Unit 2 Neighbourhood 书面表达10篇（单元话题：社区）-2025-2026学年译林版七年级英语下学期单元重难点易错题精练

Unit 2 Neighbourhood 书面表达10篇 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 社区 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．假如你是Simon，你的英国朋友Tom来信向你询问你的社区情况。请根据以下提示，写一封电子邮件回复他。 社区情况 1．社区很大，位于市中心， 2．社区里有很多志愿者，他们友善且乐于助人；能帮助我解决各种各样的问题……（至少举一个例子） 周围环境 1．社区周围设施齐全，有超市、餐馆、学校、医院等； 2．离社区1公里处有一个公园，……（至少举一个例子） 居住条件 1．社区里有20多栋建筑，每栋有9层。住在6楼；有一个客厅，一个厨房，一间浴室和3间卧室 2．最喜欢的房间是……因为我可以…… 感受 住在这样的一个社区…… 要求：1．表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2．必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3．词数：不少于100词（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 4．不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Dear Tom, I’d like to tell you something about my neighbourhood. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Simon 2．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日，某英文报正在举行题为“My neighbourhood”的征文活动。假设你是李华，住在阳光社区，请根据以下问题提示要点，完成一篇英文征文稿。 What is your neighbourhood like? What are your neighbours like? How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood? 注意事项： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须回答上面问题，并作适当发挥，80词左右； 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My neighbourhood I’m Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Community. ________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Emily对中国的社区生活很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点，给她写一封电子邮件，介绍你所在社区的情况。 1. 社区有超市和公园，环境不错； 2. 有健身设施，大家能锻炼身体； 3. 邻居们很友好，会互相帮忙； 4. 你喜欢社区的活动，感觉像大家庭。 注意： 5. 词数60左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 6. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear Emily, I’m happy to tell you about my community. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your community? I’m looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua 4．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”，邻居在我们的生活中是非常重要的。请你根据提示，以“My neighbour”为题写一篇作文，不少于70词。 要点： 1. 我是Simon，住在阳光社区。最近，我结实了一位新邻居，他叫Peter。他住在六层。 2. 他是一名警察，他工作十分努力。 3. 他很友好且乐于助人，他会帮助人们解决各种问题。 4. 我们社区的每个人都喜欢他。我们有像他这样的好邻居真是太幸运了。 注意： 1. 词数70左右。 2. 文章必须包括所有的要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺。 3. 文章中不得出现真实姓名、地点、校名等相关信息。 My neighbour ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友David来信询问你的社区。请根据以下提示，写一封电子邮件回复他。 1. What is your community like? 2. How do neighbours help each other? 3. What do you want to do for the community? 4. What do you think of your community? 要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Dear David, I’m very glad to tell you something about my community. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6．根据下表提示，以“My dream community”为题写一篇短文，词数80字左右。 要求： 1. 内容必须包括表格中的要点，可适当发挥。 2. 条理清楚、语句连贯。 概述 社区很大，有许多人住在这里 设施 有许多高楼、运动场 (playground)、游泳池…… 环境 有花园，花草树木多；空气好 (The air is fresh.) 邻居 邻居善良，友好；一些邻居是志愿者，他们有一技之长，帮人们解决问题；帮老人购物、打扫房屋；帮孩子们学习…… 其他 我打算为社区做点事：(1)…… (2) …… My dream community __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友Tony想了解你的家及你的社区。请根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件。 提示： 1. 你家的位置、房子类型、房间布局； 2. 你所在社区的情况(如：基础设施、环境、邻居等) 要求： 1. 包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 3. 80词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tony, I’m glad to tell you something about my home and my community. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I really love my home and my community. What about yours? Write to me soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 8．根据要点提示，以“My neighbourhood”为主题写一篇短文介绍你的社区，词数70左右，可适当发挥。 【要点】* What is your neighbourhood like? * What are people in your neighbourhood like? * What do people often do to help each other? * Do you often do any voluntary work for your neighbours? * Do you like your neighbourhood? Why or why not? My neighbourhood __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 重难语篇练习 9．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Emily对中国的社区生活很感兴趣。请你结合思维导图，给她写一封电子邮件，介绍你所在社区的情况。 请按需求选用参考词汇： Places: Community Centre; Fix-it Club; … Activities: give away old books; repair broken bicycles; take care of pets; do exercise; … 注意： 1. 词数90左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear Emily, I’m happy to tell you about my community. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your community? I’m looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua 10．根据下表提示，以My dream community 为题写一篇短文，词数90词左右。 要求： 1. 内容必须包括表中要点，省略号处可适当发挥。 2. 条理清楚、语句连贯。 概述 社区很大，居民不多 占地面积： 一万多平方米 环境 小区周围满是鲜花和树木 邻居：善良且友好 一些邻居是志愿者，他们经常帮助人们解决各种问题。 位置 离上海不远，开汽车到上海只需要半个小时； 设施 有个运动场 (playground)，人们喜欢在那里做运动； 有个篮球场 (court) 和一个游泳池。周末…… 希望 有个大型超市，因为…… My dream community _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 2 Neighbourhood 书面表达10篇 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 社区 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．假如你是Simon，你的英国朋友Tom来信向你询问你的社区情况。请根据以下提示，写一封电子邮件回复他。 社区情况 1．社区很大，位于市中心， 2．社区里有很多志愿者，他们友善且乐于助人；能帮助我解决各种各样的问题……（至少举一个例子） 周围环境 1．社区周围设施齐全，有超市、餐馆、学校、医院等； 2．离社区1公里处有一个公园，……（至少举一个例子） 居住条件 1．社区里有20多栋建筑，每栋有9层。住在6楼；有一个客厅，一个厨房，一间浴室和3间卧室 2．最喜欢的房间是……因为我可以…… 感受 住在这样的一个社区…… 要求：1．表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2．必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3．词数：不少于100词（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 4．不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Dear Tom, I’d like to tell you something about my neighbourhood. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Simon 【答案】例文 I’d like to tell you something about my neighbourhood. My neighbourhood is large and it is in the city center. There are many volunteers in it. They are friendly to each other, and they often help us solve all kinds of problems. Last week, There was something wrong with my computer. I asked for help. And they were willing to help me check and repair my computer. Around the neighbourhood there are supermarkets, restaurants, schools, hospitals and so on. There is even a park near it. We can go for a walk and run slowly in the park. We all like it. There are more than 20 buildings in the neighbourhood, each has nine floors and I live on the sixth floor. There is a living room, a kitchen, a bathroom and three bedrooms in my home. I like the kitchen best because my mum often makes delicious food there. I feel so happy to live in such a beautiful neighbourhood. Hope you can come here one day.                                                           Yours Simon 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先介绍一下社区情况，周围环境和居住环境。 第二步，再写一下在这里的感受。 第三步，最后诚恳邀请对方过来玩。 [亮点词汇] ①asked for help寻求帮助 ②makes delicious food做美味的食物 ③go for a walk散步 [高分句型] ①We can go for a walk and run slowly in the park.（and连接并列成分） ②I like the kitchen best because my mum often makes delicious food there.（原因状语从句） 2．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日，某英文报正在举行题为“My neighbourhood”的征文活动。假设你是李华，住在阳光社区，请根据以下问题提示要点，完成一篇英文征文稿。 What is your neighbourhood like? What are your neighbours like? How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood? 注意事项： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须回答上面问题，并作适当发挥，80词左右； 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My neighbourhood I’m Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Community. ________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My neighbourhood I am Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Community. It’s a beautiful and quiet neighbourhood. There’s a beautiful park near here. People always take a walk in it. And there’s a supermarket in our neighbourhood, so it’s very easy for us to do some shopping. My neighbours are kind and helpful. There are some engineers among them. They can help us repair things like broken bikes and computers. Some of my neighbours are college students. They can help younger students with their homework. They are patient enough to answer questions. I feel very lucky to live in such a neighbourhood. I hope it will become better in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体介绍社区的状况； 第二步，具体介绍邻居的情况以及邻里间互相帮助； 第三步，最后介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①take a walk散步 ②help sb with sth帮助某人某事 [高分句型] ①There are some engineers among them. (There be结构) 3．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Emily对中国的社区生活很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点，给她写一封电子邮件，介绍你所在社区的情况。 1. 社区有超市和公园，环境不错； 2. 有健身设施，大家能锻炼身体； 3. 邻居们很友好，会互相帮忙； 4. 你喜欢社区的活动，感觉像大家庭。 注意： 5. 词数60左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 6. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear Emily, I’m happy to tell you about my community. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your community? I’m looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Emily, I’m happy to tell you about my community. There is a supermarket and a park in my community. The environment here is very nice. We can buy things easily in the supermarket and enjoy the fresh air in the park. There are also some fitness facilities. People often use them to exercise. My neighbours are very friendly. They always help each other. For example, when someone is in trouble, others will offer help at once. I like the activities in the community very much. We have parties and clean-up days. It makes me feel like I’m in a big family. What about your community? I’m looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出自己写作目的——介绍自己所在的社区； 第二步，介绍自己社区的环境，包括有超市、公园和健身设施等； 第三步，介绍社区里的人和活动； 第四步，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①for example例如 ②be in trouble处于困难中 ③each other彼此 [高分句型] ①There is a supermarket and a park in my community. (There be句型) ②For example, when someone is in trouble, others will offer help at once. (when引导的时间状语从句) 4．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”，邻居在我们的生活中是非常重要的。请你根据提示，以“My neighbour”为题写一篇作文，不少于70词。 要点： 1. 我是Simon，住在阳光社区。最近，我结实了一位新邻居，他叫Peter。他住在六层。 2. 他是一名警察，他工作十分努力。 3. 他很友好且乐于助人，他会帮助人们解决各种问题。 4. 我们社区的每个人都喜欢他。我们有像他这样的好邻居真是太幸运了。 注意： 1. 词数70左右。 2. 文章必须包括所有的要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺。 3. 文章中不得出现真实姓名、地点、校名等相关信息。 My neighbour ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My neighbour Hi! My name is Simon. I live in Sunshine Garden. I have a new neighbour. His name is Peter. He and I live in the same building. He lives on the sixth floor. He is a policeman. He works in a police station nearby. He works very hard. He is kind and helpful. When people meet all kinds of problems, they all ask him for help. Everyone in my neighbourhood likes him very much. It is lucky for us to have a good neighbour like him. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单介绍自己的新邻居； 第二步，详细介绍新邻居的工作和性格； 第三步，总结新邻居非常好，每个人都喜欢他。 [亮点词汇] ①live in the same building住在同一栋楼 ②all kinds of problems各种各样的问题 ③ask him for help向他求助 [高分句型] ①It is lucky for us to have a good neighbour like him.(It作形式主语) 5．假如你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友David来信询问你的社区。请根据以下提示，写一封电子邮件回复他。 1. What is your community like? 2. How do neighbours help each other? 3. What do you want to do for the community? 4. What do you think of your community? 要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Dear David, I’m very glad to tell you something about my community. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear David,     I’m very glad to tell you something about my community.     My community is beautiful and safe. It’s surrounded by green trees and colorful flowers. There’s a park nearby where people can relax and play sports. Neighbours often help each other. They watch out for each other’s kids and share food and tools. I’d like to volunteer at the community center and help organize activities for kids and old people. I think my community is like a big family. Everyone cares about each other and works together. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：包括提示中的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整、规范。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍社区是什么样子的； 第二步，介绍邻居是如何相互帮助的； 第三步，介绍自己想为社区做的事情； 第四步，谈谈自己对社区的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①be surrounded by被……围绕 ②each other互相 [高分句型] ①There’s a park nearby where people can relax and play sports.（定语从句） ②I think my community is like a big family.（省略that的宾语从句） 6．根据下表提示，以“My dream community”为题写一篇短文，词数80字左右。 要求： 1. 内容必须包括表格中的要点，可适当发挥。 2. 条理清楚、语句连贯。 概述 社区很大，有许多人住在这里 设施 有许多高楼、运动场 (playground)、游泳池…… 环境 有花园，花草树木多；空气好 (The air is fresh.) 邻居 邻居善良，友好；一些邻居是志愿者，他们有一技之长，帮人们解决问题；帮老人购物、打扫房屋；帮孩子们学习…… 其他 我打算为社区做点事：(1)…… (2) …… My dream community __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My dream community My dream community is very big, but there aren’t many people living there. There are lots of trees and beautiful flowers in the neighbourhood, so the air there is fresh. We have a big garden, a swimming pool and a playground. We can have a good time playing there. All my neighbours are nice and helpful. Some of them are volunteers with different skills. If we have any problems, they can help us. They also help old people do some shopping and clean their houses. If children have problems with their study, they will give them a helping hand. I will do some things for my neighbourhood. I am going to pick up the rubbish in the community centre. If my neighbor is not good at English, I will help her with English after school. My neighbourhood will be a good place to live in. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先描述理想社区的规模、居住人口数量，进而引出社区内的环境设施，如树木、花草、花园、游泳池、操场等； 第二步，接着说明社区里邻居的特点，他们乐于助人以及具体帮助居民的事情，如帮助老人购物、打扫房屋，辅导孩子学习等； 第三步，最后阐述自己会为社区做的事，表明这样的社区会是一个宜居的好地方。 [亮点词汇] ①lots of许多 ②in the neighbourhood在社区里 ③pick up捡起；清理 [高分句型] ①My dream community is very big, but there aren’t many people living there.（but表示转折关系，连接两个句子） ②If we have any problems, they can help us.（if引导条件状语从句） 7．假设你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友Tony想了解你的家及你的社区。请根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件。 提示： 1. 你家的位置、房子类型、房间布局； 2. 你所在社区的情况(如：基础设施、环境、邻居等) 要求： 1. 包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 3. 80词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tony, I’m glad to tell you something about my home and my community. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I really love my home and my community. What about yours? Write to me soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tony, I’m glad to tell you something about my home and my community. I live in a comfortable apartment on the fifth floor of a building in a great community. My apartment has a living room and dining area. Next to it is a modern kitchen. There are two bedrooms. One is my personal space, and the other is a guest room. Besides, there is a tidy bathroom. The community is wonderful. People can exercise in a fitness center, and there is a small but beautiful garden for relaxing. The environment is clean and quiet, with trees and flowers everywhere. My neighbors are very nice. We often meet in the hallway and have friendly conversations. I really love my home and my community. What about yours? Write to me soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：主要运用一般现在时； ③提示：对自家房屋布局和社区环境、设施以及邻里关系等要点的介绍，通过具体描述展现家与社区的特点，突出喜爱之情。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明写作意图，告知对方写信是为介绍自己的家与社区，让读者明确邮件主旨； 第二步，详细介绍自家情况，先说明居住在社区中某栋楼的五楼公寓，接着描述公寓内布局，包括客厅、餐厅、现代化厨房、两间卧室及整洁的浴室；然后介绍社区情况，提及社区内有健身中心供居民锻炼、美丽小花园可放松身心，环境干净安静且到处有花草树木，还有友善的邻里关系； 第三步，总结强调对家与社区的喜爱之情。 [亮点词汇] ①comfortable舒适的 ②modern现代的 ③friendly友好的 [高分句型] People can exercise in a fitness center, and there is a small but beautiful garden for relaxing. (there be句型) 8．根据要点提示，以“My neighbourhood”为主题写一篇短文介绍你的社区，词数70左右，可适当发挥。 【要点】* What is your neighbourhood like? * What are people in your neighbourhood like? * What do people often do to help each other? * Do you often do any voluntary work for your neighbours? * Do you like your neighbourhood? Why or why not? My neighbourhood __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My neighbourhood I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is a beautiful area with some tall buildings. My neighbours are very kind and friendly. They are always ready to help others. They help others by taking care of their pets and offering umbrellas on rainy days. There is also a community centre in my neighbourhood. Many people are volunteers there. And I’m one of them. I always help clean the parks at the weekend. I like my neighbourhood because I feel happy to live in my neighbourhood. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、介绍社区是什么样子的； 第二步、介绍社区里面的人是什么样子的以及人们经常做什么来互相帮助； 第三步、介绍自己是否经常为邻居做志愿者工作，是否喜欢自己的社区以及原因。 [亮点词汇] ①be ready to准备好 ②take care of照顾 ③at the weekend在周末 [高分句型] ① I like my neighbourhood because I feel happy to live in my neighbourhood. (because引导原因状语从句) 重难语篇练习 9．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Emily对中国的社区生活很感兴趣。请你结合思维导图，给她写一封电子邮件，介绍你所在社区的情况。 请按需求选用参考词汇： Places: Community Centre; Fix-it Club; … Activities: give away old books; repair broken bicycles; take care of pets; do exercise; … 注意： 1. 词数90左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear Emily, I’m happy to tell you about my community. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your community? I’m looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Emily, I’m happy to tell you about my community. The people here are very friendly and helpful. There are many places in my community. We have a Community Centre where people can have parties and meetings. There is also a Fix-it Club where people repair broken bicycles. People often do different things. Some give away old books to those in need. Some take care of pets for others. And many people do exercise to keep fit. I really love my community. It makes me feel warm and comfortable. What about your community? I’m looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为向朋友介绍自己所在社区的电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：介绍自己所在社区的情况。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头表明很高兴向朋友介绍自己的社区。 第二步，中间详细描述社区的情况，包括友好的居民、社区里的场所（社区中心、修理俱乐部）以及人们常做的事（捐书、照顾宠物、锻炼等）。 第三步，结尾询问朋友社区的情况并期待回复。 [亮点词汇] ①friendly友好的 ②helpful有帮助的 ③repair修理 ④keep fit保持健康 [高分句型] ①There are many places in my community.（There be句型） ②We have a Community Centre where people can have parties and meetings.（定语从句） 10．根据下表提示，以My dream community 为题写一篇短文，词数90词左右。 要求： 1. 内容必须包括表中要点，省略号处可适当发挥。 2. 条理清楚、语句连贯。 概述 社区很大，居民不多 占地面积： 一万多平方米 环境 小区周围满是鲜花和树木 邻居：善良且友好 一些邻居是志愿者，他们经常帮助人们解决各种问题。 位置 离上海不远，开汽车到上海只需要半个小时； 设施 有个运动场 (playground)，人们喜欢在那里做运动； 有个篮球场 (court) 和一个游泳池。周末…… 希望 有个大型超市，因为…… My dream community _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My dream community My dream community is very big, but there aren’t many people in it. It has an area of over 10,000 (ten thousand ) square metres. Trees and colourful flowers are all over the neighbourhood. My neighbours are kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They often help people with all kinds of problems. My dream community is not far from Shanghai. It takes only half an hour by car. There is a playground in it. People like doing sports there. There’s also a basketball court and a swimming pool. At weekends, I can play basketball with friends or go swimming there. I hope there is a large supermarket, because I like shopping very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我理想的社区的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“以My dream community 为题写一篇短文”来引出中重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“环境、位置、设施等”几个方面重点介绍我理想的社区的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“我希望有一个大型超市”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb with sth帮助某人做某事； ②all kinds of各种各样的； ③far from远离； ④like doing sth喜欢做某事。 [高分句型] ①There’s also a basketball court and a swimming pool. (“there be”句型) ②I hope there is a large supermarket, because I like shopping very much. (because引导的原因状语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $