南多地市(长沙、衡阳、永州、郴州、怀化、张家界、株洲等)及2024-2025年湖南省统考卷的真题分析,可以看出“应用交际”作为英语写作的核心能力,其考查方式正在经历从“格式套用”到“真实交际”的转型。
1. 命题特点:从“完成格式”到“完成交际任务”
· 情境真实化:题目不再单纯考查格式默写,而是设置真实的交际情境。如2025湖南统考卷的“论坛跟帖”,模拟了学生日常接触的网络讨论场景;2023永州卷的“给笔友写邮件”,模拟了跨文化交流的真实需求。
· 任务复合化:单一写作任务向复合型任务转变。如2024湖南卷的发言稿,既要介绍组员运动喜好,又要阐述运动影响,还要以小组代表身份发言,融合了“介绍+观点+代表发言”多重任务。
· 价值引领性:题目主题紧扣时代脉搏和育人目标。如2023郴州卷“争做自律好学生”、2023怀化卷“如何保持健康”、2023岳阳卷“劳动社团”,均体现了核心素养导向下的价值引领。
· 受众意识强化:要求考生根据不同的读者调整语言和语气。如2023张家界卷给外国友人Peter的邮件,语言亲切友好,带有推介色彩;2024湖南卷的发言稿,面向全班同学,语言正式得体。
2. 考法分析:四大维度的命题规律
维度
近三年典型真题
命题规律与考法
书信邮件类
2023永州卷(给笔友邮件);2023张家界卷(给Peter邮件);2025湖南卷(论坛跟帖)
格式规范与交际目的并重。邮件需有称呼、正文、落款,论坛跟帖虽格式简化,但仍需体现互动性。内容多为“介绍+理由”或“观点+计划”,强调信息传递的清晰性和交流的得体性。
通知及演讲稿
2024湖南卷(运动讨论发言);2023株洲卷(朋友主题演讲);2023岳阳卷(介绍劳动社团)
口语化与结构化的平衡。发言稿需有开场白、主体、结束语,语言朗朗上口,适合口头表达。常与小组讨论、社团活动等校园场景结合,考查学生的当众表达能力。
倡议书
2023郴州卷(自律征文);2023怀化卷(健康建议);2023长沙卷(推介湖南)
隐性与显性并存。虽少直接以“倡议书”命题,但建议类、呼吁类征文本质上具备倡议功能。结构多为“问题/现象—建议/做法—呼吁”,语言有号召力,体现社会责任感。
日记
(近三年未直接出现,但可融入活动类写作)
潜在考查点。虽未独立命题,但活动经历类写作均可转化为日记体裁。注重时间线索、个人感受和真实记录,是考查学生反思能力的有效形式。
3. 所占比重与新趋势
· 比重:写作部分(15分左右)中,“应用交际”类话题占据主导地位(约60%),其中书信邮件类占比最高(约30%),通知及演讲稿次之(约20%),倡议书和日记合计约10%。
· 新趋势:
媒介形式多样化:传统邮件之外,论坛跟帖(2025湖南卷)等新媒体形式进入中考,体现写作教学与时代接轨。
交际任务嵌套化:一个写作任务往往包含多个子任务。如2024湖南卷发言稿,既要汇总小组讨论结果,又要表达个人观点,还要体现代表身份。
核心素养显性化:劳动意识(2023岳阳卷)、健康生活(2023怀化卷)、自律品质(2023郴州卷)等核心素养要素直接成为写作主题。
跨文化交际常态化:2023张家界卷、2023永州卷均设置与外国友人交流的情境,考查学生的跨文化沟通能力。
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预测一:书信邮件类仍是主流,形式更加多元
传统邮件与新媒体形式(论坛跟帖、博客评论、微信消息)并存。可能出现“回复网友评论”“在校园论坛发帖”等新形式,但核心交际功能不变。内容上可能结合“劳动教育”“心理健康”“生涯规划”等热点话题。
预测二:发言稿与校园活动深度融合
随着“活动育人”理念的深化,发言稿将与更多校园活动结合:社团招新演讲、国旗下讲话、主题班会发言、研学活动总结分享等。题目可能要求学生以特定身份(社团团长、班长、学生代表)发言。
预测三:倡议书主题更聚焦,与实际问题结合
倡议书可能针对具体校园或社会问题:如“节约粮食倡议”“绿色出行倡议”“诚信考试倡议”“合理使用手机倡议”等。要求学生不仅能提出倡议,还能分析问题、说明理由,体现解决问题的实际能力。
预测四:日记体裁可能回归,与成长记录结合
随着“过程性评价”和“成长记录”理念的推广,日记可能以“记一次有意义的劳动”“记中考前的一天”“记我的成长瞬间”等形式出现,考查学生记录生活、反思成长的能力。
预测五:交际任务更复杂,综合能力要求更高
一个题目可能融合多种交际任务:如“给笔友写邮件介绍你的暑期计划,并邀请他来你的家乡游玩”,融合了“介绍计划”和“发出邀请”两个任务;“在班会上发言分享你的学习方法,并倡议大家共同进步”,融合了“分享”和“倡议”两个任务。
话题一 书信邮件类
一:写作思路要点
从写作内容的角度来讲,书信邮件类作文通常要求学生模拟真实情境,与特定对象进行书面交流。它要求以第一人称视角展开,格式规范,语气得体,内容完整。写作时应从问候语入手,拉近与收信人的距离;然后明确写信目的,交代主要事项;接着分条陈述具体内容,每个要点应有支撑细节或理由;最后表达期待或祝愿,并正确落款。整体结构应呈现“问候—目的—正文—结尾”的逻辑链条,体现交际意识和礼貌原则。
二:写作重点词块
1. I'm writing to... 我写信是为了……
2. Thank you for your letter / reply / help 感谢你的来信/回复/帮助
3. I'm glad / happy / excited to hear that... 我很高兴听说……
4. I'm sorry to hear that... 我很遗憾听说……
5. How is everything going with you? 你一切都好吗?
6. It's been a while since we last met. 距我们上次见面已有一段时间
7. I'd like to invite you to... 我想邀请你……
8. I'm looking forward to your reply / visit / coming 期待你的回复/来访/到来
9. Please write back soon 请尽快回信
10. I'd like to share something with you 我想和你分享一些事
11. I have some good news to tell you 我有好消息告诉你
12. I'm writing to ask for your advice 我写信向你寻求建议
13. Could you please tell me something about...? 你能告诉我一些关于……的事吗?
14. I hope everything goes well with you 希望你一切顺利
15. Thank you for your kindness / help / support 感谢你的好意/帮助/支持
16. I really appreciate what you did for me 我非常感激你为我做的一切
17. I can't wait to see you 我迫不及待想见你
18. Keep in touch 保持联系
19. All the best / Best wishes 一切顺利/最好的祝愿
三:写作必备句式
1. How are you? I hope you're doing well these days.
你好吗?希望你这些天一切顺利。
2. I'm writing to tell you about my plan for the coming summer vacation.
我写信是想告诉你我即将到来的暑假计划。
3. Thank you so much for the wonderful gift you sent me on my birthday.
非常感谢你在我生日时送我的精美礼物。
4. I'm sorry I didn't reply to your last letter sooner, but I was busy with exams.
很抱歉没能早点回复你上一封信,我最近忙着考试。
5. I'd like to invite you to visit my hometown during the Spring Festival.
我想邀请你春节期间来我的家乡做客。
6. Could you please give me some advice on how to improve my spoken English?
你能给我一些关于如何提高英语口语的建议吗?
7. I really miss the days we spent together at the summer camp.
我真的很想念我们在夏令营一起度过的日子。
8. I'm planning to travel to Beijing next month. Do you have any suggestions?
我计划下个月去北京旅游。你有什么建议吗?
9. I'm looking forward to hearing from you and hope to see you soon.
期待收到你的回信,希望早日见到你。
10. Please take care of yourself and write to me when you have time.
请照顾好自己,有空时给我写信。
四:写作模板
Dear ________,
How are you? I hope everything is going well. I'm writing to ________.
First, I'd like to tell you that ________. ________. Besides, ________. ________. What's more, ________.
I really hope ________. What do you think? Please write to me and share your ideas.
Best wishes to you and your family!
Yours,
五:写作练笔
你的笔友Tom正在学习中文,并且对中国传统节日很感兴趣,并打算来你家过春节。请你写信向他分享学习中文的好方法,介绍一下中国的春节。
ways of learning Chinese
1. listen to the tapes
2. read as much as you can
3. keep a diary in Chinese…
Spring Festival
1. clean the house
2. family members get together to eat a big dinner
3. visit relatives
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you some good ways to learn Chinese well.
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I hope my advice can be helpful to you. And I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Ming
话题二 通知及演讲稿
一:写作思路要点
从写作内容的角度来讲,通知及演讲稿类作文通常要求学生在特定场合向特定听众传达信息或表达观点。它要求以第一人称(发言稿)或第三人称(通知)展开,语言口语化,结构清晰,有感染力。写作时应从称呼和开场白入手,吸引听众注意;然后分点阐述主要内容,每点应有明确的主题句和支撑细节;最后总结观点,表达感谢或发出号召。整体结构应呈现“开场—主体—结尾”的逻辑链条,体现交流能力和逻辑思维。
二:写作重点词块
1. Good morning / afternoon, everyone 大家早上/下午好
2. It's my great honor to stand here and speak 很荣幸站在这里发言
3. Today I'd like to share with you my thoughts on... 今天我想和大家分享我对……的看法
4. First of all / To begin with 首先
5. What's more / Moreover 而且/此外
6. In addition / Besides 除此之外
7. Last but not least 最后但同样重要的是
8. In my opinion / From my point of view 在我看来
9. As far as I'm concerned 就我而言
10. For example / For instance 例如
11. I strongly believe that... 我坚信……
12. Let's take action together 让我们一起行动
13. I hope everyone can join us 我希望每个人都能加入我们
14. Attention please! I have an announcement to make 请注意!我有通知要宣布
15. There will be a... held in... 将在……举行一场……
16. Everyone is welcome to take part in... 欢迎大家参加……
17. Please be there on time 请准时到场
18. Don't miss the chance 不要错过机会
19. That's all. Thank you for listening 就这些,感谢聆听
20. I hope you'll enjoy it 希望你们喜欢
三:写作必备句式
1. Good morning, dear teachers and fellow students! I'm very glad to stand here.
亲爱的老师、同学们,早上好!我很高兴站在这里。
2. Today, the topic of my speech is "The Importance of Protecting Our Environment".
今天,我演讲的主题是“保护环境的重要性”。
3. First of all, I'd like to share a story that happened to me last week.
首先,我想分享一个上周发生在我身上的故事。
4. As we all know, reading not only opens our minds but also enriches our lives.
众所周知,阅读不仅能开阔我们的思维,还能丰富我们的生活。
5. Take my own experience as an example. I used to be shy, but joining the English club changed me.
以我自己的经历为例。我曾经很害羞,但加入英语俱乐部改变了我。
6. In my opinion, everyone should develop the habit of exercising regularly.
在我看来,每个人都应该养成定期锻炼的习惯。
7. Let's work together to create a cleaner and more beautiful campus.
让我们一起努力,创造一个更清洁、更美丽的校园。
8. Attention please! I have an important announcement to make about the school trip.
请注意!我有一个关于学校旅行的重要通知要宣布。
9. The English Speech Contest will be held in the school hall at 2:30 pm this Friday.
英语演讲比赛将于本周五下午2:30在学校礼堂举行。
10. That's all for my speech. Thank you all for your time and attention!
我的演讲就到这里。感谢大家的时间和聆听!
四:写作模板
(演讲稿)
Good morning/afternoon, everyone! I'm ________(姓名/身份). Today I'd like to talk about ________(主题).
First of all, ________(要点一). ________(细节或例子). What's more, ________(要点二). ________(细节或例子). Finally, ________(要点三). ________(细节或例子).
In a word, ________(总结观点). Let's ________(呼吁行动).
That's all. Thank you for listening!
(通知)
Attention please, everyone! I have something important to tell you.
________(事件)will be held ________(时间)in ________(地点). The activity includes ________(内容). Everyone is welcome to take part in it.
Please ________(注意事项). Don't miss it!
That's all. Thank you.
五:写作练笔
你所在的城市开放一座新图书馆,这里藏书丰富,许多外国朋友慕名而来。请根据以下提示写一则英语通告,将图书馆的规定告知外国朋友,以便他们遵守规则,更好地享受馆内服务。
library rules
opening hours
8:00 a.m.—8:00 p.m.
rules
1. Keep quiet;
2. Keep clean, no food and drinks;
3. Smoke-free;
4. Borrow four books each time, keep for two weeks.
要求:
1. 内容完整,字迹工整,表达通顺;
2. 词数不少于80,通告的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Notice
Welcome to our city library. Here are some rules of our library.
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话题三 倡议书
一:写作思路要点
从写作内容的角度来讲,倡议书类作文通常要求学生针对某一问题或现象,向特定群体发出行动号召。它要求以第一人称复数(we)或泛指(everyone)展开,语言有号召力,逻辑清晰,理由充分。写作时应从问题描述入手,指出当前状况和不良影响;然后明确提出倡议内容,分条陈述具体做法;最后发出呼吁,展望美好愿景。整体结构应呈现“是什么问题—怎么做—为什么做—号召”的逻辑链条,体现社会责任感和行动力。
二:写作重点词块
1. I'm writing to call on everyone to... 我写信号召大家……
2. Nowadays, we are facing a serious problem of... 如今,我们正面临严重的……问题
3. It has become a common phenomenon that... ……已成为普遍现象
4. This not only... but also... 这不仅……而且……
5. It's time for us to take action 是我们采取行动的时候了
6. We strongly suggest that... 我们强烈建议……
7. Here are some suggestions / tips 以下是一些建议
8. First / Second / Third 第一/第二/第三
9. We should make it a habit to... 我们应该养成……的习惯
10. It's our duty to protect / save / care for... 保护/节约/关心……是我们的责任
11. Every little effort counts 每一点努力都很重要
12. Start from small things 从小事做起
13. Set a good example for others 为他人树立好榜样
14. Join us in doing... 加入我们一起……
15. Take part in this meaningful activity 参加这个有意义的活动
16. Let's work hand in hand 让我们携手合作
17. Together, we can make a difference 一起努力,我们能带来改变
18. Don't hesitate to act 不要犹豫,立即行动
19. The future of our... depends on us ……的未来取决于我们
20. Create a better tomorrow 创造更美好的明天
三:写作必备句式
1. Nowadays, wasting food on campus has become a serious problem.
如今,校园里的食物浪费已成为一个严重问题。
2. Every day, we can see a lot of leftover food thrown away in the dining hall.
每天,我们都能看到食堂里大量剩饭剩菜被倒掉。
3. This not only wastes money but also shows no respect for farmers' hard work.
这不仅浪费金钱,也是对农民辛勤劳动的不尊重。
4. It's high time that we did something to change this situation.
现在是我们采取行动改变这一状况的时候了。
5. First, we should only take as much food as we can eat.
第一,我们应该只取自己能吃完的食物量。
6. Second, if we can't finish our meal, we can ask for smaller portions.
第二,如果我们吃不完,可以要求少打一些。
7. Third, we can remind our friends not to waste food when eating together.
第三,一起吃饭时我们可以提醒朋友不要浪费食物。
8. Saving food is not just a slogan, but an action we should take every day.
节约粮食不只是一句口号,而是我们每天应该采取的行动。
9. Let's start from today and do our part to stop food waste.
让我们从今天开始,尽自己的一份力杜绝食物浪费。
10. If everyone does a little, together we can make a big difference.
如果每个人都做一点点,我们一起就能带来大改变。
四:写作模板
Dear fellow students,
Nowadays, ________(问题)has become a serious problem around us. It ________(影响).
In order to ________(目的), we call on everyone to take part in ________(行动). Here are some suggestions:
First, ________(倡议一). ________(理由或具体做法).
Second, ________(倡议二). ________(理由或具体做法).
Third, ________(倡议三). ________(理由或具体做法).
Let's start from now on. Every small action counts. Together, we can ________(愿景).
Join us and make a difference!
________(署名)
________(日期)
五:写作练笔
你校拟举办以 “How to live a healthy life” 为题的征文比赛,向同学们倡议健康生活。请根据下表要点提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
注意:
1. 文章应包括所有要点;
2. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
3. 词数 80 词左右 (短文的开头已给出,不计入词数);
4. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
How to live a healthy life
Nowadays, more and more students care about how to live a healthy life.
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话题四 日记
一:写作思路要点
从写作内容的角度来讲,活动场景类作文通常要求学生介绍某一活动的概况、过程、收获及感受。它要求以第一人称视角展开,过程清晰,细节生动,语言富有画面感。写作时应从活动的基本信息入手,明确何时何地何事;然后重点描写活动过程,运用动作描写展现画面感;接着捕捉活动中的精彩瞬间或感人细节;最后总结活动收获,表达真实感受和未来展望。整体结构应呈现“什么活动—做了什么—什么最难忘—收获了什么”的逻辑链条,体现参与感和成长性。
二:写作重点词块
1. Today was a special / meaningful / unforgettable day 今天是特别/有意义/难忘的一天
2. This morning / afternoon / evening 今天早上/下午/晚上
3. After that / Then / Later 之后/然后/后来
4. Finally / In the end 最后/最终
5. I felt happy / proud / excited / moved 我感到开心/自豪/兴奋/感动
6. I learned that... 我明白了……
7. I realized that... 我意识到……
8. It reminded me of... 这让我想起了……
9. What impressed me most was... 最让我印象深刻的是……
10. I will never forget the moment when... 我永远不会忘记……的那一刻
11. I made up my mind to... 我下定决心……
12. It was a valuable experience for me 这对我来说是一次宝贵的经历
13. I'm proud of what I did today 我为今天做的事感到骄傲
14. I regret that... 我后悔……
15. I hope I can do better next time 我希望下次能做得更好
16. Today taught me a lesson 今天给我上了一课
17. I felt a sense of achievement 我感到一种成就感
18. It was a day full of joy / surprises 这是充满快乐/惊喜的一天
19. I can't wait for tomorrow 我等不及明天的到来
20. What a wonderful day! 多么美好的一天!
三:写作必备句式
1. Monday, March 15th, 2026 Sunny
2026年3月15日 星期一 晴
2. Today was really a special day because I did something I had never done before.
今天真是特别的一天,因为我做了以前从未做过的事。
3. This morning, I got up early and helped my parents clean the house.
今天早上,我早早起床,帮父母打扫房子。
4. I swept the floor, cleaned the windows, and tidied up my bedroom.
我扫了地,擦了窗户,还整理了我的卧室。
5. After finishing the housework, I felt tired but also proud of myself.
做完家务后,我感到累,但也为自己感到骄傲。
6. In the afternoon, I went to the library with my best friend.
下午,我和最好的朋友去了图书馆。
7. We read books together and discussed what we had learned.
我们一起读书,讨论学到的东西。
8. I realized that spending time with friends is one of the happiest things in life.
我意识到,和朋友在一起是人生中最快乐的事之一。
9. Looking back on today, I feel grateful for everything I have.
回望今天,我为自己拥有的一切感到感恩。
10. I hope tomorrow will be as wonderful as today.
希望明天和今天一样美好。
四:写作模板
________(日期) ________(天气)
Today was a(n) ________(形容词)day. I ________(做了什么事).
In the morning, ________(事件一). ________(细节). After that, ________(事件二). ________(细节). In the afternoon, ________(事件三). ________(细节).
Through this experience, I felt ________(感受). I learned that ________(收获). I realized ________(反思).
I will never forget this day. I hope ________(愿望).
五:写作练笔
假如你上周六参观了一家博物馆,请以“Visiting a Museum”为题记录当天的经历和感受。请你围绕下图所示的三个问题,用英文写一篇日记。
注意:
1. 根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3. 词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Last Saturday was a truly meaningful day for me.
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Passage 1
校园花草相映美,砖瓦间藏诗意浓。为使校园常新常绿,近日你校开展了以“倡导低碳校园,一日环保体验”为主题的实践活动。假如你是李华,请结合以下图示,用英语给你的英国笔友Tom写一封信,分享活动过程和感受。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I’m writing to
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Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
假设你是李华,上个月你校举办了“迎新年传统文化节”活动,你的外国笔友Frank对此很感兴趣。请根据下表信息给Frank写一封邮件,介绍你所参加的活动并谈谈你的感受。
New Year Traditional Culture Festival
Time & Place
Activities
Meanings
Feelings
»January 1st 2026
»the playground
»do paper-cutting
»eat Tangyuan
»...
»good luck
»a sense of togetherness
»...
»the joy of the New Year
»...
注意:(1) 邮件需包含题目要求的所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名,学校等信息;
(3) 词数90-100左右;邮件的第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Frank,
I’m writing to share with you something about our school’s New Year Traditional Culture Festival activity.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
创新点亮生活,科技成就梦想。为了丰富学生们的校园生活,培养创新能力,上周你校举办了一次创意作品展 (exhibition of creative works)。假定你是李辉,请给你的外国笔友Eric写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1) 活动的目的;
(2) 同学们的创意作品 (至少两件);
(3) 你的感悟。
注意:
(1) 词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going?
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Passage 4
假如你是李华,本月是你们学校的志愿与慈善活动月,倡导学生积极伸出援助之手以各种形式帮助他人。请你根据以下提示信息写一篇日记,记录下你本月的慈善事迹。
内容提示:
What I Did for Charity
Time: September
To: Poor children
Things: 1) Save money and collect books
2) Give away clothes and toys
Feeling: Happy
Decision: Volunteer every week
要求:
1.语句通顺,符合逻辑,可适当发挥;
2. 80个词左右(格式与开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
September 26 Friday Sunny
I used to spend most of my money buying clothes and toys._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 5
为了提高学生们的口语水平,你校将要举行“英语之夜(English Evening)”活动,请你根据以下具体信息写一则通知。
内容包括:
1.时间:周五下午三点开始,五点结束。
2.地点:学校大厅
3.活动内容:
(1)看英语电影;
(2)唱英文歌曲;
(3)表演英语话剧;
(4)……
要求:
1.词数:80词左右。
2.开头及结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数。
3.不得出现真实的人名与校名。
学校大厅 :the school hall 表演:perform
Notice
Dear students,
In order to improve students’ spoken English, our school will hold the activity of the English Evening.
_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s practice speaking English together.
The School English Club
Passage 6
人们对未来总是充满着期待,未来一定会发生很大变化。假如学校英语俱乐部下周将要举办一场关于未来变化的主题演讲活动。请你以“The Future Changes in Our Lives”为题写一篇英语演讲稿参与该活动。
写作要点:
1. 人们的寿命变得更加长久;
2. 人们的居住环境变得更加美好;
3. 人们的生活更加舒适。
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数100左右。
The Future Changes in Our Lives
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Passage 7
你们班开展了一次以“The Most Useful Invention in My Daily Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,与同学们分享。写作要点:
1.你认为日常生活中最有用的发明是什么?
2.你为什么认为它最有用?(play an important role in…,serve as…)
3.它是怎样改变你的或者其他人的生活的?(convenient, make life much easier, make a great difference to…)
4.……
注意:1.必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥,使文章内容通顺、完整;
2.100词左右。
The Most Useful Invention in My Daily Life
Good morning, everyone! The most useful invention in my daily life is undoubtedly
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Passage 8
生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近,学校将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……),请写一篇作文介绍这位值得感恩的人。
提示问题:●What does he/she look like?
● Why do you want to thank him/her?
● What can you learn from him/her?
要求:1. 条理清楚,语言流畅,语法正确,内容充实。2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
The Person I Want to Thank
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Passage 9
假如你是李华,经常参加学校组织的英语角活动,你的英国笔友Linda对这项活动很感兴趣,请你根据下面表格的提示,用英语写一封电子邮件,把你们学校英语角活动的情况告诉她。
Time
Every Friday afternoon
Place
School library
Members
Students and teachers
Activities
●Sing English songs
●Practice oral English
●Share some ideas or advice
Effects
●Improve English ability
●…… (至少补充一点)
要求:
1. 须包括提示内容,可适当发挥,文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 词数不少于90,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
How is it going these days? I’m glad you’re interested in our English Corner.
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Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 10
你校社团中心将于下周新增劳动实践课,假如你是社团负责人,请根据以下内容提示写一则通知,为同学们介绍该课程的情况。
要求:
1. 通知内容必须包括所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:Labor Club劳动实践俱乐部 campus校园
Notice
Dear students.
We’re excited to tell you our school will have a new club—Labor Club next week. Let me introduce it to all of you.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We are looking forward to your joining!
Yours,
School Club Center
Passage 11
假定你是校英文广播站主持人李华,学校正在开展“绿色生活,有你有我”主题活动。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文广播稿,号召全校同学厉行节约,绿色生活。
clear your plate
reuse the books
...
注意:1. 短文需包含所有提示信息,并补充至少一点倡议;
2. 词数100左右,首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:call on号召
Boys and girls,
I am Li Hua. Our school is holding an activity named “A Greener Life for You and Me”.
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Thanks!
Passage 12
为了提高同学们的安全意识,学校即将开展“安全在我心”的宣传活动。假定你是学生会主席李华,请你写一封倡议信,从饮食、运动及另一个方面谈谈具体做法和理由,并发出呼吁。
注意:1. 词数为100词左右;
2. 适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、班名及学校名称;
4. 邮件的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
As we all know, safety is very important in our daily life.
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Li Hua
President of the Student Union
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专题23 写作话题之应用交际
目录
01·考情剖析·命题前瞻 1
02·时空导航·网络构建 4
03·题型通关·靶向突破 4
维度一 书信邮件类 4
维度二 通知及演讲稿 8
维度三 倡议书 12
维度四 日记 16
04·优题精选·练能提分 19
题型
考查形式
2025年
2024年
2023年
知识运用之写作(应用交际)
□选择题
☑非选择题
湖南省卷
湖南省卷
岳阳卷;郴州卷;株洲卷;永州卷均考察过该维度
考
情
分
析
通过对2023-2025年湖南多地市(长沙、衡阳、永州、郴州、怀化、张家界、株洲等)及2024-2025年湖南省统考卷的真题分析,可以看出“应用交际”作为英语写作的核心能力,其考查方式正在经历从“格式套用”到“真实交际”的转型。
1. 命题特点:从“完成格式”到“完成交际任务”
· 情境真实化:题目不再单纯考查格式默写,而是设置真实的交际情境。如2025湖南统考卷的“论坛跟帖”,模拟了学生日常接触的网络讨论场景;2023永州卷的“给笔友写邮件”,模拟了跨文化交流的真实需求。
· 任务复合化:单一写作任务向复合型任务转变。如2024湖南卷的发言稿,既要介绍组员运动喜好,又要阐述运动影响,还要以小组代表身份发言,融合了“介绍+观点+代表发言”多重任务。
· 价值引领性:题目主题紧扣时代脉搏和育人目标。如2023郴州卷“争做自律好学生”、2023怀化卷“如何保持健康”、2023岳阳卷“劳动社团”,均体现了核心素养导向下的价值引领。
· 受众意识强化:要求考生根据不同的读者调整语言和语气。如2023张家界卷给外国友人Peter的邮件,语言亲切友好,带有推介色彩;2024湖南卷的发言稿,面向全班同学,语言正式得体。
2. 考法分析:四大维度的命题规律
维度
近三年典型真题
命题规律与考法
书信邮件类
2023永州卷(给笔友邮件);2023张家界卷(给Peter邮件);2025湖南卷(论坛跟帖)
格式规范与交际目的并重。邮件需有称呼、正文、落款,论坛跟帖虽格式简化,但仍需体现互动性。内容多为“介绍+理由”或“观点+计划”,强调信息传递的清晰性和交流的得体性。
通知及演讲稿
2024湖南卷(运动讨论发言);2023株洲卷(朋友主题演讲);2023岳阳卷(介绍劳动社团)
口语化与结构化的平衡。发言稿需有开场白、主体、结束语,语言朗朗上口,适合口头表达。常与小组讨论、社团活动等校园场景结合,考查学生的当众表达能力。
倡议书
2023郴州卷(自律征文);2023怀化卷(健康建议);2023长沙卷(推介湖南)
隐性与显性并存。虽少直接以“倡议书”命题,但建议类、呼吁类征文本质上具备倡议功能。结构多为“问题/现象—建议/做法—呼吁”,语言有号召力,体现社会责任感。
日记
(近三年未直接出现,但可融入活动类写作)
潜在考查点。虽未独立命题,但活动经历类写作均可转化为日记体裁。注重时间线索、个人感受和真实记录,是考查学生反思能力的有效形式。
3. 所占比重与新趋势
· 比重:写作部分(15分左右)中,“应用交际”类话题占据主导地位(约60%),其中书信邮件类占比最高(约30%),通知及演讲稿次之(约20%),倡议书和日记合计约10%。
· 新趋势:
媒介形式多样化:传统邮件之外,论坛跟帖(2025湖南卷)等新媒体形式进入中考,体现写作教学与时代接轨。
交际任务嵌套化:一个写作任务往往包含多个子任务。如2024湖南卷发言稿,既要汇总小组讨论结果,又要表达个人观点,还要体现代表身份。
核心素养显性化:劳动意识(2023岳阳卷)、健康生活(2023怀化卷)、自律品质(2023郴州卷)等核心素养要素直接成为写作主题。
跨文化交际常态化:2023张家界卷、2023永州卷均设置与外国友人交流的情境,考查学生的跨文化沟通能力。
命
题
预
测
预测一:书信邮件类仍是主流,形式更加多元
传统邮件与新媒体形式(论坛跟帖、博客评论、微信消息)并存。可能出现“回复网友评论”“在校园论坛发帖”等新形式,但核心交际功能不变。内容上可能结合“劳动教育”“心理健康”“生涯规划”等热点话题。
预测二:发言稿与校园活动深度融合
随着“活动育人”理念的深化,发言稿将与更多校园活动结合:社团招新演讲、国旗下讲话、主题班会发言、研学活动总结分享等。题目可能要求学生以特定身份(社团团长、班长、学生代表)发言。
预测三:倡议书主题更聚焦,与实际问题结合
倡议书可能针对具体校园或社会问题:如“节约粮食倡议”“绿色出行倡议”“诚信考试倡议”“合理使用手机倡议”等。要求学生不仅能提出倡议,还能分析问题、说明理由,体现解决问题的实际能力。
预测四:日记体裁可能回归,与成长记录结合
随着“过程性评价”和“成长记录”理念的推广,日记可能以“记一次有意义的劳动”“记中考前的一天”“记我的成长瞬间”等形式出现,考查学生记录生活、反思成长的能力。
预测五:交际任务更复杂,综合能力要求更高
一个题目可能融合多种交际任务:如“给笔友写邮件介绍你的暑期计划,并邀请他来你的家乡游玩”,融合了“介绍计划”和“发出邀请”两个任务;“在班会上发言分享你的学习方法,并倡议大家共同进步”,融合了“分享”和“倡议”两个任务。
话题一 书信邮件类
一:写作思路要点
从写作内容的角度来讲,书信邮件类作文通常要求学生模拟真实情境,与特定对象进行书面交流。它要求以第一人称视角展开,格式规范,语气得体,内容完整。写作时应从问候语入手,拉近与收信人的距离;然后明确写信目的,交代主要事项;接着分条陈述具体内容,每个要点应有支撑细节或理由;最后表达期待或祝愿,并正确落款。整体结构应呈现“问候—目的—正文—结尾”的逻辑链条,体现交际意识和礼貌原则。
二:写作重点词块
1. I'm writing to... 我写信是为了……
2. Thank you for your letter / reply / help 感谢你的来信/回复/帮助
3. I'm glad / happy / excited to hear that... 我很高兴听说……
4. I'm sorry to hear that... 我很遗憾听说……
5. How is everything going with you? 你一切都好吗?
6. It's been a while since we last met. 距我们上次见面已有一段时间
7. I'd like to invite you to... 我想邀请你……
8. I'm looking forward to your reply / visit / coming 期待你的回复/来访/到来
9. Please write back soon 请尽快回信
10. I'd like to share something with you 我想和你分享一些事
11. I have some good news to tell you 我有好消息告诉你
12. I'm writing to ask for your advice 我写信向你寻求建议
13. Could you please tell me something about...? 你能告诉我一些关于……的事吗?
14. I hope everything goes well with you 希望你一切顺利
15. Thank you for your kindness / help / support 感谢你的好意/帮助/支持
16. I really appreciate what you did for me 我非常感激你为我做的一切
17. I can't wait to see you 我迫不及待想见你
18. Keep in touch 保持联系
19. All the best / Best wishes 一切顺利/最好的祝愿
三:写作必备句式
1. How are you? I hope you're doing well these days.
你好吗?希望你这些天一切顺利。
2. I'm writing to tell you about my plan for the coming summer vacation.
我写信是想告诉你我即将到来的暑假计划。
3. Thank you so much for the wonderful gift you sent me on my birthday.
非常感谢你在我生日时送我的精美礼物。
4. I'm sorry I didn't reply to your last letter sooner, but I was busy with exams.
很抱歉没能早点回复你上一封信,我最近忙着考试。
5. I'd like to invite you to visit my hometown during the Spring Festival.
我想邀请你春节期间来我的家乡做客。
6. Could you please give me some advice on how to improve my spoken English?
你能给我一些关于如何提高英语口语的建议吗?
7. I really miss the days we spent together at the summer camp.
我真的很想念我们在夏令营一起度过的日子。
8. I'm planning to travel to Beijing next month. Do you have any suggestions?
我计划下个月去北京旅游。你有什么建议吗?
9. I'm looking forward to hearing from you and hope to see you soon.
期待收到你的回信,希望早日见到你。
10. Please take care of yourself and write to me when you have time.
请照顾好自己,有空时给我写信。
四:写作模板
Dear ________,
How are you? I hope everything is going well. I'm writing to ________.
First, I'd like to tell you that ________. ________. Besides, ________. ________. What's more, ________.
I really hope ________. What do you think? Please write to me and share your ideas.
Best wishes to you and your family!
Yours,
五:写作练笔
你的笔友Tom正在学习中文,并且对中国传统节日很感兴趣,并打算来你家过春节。请你写信向他分享学习中文的好方法,介绍一下中国的春节。
ways of learning Chinese
1. listen to the tapes
2. read as much as you can
3. keep a diary in Chinese…
Spring Festival
1. clean the house
2. family members get together to eat a big dinner
3. visit relatives
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you some good ways to learn Chinese well.
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I hope my advice can be helpful to you. And I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】
例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you some good ways to learn Chinese well. Firstly, listening to tapes helps improve pronunciation. Secondly, reading Chinese books or stories widely is useful. Thirdly, keeping a diary in Chinese daily can practice writing. Mastering these small tips will help you better understand the interesting customs of Spring Festival.
Spring Festival is the most important holiday in China. Before it, we clean our house to sweep away bad luck. On New Year’s Eve, family members get together for a big dinner. During the festival, we visit relatives and wish each other good luck.
I hope my advice can be helpful to you. And I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Ming
【总体分析】①题材:书信作文
②时态:一般现在时
③提示:需包含学习中文的方法(至少三点)和春节习俗(至少三点),并保持书信格式。
【写作步骤】第一步:承接开头,用Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly有序介绍三种学习方法。
第二步:另起一段,介绍春节,按时间顺序描述清洁房屋、年夜饭、走亲访友。
第三步:自然结尾,呼应已给出的祝愿语。
【亮点词汇】①improve 提高
②widely 广泛地
③relatives 亲戚
【高分句型】①Firstly, listening to tapes helps improve pronunciation.(运用了动名词短语作主语)
②Spring Festival is the most important holiday in China.(运用了最高级)
③During the festival, we visit relatives and wish each other good luck.(运用了并列谓语)
话题二 通知及演讲稿
一:写作思路要点
从写作内容的角度来讲,通知及演讲稿类作文通常要求学生在特定场合向特定听众传达信息或表达观点。它要求以第一人称(发言稿)或第三人称(通知)展开,语言口语化,结构清晰,有感染力。写作时应从称呼和开场白入手,吸引听众注意;然后分点阐述主要内容,每点应有明确的主题句和支撑细节;最后总结观点,表达感谢或发出号召。整体结构应呈现“开场—主体—结尾”的逻辑链条,体现交流能力和逻辑思维。
二:写作重点词块
1. Good morning / afternoon, everyone 大家早上/下午好
2. It's my great honor to stand here and speak 很荣幸站在这里发言
3. Today I'd like to share with you my thoughts on... 今天我想和大家分享我对……的看法
4. First of all / To begin with 首先
5. What's more / Moreover 而且/此外
6. In addition / Besides 除此之外
7. Last but not least 最后但同样重要的是
8. In my opinion / From my point of view 在我看来
9. As far as I'm concerned 就我而言
10. For example / For instance 例如
11. I strongly believe that... 我坚信……
12. Let's take action together 让我们一起行动
13. I hope everyone can join us 我希望每个人都能加入我们
14. Attention please! I have an announcement to make 请注意!我有通知要宣布
15. There will be a... held in... 将在……举行一场……
16. Everyone is welcome to take part in... 欢迎大家参加……
17. Please be there on time 请准时到场
18. Don't miss the chance 不要错过机会
19. That's all. Thank you for listening 就这些,感谢聆听
20. I hope you'll enjoy it 希望你们喜欢
三:写作必备句式
1. Good morning, dear teachers and fellow students! I'm very glad to stand here.
亲爱的老师、同学们,早上好!我很高兴站在这里。
2. Today, the topic of my speech is "The Importance of Protecting Our Environment".
今天,我演讲的主题是“保护环境的重要性”。
3. First of all, I'd like to share a story that happened to me last week.
首先,我想分享一个上周发生在我身上的故事。
4. As we all know, reading not only opens our minds but also enriches our lives.
众所周知,阅读不仅能开阔我们的思维,还能丰富我们的生活。
5. Take my own experience as an example. I used to be shy, but joining the English club changed me.
以我自己的经历为例。我曾经很害羞,但加入英语俱乐部改变了我。
6. In my opinion, everyone should develop the habit of exercising regularly.
在我看来,每个人都应该养成定期锻炼的习惯。
7. Let's work together to create a cleaner and more beautiful campus.
让我们一起努力,创造一个更清洁、更美丽的校园。
8. Attention please! I have an important announcement to make about the school trip.
请注意!我有一个关于学校旅行的重要通知要宣布。
9. The English Speech Contest will be held in the school hall at 2:30 pm this Friday.
英语演讲比赛将于本周五下午2:30在学校礼堂举行。
10. That's all for my speech. Thank you all for your time and attention!
我的演讲就到这里。感谢大家的时间和聆听!
四:写作模板
(演讲稿)
Good morning/afternoon, everyone! I'm ________(姓名/身份). Today I'd like to talk about ________(主题).
First of all, ________(要点一). ________(细节或例子). What's more, ________(要点二). ________(细节或例子). Finally, ________(要点三). ________(细节或例子).
In a word, ________(总结观点). Let's ________(呼吁行动).
That's all. Thank you for listening!
(通知)
Attention please, everyone! I have something important to tell you.
________(事件)will be held ________(时间)in ________(地点). The activity includes ________(内容). Everyone is welcome to take part in it.
Please ________(注意事项). Don't miss it!
That's all. Thank you.
五:写作练笔
你所在的城市开放一座新图书馆,这里藏书丰富,许多外国朋友慕名而来。请根据以下提示写一则英语通告,将图书馆的规定告知外国朋友,以便他们遵守规则,更好地享受馆内服务。
library rules
opening hours
8:00 a.m.—8:00 p.m.
rules
1. Keep quiet;
2. Keep clean, no food and drinks;
3. Smoke-free;
4. Borrow four books each time, keep for two weeks.
要求:
1. 内容完整,字迹工整,表达通顺;
2. 词数不少于80,通告的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Notice
Welcome to our city library. Here are some rules of our library.
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【答案】例文:
Notice
Welcome to our city library. Here are some rules of our library.
First, please pay attention to the opening hours. The library is open from 8:00 a.m. to 8:00 p.m. every day. Second, you must keep quiet in the library so that everyone can enjoy reading. Don’t talk loudly or make noise. Third, please keep the library clean. You are not allowed to bring any food or drinks into the reading rooms. Also, smoking is strictly forbidden here. Fourth, you can borrow four books at a time and keep them for two weeks. Remember to return them on time.
Please follow the rules and enjoy your time here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一则通知;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不得遗漏,可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:引出话题,说明通告目的是介绍图书馆规则;
第二步:分条详述规则,包括开放时间、安静阅读、环境卫生以及借还书规定;
第三步:呼吁大家遵守规则并祝愿阅读愉快。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②keep quiet保持安静
③so that以便于
④loudly大声地
⑤make noise制造噪音
[高分句型]
①You are not allowed to bring any food or drinks into the reading rooms. (be allowed to do被动语态)
②Also, smoking is strictly forbidden here. (动名词作主语)
话题三 倡议书
一:写作思路要点
从写作内容的角度来讲,倡议书类作文通常要求学生针对某一问题或现象,向特定群体发出行动号召。它要求以第一人称复数(we)或泛指(everyone)展开,语言有号召力,逻辑清晰,理由充分。写作时应从问题描述入手,指出当前状况和不良影响;然后明确提出倡议内容,分条陈述具体做法;最后发出呼吁,展望美好愿景。整体结构应呈现“是什么问题—怎么做—为什么做—号召”的逻辑链条,体现社会责任感和行动力。
二:写作重点词块
1. I'm writing to call on everyone to... 我写信号召大家……
2. Nowadays, we are facing a serious problem of... 如今,我们正面临严重的……问题
3. It has become a common phenomenon that... ……已成为普遍现象
4. This not only... but also... 这不仅……而且……
5. It's time for us to take action 是我们采取行动的时候了
6. We strongly suggest that... 我们强烈建议……
7. Here are some suggestions / tips 以下是一些建议
8. First / Second / Third 第一/第二/第三
9. We should make it a habit to... 我们应该养成……的习惯
10. It's our duty to protect / save / care for... 保护/节约/关心……是我们的责任
11. Every little effort counts 每一点努力都很重要
12. Start from small things 从小事做起
13. Set a good example for others 为他人树立好榜样
14. Join us in doing... 加入我们一起……
15. Take part in this meaningful activity 参加这个有意义的活动
16. Let's work hand in hand 让我们携手合作
17. Together, we can make a difference 一起努力,我们能带来改变
18. Don't hesitate to act 不要犹豫,立即行动
19. The future of our... depends on us ……的未来取决于我们
20. Create a better tomorrow 创造更美好的明天
三:写作必备句式
1. Nowadays, wasting food on campus has become a serious problem.
如今,校园里的食物浪费已成为一个严重问题。
2. Every day, we can see a lot of leftover food thrown away in the dining hall.
每天,我们都能看到食堂里大量剩饭剩菜被倒掉。
3. This not only wastes money but also shows no respect for farmers' hard work.
这不仅浪费金钱,也是对农民辛勤劳动的不尊重。
4. It's high time that we did something to change this situation.
现在是我们采取行动改变这一状况的时候了。
5. First, we should only take as much food as we can eat.
第一,我们应该只取自己能吃完的食物量。
6. Second, if we can't finish our meal, we can ask for smaller portions.
第二,如果我们吃不完,可以要求少打一些。
7. Third, we can remind our friends not to waste food when eating together.
第三,一起吃饭时我们可以提醒朋友不要浪费食物。
8. Saving food is not just a slogan, but an action we should take every day.
节约粮食不只是一句口号,而是我们每天应该采取的行动。
9. Let's start from today and do our part to stop food waste.
让我们从今天开始,尽自己的一份力杜绝食物浪费。
10. If everyone does a little, together we can make a big difference.
如果每个人都做一点点,我们一起就能带来大改变。
四:写作模板
Dear fellow students,
Nowadays, ________(问题)has become a serious problem around us. It ________(影响).
In order to ________(目的), we call on everyone to take part in ________(行动). Here are some suggestions:
First, ________(倡议一). ________(理由或具体做法).
Second, ________(倡议二). ________(理由或具体做法).
Third, ________(倡议三). ________(理由或具体做法).
Let's start from now on. Every small action counts. Together, we can ________(愿景).
Join us and make a difference!
________(署名)
________(日期)
五:写作练笔
你校拟举办以 “How to live a healthy life” 为题的征文比赛,向同学们倡议健康生活。请根据下表要点提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
注意:
1. 文章应包括所有要点;
2. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
3. 词数 80 词左右 (短文的开头已给出,不计入词数);
4. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
How to live a healthy life
Nowadays, more and more students care about how to live a healthy life.
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【答案】例文
How to live a healthy life Nowadays, more and more students care about how to live a healthy life. Living a healthy life is crucial because it can help us stay energetic and focused on our studies.
However, there are some unhealthy habits around us. Some students often stay up late playing computer games, which makes them feel tired the next day. Also, many students prefer junk food to healthy meals, which is bad for their bodies.
To live healthily, first, we should have a regular sleep schedule so that we can get enough rest. Second, we ought to eat more fruits and vegetables, which are full of nutrients. Third, taking exercise every day is necessary as it can strengthen our bodies.
Let’s all try to live a healthy life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本题是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文用一般现在时;
③提示:向同学们倡议健康生活,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明越来越多的学生关注如何健康生活,简述健康生活的重要性;
第二步,列举学生们常见的不健康的生活习惯,注意用词准确,行文流畅;
第三步,提出如何健康生活的建议,注意细节充分,三观正确;
第四步,号召大家一起过健康生活,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①focus on… 专注……
②stay up late 熬夜
③prefer… to… 比起……更喜欢……
[高分句型]
①Some students often stay up late playing computer games, which makes them feel tired the next day.(定语从句)
②To live healthily, first, we should have a regular sleep schedule so that we can get enough rest.(目的状语从句)
话题四 日记
一:写作思路要点
从写作内容的角度来讲,活动场景类作文通常要求学生介绍某一活动的概况、过程、收获及感受。它要求以第一人称视角展开,过程清晰,细节生动,语言富有画面感。写作时应从活动的基本信息入手,明确何时何地何事;然后重点描写活动过程,运用动作描写展现画面感;接着捕捉活动中的精彩瞬间或感人细节;最后总结活动收获,表达真实感受和未来展望。整体结构应呈现“什么活动—做了什么—什么最难忘—收获了什么”的逻辑链条,体现参与感和成长性。
二:写作重点词块
1. Today was a special / meaningful / unforgettable day 今天是特别/有意义/难忘的一天
2. This morning / afternoon / evening 今天早上/下午/晚上
3. After that / Then / Later 之后/然后/后来
4. Finally / In the end 最后/最终
5. I felt happy / proud / excited / moved 我感到开心/自豪/兴奋/感动
6. I learned that... 我明白了……
7. I realized that... 我意识到……
8. It reminded me of... 这让我想起了……
9. What impressed me most was... 最让我印象深刻的是……
10. I will never forget the moment when... 我永远不会忘记……的那一刻
11. I made up my mind to... 我下定决心……
12. It was a valuable experience for me 这对我来说是一次宝贵的经历
13. I'm proud of what I did today 我为今天做的事感到骄傲
14. I regret that... 我后悔……
15. I hope I can do better next time 我希望下次能做得更好
16. Today taught me a lesson 今天给我上了一课
17. I felt a sense of achievement 我感到一种成就感
18. It was a day full of joy / surprises 这是充满快乐/惊喜的一天
19. I can't wait for tomorrow 我等不及明天的到来
20. What a wonderful day! 多么美好的一天!
三:写作必备句式
1. Monday, March 15th, 2026 Sunny
2026年3月15日 星期一 晴
2. Today was really a special day because I did something I had never done before.
今天真是特别的一天,因为我做了以前从未做过的事。
3. This morning, I got up early and helped my parents clean the house.
今天早上,我早早起床,帮父母打扫房子。
4. I swept the floor, cleaned the windows, and tidied up my bedroom.
我扫了地,擦了窗户,还整理了我的卧室。
5. After finishing the housework, I felt tired but also proud of myself.
做完家务后,我感到累,但也为自己感到骄傲。
6. In the afternoon, I went to the library with my best friend.
下午,我和最好的朋友去了图书馆。
7. We read books together and discussed what we had learned.
我们一起读书,讨论学到的东西。
8. I realized that spending time with friends is one of the happiest things in life.
我意识到,和朋友在一起是人生中最快乐的事之一。
9. Looking back on today, I feel grateful for everything I have.
回望今天,我为自己拥有的一切感到感恩。
10. I hope tomorrow will be as wonderful as today.
希望明天和今天一样美好。
四:写作模板
________(日期) ________(天气)
Today was a(n) ________(形容词)day. I ________(做了什么事).
In the morning, ________(事件一). ________(细节). After that, ________(事件二). ________(细节). In the afternoon, ________(事件三). ________(细节).
Through this experience, I felt ________(感受). I learned that ________(收获). I realized ________(反思).
I will never forget this day. I hope ________(愿望).
五:写作练笔
假如你上周六参观了一家博物馆,请以“Visiting a Museum”为题记录当天的经历和感受。请你围绕下图所示的三个问题,用英文写一篇日记。
注意:
1. 根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3. 词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Last Saturday was a truly meaningful day for me.
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【答案】例文
Saturday, May 3rd
Visiting a Museum
Last Saturday was a truly meaningful day for me.
I visited a museum with my classmates, and it was both fun and educational. We first explored the history section, where we saw ancient tools, traditional clothes, and old coins. Then we moved on to the science section, which showed amazing inventions, machines, and interactive exhibits.
We took part in a guided tour, during which the guide explained many interesting facts. After that, we joined a knowledge competition, and I even won a small prize! I learned how ancient people lived, worked, and created things, and I also understood how technology has developed over the centuries. It was an unforgettable experience.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇日记;
②时态:一般过去时为主;
③提示:写作要点和开头部分已给出,考试应注意要求中的内容,充实细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明参观博物馆的经历很有意义,引出下文;
第二步,详细阐述参观的过程和内容;
第三步,结尾总结这次经历令人难忘。
[亮点词汇]
①educational有教育意义的
②explore探索
③interactive交互的
④unforgettable难忘的
[高分句型]
①We first explored the history section, where we saw ancient tools, traditional clothes, and old coins. (where引导的非限制性定语从句)
②I learned how ancient people lived, worked, and created things, and I also understood how technology has developed over the centuries. (how 引导的宾语从句)
Passage 1
校园花草相映美,砖瓦间藏诗意浓。为使校园常新常绿,近日你校开展了以“倡导低碳校园,一日环保体验”为主题的实践活动。假如你是李华,请结合以下图示,用英语给你的英国笔友Tom写一封信,分享活动过程和感受。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I’m writing to
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Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share a meaningful activity with you. On November 11th, our school held the “One-day Experience for a Green and Low-carbon School” activity. First, we picked up litter around the campus. Then we collected waste paper and bottles for recycling. We also spread the message about saving water and electricity, and some of us planted small trees.
I felt very happy during the activity. It made me realize that small actions can make a big difference to our environment.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时与一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给开头,点明写信目的是分享活动。
第二步、介绍活动的时间、主题,并依次描述捡垃圾、回收废品、宣传环保、植树等具体活动。
第三步、表达个人感受,点明活动意义,总结环保行动的价值。
[亮点词汇]
①meaningful有意义的
②recycling回收利用
③make a big difference产生很大影响
[高分句型]
①It made me realize that small actions can make a big difference to our environment.(that引导宾语从句,增强句子层次感)
Passage 2
假设你是李华,上个月你校举办了“迎新年传统文化节”活动,你的外国笔友Frank对此很感兴趣。请根据下表信息给Frank写一封邮件,介绍你所参加的活动并谈谈你的感受。
New Year Traditional Culture Festival
Time & Place
Activities
Meanings
Feelings
»January 1st 2026
»the playground
»do paper-cutting
»eat Tangyuan
»...
»good luck
»a sense of togetherness
»...
»the joy of the New Year
»...
注意:(1) 邮件需包含题目要求的所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名,学校等信息;
(3) 词数90-100左右;邮件的第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Frank,
I’m writing to share with you something about our school’s New Year Traditional Culture Festival activity.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Frank,
I’m writing to share with you something about our school’s New Year Traditional Culture Festival activity.
It was held on January 1st, 2026 on the playground. We took part in many fun activities. I tried paper-cutting, which is a symbol of good luck in China. I also ate Tangyuan with my classmates, and it gave us a strong sense of togetherness. Besides, we watched a wonderful lion dance performance. These activities are not only interesting but also meaningful. They help us understand traditional Chinese culture better. I felt the joy of the New Year and was proud of our rich culture. I really enjoyed this festival. What traditional activities do you have in your country?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:电子邮件;
② 时态:以一般过去时为主;
③ 提示:需包含活动时间地点、参与的活动、活动意义及个人感受,可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点明邮件目的,引出活动主题。
第二步:按表格信息依次介绍活动的时间、地点、具体内容及意义,如剪纸、吃汤圆等。
第三步:表达个人感受,并向笔友提问,收尾。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in参加
② a symbol of……的象征
③ a strong sense of togetherness强烈的归属感
④ not only... but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
① I tried paper-cutting, which is a symbol of good luck in China.(由which引导非限制性定语从句)
② These activities are not only interesting but also meaningful. (not only... but also...句型)
Passage 3
创新点亮生活,科技成就梦想。为了丰富学生们的校园生活,培养创新能力,上周你校举办了一次创意作品展 (exhibition of creative works)。假定你是李辉,请给你的外国笔友Eric写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1) 活动的目的;
(2) 同学们的创意作品 (至少两件);
(3) 你的感悟。
注意:
(1) 词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going?
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【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
How is everything going? Last week, our school held an exhibition of creative works to enrich campus life and develop innovation ability.
Many amazing works were shown. For example, a smart trash can could sort waste automatically. Another student made a model plane using recycled materials. I was deeply impressed by their creativity.
I realized that innovation can make our life better and more convenient. It’s not only about small inventions but also about thinking differently to solve daily problems. I hope to create my own work in the future.
Best wishes,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:电子邮件;
②时态:一般过去时为主;
③提示:需包含活动目的、两件创意作品描述及个人感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步:首段说明活动目的;
第二步:中间段列举两件作品;
第三步:末段表达感悟,结尾祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①innovation ability创新能力
②sort waste垃圾分类
③more convenient更方便的
[高分句型]
①I realized that innovation can make our life better and more convenient. (宾语从句)
②It’s not only about small inventions but also about thinking differently to solve daily problems. (not only...but also...结构)
Passage 4
假如你是李华,本月是你们学校的志愿与慈善活动月,倡导学生积极伸出援助之手以各种形式帮助他人。请你根据以下提示信息写一篇日记,记录下你本月的慈善事迹。
内容提示:
What I Did for Charity
Time: September
To: Poor children
Things: 1) Save money and collect books
2) Give away clothes and toys
Feeling: Happy
Decision: Volunteer every week
要求:
1.语句通顺,符合逻辑,可适当发挥;
2. 80个词左右(格式与开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
September 26 Friday Sunny
I used to spend most of my money buying clothes and toys._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
September 26 Friday Sunny
I used to spend most of my money buying clothes and toys. But my English teacher says that there are still many poor children in some places. And they are too poor to go to school. So this month, I saved my pocket money and collected books to send them. I also gave away clothes and toys along with books.
I’m very happy that I can help others in need. From now on, I plan to volunteer every week. I believe a simple kindness can make a big difference to the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇日记;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中的介绍要点,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,讲述自己过去花钱的习惯,接着因老师的话,说明这个月为贫困孩子存钱、收集书籍以及捐赠衣物玩具的行为;
第二步,表达帮助他人的快乐,以及未来每周做志愿者的计划;
第三步,阐述善意能改变世界的信念。
[亮点词汇]
① save my pocket money 省下了我的零花钱
② give away 赠送
③ make a big difference to 对……产生重大影响
[高分句型]
① So this month, I saved my pocket money and collected books to send them.(动词不定式短语作目的状语)
② I also gave away clothes and toys along with books.(介词短语作状语)
Passage 5
为了提高学生们的口语水平,你校将要举行“英语之夜(English Evening)”活动,请你根据以下具体信息写一则通知。
内容包括:
1.时间:周五下午三点开始,五点结束。
2.地点:学校大厅
3.活动内容:
(1)看英语电影;
(2)唱英文歌曲;
(3)表演英语话剧;
(4)……
要求:
1.词数:80词左右。
2.开头及结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数。
3.不得出现真实的人名与校名。
学校大厅 :the school hall 表演:perform
Notice
Dear students,
In order to improve students’ spoken English, our school will hold the activity of the English Evening.
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Let’s practice speaking English together.
The School English Club
【答案】例文:
NoticeDear students,
In order to improve students’ spoken English, our school will hold the activity of the English Evening.
It will take place this Friday in the school hall, starting at 3:00 p.m. and ending at 5:00 p.m. During the event, you can enjoy English movies, sing English songs, and watch English plays performed by students. There will also be fun English games for everyone to join. Everyone is welcome! If you are interested in it, please contact your English teacher. Don’t forget to come on time and practice your English with us. I’m sure we’ll have a good time.
Let’s practice speaking English together.
The School English Club
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇通知;
②时态:时态主要为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍活动的时间、地点;
第二步,具体活动的具体内容;
第三步,书写结语,号召同学们参加此次活动。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②be interested in sth对……感兴趣
③on time准时
④have a good time玩得开心,过得愉快
[高分句型]
①There will also be fun English games for everyone to join.(there be句型)
②If you are interested in it, please contact your English teacher.(if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 6
人们对未来总是充满着期待,未来一定会发生很大变化。假如学校英语俱乐部下周将要举办一场关于未来变化的主题演讲活动。请你以“The Future Changes in Our Lives”为题写一篇英语演讲稿参与该活动。
写作要点:
1. 人们的寿命变得更加长久;
2. 人们的居住环境变得更加美好;
3. 人们的生活更加舒适。
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数100左右。
The Future Changes in Our Lives
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【答案】例文
The Future Changes in Our Lives
Good morning, everyone! Today I’ll talk about future changes in our lives.
First, people will live much longer. With better medicine and healthy lifestyles, many may live to over 100. Second, our environment will become more beautiful. There will be more parks and green spaces, with cleaner air and bluer skies. Third, life will be more comfortable. Robots will help with housework and smart homes will make everything easier.
We will have more time to enjoy life with family. I believe these changes will come true if we work hard.
Thank you for listening!
(词数统计:94词)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:讲稿;
②时态:一般将来时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏,并适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,并突出重点,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问候听众并引出演讲主题;
第二步,分三点阐述未来生活的变化(寿命延长、环境改善、生活更舒适);
第三步,总结并表达信心,结束演讲。
[亮点词汇]
①live much longer活得更久
②better medicine更好的医疗
③healthy lifestyles健康的生活方式
④more parks and green spaces更多公园和绿地
⑤cleaner air and bluer skies更洁净的空气和更蓝的天空
⑥help with housework帮忙做家务
⑦smart homes智能家居
[高分句型]
①With better medicine and healthy lifestyles, many may live to over 100. (With介词短语作伴随状语)
②Robots will help with housework and smart homes will make everything easier. (and连接的并列句)
③I believe these changes will come true if we work hard. (省略that的宾语从句,if引导条件状语从句)
Passage 7
你们班开展了一次以“The Most Useful Invention in My Daily Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,与同学们分享。写作要点:
1.你认为日常生活中最有用的发明是什么?
2.你为什么认为它最有用?(play an important role in…,serve as…)
3.它是怎样改变你的或者其他人的生活的?(convenient, make life much easier, make a great difference to…)
4.……
注意:1.必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥,使文章内容通顺、完整;
2.100词左右。
The Most Useful Invention in My Daily Life
Good morning, everyone! The most useful invention in my daily life is undoubtedly
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【答案】
例文
The Most Useful Invention in My Daily Life
Good morning, everyone! The most useful invention in my daily life is undoubtedly the smartphone.
I believe it is the most useful because it plays an important role in almost everything I do. It serves as a phone, a camera, a map, and a learning tool all in one. I even use it to shop for daily things or order meals when I’m busy.
It has greatly changed our lives. It makes communication convenient, helps us find information quickly, and makes life much easier. Truly, it has made a great difference to how we live, work, and connect with the world.
In short, the smartphone is not just a device—it’s a window to the world.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括介绍日常生活中最有用的发明、说明其最有用的原因以及阐述它如何改变生活。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接点明“The most useful invention in my daily life is undoubtedly the smartphone”,引出重点介绍的内容——智能手机;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“plays an important role in almost everything I do”以及“serves as a phone, a camera, a map, and a learning tool all in one”等方面说明认为智能手机最有用的原因;通过“makes communication convenient, helps us find information quickly, and makes life much easier”阐述智能手机如何改变生活;
第三步,书写结语。用“In short, the smartphone is not just a device—it’s a window to the world”总结智能手机的重要性,并表达“Thank you!”结束演讲,表达希望与同学们分享观点的意愿。
[亮点词汇]
①undoubtedly无疑地,确定地
②play an important role in…在……中扮演重要角色
③serve as充当,用作
④make a great difference to…对……产生巨大影响
[高分句型]
①I believe it is the most useful because it plays an important role in almost everything I do.(原因状语从句)
②Truly, it has made a great difference to how we live, work, and connect with the world.(宾语从句)
Passage 8
生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近,学校将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……),请写一篇作文介绍这位值得感恩的人。
提示问题:●What does he/she look like?
● Why do you want to thank him/her?
● What can you learn from him/her?
要求:1. 条理清楚,语言流畅,语法正确,内容充实。2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
The Person I Want to Thank
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【答案】
例文
The Person I Want to Thank
The person I want to thank most is my English teacher, Ms. Li. She has long hair and always wears a warm smile. Whenever I met difficulties in English learning, she would explain the knowledge points to me over and over again. I want to thank her because she made me love English. When I felt shy to speak, she encouraged me patiently. She also often recommended interesting English stories and songs to me to broaden my horizons. From her, I learned that practice makes perfect. I will always remember her kindness and work harder.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,不得遗漏,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点明要感谢的对象,并简要描述其外貌特征;
第二步:具体阐述感谢的原因,说明该人物对你的积极影响;
第三步:总结从该人物身上学到的道理或品质,表达感恩之情和未来决心。
[亮点词汇]
①over and over again一遍又一遍
②encouraged鼓励
③broaden my horizons拓宽我的眼界
④practice makes perfect熟能生巧
[高分句型]
①I want to thank her because she made me love English. When I felt shy to speak, she encouraged me patiently.(because引导的原因状语从句+when引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 9
假如你是李华,经常参加学校组织的英语角活动,你的英国笔友Linda对这项活动很感兴趣,请你根据下面表格的提示,用英语写一封电子邮件,把你们学校英语角活动的情况告诉她。
Time
Every Friday afternoon
Place
School library
Members
Students and teachers
Activities
●Sing English songs
●Practice oral English
●Share some ideas or advice
Effects
●Improve English ability
●…… (至少补充一点)
要求:
1. 须包括提示内容,可适当发挥,文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 词数不少于90,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
How is it going these days? I’m glad you’re interested in our English Corner.
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Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Linda ,
How is it going these days? I’m glad you’re interested in our English Corner.
It is held every Friday afternoon in our school library, and both students and teachers join in it happily. We start by singing popular English songs to relax, then practice oral English through group talks about our hobbies, school life or funny stories. We also share practical learning advice, like how to remember new words better.
This activity not only improves our English skills but also helps us make more friends and feel more confident when speaking. We always have a wonderful time and look forward to it each week.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件,介绍学校英语角活动;
②时态:一般现在时,客观描述固定活动安排;
③提示:完整覆盖表格所有要点,补充了活动细节和额外效果,符合要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇回应对方兴趣,引出英语角话题;
第二步:介绍英语角的时间、地点、参与人员,并详细描述活动流程;
第三步:说明活动带来的多重效果,表达大家的期待,送上祝福。
[亮点词汇]
① join in 参加
② practical 实用的
③ look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
1 We also share practical learning advice, like how to remember new words better. (用“like”举例,让建议更具体)
Passage 10
你校社团中心将于下周新增劳动实践课,假如你是社团负责人,请根据以下内容提示写一则通知,为同学们介绍该课程的情况。
要求:
1. 通知内容必须包括所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:Labor Club劳动实践俱乐部 campus校园
Notice
Dear students.
We’re excited to tell you our school will have a new club—Labor Club next week. Let me introduce it to all of you.
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We are looking forward to your joining!
Yours,
School Club Center
【答案】例文
Notice
Dear students,
We’re excited to tell you our school will have a new club—Labor Club next week. Let me introduce it to all
of you.
The club activities will be held on our school campus from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm every Friday. In the club, you can grow vegetables and water trees and flowers. What’s more, you’ll learn to make cloth bags. Our craft teachers will be there to guide you step by step. Whether it’s a small bag for pencils or a bigger one for books, you’ll create something useful with your own hands. Joining the club will help you understand the value of labor, make new friends and enjoy the fun of creating.
We are looking forward to your joining!
Yours,
School Club Center
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇通知;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,注意格式规范。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题;
第二步,阐述课程的有关信息和意义;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①What’s more而且
②learn to make学习制作
③make new friends结交新朋友
[高分句型]
Joining the club will help you understand the value of labor, make new friends and enjoy the fun of creating. (and连接并列成分)
Passage 11
假定你是校英文广播站主持人李华,学校正在开展“绿色生活,有你有我”主题活动。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文广播稿,号召全校同学厉行节约,绿色生活。
clear your plate
reuse the books
...
注意:1. 短文需包含所有提示信息,并补充至少一点倡议;
2. 词数100左右,首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:call on号召
Boys and girls,
I am Li Hua. Our school is holding an activity named “A Greener Life for You and Me”.
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Thanks!
【答案】例文
Boys and girls,
I am Li Hua. Our school is holding an activity named “A Greener Life for You and Me”. I’m here to call on everybody to take part in this activity and live a greener life.
First of all, we should clear our plates while having meals. Wasting food is not a good habit. Besides, it is a good idea to reuse the old books. Instead of throwing away those used books, we’d better give them away to the students who are in need. Last but not least, turn off the lights before leaving. We should try our best to save energy.
Let’s take action now and start with the little things around us!
Thanks!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇广播稿;
②时态:主要运用“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中的每一项内容,适当添加细节,如阐述这些行为的意义,并突出写作重点,即号召全校同学厉行节约,绿色生活。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图;
第二步:分别从节约粮食、旧书再利用、节约能源等角度,列举一系列具体且可行的环保行动,并适当阐述意义;
第三步:书写结语,发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①call on号召
②instead of而不是
③turn off关闭
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①I’m here to call on everybody to take part in this activity and live a greener life.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②Instead of throwing away those used books, we’d better give them away to the students who are in need.(who引导的定语从句)
③Let’s take action now and start with the little things around us!(祈使句)
Passage 12
为了提高同学们的安全意识,学校即将开展“安全在我心”的宣传活动。假定你是学生会主席李华,请你写一封倡议信,从饮食、运动及另一个方面谈谈具体做法和理由,并发出呼吁。
注意:1. 词数为100词左右;
2. 适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、班名及学校名称;
4. 邮件的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
As we all know, safety is very important in our daily life.
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Li Hua
President of the Student Union
【答案】
例文
Dear fellow students,
As we all know, safety is very important in our daily life. Firstly, eat a balanced diet and avoid junk food to stay healthy. Always check expiration dates on food, which prevents food poisoning. Healthy eating provides a solid foundation for our study and life. Secondly, when exercising, warm up first and wear protective gear like helmets. This helps prevent injuries. After exercising, don’t take a cold shower immediately to avoid catching a cold. Thirdly, follow traffic rules: never run across roads and pay full attention when walking. Using phones while walking may cause accidents.
Let’s work together to make safety a habit! Remember: protecting ourselves is protecting our future.
Li Hua
President of the Student Union
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封倡议信;
②时态:是“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干进行写作,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步、饮食、运动、交通安全这三个方面谈谈具体做法和理由;
第三步、发出呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①food poisoning食物中毒
②protective gear防护装备
③pay full attention全神贯注
[高分句型]
Always check expiration dates on food, which prevents food poisoning. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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