摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“旅行”话题写作,涵盖话题词汇(如trip, lead)、佳句仿写(如travel along, take a train)、范文模板及实战演练,通过从词句积累到篇章构建的学习支架,帮助学生逐步掌握写作技能。
其亮点在于以语言能力培养为核心,通过教材原句仿写和高分词句储备夯实基础,结合范文赏析中的“审、列”步骤提升思维品质,实战演练任务(如推荐唐山景点邮件)强化学习能力。教师可利用结构化资源高效教学,学生能在实践中提升写作应用能力。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级下册 JJ
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Unit 1 A trip to the Silk Road
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单元话题与写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.领路;导致 v. ______
2.旅行 n. ______
3.同学 n. ___________
4.梦想;梦n. _______
lead
trip
classmate
dream
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5.美味的菜肴 ________________
6.学习;了解 _____________
7.带……参观 ________________
8.拍照 ______________________
delicious dish
learn about
show... around
take a picture/photo
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】We will travel along the Silk Road.(travel along)
→仿写:如果你沿着这条街走,你会发现一个大公园。
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If you travel along this street, you will find a big park.
10.【教材原句】Then we will take a train to Lanzhou.(take a train)
→仿写:我们将乘火车去山里过暑假。
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We will take a train to the mountains for our summer vacation.
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11.【教材原句】I’m looking forward to visiting the Mogao Caves.(look forward
to doing)
→仿写:我们期待这周末看足球比赛。
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We look forward to watching the soccer/football match this weekend.
12.【教材原句】Lanzhou is the capital city of Gansu.(the capital city of...)
→仿写:我们下个月要去参观加拿大的首都。
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We will visit the capital city of Canada next month.
13.【教材原句】Come discover the secrets of this ancient city! (the secrets of...)
→仿写:他们计划去参观博物馆,以发现历史的秘密。
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They plan to visit the museum to discover the secrets of history.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
The May Day holiday is coming. We will have a three-day trip to Xi’an.
(开头点明旅行目的地)
We plan to take a train to Xi’an (交通方式).We will arrive there at 6:30
in the morning on Monday (时间安排).First, we will walk along the City Wall,
and then we will visit the Terracotta Warriors.On Tuesday, we will visit Shaanxi
History Museum. We will head to Datang Everbright City at night.On Wednesday
we will visit the Drum Tower and the Bell Tower. We will come back in the
afternoon. It only costs 500 yuan (使用First、then、On Tuesday等串联具体的旅
游活动计划).
I’m sure we will have a great time!(对旅行的期待)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2024河北保定期末]暑假即将来临,你在美国的笔友Lucy来信想了解一下
你的假期安排,请你根据来信,以李华的身份写一封信回复她。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you? Summer holiday is coming. Will you take a trip? What
other things will you do? Can you tell me your summer holiday plan?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lucy
注意:
1.回信中须包含来信中所有问题,可适当发挥;
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2.信中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3.词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to hear from you. Everything is fine here. Now let me tell you
about my plan for the summer holiday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:以一般将来时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:根据书信内容介绍假期安排
写作框架:总—分—总
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第二步 列#4
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Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to hear from you. Everything is fine
here. Now let me tell you about my plan ① for the
summer holiday. ①tell sb about sth展现作
者想要介绍的内容。
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I will take a trip ② during the summer holiday.
I will go to Sanya with my parents.As for ② other
things, I will do exercise ② every day to keep
healthy. I plan to learn ② cooking from my mother.In
my free time ② , I plan to read some meaningful
books. Besides, I will also go to the park or other
places to clean up ② to protect the environment.
I’m looking forward to ② it. I’m sure I’ll have
a good holiday ③ .
Yours,
Li Hua ②准确运用take a trip、as
for、do exercise、plan to
do sth、in one’s free
time、clean up等短语;
look forward to为本单元
短语,作者学以致用,使
文章更有可读性。
③句式多样,运用宾语从
句能让文章更显灵动。
续表
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开头直接引出要介绍假期安排;中间部分从跟谁去度假、计划做哪些活动、去哪
些地方等几个方面介绍假期生活,透露着细致的规划感,使读者读起来就像跟着作
者提前“云游”了一趟;结尾表明对这样的假期充满期待。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025河北唐山期末】假如你是大明,你的笔友Bill今年暑假要来唐山旅行,
请根据下面的提示,给他写一封电子邮件,向他推荐几个唐山适合游览的地方,
并说明理由。
Places Reasons
the South Lake Park go boating, ride a bike
the Tangshan Banquet
(唐山宴) eat delicious food, watch shadow plays
(皮影戏)
the science museum watch the science exhibits, play with robots
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要求:1.邮件须包括提示中推荐的三个地点和理由,可适当发挥;
2.邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3.词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Bill,
I’m happy that you’ll come to Tangshan this summer vacation. There are
some great places you shouldn’t miss. ____
I’m sure you’ll have a great time in Tangshan.
Yours,
Daming
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【参考范文】
Dear Bill,
I’m happy that you’ll come to Tangshan this summer vacation.There
are some great places you shouldn’t miss.
The South Lake Park is really fun.You can go boating on the
lake.It’s relaxing.You can also ride a bike around the park.The fresh
air will make you feel great.The Tangshan Banquet is a wonderful place
for food and shows.There are lots of special dishes there.And the
shadow plays are very interesting.It’s also a good idea to go to the
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science museum.You can watch different science exhibits.You can even
play with robots.It’s so much fun!
I’m sure you’ll have a great time in Tangshan.
Yours,
Daming
【解析】知识拓展
have a great time=have a good time=enjoy oneself玩得开心
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