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北师大版英语八年级上册 Unit 2 写作专项
Safety Rules
一、写作目标
结合本单元“安全规则、must/mustn’t、have to/don’t have to、should/shouldn’t、不定代词”的核心目标,能写一篇短文介绍一项运动的安全规则,内容包括:运动名称、具体规则和遵守规则的重要性。
1. 能正确使用情态动词(must/mustn’t, should/shouldn’t, have to/don’t have to)和不定代词(someone, anyone, no one, something, anything)清晰表达安全要求。
2. 能运用本单元与安全、规则相关的词汇(如helmet, brake, zebra crossing, risk)撰写规则说明。
3. 遵循“引言-正文-结论”的三段式结构,语言客观、条理清晰,字数控制在80-120词,贴合八年级上册日常写作场景。
二、题目解析
1. 体裁:应用文(安全规则说明),用于在学校公告栏发布运动安全须知,语气正式、信息明确。
2. 人称:以第二人称(you)为主,直接向读者提出要求。
3. 时态:核心使用一般现在时陈述规则和建议。
4. 核心要求
· 内容:写清运动名称、具体的安全规则(使用情态动词),以及遵守规则的重要性。
· 格式:包含引言(点明运动和目的)、正文(逐条说明规则)、结论(强调安全第一)三部分,结构完整。
· 字数:80-120词,合理运用情态动词和不定代词,贴合单元语法要求。
三、典型例题
你要在学校的英文公告栏上发布一项运动的安全规则。请你写一篇短文,介绍这项运动的安全须知。
要点:
1. 你选择介绍哪项运动?
2. 有哪些具体的安全规则?(使用must/mustn’t, should/shouldn’t)
3. 为什么遵守这些规则很重要?
四、思路点拨
1. 第一段(引言):用“Riding a bike is good for you. When you are on the road, you must always follow the rules of safe cycling.”点明运动和遵守规则的必要性。
2. 第二段(正文):使用“You should...”, “You must...”, “Don’t...”等句式,逐条说明具体的安全规则,如检查车辆、佩戴头盔、遵守交通信号等。
3. 第三段(结论):用“Remember: Don’t take risks. Safety comes first.”总结,强调安全第一的重要性。
五、写作模板(逐段拆解,贴合单元目标)
第一段:引言(点明运动 + 总述规则)
写作目的:引出话题,强调遵守规则的重要性。
必写要素:运动名称 + 总述规则
基础句式:[运动] is good for you. When you are [场景], you must always follow the rules of safe [运动].
示例:Riding a bike is good for you. When you are on the road, you must always follow the rules of safe cycling.
第二段:正文(具体规则 + 情态动词)
写作目的:详细说明安全规则,使用情态动词增强语气。
必写要素:具体规则 + 情态动词(should, must, don’t)
基础句式:You should [规则1]. You must [规则2]. Don’t [规则3]. Stop at [规则4].
示例:You should check your bike before you ride, e.g. the brakes. You must wear a helmet. Don’t ride on the sidewalk if you can. Stop at zebra crossings, and stop at red lights.
第三段:结论(强调安全 + 总结)
写作目的:总结全文,强调安全第一。
必写要素:安全提醒 + 总结
基础句式:Remember: Don’t take risks. [运动] is fun, but safety comes first.
示例:Remember: Don’t take risks. Cycling is fun, but safety comes first.
六、范文(中英对照 )
Safe Cycling
Riding a bike is good for you. When you are on the road, you must always follow the rules of safe cycling.
You should check your bike before you ride, e.g. the brakes. You must wear a helmet. Don’t ride on the sidewalk if you can. Don’t turn without using hand signals. Stop at zebra crossings, and stop at red lights. Don’t try to overtake cars, buses or trucks. You should lock your bike when you’re not using it.
Remember: Don’t take risks. Cycling is fun, but safety comes first.
中文翻译
安全骑行
骑自行车对身体有益。当你在路上时,必须始终遵守安全骑行的规则。
骑行前,你应该检查自行车,例如刹车。你必须佩戴头盔。如果可以的话,不要在人行道上骑行。转弯时必须使用手势信号。在斑马线和红灯前要停车。不要试图超越汽车、公交车或卡车。不使用自行车时,你应该把它锁好。
记住:不要冒险。骑行很有趣,但安全第一。
七、素材积累
短语
1. follow the rules 遵守规则
2. check your bike 检查自行车
3. wear a helmet 佩戴头盔
4. ride on the sidewalk 在人行道上骑行
5. hand signals 手势信号
6. zebra crossings 斑马线
7. take risks 冒险
8. safety comes first 安全第一
基础句型
基础句型
仿写句子
You should check your bike before you ride.
You should warm up before you play football.
You must wear a helmet.
You must follow the teacher’s instructions in PE class.
Don’t ride on the sidewalk if you can.
Don’t run in the hallway at school.
Remember: Don’t take risks. Safety comes first.
Remember: Don’t swim alone. Safety comes first.
好句集锦
1. When you are on the road, you must always follow the rules of safe cycling.(当你在路上时,必须始终遵守安全骑行的规则。)
2. You should check your bike before you ride, e.g. the brakes.(骑行前,你应该检查自行车,例如刹车。)
3. Remember: Don’t take risks. Cycling is fun, but safety comes first.(记住:不要冒险。骑行很有趣,但安全第一。)
谚语
1. Safety first.(安全第一。)
2. Better safe than sorry.(宁可事先谨慎,不要事后后悔。)
3. An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.(一分预防胜过十分治疗。)
4. Look before you leap.(三思而后行。)
八、学生写作填空练习版
Safe _______(运动,如Swimming)
_______(运动,如Swimming) is good for you. When you are at the pool, you must always follow the rules of safe _______(运动,如swimming).
You should _______(规则1,如warm up) before you go into the water. You must _______(规则2,如swim with a partner). Don’t _______(规则3,如swim in the deep end alone). Stop _______(规则4,如if you feel tired). You should _______(规则5,如take a shower after swimming).
Remember: Don’t take risks. _______(运动,如Swimming) is fun, but safety comes first.
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