Unit 2 Never Give Up 写作专项学案- 2025-2026学年教科版五四制英语八年级下册

Unit 2 Never Give Up 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“永不言弃，突破困境”主题，围绕盲人埃里克·魏亨麦尔自幼失明却坚持登山，最终成功登顶珠穆朗玛峰的核心故事，写一篇阐释“坚持的力量”、描述个人战胜困难的经历或表达对“永不放弃”品质理解的短文，达成以下目标： 1.能正确使用本单元“挑战与坚持”相关核心词汇（如blind、climb、challenge、determined、success、courage、disability、achieve、overcome、mountain等）及短语（give up、in the end、due to、not...until...、face the challenge、keep on、make one’s dream come true等）； 2.能熟练运用动词的现在分词与过去分词作定语，掌握“be dying to do sth.” “It’s + 形容词 + of sb. to do sth.”等句型，正确使用“though” “however” “finally” “because of”等衔接表达； 3.能按“主题引入→核心细节（故事解读/经历描述/品质阐释）→感悟与践行”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“坚守梦想，无畏前行”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁：主题阐释类说明文、成长经历类记叙文或品质感悟类短文，兼具励志性与感染力； 2.人称：第一人称（分享经历、表达感受）或第三人称（解读故事、阐释品质）为主； 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容：覆盖“1个核心角度（埃里克故事启示/个人战胜困难经历/坚持品质解读）、2-3个关键细节（故事核心/经历过程/品质内涵）、1个核心感悟（坚持的意义）”3个要点； ￮ 字数：80–100词，阐释准确深刻、描述真实具体或感悟真挚贴切，语言符合八年级学生水平，体现对“永不言弃”的深度思考。 思路点拨 1.开头：明确引入核心主题（如“埃里克的故事告诉我们，身体的缺陷无法阻挡追梦的脚步，坚持才是突破困境的唯一钥匙” “每个人都会遇到挫折，一次坚持不懈的经历让我懂得了‘永不放弃’的真正力量’’ “失明不是终点，而是另一种人生的起点，埃里克用登山壮举诠释了‘心有光芒，无畏前行’的真理’’），用简洁句式点明核心观点（如“困难如高山，坚持如登山杖，唯有紧握不放，方能登顶成功” “放弃只会留下遗憾，坚持才能书写奇迹；残疾不可怕，可怕的是失去追梦的勇气”），用引导性语言引出下文； 2.中间：若解读故事，按“遭遇困境→坚持训练→挑战高峰→成功登顶”展开，结合埃里克13岁失明、靠触觉和听觉登山、与朋友协作历时48天登顶珠峰的细节，阐释“永不放弃”的重要性；若描述个人战胜困难经历，聚焦“困境场景→面临挑战→坚持过程→最终成果”，用具体事例（如攻克学习难题、坚持体育训练、克服心理障碍）传递真实体验；若阐释坚持品质，围绕“坚持的内涵→坚持的意义→生活中的践行”，用具体场景（如学习中的坚持、技能培养中的不放弃）支撑观点，确保有说服力； 3.结尾：分享感悟（如“埃里克的成功不仅在于登顶珠峰，更在于他用坚持打破了‘失明即无能’的偏见，证明了意志的力量无穷无尽”“坚持的道路或许布满荆棘，但每一步坚持都在靠近成功，永不放弃终会收获惊喜”）或表达行动意愿（如“我会以埃里克为榜样，在面对困难时不退缩、不放弃，用坚持和勇气追逐梦想” “我会将埃里克的故事分享给身边人，让更多人懂得‘永不言弃’的价值，勇敢挑战自我”），呼应单元“Never Give Up”的核心主题，传递“坚守梦想，无畏前行”的积极态度。 写作模板（逐段拆解） 模板一：主题阐释——坚持铸就奇迹（Perseverance Creates Miracles） 第一段：故事引入与核心定位 基础句式：The story of the blind mountain climber Eric Weihenmayer teaches us a valuable lesson about perseverance. No matter how big the difficulty is, we can overcome it with determination and never giving up. 示例：What helps people overcome great difficulties and achieve impossible dreams? Eric Weihenmayer’s experience gives us a clear answer—it’s unshakable perseverance. 第二段：故事解读与细节支撑 基础句式：Eric has been blind since he was 13, but he never gave up his dream of mountain climbing. He climbs by feeling with his hands and listening to the sounds around him. With the help of his friends, he trained hard for years and decided to climb Mt. Qomolangma. After 48 tiring days of climbing, he finally reached the top. 示例：At the age of 13, Eric lost his eyesight, but this didn’t stop him from loving mountain climbing. He developed a special way to climb—feeling rocks with his hands and following the bells on his friends’ jackets. When he decided to climb Mt. Qomolangma, experts said it was impossible. But Eric and his friends didn’t give up. They climbed through bad weather and tiredness for 48 days. Finally, they stood on the top of the world’s highest mountain. 第三段：感悟总结与践行 基础句式：This story tells us that disability doesn’t mean failure. As long as we have courage and keep trying, we can make our dreams come true. We should learn from Eric and never give up when facing difficulties. 示例：From Eric’s story, I understand that nothing is impossible for a person with a determined heart. Blindness didn’t stop him, and difficulties shouldn’t stop us. In daily life, I will face my challenges bravely and keep trying. Perseverance will always lead us to success. 模板二：成长经历——一次永不放弃的挑战（A Challenge of Never Giving Up） 第一段：经历引入与背景铺垫 基础句式：I once faced a great difficulty in learning to play the guitar, but I overcame it with perseverance. This experience made me deeply understand the value of never giving up. 示例：Everyone has a “Mt. Qomolangma” in their life. An experience of learning to ride a bicycle made me realize the power of sticking to it. 第二段：经历细节与过程描述 基础句式：I used to fall off the bicycle again and again. My knees were hurt, and I wanted to give up. But I remembered Eric—he climbed mountains without seeing. So I kept practicing. I asked my dad for help, learned to balance, and tried again and again. Even when I felt tired, I told myself not to give up. 示例：When I first tried to ride a bicycle, I fell down many times. My legs were bruised, and I felt frustrated. But Eric’s story inspired me—he faced darkness but kept climbing. So I got up every time I fell. I practiced in the park after school, learned to control the direction and balance. Once I wanted to quit because of a bad fall, but I thought of Eric’s 48-day climbing. I kept going and slowly made progress. 第三段：经历感悟与收获 基础句式：Finally, I could ride the bicycle smoothly. This experience taught me that as long as we never give up, we can overcome any difficulty. I will keep this spirit in my study and life. 示例：After weeks of practice, I could ride the bicycle freely. That experience made me realize that “never give up” is not just a slogan, but a way to achieve dreams. Just like Eric conquered Mt. Qomolangma, we can conquer our own difficulties with perseverance. I will never give up when facing challenges in the future. 模板三：品质感悟——坚守梦想，无畏前行（Stick to Dreams, Move Forward Bravely） 第一段：品质引入与核心意义 基础句式：Perseverance is a precious quality that helps us overcome difficulties and achieve our dreams. Eric Weihenmayer’s story perfectly shows that never giving up can turn impossible into possible. 示例：In life, difficulties and setbacks are inevitable, but perseverance is the key to overcoming them. Eric’s success tells us the true meaning of “never give up.” 第二段：品质阐释与细节支撑 基础句式：First, perseverance means not giving up when facing failures. Eric fell many times while climbing, but he kept trying. Second, courage is necessary for perseverance. Eric dared to challenge Mt. Qomolangma even though he was blind. Finally, teamwork can support perseverance. Eric’s friends helped him a lot during the climbing. We should learn these qualities from him. 示例：True perseverance is about facing difficulties with courage and sticking to dreams no matter what. Eric didn’t let blindness become a barrier—he turned it into motivation to practice harder. In life, we should do the same: if we fail an exam, keep studying instead of being discouraged; if we can’t master a skill, keep practicing instead of giving up. Every small step of perseverance will lead to a big success. 第三段：感悟与行动呼吁 基础句式：Let’s learn from Eric Weihenmayer, cherish the spirit of never giving up, and bravely face all difficulties. With perseverance and courage, we can achieve our dreams and create our own miracles. 示例：Eric’s story is an inspiration for everyone. Let’s take him as an example—never give up on our dreams because of difficulties, and never lose courage because of setbacks. With perseverance, we can all overcome challenges and shine in our own lives. 范文 Never Give Up, and Dreams Will Come True Eric Weihenmayer’s story clearly shows that perseverance is the key to overcoming difficulties—never giving up can make impossible dreams come true. Eric has been blind since he was 13, but he never gave up his love for mountain climbing. He climbs by feeling with his hands and listening to the bells on his friends’ jackets. When he decided to climb Mt. Qomolangma, many experts said it was impossible. However, Eric and his friends trained hard and started the challenging climb. They spent 48 tiring days climbing through bad weather, and finally reached the top. This story deeply inspires me. In life, I also face difficulties in study and life. But from now on, I will learn from Eric—keep trying, never give up, and face challenges bravely. I believe that as long as we hold on to our dreams and never give up, we will achieve success in the end. 范文中文翻译 永不放弃，梦想终将实现 埃里克·魏亨麦尔的故事清楚地表明，坚持是克服困难的关键——永不放弃能让不可能的梦想成为现实。 埃里克13岁起就双目失明，但他从未放弃对登山的热爱。他靠双手触摸和聆听朋友夹克上的铃铛声登山。当他决定攀登珠穆朗玛峰时，许多专家都说这是不可能的。然而，埃里克和他的朋友们刻苦训练，开启了这场充满挑战的攀登。他们历经48天的疲惫攀登，克服了恶劣天气，最终成功登顶。 这个故事深深启发了我。在生活中，我在学习和生活中也会遇到困难。但从现在起，我会以埃里克为榜样——不断尝试，永不放弃，勇敢面对挑战。我相信，只要我们坚守梦想、永不放弃，最终一定会收获成功。 素材积累 核心短语 give up 放弃 in the end 最后；终于 due to 由于；因为 not...until... 直到……才…… face the challenge 面对挑战 keep on 继续；坚持 make one’s dream come true 实现某人的梦想 climb mountains 登山 reach the top 登顶 tiring days 疲惫的日子 bad weather 恶劣天气 overcome difficulties 克服困难 stick to 坚持 fall off 摔倒 try again and again 一次又一次尝试 with determination 带着决心 基础句型（含本单元重点） 基础句型 仿写句子 The story of Eric teaches us that ________. The story of Eric teaches us that perseverance can overcome any difficulty. I used to ________, but now I ________. I used to give up easily, but now I know to stick to my goals. To achieve success, we should ________ instead of ________. To achieve success, we should keep trying instead of giving up when facing failures. Even though ________, Eric still ________. Even though he was blind, Eric still climbed Mt. Qomolangma. It’s + 形容词 + of sb. to ________. It’s brave of Eric to challenge the highest mountain in the world. 好句集锦 1.Difficulties are not walls to stop us, but stairs to lift us up—just like Eric’s blindness didn’t stop his climbing dream. 2.Perseverance is the light in the dark; it guides us through difficulties and towards success. 3.Eric’s footprints on Mt. Qomolangma are not just marks of climbing, but proofs of perseverance and courage. 4.Success never comes easily; it belongs to those who never give up when facing hardships. 谚语 1.Where there is a will, there is a way.（有志者事竟成——契合单元主题） 2.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.（心之所向，无所不成——强调坚持的力量） 3.Keep on going never give up.（勇往直前，永不放弃——呼应单元核心） 学生写作填空练习版 版本一：主题阐释 The story of Eric Weihenmayer reveals the power of perseverance and never giving up. Eric has been ________ (困境，如blind since he was 13). But he never gave up his dream of ________ (目标，如climbing mountains). He climbed by feeling with his hands and listening to sounds. With his friends’ help, he spent ________ (时长，如48 days) climbing Mt. Qomolangma and finally ________ (结果，如reached the top). From this story, I learn that ________ (感悟，如perseverance can make impossible dreams come true). I will ________ (行动，如keep trying and never give up) in daily life. 版本二：成长经历 I once overcame ________ (困难，如learning to ride a bicycle) with perseverance. It was an unforgettable experience that taught me the value of never giving up. I used to ________ (过去的状态，如fall off the bicycle often) and wanted to give up. But I remembered Eric’s story. I ________ (行动1，如asked my dad for help) and ________ (行动2，如practiced every afternoon). Even when I felt tired, I told myself to keep going. This experience made me realize that ________ (感悟，如never giving up leads to success). I will ________ (行动，如face difficulties bravely) in the future. 版本三：品质感悟 Perseverance and never giving up are essential for achieving dreams. Eric’s story explains their true meaning. First, we should ________ (做法1，如not give up when facing failures) like Eric. He didn’t stop climbing even though he was blind. Second, we need to ________ (做法2，如have courage to challenge difficulties) instead of being afraid. Perseverance helps us ________ (好处，如overcome hardships and achieve goals). Let’s learn from Eric. I believe that with ________ (品质，如perseverance and courage), we can ________ (成果，如make our dreams come true) and create miracles. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $