Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle 建议信(单元同步写作讲义)英语人教版选择性必修第三册

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学段 高中
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教材版本 高中英语人教版选择性必修第三册
年级 高二
章节 Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle
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本讲义聚焦高中英语选修第三册Unit 2建议信写作这一核心知识点,系统梳理建议信的体裁结构(说明目的、提出建议、表达祝愿),通过常用表达积累、高考真题(如2026八省联考Peter选志愿者活动建议信)与学生案例(王璐戒糖运动、乔治换放松方式)分析,构建从基础表达、逻辑组织到实际应用的学习支架,助力学生掌握建议信写作要点。 该资料特色在于以核心素养为导向,语言能力层面提供多样化句式模板与升级策略(如虚拟语气、倒装句运用),思维品质层面通过案例问题分析培养学生逻辑推理与建议合理性判断能力,学习能力层面设计分层练习(基础词性转换、提升题情境写作、高考真题演练)。课中教师可依托案例与真题引导学生实践,课后学生能通过模板与练习巩固知识,有效查漏补缺,提升应用文写作综合能力。

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选修第三册 Unit 2单元写作指导与演练(含高考真题+原创题) Write a Letter for Advice 单元写作早知道 写作任务 本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信是应用文的常用体裁。建议信是写信者向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。建议信可以写给个人,也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就某个问题提出自己的看法或建议。 建议信的正文一般可以分为三部分: 第一部分:说明目的; 第二部分:提出建议; 第三部分:表达祝愿。 常用表达 1. I am writing to offer you some suggestions. 2. I would like to give you some advice on… 3. It is advisable for you to do… 4. You had better do… 5. It would be better if you could… 6. I suggest that you (should) do… 7. What you need to do is… 8. In my opinion / As far as I’m concerned… 9. Only in this way can you… 10. I believe these suggestions will be helpful to you. 11. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 12. I’m looking forward to your reply. 单元话题 真题展示 高考链接 建议信 2026·八省联考 建议信是高考应用文的热点话题。可以是对某个人的问题的建议,也可以对学校,政府及特定团体和组织的建议。 Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to Peter below. 假定你是李华,你所在的城市有两个活动正在招募志愿者,一个为越野跑(cross-country running),另一个为书法比赛(calligraphy competition)。你的交换生朋友Peter不知道选择哪一个参加,向你寻求建议。请你写一封邮件,内容包括: 1. 给出建议; 2. 说明理由。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答; 3. 开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I am thrilled to hear you're interested in being a volunteer. Yours, Li Hua 本单元写作相关内容为两位青少年参加健康生活夏令营后,向编辑分享自身生活方式的问题及改变,王璐戒糖运动、乔治换放松方式,均收获了身心健康的改善。 name Problems Suggestions Reasons Wang Lu She hardly felt well physically or mentally, often felt sleepy and dizzy, lacked passion, got the flu easily and suffered from many toothaches because of too much sugar in her meals. 1. Eat nothing with sugar, stop buying sweets, biscuits and sugary drinks, and bring sugar-free snacks when going out with friends.2. Exercise regularly, go outside for at least 30 minutes every day to do active things like playing table tennis, badminton, skateboarding or taking a long walk. 1. A dentist told her that too much sugar had damaged her teeth and health.2. Regular exercise can improve physical and mental health, make her stronger and more dynamic.3. Changing herself can help her take control of her own life. George Fielding After starting high school, he felt stressed out and always relaxed by playing computer games day and night, which made him even more worn out afterwards. 1. Quit playing computer games and replace them with other relaxing activities.2. Try activities like rock climbing, bowling, watching comedies and playing basketball to relax. 1. Playing computer games day and night is bad for his health and makes him tired, so adjusting lifestyle is very important.2. Replacing computer games with other activities can help him relax better, improve his health and happiness.3. Changing himself for the better may help change the world for the better. 段落 内容 句子设计 第一段 明确王璐和乔治的生活方式问题,以及两人写信分享自身改变的目的 You wrote in your letter that you had health and lifestyle problems after attending the summer camp. I understand how you feel. I am writing to offer my suggestions. 第二段 针对两人的问题,提出戒糖运动、用健康方式替代游戏的具体建议及好处 I think you can try quitting sugary foods and exercising regularly. This will give you a chance to improve your physical health. It will also help you feel more energetic. You can also replace computer games with outdoor activities because they can relax you and strengthen your body. I'm sure that these changes will make you better. 第三段 对王璐和乔治的改变表示肯定,并送上祝愿 I hope my suggestions are of help to you. 【小试牛刀】 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【必备句式】 第一部分:说明写信的目的 套语: 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients(顾客). 我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法,以吸引更多顾客。 4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here. 你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions. 很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. 很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议。 第二部分:介绍详情、说明原因 套语: (1) 它将于下午两点钟开始,四点钟结束,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。 It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. (2) 我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。 We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. (3) 下午,我们会一起…… During the afternoon, we’ll...together. (4) 记得带上水和午餐。 Remember to take water and lunch with you. (5) 顺便说一下,你可以乘坐322路公交车,它会直接把你带到俱乐部。 By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (6) 我知道你的母语是英语,还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。 I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. (7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语,这会是一个很好的机会。 Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。 I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 第三部分:提出建议 套语: 我建议…… I’d like to suggest that… May I suggest that…? In my opinion… I would like to make a recommendation that… I am writing to advise… If I were you, I would… 第四部分:希望采纳建议,并表示谢意,盼望回复 套语: 1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:有志者事竟成。 2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。 3. Best wishes! (给你)最美好的祝愿! 4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. 无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work! 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运。 6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. 我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我。 【必背模板】 模板① Dear________, You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容). I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your________________(祝愿). Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 模板② Dear_______, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________. (可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下) As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果, 给对方以行为的信心和决心). I hope ____________(表达愿望)。 Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【升级策略】 1. 建议信写作注意事项 建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,不是投诉信。观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。 2. 写作方法 ① 首段: a. 简介自己,不要罗嗦; b. 说明目的,注意语气。 ② 主体: a. 提出具体建议; b. 首先肯定优点,再写改进内容,否则会变成投诉信; c. 经常进行交流,注意对方感受,时时提到你和我,否则容易跑题写成议论文。 ③尾段:总结建议,注意礼貌,使对方易于接受。 3. 写作流程图 说明写信目的 介绍详情、说明原因 提出建议 提出希望采纳建议,并表示谢意,盼望回复 (25-26高二下·山西·月考)假定你是李华,你的朋友Tom最近在交友方面遇到了困难,感到很焦虑,请你给他写封建议信,帮助他改善人际关系,内容包括: 1.你的建议: 2.你的祝愿。 注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右: 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, I know you’ve been feeling anxious lately because you’re facing difficulties in making friends. Here are some suggestions that might help. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards. Li Hua 审题 1.文体:应用文(建议信) 2.时态:一般现在时、一般将来时为主 3.人称:第一人称(提建议),第二人称(描述对方问题) 谋篇 第一段:点明对方交友焦虑的问题,说明写信目的。 第二段:给出具体建议。 第三段:表达祝愿。 遣词造句 【核心词汇】 1. anxious 2. make friends 3. difficulties 4. participate 5. group activities 6. communicate 7. listen attentively 8. respect 9. relieve anxiety 10. friendship 【连词成句】 1. Here are some suggestions that might help you. 2. You can actively participate in group activities to meet more people. 3. You should listen attentively when communicating with others. 4. This shows your respect and helps you build good relationships. 5. I hope these suggestions can relieve your anxiety. 6. You will make more wonderful friends. 【句式升级】 1. 将2、3、4句优化: ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 将5、6句合成一句: ___________________________________________________________________________________________组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【第一部分 基础题】 ​​一、词性转换训练​​ (一)将下列动词转换为名词或形容词,用于建议句式: 1.suggest → (n.) ______ → (adj.) ______ 2.advise → (n.) ______ → (adj.) ______ 3.improve → (n.) ______ (二)用括号内单词的正确形式填空: 1.The teacher ​​recommended​​ (recommend) that students ​​(take)​​ notes during lectures. 2.It’s ​​essential​​ (essence) to ​​balance​​ (balance) study and rest. 二、句子仿写改写​​ 基础层:结构调整 1.原句:You should join the club. It helps you make friends. → 合并为复合句:______ → 用非谓语动词改写:______ 2.原句:I think you can practice more. → 转为委婉建议:______ 提分层:高阶句型 1.原句:You must finish the project on time. → 虚拟语气:______ → 倒装句:______ 2.原句:Reading widely is good. → 强调重要性:______ 三、翻译句子​​ 要求:用建议信常用句式翻译,注意语气礼貌。 1.我建议你每天复习笔记。 2.为什么不参加志愿者活动呢? 3.重要的是保持积极心态。 【第二部分 提升题】 1. 假如你是李华,最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说,由于刚进入高中,不知道如何去结交新朋友,因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信: 1.表示问候和慰问; 2.提出以下建议: (1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动; (2)你的同学遇到麻烦时,去帮助他们; (3)你遇到困难时向同学求助。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 你的美国好友Tom即将升入大学,他想选择学习历史,但是又对计算机很感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件,对他提出建议。 注意: 1. 字数80字左右; 2. 可以增加细节,使行文流畅。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 假如你是李华,你对朋友王琳即将面临高考选科,请你帮忙给她建议。请你根据你对理解对她提出建议。 注意: 1. 字数80字左右。 2. 可以增加细节,使行文流畅。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【链接高考—经典诵读】 (2026八省联考)假定你是李华,你所在的城市有两个活动正在招募志愿者,一个为越野跑(cross-country running),另一个为书法比赛(calligraphy competition)。你的交换生朋友Peter不知道选择哪一个参加,向你寻求建议。请你写一封邮件,内容包括: 1. 给出建议; 2. 说明理由。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答; 3. 开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I am thrilled to hear you're interested in being a volunteer. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7 / 12 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $ 选修第三册 Unit 2单元写作指导与演练(含高考真题+原创题) Write a Letter for Advice 单元写作早知道 写作任务 本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信是应用文的常用体裁。建议信是写信者向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。建议信可以写给个人,也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就某个问题提出自己的看法或建议。 建议信的正文一般可以分为三部分: 第一部分:说明目的; 第二部分:提出建议; 第三部分:表达祝愿。 常用表达 1. I am writing to offer you some suggestions. 2. I would like to give you some advice on… 3. It is advisable for you to do… 4. You had better do… 5. It would be better if you could… 6. I suggest that you (should) do… 7. What you need to do is… 8. In my opinion / As far as I’m concerned… 9. Only in this way can you… 10. I believe these suggestions will be helpful to you. 11. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 12. I’m looking forward to your reply. 单元话题 真题展示 高考链接 建议信 2026·八省联考 建议信是高考应用文的热点话题。可以是对某个人的问题的建议,也可以对学校,政府及特定团体和组织的建议。 Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to Peter below. 假定你是李华,你所在的城市有两个活动正在招募志愿者,一个为越野跑(cross-country running),另一个为书法比赛(calligraphy competition)。你的交换生朋友Peter不知道选择哪一个参加,向你寻求建议。请你写一封邮件,内容包括: 1. 给出建议; 2. 说明理由。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答; 3. 开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I am thrilled to hear you're interested in being a volunteer. Yours, Li Hua 本单元写作相关内容为两位青少年参加健康生活夏令营后,向编辑分享自身生活方式的问题及改变,王璐戒糖运动、乔治换放松方式,均收获了身心健康的改善。 name Problems Suggestions Reasons Wang Lu She hardly felt well physically or mentally, often felt sleepy and dizzy, lacked passion, got the flu easily and suffered from many toothaches because of too much sugar in her meals. 1. Eat nothing with sugar, stop buying sweets, biscuits and sugary drinks, and bring sugar-free snacks when going out with friends.2. Exercise regularly, go outside for at least 30 minutes every day to do active things like playing table tennis, badminton, skateboarding or taking a long walk. 1. A dentist told her that too much sugar had damaged her teeth and health.2. Regular exercise can improve physical and mental health, make her stronger and more dynamic.3. Changing herself can help her take control of her own life. George Fielding After starting high school, he felt stressed out and always relaxed by playing computer games day and night, which made him even more worn out afterwards. 1. Quit playing computer games and replace them with other relaxing activities.2. Try activities like rock climbing, bowling, watching comedies and playing basketball to relax. 1. Playing computer games day and night is bad for his health and makes him tired, so adjusting lifestyle is very important.2. Replacing computer games with other activities can help him relax better, improve his health and happiness.3. Changing himself for the better may help change the world for the better. 段落 内容 句子设计 第一段 明确王璐和乔治的生活方式问题,以及两人写信分享自身改变的目的 You wrote in your letter that you had health and lifestyle problems after attending the summer camp. I understand how you feel. I am writing to offer my suggestions. 第二段 针对两人的问题,提出戒糖运动、用健康方式替代游戏的具体建议及好处 I think you can try quitting sugary foods and exercising regularly. This will give you a chance to improve your physical health. It will also help you feel more energetic. You can also replace computer games with outdoor activities because they can relax you and strengthen your body. I'm sure that these changes will make you better. 第三段 对王璐和乔治的改变表示肯定,并送上祝愿 I hope my suggestions are of help to you. 【小试牛刀】 参考范文 1 Dear Wang Lu and George, You wrote in your letter that you had health and lifestyle problems after attending the summer camp. I understand how you feel. I am writing to offer my suggestions. I think you can try quitting sugary foods and exercising regularly. This will improve your physical health and make you more energetic. You can also replace computer games with outdoor activities to relax and strengthen your body. These changes will surely help you. I hope my suggestions are of help to you. Best wishes! 参考范文 2 Dear Wang Lu and George, You told me in your letter about your lifestyle and health problems. I know you are worried about them. I am writing to give you some useful advice. It is a good idea to stop eating sweet food and take more exercise. This helps you stay healthy and active. Instead of playing computer games, you can do more outdoor activities. They are good for both your body and mind. I hope you can make great progress. Best wishes! 参考范文 3 Dear Wang Lu and George, You mentioned in your letter that you had some lifestyle and health problems. I really understand your situation. I am writing to share my advice with you. You should give up sugary foods and exercise often. This can make you healthier and more energetic. You can also take up outdoor activities instead of computer games to relax yourselves. I hope my advice will be helpful. Wish you good health! 【必备句式】 第一部分:说明写信的目的 套语: 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients(顾客). 我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法,以吸引更多顾客。 4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here. 你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions. 很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. 很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议。 第二部分:介绍详情、说明原因 套语: (1) 它将于下午两点钟开始,四点钟结束,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。 It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. (2) 我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。 We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. (3) 下午,我们会一起…… During the afternoon, we’ll...together. (4) 记得带上水和午餐。 Remember to take water and lunch with you. (5) 顺便说一下,你可以乘坐322路公交车,它会直接把你带到俱乐部。 By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (6) 我知道你的母语是英语,还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。 I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. (7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语,这会是一个很好的机会。 Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。 I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 第三部分:提出建议 套语: 我建议…… I’d like to suggest that… May I suggest that…? In my opinion… I would like to make a recommendation that… I am writing to advise… If I were you, I would… 第四部分:希望采纳建议,并表示谢意,盼望回复 套语: 1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:有志者事竟成。 2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。 3. Best wishes! (给你)最美好的祝愿! 4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. 无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work! 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运。 6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. 我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我。 【必背模板】 模板① Dear________, You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容). I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your________________(祝愿). Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 模板② Dear_______, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________. (可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下) As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果, 给对方以行为的信心和决心). I hope ____________(表达愿望)。 Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【升级策略】 1. 建议信写作注意事项 建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,不是投诉信。观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。 2. 写作方法 ① 首段: a. 简介自己,不要罗嗦; b. 说明目的,注意语气。 ② 主体: a. 提出具体建议; b. 首先肯定优点,再写改进内容,否则会变成投诉信; c. 经常进行交流,注意对方感受,时时提到你和我,否则容易跑题写成议论文。 ③尾段:总结建议,注意礼貌,使对方易于接受。 3. 写作流程图 说明写信目的 介绍详情、说明原因 提出建议 提出希望采纳建议,并表示谢意,盼望回复 (25-26高二下·山西·月考)假定你是李华,你的朋友Tom最近在交友方面遇到了困难,感到很焦虑,请你给他写封建议信,帮助他改善人际关系,内容包括: 1.你的建议: 2.你的祝愿。 注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右: 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, I know you’ve been feeling anxious lately because you’re facing difficulties in making friends. Here are some suggestions that might help. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards. Li Hua 审题 1.文体:应用文(建议信) 2.时态:一般现在时、一般将来时为主 3.人称:第一人称(提建议),第二人称(描述对方问题) 谋篇 第一段:点明对方交友焦虑的问题,说明写信目的。 第二段:给出具体建议。 第三段:表达祝愿。 遣词造句 【核心词汇】 1. anxious 焦虑的 2. make friends 交友 3. difficulties 困难 4. participate 参加 5. group activities 团体活动 6. communicate 交流 7. listen attentively 认真倾听 8. respect 尊重 9. relieve anxiety 缓解焦虑 10. friendship 友谊 【连词成句】 1. Here are some suggestions that might help you. 2. You can actively participate in group activities to meet more people. 3. You should listen attentively when communicating with others. 4. This shows your respect and helps you build good relationships. 5. I hope these suggestions can relieve your anxiety. 6. You will make more wonderful friends. 【句式升级】 1. 将2、3、4句优化: First, actively participate in group activities where you can meet various people. Second, listen attentively when communicating with others, which shows your respect and makes it easier to form good relationships. 2. 将5、6句合成一句: I truly hope these tips can relieve your anxiety and bring you more wonderful friendships. 组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 Dear Tom, I know you’ve been feeling anxious lately because you’re facing difficulties in making friends. Here are some suggestions that might help. First, actively participate in group activities where you can meet various people. Second, when communicating with others, listen attentively. This shows your respect and interest, making it easier to form good relationships. I truly hope these tips can relieve your anxiety and bring you more wonderful friendships. Best regards. Li Hua 【第一部分 基础题】 ​​一、词性转换训练​​ (一)将下列动词转换为名词或形容词,用于建议句式: 1.suggest → (n.) ______ → (adj.) ______ 2.advise → (n.) ______ → (adj.) ______ 3.improve → (n.) ______ (二)用括号内单词的正确形式填空: 1.The teacher ​​recommended​​ (recommend) that students ​​(take)​​ notes during lectures. 2.It’s ​​essential​​ (essence) to ​​balance​​ (balance) study and rest. 【参考答案】 (一)1.suggestion (n.), suggestive (adj.); 2.advice (n.), advisable (adj.); 3.improvement (n.) (二)1.recommended, take;2. essential, balance 二、句子仿写改写​​ 基础层:结构调整 1.原句:You should join the club. It helps you make friends. → 合并为复合句:______ → 用非谓语动词改写:______ 2.原句:I think you can practice more. → 转为委婉建议:______ 【参考答案】 You should join the club, which helps you make friends. Practicing more is advisable for you. I suggest that you practice more. / Why not practice more? 提分层:高阶句型 1.原句:You must finish the project on time. → 虚拟语气:______ → 倒装句:______ 2.原句:Reading widely is good. → 强调重要性:______ 【参考答案】 1.I strongly recommend that you (should) finish the project on time. Not only should you finish the project on time, but also you should check details carefully. 2.There is no denying that extensive reading plays a vital role in language learning. 三、翻译句子​​ 要求:用建议信常用句式翻译,注意语气礼貌。 1.我建议你每天复习笔记。 2.为什么不参加志愿者活动呢? 3.重要的是保持积极心态。 【参考答案】 1.I suggest that you review your notes daily. 2.Why not participate in volunteer activities? 3.It is crucial to maintain a positive attitude. 【第二部分 提升题】 1. 假如你是李华,最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说,由于刚进入高中,不知道如何去结交新朋友,因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信: 1.表示问候和慰问; 2.提出以下建议: (1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动; (2)你的同学遇到麻烦时,去帮助他们; (3)你遇到困难时向同学求助。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】 Dear Jenny, I’m really sorry to hear that you have trouble making friends with others after entering senior high school. I'd like to offer some personal advice to you. In fact,there is something you can do to improve this situation.In my opinion,it is a good solution for you to invite your classmates to take part in some activities after school.Then, try to help your classmates when they are faced with trouble in their lessons,which will help you make more friends. And you are also suggested to turn to your classmates bravely when you are struggling in your lessons. I believe you will make many new friends and have a happy school life there. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 2. 你的美国好友Tom即将升入大学,他想选择学习历史,但是又对计算机很感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件,对他提出建议。 注意: 1. 字数80字左右; 2. 可以增加细节,使行文流畅。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏】 Dear Tom, Having known that you have some trouble with the course election, I am more than glad to offer you some personal suggestions according to my own experience. Personally, I feel that it would be wise if you consider your hobbies and strengths , which may play a vital role in your future study. Besides, the most important thing you should bear in mind is that your university training is a preparation for your future career. There is no doubt that the field of computer science offers far wider job opportunities than history. I'm firmly convinced that in the foreseeable future, it will be essential for everyone to be equipped with computer skills to earn a living. I would recommend that you keep up your reading of history in your spare time. Thanks for trusting me. I hope my advice can help you make a wise decision. Yours Li Hua 3. 假如你是李华,你对朋友王琳即将面临高考选科,请你帮忙给她建议。请你根据你对理解对她提出建议。 注意: 1. 字数80字左右。 2. 可以增加细节,使行文流畅。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏】 Dear Wang Lin, Knowing that you are confused about selecting courses for College Entrance Exam, I am writing to give you some personal suggestions. First and foremost, you are supposed to pay enough attention to the universities requirements and your future development. Moreover, it’s of equal importance to choose what you are interested in and excel at. If I were you, I would choose science, because I think it is more useful and helpful in finding jobs in the future. Hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Should you have any problems, do remember that you are welcomed to share them with me. Best wishes! Yours Li Hua 【链接高考—经典诵读】 (2026八省联考)假定你是李华,你所在的城市有两个活动正在招募志愿者,一个为越野跑(cross-country running),另一个为书法比赛(calligraphy competition)。你的交换生朋友Peter不知道选择哪一个参加,向你寻求建议。请你写一封邮件,内容包括: 1. 给出建议; 2. 说明理由。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答; 3. 开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I am thrilled to hear you're interested in being a volunteer. Yours, Li Hua 【佳作欣赏1】 Dear Peter, I'm thrilled to hear you're interested in being a volunteer. Between the two choices, I strongly suggest signing up for the cross-country running volunteer team. For one thing, the event takes place along suburban trails. It's ideal for an exchange student to immerse yourself in natural surroundings. For another, you'll help with checkpoint guidance, water supply, and participant support, which lets you make friends with sports lovers. Above all, the energetic atmosphere will let you experience local sports culture. Volunteering for it is definitely a perfect way to enrich your exchange life! Looking forward to hearing your decision! Yours, Li Hua 【佳作欣赏2】 Dear Peter, I'm thrilled to hear you're interested in being a volunteer. Between the two choices, I strongly suggest signing up for the calligraphy competition volunteer program! For one thing, you'll help hand out rice paper, brushes and ink, enabling you to observe the beauty of traditional Chinese brushwork. For another, standing by contestants, you'll naturally pick up basic skills. Above all, judges' comments on works will let you glimpse how to appreciate this Chinese culture. Volunteering for it is definitely a perfect way to enrich your exchange life! Looking forward to hearing your decision! Yours, Li Hua 【佳作欣赏3】 Dear Peter, I am thrilled to hear you're interested in being a volunteer.I strongly recommend you choose the calligraphy competition. As you show great interest in traditional Chinese culture, you will have a great chance to appreciate wonderful works and feel the unique beauty of Chinese characters. Besides, you can communicate with art lovers and learn more about traditional culture. It is also a good chance to improve your Chinese and make new friends who share the same interest with you. I believe you will have a meaningful and unforgettable experience and learn a lot from this meaningful activity. Yours, Li Hua 7 / 12 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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