Unit 2 The Frog Prince 写作专项学案 2025-2026学年教科版五四制英语九年级上册

Unit 2 The Frog Prince 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“坚守承诺”主题，围绕公主违背对青蛙的承诺后最终践行约定、收获真爱的核心童话，写一篇阐释承诺的价值、描述个人坚守承诺的经历或表达对诚信品质理解的短文，达成以下目标： 1.能正确使用本单元“承诺与相处”相关核心词汇（如prince、princess、promise、fairy tale、honest、dishonest、mean、kind、handsome、repay、reward等）及短语（keep one’s word、break a promise、sign up、do sb. a favor、be fond of、take a break、get back to等）； 2.能熟练运用现在进行时表达当前动作或计划，掌握“promise to do sth.” “would you do me a favor?”等句型，正确使用“but” “however” “finally” “because”等衔接表达； 3.能按“主题引入→核心细节（故事解读/经历描述/品质阐释）→感悟与践行”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“信守承诺，方得始终”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁：主题阐释类说明文、诚信经历类记叙文或品质感悟类短文，兼具教育性与感染力； 2.人称：第一人称（分享经历、表达感受）或第三人称（解读故事、阐释品质）为主； 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容：覆盖“1个核心角度（童话启示/个人守诺经历/诚信品质解读）、2-3个关键细节（故事核心/经历过程/品质内涵）、1个核心感悟（承诺的意义）”3个要点； ￮ 字数：80–100词，阐释准确深刻、描述真实具体或感悟真挚贴切，语言符合九年级学生水平，体现对诚信品质的深度思考。 思路点拨 1.开头：明确引入核心主题（如“《青蛙王子》的童话告诉我们，承诺不是随口之言，坚守约定才能收获美好与尊重” “诚信是人际交往的基石，一次坚守承诺的经历让我懂得了‘言出必行’的重量’’ “公主从违背承诺到主动践行的转变，诠释了‘信守承诺’是跨越偏见的桥梁’’），用简洁句式点明核心观点（如“承诺如金，坚守方显珍贵；失信易，挽回难” “诚信不在于惊天动地的誓言，而在于点滴约定的践行”），用引导性语言引出下文； 2.中间：若解读童话，按“故事背景→承诺产生→违背约定→践行转变→美好结果”展开，结合公主因国王教诲践行承诺、青蛙变王子的细节，阐释“坚守承诺”的重要性；若描述个人守诺经历，聚焦“承诺场景→面临考验→坚守过程→最终收获”，用具体事例（如答应帮同学补习、承诺保守秘密并坚守、约定共同完成任务不半途而废）传递真实体验；若阐释诚信品质，围绕“诚信的内涵→守诺的意义→生活中的践行”，用具体场景（如学习中不违约、交往中守约定）支撑观点，确保有说服力； 3.结尾：分享感悟（如“公主的经历告诉我们，坚守承诺不仅能化解矛盾，更能收获意想不到的美好，诚信永远是值得坚守的品质” “承诺是人与人之间的信任纽带，唯有坚守，才能让这份纽带愈发牢固”）或表达行动意愿（如“我会以公主的转变为榜样，在学习和生活中言出必行，做一个信守承诺的人” “我会将《青蛙王子》的故事分享给身边人，让更多人体会坚守承诺的价值”），呼应单元“The Frog Prince”的核心主题，传递“信守承诺，诚信为本”的积极态度。 写作模板（逐段拆解） 模板一：主题阐释——承诺的价值（The Value of Keeping Promises） 第一段：故事引入与核心定位 基础句式：The fairy tale The Frog Prince teaches us a valuable lesson about honesty and promises. Keeping one’s word can bring unexpected blessings and respect. 示例：What is the true meaning of a promise? The story of the princess and the frog gives us a clear answer—it’s keeping our word no matter what. 第二段：故事解读与细节支撑 基础句式：A princess promised to be friends with a frog to get her golden ball back, but she broke her promise later. Her father told her that promises must be kept, so she let the frog in. The frog was kind to her, and finally, he turned into a handsome prince. 示例：A princess lost her golden ball in a lake. A frog offered to find it if she promised to be his friend. The princess agreed but ran away without keeping her word. That night, the frog came to her door. The king said, “If you make a promise, you must keep it.” The princess followed his words, and the kind frog eventually turned into a prince. 第三段：感悟总结与践行 基础句式：This story tells us that promises are not empty words. Keeping our word shows our honesty and respect for others. Only by keeping promises can we build trust and收获 good results. 示例：From the princess’s experience, I understand that keeping promises is a basic virtue. We should never break our words just because we think it’s convenient. In daily life, I will always keep my promises and be an honest person. 模板二：诚信经历——一次坚守承诺的经历（An Experience of Keeping My Promise） 第一段：经历引入与背景铺垫 基础句式：I once promised my friend Lily to help her prepare for the English speech contest, and I didn’t let her down even though I was busy. This experience made me realize the importance of keeping promises. 示例：Promises are like commitments we must honor. An experience of keeping my promise to my classmate Tom made me deeply understand the power of honesty. 第二段：经历细节与过程描述 基础句式：Lily was weak in English and asked me to help her practice every weekend. At that time, I was also preparing for my math exam. But I remembered the princess in The Frog Prince—she kept her promise even though she didn’t like the frog. So I made a schedule to balance my study and helping her. We practiced speaking and corrected mistakes together. 示例：Tom and I promised to finish the group science project together. But a few days before the deadline, I caught a cold and felt very tired. I wanted to give up, but I thought of the princess who kept her promise. So I asked my mom to help me record the practice video and sent it to Tom. We discussed online every evening, and finally, we completed the project successfully. 第三段：经历感悟与收获 基础句式：Lily won the third prize in the contest, and she thanked me sincerely. This experience taught me that keeping promises not only helps others but also makes us more responsible. I will always keep my word in the future. 示例：That experience made me realize that keeping promises is not always easy, but it’s worth it. It helps us gain trust and maintain good friendships. Just like the princess got a prince by keeping her promise, we can收获 more happiness and respect by being honest. 模板三：品质感悟——诚信如金，信守为美（Honesty Is Gold, Keeping Promises Is Beauty） 第一段：品质引入与核心意义 基础句式：Honesty and keeping promises are the most important qualities in our lives. They help us build trust with others and make our relationships stronger. The Frog Prince perfectly shows their importance. 示例：In a world full of choices, keeping promises is a shining quality. The fairy tale of The Frog Prince tells us that honesty and commitment can change everything. 第二段：品质阐释与细节支撑 基础句式：First, keeping promises shows our honesty. The princess was wrong at first, but she corrected her mistake by keeping her word. Second, promises help us gain respect. The frog treated the princess kindly because she kept her promise. Finally, keeping promises can bring unexpected blessings, just like the frog turning into a prince. 示例：Honesty means keeping our promises no matter how difficult it is. The princess didn’t like the frog, but she still kept her promise because of her father’s teaching. In life, we should also be like her: if we promise to help others, we must do it; if we agree to a plan, we shouldn’t change it easily. Keeping promises not only makes others trust us but also makes us feel proud of ourselves. 第三段：感悟与行动呼吁 基础句式：Honesty and keeping promises are the foundation of a good life. Let’s learn from the princess, keep our words, and build a more trustworthy world with our actions. 示例：The Frog Prince’s story is timeless. In our study and daily life, let’s take it as an example—be honest and keep our promises. With these qualities, we can make more friends, gain more trust, and grow into better people. 范文 Keep Your Promise, and You’ll Gain More The Frog Prince’s fairy tale clearly shows that keeping promises is a precious virtue that brings unexpected blessings. A princess lost her golden ball in a lake. A frog offered to retrieve it on the condition that she’d be his friend. The princess agreed but broke her promise after getting the ball. However, her father reminded her, “Promises must be kept.” The princess followed his advice, and the kind frog stayed with her. Finally, the frog turned into a handsome prince, and they promised to get married. This story deeply inspires me. Promises are not trivial. In life, I’ll always keep my words, whether it’s helping a friend or finishing a task on time. I believe that keeping promises will help me gain trust and harvest more beautiful things. 范文中文翻译 信守承诺，收获更多 《青蛙王子》的童话清楚地表明，坚守承诺是一种珍贵的美德，能带来意想不到的美好。 一位公主在湖边丢失了她的金球。一只青蛙提出帮她找回金球，条件是她要做他的朋友。公主答应了，但拿到金球后却违背了承诺。然而，她的父亲提醒她：“承诺必须坚守。”公主听从了父亲的建议，这只善良的青蛙便留在了她身边。最后，青蛙变成了一位英俊的王子，他们承诺要结婚。 这个故事深深启发了我。承诺并非小事。在生活中，我会始终信守诺言，无论是帮助朋友还是按时完成任务。我相信，坚守承诺会帮助我赢得信任，收获更多美好的事物。 素材积累 核心短语 keep one’s word 履行诺言 break a promise 违背承诺 do sb. a favor 帮某人一个忙 sign up 报名参加 be fond of 喜欢 take a break 休息一下 get back to 回到（某事） retrieve the golden ball 找回金球 on the condition that 以……为条件 build trust 建立信任 basic virtue 基本美德 empty words 空话 honor commitments 履行承诺 correct mistakes 纠正错误 balance study and helping others 平衡学习与帮助他人 基础句型（含本单元重点） 基础句型 仿写句子 The story of The Frog Prince teaches us that ________. The story of The Frog Prince teaches us that keeping promises brings trust and blessings. I used to ________, but now I ________. I used to forget my promises easily, but now I always write them down to remember. To be honest, we should ________ instead of ________. To be honest, we should keep our promises instead of making empty words. If we ________, we can ________. If we keep our promises, we can build better relationships with others. Even though ________, I still ________. Even though I was tired, I still kept my promise to help my friend. 好句集锦 1.Promises are the glue of relationships—only by keeping them can the bond grow stronger. 2.The princess’s mistake teaches us that breaking a promise is easy, but regaining trust is hard. 3.Kindness and honesty go hand in hand with keeping promises, just like the frog’s kindness and the princess’s commitment. 4.A promise kept is a trust earned; a promise broken is a bridge burned. 谚语 1.Keep your promises and you’ll have trustworthy friends.（信守承诺，方能拥有挚友——契合单元主题） 2.Honesty is the best policy.（诚信为本——强调诚信的重要性） 3.A man of his word is worth his weight in gold.（言出必行的人价值千金——呼应坚守承诺的价值） 学生写作填空练习版 版本一：主题阐释 The Frog Prince’s story reveals the importance of keeping promises. A princess lost her ________ (物品，如golden ball) in a lake. A frog offered to find it if she ________ (承诺内容，如promised to be his friend). The princess agreed but ________ (行为，如broke her promise) later. Her father told her to keep her word, so she let the frog in. Finally, the frog turned into a handsome prince. From this story, I learn that ________ (感悟，如promises are precious). I will ________ (行动，如keep my promises) in daily life. 版本二：诚信经历 I once promised my friend ________ (朋友姓名，如Lily) to ________ (承诺内容，如help her practice English for the speech contest). It was an unforgettable experience that taught me the value of keeping promises. At that time, I was also busy with ________ (困难，如my own math exam). But I remembered the princess in The Frog Prince. I ________ (行动1，如made a study schedule) and ________ (行动2，如practiced with her every weekend). We corrected mistakes together, and she won a prize. This experience made me realize that ________ (感悟，如keeping promises builds trust). I will ________ (行动，如always honor my commitments) in the future. 版本三：品质感悟 Honesty and keeping promises are essential qualities for everyone. The Frog Prince’s story explains their true meaning. First, we should ________ (做法1，如keep our promises no matter what) because it shows our honesty. The princess followed her father’s advice and kept her word. Second, we need to ________ (做法2，如take promises seriously) instead of making empty words. Keeping promises helps us ________ (好处，如gain others’ respect). Let’s learn from the princess. I believe that with ________ (品质，如honesty and commitment), we can ________ (成果，如build better relationships) and收获 more happiness. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $