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Unit 2 The Frog Prince 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“The Frog Prince”为话题,属于“真理与诚信”主题范畴中“信守承诺”主题群,核心聚焦“用英语讲述信守承诺的故事、分享对履行诺言的看法、表达承诺带来的成长”,运用现在进行时及承诺相关核心词汇,提升叙事类与议论类写作的情感感染力和逻辑性。常见写作角度包括:① 讲述一次自己信守承诺的经历;② 给朋友写邮件分享对“履行诺言”的理解;③ 论述“信守承诺是一种美德”;④ 仿写童话传递“言出必行”的道理。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点,突出“道德性”和“成长性”,可直接用于课堂同步训练。
【单元话题】
“一次难忘的承诺”。请用英语写一篇短文,讲述一次你许下并坚守承诺的经历,包括背景、过程及感悟,词数80-100左右,题目为“A Promise I Kept”。
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【范文】
A Promise I Kept
Last semester, I made a promise to my deskmate Lily that I would help her with English speaking before the final exam.
Lily was worried about her oral test, so I promised to practice with her every lunchtime. At first, I was busy with my own homework and almost forgot the promise. But I remembered the frog prince’s story—keeping one’s word brings respect. Every day, we practiced dialogues and pronunciation. When she felt frustrated, I encouraged her not to give up.
In the end, Lily got a good grade. This experience teaches me that a promise is a serious commitment. Keeping it not only helps others but also makes me a reliable person.
【译文】
一次我坚守的承诺
上学期,我向同桌莉莉承诺,期末考试前会帮她练习英语口语。
莉莉很担心口语测试,所以我答应每天午餐时间陪她练习。一开始,我忙着自己的作业,差点忘了这个承诺。但我想起了青蛙王子的故事——信守诺言才能赢得尊重。每天我们都会练习对话和发音,当她感到沮丧时,我会鼓励她不要放弃。
最后,莉莉取得了不错的成绩。这次经历让我明白,承诺是一份严肃的责任,坚守它不仅能帮助他人,也能让自己成为一个可靠的人。
亮点词块
1.keep one’s word 履行诺言
2.oral test 口语测试
3.practice dialogues 练习对话
4.pronunciation 发音
5.feel frustrated 感到沮丧
6.serious commitment 严肃的责任
7.reliable person 可靠的人
高分句子
1.But I remembered the frog prince’s story—keeping one’s word brings respect.(呼应课本核心主题,贴合单元内涵)
2.Every day, we practiced dialogues and pronunciation.(用一般现在时描述日常动作,贴合单元语法重点延伸应用)
3.Keeping it not only helps others but also makes me a reliable person.(升华主题,体现承诺的双重意义,贴合单元德育目标)
【拓展1】
你的外国笔友Peter最近因没能遵守对朋友的承诺而烦恼,请你写一封邮件,分享你对“履行诺言”的看法及建议,词数不少于60。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear you’re upset about breaking the promise to your friend. The story of The Frog Prince in my textbook makes me have deep thoughts about keeping one’s word.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear you’re upset about breaking the promise to your friend. The story of The Frog Prince in my textbook makes me have deep thoughts about keeping one’s word.
The princess kept her promise to the frog and got a surprise reward. Breaking a promise may hurt others’ feelings and lose their trust. I think you should apologize sincerely and explain the reason. You can also make a new promise to make up for it—actions speak louder than words.
Remember, keeping promises is not easy, but it’s a valuable quality. I believe your friend will understand if you show your sincerity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的彼得:
听说你因为没能遵守对朋友的承诺而烦恼,我很为你担心。我课本里《青蛙王子》的故事让我对信守诺言有了深刻的思考。
公主遵守了对青蛙的承诺,最终得到了意外的回报。违背承诺可能会伤害别人的感情,失去他们的信任。我觉得你应该真诚地道歉并解释原因,也可以许下一个新的承诺来弥补——行动胜于言语。
记住,信守承诺并不容易,但这是一种宝贵的品质。我相信只要你展现出诚意,你的朋友会理解你的。
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,论述“信守承诺的重要性”,词数70左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
核心观点
信守承诺是人际交往的基石
理由
赢得他人信任;建立良好关系;展现个人品德
呼吁
每个人都应言出必行,做有诚信的人
Keeping promises is the foundation of interpersonal relationships.
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【拓展2范文】
Keeping promises is the foundation of interpersonal relationships.
First, it helps us win others’ trust—people are more willing to get along with reliable people. Second, it builds good relationships, whether with friends or family. What’s more, keeping promises shows our good character, just like the princess in the story.
We should all keep our words and be honest people. Only in this way can we create a harmonious world full of trust.
【拓展2译文】
信守承诺是人际交往的基石。
首先,它能帮助我们赢得他人的信任——人们更愿意与可靠的人相处;其次,它能建立良好的关系,无论是与朋友还是家人;更重要的是,信守承诺能展现我们的良好品德,就像故事中的公主一样。
我们都应该言出必行,做诚信的人。只有这样,我们才能创造一个充满信任的和谐世界。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.承诺相关(单元重点)
· 承诺与履行:promise 承诺;keep one’s word 履行诺言;break a promise 违背承诺;make a promise 许下承诺;fulfill a promise 实现承诺;commitment 责任;reliable 可靠的;sincere 真诚的
· 现在进行时相关:is practicing 正在练习;are preparing 正在准备;is encouraging 正在鼓励;are communicating 正在沟通;is apologizing 正在道歉
· 故事与感悟:frog prince 青蛙王子;princess 公主;reward 回报;trust 信任;character 品德;interpersonal relationships 人际关系;harmonious 和谐的
· 行动与表达:practice dialogues 练习对话;explain the reason 解释原因;make up for 弥补;apologize sincerely 真诚道歉;encourage sb not to give up 鼓励某人不放弃
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 现在进行时(表当前动作/临时状态):
· 主语+am/is/are+动词-ing:She is practicing oral English now.(她现在正在练习英语口语。);We are keeping our promise to help others.(我们正在坚守帮助他人的承诺。)
· 现在进行时(表计划/趋势):
· More and more people are valuing the importance of keeping promises.(越来越多的人正在重视信守承诺的重要性。);He is preparing to keep his promise to visit his grandma.(他正在准备兑现去看望奶奶的承诺。)
1. 表达类(单元基础)
· 逻辑连接:first 首先;second 其次;what’s more 更重要的是;in the end 最后;therefore 因此;only in this way 只有这样
· 感悟表达:foundation 基石;valuable quality 宝贵的品质;deep thoughts 深刻的思考;actions speak louder than words 行动胜于言语
二、实用句型积累
1.讲述信守承诺的经历(贴合单元核心)
· I made a promise to… that I would… 我向……承诺我会……,例:I made a promise to my teacher that I would finish my homework on time.
· At first, I… but I remembered… 一开始我……但我想起了……,例:At first, I wanted to give up but I remembered the frog prince’s lesson.
· This experience teaches me that… 这次经历让我明白……,例:This experience teaches me that keeping promises makes me grow.
1. 分享对承诺的看法(贴合单元主题)
· The story of The Frog Prince makes me realize that… 《青蛙王子》的故事让我意识到……,例:The story of The Frog Prince makes me realize that promises should never be broken.
· Breaking a promise may… but keeping it can… 违背承诺可能会……但坚守它能……,例:Breaking a promise may hurt feelings but keeping it can win trust.
· People are more willing to… with those who… 人们更愿意与……的人……,例:People are more willing to cooperate with those who keep their words.
1. 论述承诺的重要性(贴合单元内涵)
· … is the foundation of… ……是……的基石,例:Keeping promises is the foundation of true friendship.
· There are many reasons why… ……有很多原因,例:There are many reasons why keeping promises is important.
· We should all… and be… 我们都应该……做……的人,例:We should all keep our promises and be honest people.
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:What does the story of The Frog Prince teach us?;Have you ever kept an important promise?;Why is keeping promises important?;How do you feel when others break their promises?;What should you do if you can’t keep a promise?
· 回答句型:It teaches us that we should keep our words.;Yes, I once promised to help my friend study and I did it.;Because it helps us win trust and build good relationships.;I feel disappointed and sad.;I should apologize sincerely and explain the reason.
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