内容正文:
Unit 4 Wang Wei’s Dream 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“追逐梦想”主题,围绕王伟凭借热爱与坚持实现工程师梦想的核心故事,写一篇阐释梦想的力量、描述个人追梦经历或规划未来梦想的短文,达成以下目标:
1.能正确使用本单元“梦想与成长”相关核心词汇(如dream、engineer、talent、faith、scholarship、tuition、extra、apply、breath、tear等)及短语(take apart、put back、apply for、take a deep breath、have faith in、give up、work hard at等);
2.能熟练运用表达能力的情态动词(can/could/will be able to),掌握“wish”从句表达愿望,正确使用“because” “so” “however” “finally”等衔接表达;
3.能按“梦想主题引入→核心细节(故事解读/追梦过程/梦想规划)→感悟与践行”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“坚守梦想,不懈奋斗”的单元主题。
题目解析
1.体裁:主题阐释类说明文、追梦经历类记叙文或梦想规划类应用文,兼具励志性与实用性;
2.人称:第一人称(分享经历、规划梦想)或第三人称(解读故事、客观阐释)为主;
3.核心要求
○ 内容:覆盖“1个核心角度(梦想的意义/个人追梦经历/未来梦想规划)、2-3个关键细节(追梦动力/克服困难/实现路径)、1个核心感悟(坚持的价值)”3个要点;
○ 字数:80–100词,阐释深刻有力、描述真实感人或规划具体可行,语言符合九年级学生水平,体现对梦想的执着追求。
思路点拨
1.开头:明确引入核心主题(如“王伟的故事告诉我们,梦想的力量足以战胜困难,坚持的脚步终将抵达成功” “每个人心中都有一个梦想,我的梦想是成为一名……” “没有梦想的人生如同没有航向的船,而追逐梦想的过程,就是人生最美的风景”),用简洁句式点明核心观点(如“梦想需要热爱浇灌,更需要坚持护航” “有梦想并为之奋斗,才能让人生更有意义”),用引导性语言引出下文;
2.中间:若解读故事,按“梦想萌芽→遇到困难→努力拼搏→梦想实现”展开,结合王伟拆解玩具、申请奖学金等细节,阐释“热爱、坚持、家人信任”的重要性;若描述个人追梦经历,聚焦“梦想起源→遇到挫折→努力坚持→阶段性收获”,用具体事例(如为实现绘画梦想坚持练习、克服懒惰)传递真实体验;若规划未来梦想,围绕“梦想目标→自身优势→努力方向”,用具体方法(如“努力学习相关科目” “参加实践活动”)支撑规划,确保可操作;
3.结尾:分享感悟(如“梦想不会自动实现,唯有脚踏实地、不懈奋斗,才能让梦想照进现实” “追逐梦想的路上,困难是常态,坚持是答案”)或表达行动意愿(如“我会以王伟为榜样,坚守梦想,勇敢追梦,不辜负时光与期待” “我会为自己的梦想制定详细计划,一步一个脚印走向成功”),呼应单元“Wang Wei's Dream”的核心主题,传递“热爱梦想、执着追求”的积极态度。
写作模板(逐段拆解)
模板一:主题阐释——梦想的力量(The Power of Dreams)
第一段:故事引入与核心定位
基础句式:Wang Wei's story is an inspiring example of how dreams can change our lives. With passion and persistence, he turned his childhood dream of being an engineer into reality.
示例:What can make a person overcome difficulties and keep moving forward? Wang Wei's story gives us the answer—its the power of dreams.
第二段:故事解读与细节支撑
基础句式:Ever since he was little, Wang Wei wanted to be an engineer. He often took toys apart and put them back together, showing great talent. However, his family couldnt afford his college tuition. With faith from his parents and his own hard work, he studied extra hard and applied for scholarships. Finally, he was accepted to college with a full scholarship.
示例:Wang Wei's dream of being an engineer started in his childhood. He loved taking things apart to see how they worked—even the television! His teachers noticed his talent, but his family had no money for college tuition. Instead of giving up, Wang Wei studied extra hard every day and applied for scholarships. His parents always had faith in him, which gave him great courage. In the end, he received the college acceptance letter with a full scholarship.
第三段:感悟总结与践行
基础句式:This story tells us that dreams are the driving force of life. As long as we have faith in our dreams and work hard, we can overcome any difficulties.
示例:From Wang Wei's experience, I understand that dreams need persistence and courage. No matter how hard the road is, we should never give up our dreams. In my life, I will keep my dream in mind and work hard for it. I believe that with effort, my dream will come true too.
模板二:追梦经历——我的追梦之路(My Journey to Chase Dreams)
第一段:经历引入与背景铺垫
基础句式:I have a dream of becoming a painter. This dream has been with me since I was a child, and I have been working hard to make it come true.
示例:Everyone has a dream, and mine is to be a writer. This dream started when I read my first storybook, and it has guided me through many difficult times.
第二段:经历细节与过程描述
基础句式:At first, I struggled with drawing realistic pictures. My teacher told me to practice more. So I drew every day after school, even when I felt tired. I also joined the school art club to learn from others. Gradually, my skills improved, and I won a prize in a school art competition.
示例:Writing was not easy for me at first. I often didnt know what to write, and my articles were short and boring. But I didnt give up. I read a lot of books to learn writing skills, and I kept a diary every day to practice. Whenever I felt discouraged, my parents encouraged me to keep going. Last year, my short story was published in the school magazine, which made me more confident.
第三段:经历感悟与收获
基础句式:This journey has taught me that chasing dreams requires persistence. I will keep practicing and never give up. I believe that one day, I will become a great painter.
示例:My追梦 journey has taught me a valuable lesson: there is no shortcut to success. Only through continuous effort and never giving up can we get closer to our dreams. I will keep reading and writing, and I hope to become a famous writer in the future.
模板三:梦想规划——我的未来梦想(My Future Dream)
第一段:规划引入与核心目标
基础句式:My future dream is to become a doctor. I want to help sick people get better and bring hope to their families.
示例:As a junior high school student, I have a clear dream for my future—I want to be a scientist who studies environmental protection.
第二段:具体规划与实现路径
基础句式:To achieve this dream, I will first study hard in senior high school, especially in biology and chemistry. I will also read more books about medicine and volunteer in hospitals to gain experience. After high school, I plan to enter a good medical university to learn professional knowledge.
示例:First, I will study hard at science subjects like physics, chemistry and biology in senior high school to lay a solid foundation. Second, I will join environmental protection clubs to learn more about environmental issues. In my spare time, I will read books and articles about environmental science. After college, I want to do research on environmental protection and try my best to make the world a better place.
第三段:规划展望与坚定信念
基础句式:I know that achieving this dream is not easy, but I will never give up. I will keep working hard and stay true to my dream.
示例:I know that the road to becoming a scientist is long and difficult. But I am willing to work hard for my dream. I will keep learning and exploring, and I will never give up even when I face difficulties. I believe that with my efforts, I can make my dream come true and contribute to protecting the environment.
范文
Chase Your Dream, Never Give Up
Wang Wei's story tells us that as long as we chase our dreams with persistence, we can overcome any difficulties.
Ever since he was a child, Wang Wei dreamed of being an engineer. He often took toys apart and put them back together, showing great interest and talent. However, his family couldnt afford his college tuition. With the faith from his parents and his own determination, Wang Wei studied extra hard every day. He applied for scholarships and finally received the acceptance letter from his dream college with a full scholarship.
This story inspires me deeply. My dream is to become a teacher. I know its not easy, but I will learn from Wang Wei—study hard, never give up, and keep chasing my dream. I believe that persistence can make dreams come true.
范文中文翻译
追逐梦想,永不放弃
王伟的故事告诉我们,只要我们坚持不懈地追逐梦想,就能克服任何困难。
从小,王伟就梦想成为一名工程师。他经常把玩具拆开再组装起来,展现出浓厚的兴趣和天赋。然而,他的家庭无力支付他的大学学费。带着父母的信任和自己的决心,王伟每天都加倍努力学习。他申请了奖学金,最终收到了梦想大学的录取通知书,并获得了全额奖学金。
这个故事深深激励着我。我的梦想是成为一名教师。我知道这并不容易,但我会向王伟学习——努力学习、永不放弃,执着追逐我的梦想。我相信,坚持能让梦想照进现实。
素材积累
核心短语
take apart 拆开
put back 重组;放回原处
apply for 申请
take a deep breath 深呼吸
have faith in 信任;对……有信心
give up 放弃
work hard at 努力学习……
extra hard 加倍努力
full scholarship 全额奖学金
chase dreams 追逐梦想
overcome difficulties 克服困难
lay a solid foundation 打下坚实的基础
keep going 坚持下去
never give up 永不放弃
come true 实现
基础句型(含本单元重点)
基础句型
仿写句子
My dream is to ________ because ________.
My dream is to become a scientist because I want to make contributions to society.
To achieve my dream, I will ________ and ________.
To achieve my dream, I will study hard every day and read more related books.
Wang Wei's story teaches us that ________.
Wang Wei's story teaches us that persistence is the key to realizing dreams.
Even though ________, I will never give up my dream.
Even though there are many difficulties, I will never give up my dream.
With ________, we can ________.
With faith and effort, we can make our dreams come true.
好句集锦
1.Dreams are like stars in the sky—they guide us forward even in the dark.
2.The road to dreams may be long and rough, but persistence will lead us to the end.
3.What makes a dream valuable is not the result, but the courage and effort we put in during the chase.
4.Faith in dreams gives us strength, and hard work turns dreams into reality.
谚语
1.Where there is a will, there is a way.(有志者事竟成——契合追梦主题)
2.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.(心之所向,无所不成——强调决心的重要性)
3.Practice makes perfect.(熟能生巧——体现追梦过程中努力的价值)
学生写作填空练习版
版本一:主题阐释
Wang Wei's story shows us the power of dreams and persistence.
Ever since he was little, Wang Wei wanted to be an ________ (职业,如engineer). He often ________ (表现1,如took toys apart and put them back together) to see how they worked. However, his family ________ (困难,如couldnt afford his college tuition). With his parents faith and his own effort, he ________ (行动1,如studied extra hard) and ________ (行动2,如applied for scholarships). Finally, he achieved his dream.
From this story, I learn that ________ (感悟,如dreams need persistence). I will ________ (行动,如keep my dream in mind and work hard for it) in the future.
版本二:追梦经历
My dream is to become a ________ (职业,如writer). It has been with me since I was a child, and I have been chasing it.
At first, I ________ (困难,如didnt know how to write good articles). But I didnt give up. I ________ (行动1,如read a lot of books) and ________ (行动2,如kept a diary every day) to practice. Whenever I felt discouraged, ________ (帮助者,如my parents) encouraged me. Last year, I ________ (收获,如published my short story in the school magazine).
This journey taught me that ________ (感悟,如persistence is important for chasing dreams). I will ________ (行动,如keep practicing) and never give up.
版本三:梦想规划
My future dream is to become a ________ (职业,如scientist). I want to make contributions to ________ (领域,如environmental protection).
To achieve this dream, I will first ________ (行动1,如study hard at science subjects) in senior high school. Second, I will ________ (行动2,如join related clubs) to gain experience. In my spare time, I will ________ (行动3,如read more books about my dream).
I know its not easy to realize my dream, but I will ________ (行动,如never give up). I believe that with hard work, my dream will come true.
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