Unit 8 You Find What You Are Looking for 写作专项学案 2025-2026学年教科版（2012）五四制英语九年级下册

Unit 8 You Find What You Are Looking for 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“心态决定所见”主题，围绕房地产经纪人诺布尔夫人的智慧故事，写一篇阐释心态的力量、描述个人看待他人的经历或分享积极处世态度的短文，达成以下目标： 1.能正确使用本单元“人际认知与态度”相关核心词汇（如attitude、current、considerate、complaint、negative、quality、fit in、co-worker、concentrate、privacy等）及短语（fit in、complain about、look for、find out、take care of、get along with、think of等）； 2.能熟练运用定语从句（who/which/where）补充信息，掌握“what do you think of...” “I have a complaint about...”等句型表达观点与诉求，正确使用“but” “however” “so” “therefore”等衔接表达； 3.能按“心态主题引入→核心细节（故事解读/经历描述/态度建议）→感悟与践行”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“秉持积极心态，发现他人美好”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁：主题阐释类说明文、人际认知类记叙文或态度建议类应用文，兼具思辨性与实用性； 2.人称：第一人称（分享经历、表达感受）或第三人称（解读故事、客观建议）为主； 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容：覆盖“1个核心角度（心态的影响/个人认知经历/积极处世建议）、2-3个关键细节（心态表现/认知过程/建议要点）、1个核心感悟（积极心态的价值）”3个要点； ￮ 字数：80–100词，阐释准确深刻、描述真实具体或建议切实可行，语言符合九年级学生水平，体现对人际认知的深度思考。 思路点拨 1.开头：明确引入核心主题（如“诺布尔夫人的故事告诉我们，你用什么样的心态看待世界，就会看到什么样的世界” “心态是认知的滤镜，我的一次经历让我懂得了用积极眼光看待他人的重要性” “积极的心态能让我们发现他人的美好，而消极的心态只会让我们陷入抱怨的漩涡”），用简洁句式点明核心观点（如“你寻找美好，便会遇见美好；你紧盯缺点，便会满眼瑕疵” “心态决定认知，认知影响相处”），用引导性语言引出下文； 2.中间：若解读故事，按“故事背景→人物对比→核心启示”展开，结合年轻夫妇与弗兰克的不同心态、诺布尔夫人的回应等细节，阐释“积极心态发现美好，消极心态放大缺点”的道理；若描述个人认知经历，聚焦“认知背景→初始心态→心态转变→认知变化”，用具体事例（如对新同学从误解到接纳、发现他人隐藏的优点）传递真实体验；若提出积极处世建议，围绕“积极观察→包容差异→欣赏优点”，用具体方法（如“多关注他人的善意举动” “客观看待他人的不足”）支撑建议，确保可操作； 3.结尾：分享感悟（如“积极的心态是人际相处的润滑剂，它能让我们看到他人的闪光点，收获真挚的情谊” “心态不同，所见不同，愿我们都能以积极之心看待世界，发现更多美好”）或表达行动意愿（如“我会以诺布尔夫人的智慧为指引，秉持积极心态，主动发现他人的美好，真诚与人相处” “我会将积极处世的方法分享给身边人，让更多人感受心态的力量”），呼应单元“You Find What You Are Looking for”的核心主题，传递“积极认知、友善相处”的积极态度。 写作模板（逐段拆解） 模板一：主题阐释——心态决定所见（Attitude Determines What You See） 第一段：故事引入与核心定位 基础句式：The story of Mrs. Noble, the real estate agent, teaches us a valuable lesson about attitude. What we find in others depends on what we are looking for. 示例：Have you ever noticed that different people see the same thing differently? The story of Mrs. Noble and the two people from the city gives us the answer—it’s all about attitude. 第二段：故事解读与细节支撑 基础句式：Jon and Cathy, a young couple, were looking for kind and considerate neighbors, so Mrs. Noble told them they would fit in well. However, Frank complained about his current neighbors’ negative qualities, so Mrs. Noble said he would find the same in Pleasantville. It’s true that people find what they are looking for. 示例：A young couple named Jon and Cathy wanted to move to Pleasantville. They liked their current neighbors who were helpful and considerate, so they hoped to find similar people. But Frank, another man from the city, hated his neighbors and co-workers—he only saw their negative qualities. Mrs. Noble told the couple they would love the people there, but warned Frank he’d find the same negativity. She was telling the truth: positive people see goodness, while negative people only notice flaws. 第三段：感悟总结与践行 基础句式：This story shows that attitude plays a key role in how we see others. We should keep a positive attitude and look for the best in people. Only in this way can we get along well with others and live a happier life. 示例：Mrs. Noble’s wisdom reminds us that our attitude shapes our perception. If we look for the good in others, we’ll find it; if we focus on flaws, that’s all we’ll see. In daily life, I’ll choose to be like Jon and Cathy—keep a positive attitude and appreciate others’ strengths. 模板二：人际认知经历——我的认知转变（My Change in Perception） 第一段：经历引入与背景铺垫 基础句式：I used to have a negative impression of my new classmate Tom. But a special experience changed my attitude and made me see his good qualities. 示例：It’s easy to judge others based on first impressions, and I once made that mistake. My experience with my classmate Lisa taught me to look for the best in people instead of focusing on shortcomings. 第二段：经历细节与过程描述 基础句式：At first, I thought Tom was unfriendly because he rarely talked to others. I even complained about him to my friends. But one day, I forgot my lunch and Tom shared his with me. I then found out he was just shy, not unfriendly. He often helped others secretly, which made me feel ashamed of my previous judgment. 示例：Lisa transferred to our class last semester. She was quiet and didn’t join our activities, so I thought she was arrogant. I avoided talking to her and even complained about her to my deskmate. One day, I fell and hurt my leg. Lisa was the first to help me and took care of me for weeks. I realized I’d been wrong—she was just shy. Later, I found out she was kind and helpful, and we became good friends. 第三段：经历感悟与收获 基础句式：This experience made me understand that we shouldn’t judge others too quickly. We should look for their good qualities with a positive attitude. Only in this way can we make more friends and get along well with others. 示例：This experience taught me a valuable lesson: people find what they are looking for. If I’d kept my negative attitude, I would have missed a good friend. Now, I always try to see the best in others first. It makes my relationships with people around me much better. 模板三：态度建议——秉持积极心态，发现他人美好（Hold a Positive Attitude to Find the Good in Others） 第一段：建议引入与核心意义 基础句式：A positive attitude is important for getting along with others. It helps us see the good in people and build better relationships. Here are some practical suggestions to develop a positive attitude. 示例：How can we get along well with others and find the goodness around us? The key is to hold a positive attitude. To help everyone see the best in people, I want to share some useful suggestions. 第二段：具体建议与细节支撑 基础句式：First, we should avoid complaining about others. Instead of focusing on their negative qualities, we should look for their strengths. Second, we should be considerate of others’ feelings, just like Jon and Cathy. Third, we should try to fit in with others and communicate actively. These steps can help us develop a positive attitude. 示例：First, stop complaining about others. Like Frank, constant complaints make us only see flaws. Second, look for small acts of kindness—maybe someone helps others secretly or is quiet but reliable. Third, be open-minded and give others a chance. Don’t judge others based on first impressions. These suggestions can help us see the good in people. 第三段：建议呼吁与展望 基础句式：A positive attitude can bring us more friends and happiness. Let’s put these suggestions into practice and look for the best in others. I believe that with a positive attitude, we can build better relationships and live a more fulfilling life. 示例：Seeing the good in others is a kind of wisdom. Let’s take Mrs. Noble’s words to heart—“people find what they are looking for”—and choose to be positive. I hope everyone can hold a positive attitude, find the beauty in others, and enjoy harmonious relationships. 范文 Look for the Good, and You’ll Find It Mrs. Noble’s story clearly shows that our attitude determines what we see in others and the world around us. Jon and Cathy, a young couple, loved their current neighbors who were kind and considerate. They hoped to find similar people in Pleasantville, so Mrs. Noble told them they would fit in well. However, Frank, another man from the city, only complained about his neighbors’ negative qualities—he hated how they treated him. Mrs. Noble honestly told him he’d find the same in Pleasantville. Her words revealed a truth: positive people seek goodness and find it, while negative people focus on flaws. This story inspires me deeply. In life, I’ll choose to be like Jon and Cathy. I’ll hold a positive attitude, look for the good in others, and be considerate. I believe this will help me make more friends and live a happier life. 范文中文翻译 寻找美好，你就会发现它 诺布尔夫人的故事清楚地表明，我们的心态决定了我们在他人身上和周围世界中看到的东西。 乔恩和凯西是一对年轻夫妇，他们喜欢现在那些善良体贴的邻居。他们希望在欢乐谷找到类似的人，所以诺布尔夫人告诉他们会相处得很融洽。然而，另一位来自城市的男人弗兰克，只抱怨邻居们的缺点——他讨厌他们对待他的方式。诺布尔夫人诚实地告诉他，他在欢乐谷也会遇到同样的情况。她的话揭示了一个真理：积极的人寻求美好并能找到它，而消极的人只关注缺点。 这个故事深深启发了我。在生活中，我会选择像乔恩和凯西一样。我会秉持积极的心态，寻找他人身上的美好，并且体贴他人。我相信这会帮助我交到更多朋友，过上更幸福的生活。 素材积累 核心短语 fit in 相处融洽 complain about 抱怨 look for 寻找 find out 发现；查明 take care of 照顾 get along with 与……相处 think of 认为；想起 focus on 关注 negative qualities 缺点 good qualities 优点 first impression 第一印象 be considerate of 体贴；考虑到 avoid doing 避免做某事 communicate actively 积极沟通 build relationships 建立关系 基础句型（含本单元重点） 基础句型 仿写句子 The story of Mrs. Noble teaches us that ________. The story of Mrs. Noble teaches us that attitude determines what we see. I used to ________, but now I ________. I used to focus on others’ flaws, but now I look for their good qualities. To hold a positive attitude, we should ________ and ________. To hold a positive attitude, we should avoid complaining and be considerate of others. People who ________ will ________, while those who ________ will ________. People who look for goodness will find it, while those who focus on flaws will only see them. What do you think of ________? What do you think of the way we perceive others? 好句集锦 1.Attitude is a mirror—when you smile at the world, the world smiles back at you. 2.Looking for the good in others is not ignoring their flaws, but choosing to focus on their strengths. 3.The world is not lacking beauty, but lacking the eyes to find it—and the attitude to appreciate it. 4.A positive attitude towards others can turn strangers into friends and conflicts into harmony. 谚语 1.Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.（情人眼里出西施——强调认知受心态影响） 2.Kindness begets kindness.（善有善报——契合积极处世主题） 3.Judge not, that ye be not judged.（不要评判他人，以免被他人评判——强调客观看待他人） 学生写作填空练习版 版本一：主题阐释 Mrs. Noble’s story tells us that attitude determines what we see in others. Jon and Cathy wanted to find neighbors who were ________ (品质，如kind and considerate), so they hoped to fit in well in Pleasantville. But Frank ________ (行为，如complained about his current neighbors’ negative qualities) and hated his co-workers. Mrs. Noble told the couple they would love the people there, but Frank would find the same flaws. It’s true that people ________ (核心观点，如find what they are looking for). From this story, I learn that ________ (感悟，如a positive attitude helps us see goodness). I will ________ (行动，如look for others’ strengths) in daily life. 版本二：人际认知经历 I once misjudged my classmate ________ (同学姓名，如Lisa) because of my negative attitude. But an experience changed my perception. At first, I thought she was ________ (初始印象，如arrogant) because she was quiet and didn’t join our activities. I even complained about her to my friends. One day, ________ (事件，如I fell and hurt my leg), and Lisa was the first to help me. I then found out she was ________ (真实品质，如kind and shy). We became good friends. This experience taught me that ________ (感悟，如we shouldn’t judge others by first impressions). I will ________ (行动，如hold a positive attitude to find others’ good qualities) from now on. 版本三：态度建议 A positive attitude helps us find the good in others and build better relationships. Here are some useful suggestions. First, we should ________ (建议1，如stop complaining about others) and focus on their strengths. Second, we need to ________ (建议2，如be open-minded) and give others a chance. Third, we should ________ (建议3，如look for small acts of kindness) in daily life. Let’s follow these suggestions. I believe that with a positive attitude, we can ________ (好处，如make more friends) and enjoy harmonious relationships. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $