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英 语
七年级下册 WY
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Unit 1 The secrets of happiness
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.令人兴奋的 __________
exciting
【解析】链接狂K
exciting的详细讲解见狂K重点P2。
2.同意;赞同 _______
3.认为 _________
4.令某人惊讶的是 ____________________
5.来自 _______________________
agree
believe
to one’s surprise
spring from/come from
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6.幸福的关键 ______________________
7.使某人快乐 _______________
8.与某人分享某物 ___________________
the key to happiness
make sb happy
share sth with sb
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二、佳句模仿
9.【教材原句】Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.
(spring from)
→仿写:幸福来自人们之间的照顾与关爱。
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Happiness springs from the care and love among people.
10.【教材原句】I think love is the most important one.(the+形容词最高级)
→仿写:在那之后,我了解到爱是最重要的事情。
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After that, I learnt that love is the most important thing.
11.【教材原句】The book was full of magic.(full of)
→仿写:当他收到惊喜礼物时,心里充满了幸福。
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His heart was full of happiness when he received the surprise gift.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Helping othersmakes me happy. I think we should help others when
necessary.(开篇点明主题)
One day, on my way home from school, (介绍地点) I noticed an old
lady. .who was struggling to carry a heavy bag of groceries.(介绍人物) I
stopped to ask her what the matter was. She said she lived alone and the bag
was too heavy for her to lift.(介绍人物遇到的问题)Firstly, I offered to help
her carry the bag.Then, I walked slowly beside her to make sure she didn’t
fall.After that, when we reached her doorstep, I helped her take the groceries
inside.Finally, she thanked me with a big smile and said I was a kind child.
(用Firstly、Then、After that、Finally具体描述帮助老人的过程)
I was full of happiness and proud.I think a little help can make a big
difference to others.(总结感受,升华主旨)#1.2
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
父母之爱是最温暖的港湾。受伤时,父亲背着你奔向医院的场景、母亲彻夜
守护的身影、一粥一饭的关怀,都藏着无声却深沉的爱。这份爱治愈伤痛,温暖
心灵,是岁月里最珍贵的守护。你认为爱能让我们幸福吗?以“Love Is the Key
to Happiness”为题,结合你的经历谈谈感受,写一篇短文,不少于80词。
内容包括:
1.What did you experience?
2.How did you feel?
3.What do you learn from it?
Love Is the Key to Happiness
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第一步 审
体 裁:记叙文
时 态:以一般过去时和一般现在时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:事故发生、父母的悉心照料、作者感悟等
写作结构:总—分—总
第二步 列#1.2.3
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What does happiness mean to you? For
me, love is the key to happiness.Now let me
share my experience with you. ①
Last month, I hurt my leg in a football
match. My father carried me on his back to the
hospital. I had to be in hospital for a week.
My mother cooked delicious food and stayed
with me all night long.My parents took care of
me so carefully that I became well soon. ② That
touched me greatly.
After that, I learnt that love is the most
important thing.It can move us, change us and
give us a life full of happiness. ③ ________________________________
①用祈使句引入主题。
②“so… that…”结构描述了父
母的悉心照料使“我”很快愈
合,紧扣主题。
③结尾进一步阐述爱的作用,
即爱能够感动我们、改变我
们,并给予我们充满幸福的生
活,对“爱是幸福的关键”这一
观点进行了总结和升华,使文
章的主题更加深刻和明确。
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这篇习作采用 “总—分—总” 的结构,开篇点明主题,中间用具体事例展开,结
尾总结升华,逻辑连贯,层次分明,让读者能够清晰地把握作者的行文思路和核
心观点。文中the key to happiness、share my experience with you、carried me
on his back to the hospital、the most important thing、give us a life full of
happiness等表达表明了作者灵活运用所学知识的能力,是文中的亮点。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025内蒙古赤峰期末】陪伴家人,你会幸福,笑对人生,你会幸福,好友
相聚,你会幸福,努力奋斗,你会幸福,酣畅淋漓地运动,你会幸福,享用一顿
美食,你会幸福,亲近自然,你会幸福,帮助他人,你会幸福…… 英语校报正在
开展以“如何获得幸福”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你以“How to Be
Happy”为题,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
How to Be Happy 1.love…
2.stay positive…
3.help others…
4.…
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要求:1.短文词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和人名;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Be Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life.
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【参考范文】
How to Be Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life.
As for me, there are several ways to achieve it.First, love your
family.Spend time with them, like having dinners together or
chatting.These things can bring warmth.Second, stay positive.When
facing problems, a smile and a hopeful heart help a lot.Third, help
others.Give a hand to those in need, such as volunteering, which makes
you feel useful.Also, enjoy sports.Running or playing ball games lets
you release stress and feel energetic.
By doing these, happiness will surely fill your life.
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