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鲁教(五四学制)八下Unit 8 写作专项
The Special Product in My Town
写作目标
结合本单元“谈论产品的制作材料、产地及特色”的核心目标,能写一篇介绍家乡特色产品的短文,内容包括:产品名称、制作材料/产地、制作方式及产品的特别之处。
1. 能正确使用一般现在时的被动语态(be made of/from/in/by)描述产品(本单元核心语法);
2. 能运用本单元与产品、制作相关的词汇(如material, produce, make, famous, special, traditional, process等)撰写短文 ;
3. 能遵循“总述特色—具体介绍—说明特别之处”的三段式结构,语言简洁流畅、逻辑清晰,贴合本单元“介绍产品”的交际场景 。
题目解析
1. 体裁:说明文(产品介绍),介绍家乡的特色产品,需遵循“点明产品—介绍制作细节—说明特别之处”的结构,契合本单元“Talk about what products are made of and where they were made”的核心目标。
2. 人称:以第三人称为主,客观介绍产品的相关信息,少量使用第一人称(I/we)表达感受,符合产品介绍类短文的人称使用规范,完全贴合教材写作要求。
3. 时态:核心用一般现在时的被动语态(be made of/from/in/by)描述产品的材料、产地和制作,正确运用被动语态的基本结构(本单元重点语法),难度适配八年级学生水平 。
4. 核心要求
· 内容:写清家乡特色产品的名称、制作材料/产地、制作方式,以及产品的特别之处,无冗余表述;
· 格式:包含标题、三段式正文,无需书信格式,与前几单元讲解格式完全统一,贴合说明文基本规范;
· 字数:80-120词,句子简洁、重点突出,合理嵌入被动语态核心句式 。
典型例题
你的家乡一定有独具特色的产品(食物、手工艺品均可),请你以“The Special Product in My Town”为题,写一篇三段式短文,按照以下要求完成写作:
要点
1. 第一段:点明家乡的特色产品,说明产品的知名度;
2. 第二段:介绍产品的制作材料、产地,以及简单的制作方式;
3. 第三段:说明这款产品的特别之处,以及人们喜爱它的原因。
思路点拨
1. 第一段(总述特色,简洁点题):开篇直接点明家乡的特色产品,用“be famous for”说明产品的知名度,一句话点题,无冗余;
2. 第二段(具体介绍,核心语法):用本单元核心被动语态,介绍产品的制作材料(be made of/from)、产地(be made in),简要说明制作方式,贴合教材3b核心要求;
3. 第三段(说明特色,总结收尾):简洁说明产品的特别之处,以及家乡人乃至外地人喜爱它的原因,呼应主题,让三段式结构完整、逻辑清晰。
写作模板
第一段:点明产品,说明知名度
写作目的:简洁点题,说明家乡的特色产品及知名度;
必写要素:家乡+特色产品+be famous for句式;
基础句式:My town is famous for _______(产品名称). It is a traditional product in our town, and many people love it very much.
第二段:介绍制作细节,运用被动语态
写作目的:介绍产品材料、产地、制作方式,核心运用被动语态,无废话;
必写要素:制作材料(be made of/from)+ 产地/制作方(be made in/by)+ 简单制作方式;
基础句式:It is made of/from _______(材料). It is made in _______(具体产地) by local people. It is made by hand, and the making process is simple but careful.
第三段:说明特别之处,总结收尾
写作目的:说明产品的特别之处,说明人们喜爱它的原因,简洁收尾;
必写要素:特别之处 + 人们的喜爱/产品的意义;
基础句式:This product is special because _______(特别之处). It tastes good/looks beautiful, and it is also a symbol of our town’s culture.
范文
英文
The Special Product in My Town
My town is famous for paper cutting. It is a traditional handcraft in our town, and it’s well-known among local people and visitors.(点题+知名度,贴合教材3b)
It is made of red paper. It is made in the central street of our town by local old craftsmen. It is made by hand: the paper is folded first, then cut into different shapes with scissors.(制作细节,本单元核心:被动语态)
This product is special because it has a long history. The patterns are about flowers and animals, which stand for good luck. It’s not only beautiful but also a symbol of our traditional culture.(特别之处+总结)
中文翻译
我家乡的特色产品
我的家乡以剪纸闻名。它是我们镇上的传统手工艺品,在当地人和游客中都很有名。
它由红纸制成,产自我们镇的中心街道,由当地的老工匠制作。它是纯手工制作的:先把红纸折叠,再用剪刀剪成不同的形状。
这款产品的特别之处在于它有着悠久的历史。剪纸的图案多是花草和动物,代表着美好祝福。它不仅造型精美,还是我们传统文化的象征。
素材积累
短语
1. be famous for — 因……而闻名
2. be made of — 由……制成(能看出原材料)
3. be made from — 由……制成(看不出原材料)
4. be made in — 在……制作/生产
5. be made by — 由……制作(人/工匠)
6. traditional product/handcraft — 传统产品/手工艺品
7. by hand — 手工制作
8. local people — 当地人
9. stand for — 代表;象征
10. traditional culture — 传统文化
基础句型
基础句型
仿写句子
My town is famous for _______.
My town is famous for green tea.
It is made of/from _______.
It is made from fresh tea leaves.
It is made in _______ by _______.
It is made in the mountains by local farmers.
It is special because _______.
It is special because it tastes fresh and sweet.
It is not only _______ but also _______.
It is not only delicious but also healthy.
好句集锦
1. My hometown is famous for clay art, which is a traditional handcraft with a long history.(我的家乡以泥塑闻名,它是一种有着悠久历史的传统手工艺品。)
2. It is made of a special kind of clay and made by hand by local craftsmen.(它由一种特殊的黏土制成,由当地工匠手工打造。)
3. This product is special because it is made carefully and every piece has a unique pattern.(这款产品的特别之处在于它制作精细,每一件都有独一无二的图案。)
谚语
1. East or west, home is best.(金窝银窝,不如自己的草窝。)
2. Traditional art is the treasure of a place.(传统工艺是一方水土的瑰宝。)
学生写作填空练习版
The Special Product in My Town
My town is famous for _______(产品名称,如green tea/paper cutting). It is a _______(traditional) product in our town, and it’s well-known among local people and visitors.
It is made of/from _______(材料,如red paper/tea leaves). It is made in _______(具体产地,如the central street/the mountains) by _______(local people/craftsmen). It is made _______(by hand), and the making process is simple but careful.
This product is special because _______(特别之处,如it has a long history/it tastes fresh). It _______(looks beautiful/tastes good), and it is also a symbol of our town’s _______(culture/tradition).
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