Unit2 写作专项：A diary about facing a challenge-2025-2026学年沪教版英语（五四学制）七年级上学期

沪教版英语（五四学制）七上Unit2 写作专项 A diary about facing a challenge 一、写作目标 结合本单元“培养坚强意志、讲述成长经历”的核心主题，能写一篇日记记录自己面对挑战的经历，内容包括：遇到的挑战、当时的感受、解决过程及收获。 1. 能正确使用一般过去时描述过去的事件与情绪（本单元核心时态）； 2. 能运用本单元与“情绪、应对挑战”相关的词汇（如unhappy、firmly、brave）撰写短文； 3. 能按照“事件发展顺序”组织内容，体现“遇到挑战—情绪变化—解决问题—收获感悟”的逻辑，符合日记的叙事特点。 二、题目解析 1. 体裁：日记（个人叙事），要求记录面对挑战的经历，需遵循“事件+情绪+感悟”的结构，契合本单元“坚强意志”的主题。 2. 人称：以第一人称（I, my, me）为主，讲述自身经历，符合日记的人称规范。 3. 时态：核心用一般过去时描述事件、情绪变化；结尾可用一般现在时表达感悟，适配七年级写作水平。 4. 核心要求 ￮ 内容：写清挑战、情绪变化、解决方法及收获，体现“坚强面对困难”的单元目标。 ￮ 格式：包含日记的日期、天气、正文（开头-事件-情绪-解决-感悟），符合日记的排版规范。 ￮ 字数：80-120词，以简单句为主，适当搭配衔接词（如however、finally），贴合初中生表达能力。 三、典型例题 在生活中，我们会遇到各种挑战（如与同学相处、学习困难等）。请你以“A diary about facing a challenge”为题，写一篇日记，记录一次你面对挑战的经历。 要点： 1. 你遇到了什么挑战？ 2. 面对挑战时，你的情绪有怎样的变化？ 3. 你是如何解决这个挑战的？ 4. 这次经历让你有什么收获？ 四、思路点拨 1. 开篇（日记格式+引出挑战）：先写日记的日期、天气，再点明遇到的挑战及最初的情绪，快速切入主题。 2. 发展（事件推进+情绪变化）：描述挑战的发展过程，以及自己情绪的变化（如从“不开心”到“忍不住”），体现冲突。 3. 高潮（解决问题）：说明自己如何鼓起勇气解决问题的具体做法，体现“坚强意志”。 4. 结尾（感悟收获）：总结解决问题后的感受，提炼这次经历带来的成长或启示，升华主题。 五、写作模板（逐段拆解，贴合单元目标） 第一段：日记开头+引出挑战 写作目的：符合日记格式，点明挑战与初始情绪，呼应单元“面对困难”的主题。 必写要素：日期+天气+挑战+初始情绪 基础句式：[Date], [Weather] Dear Diary, Last [time], I [met a challenge]. I felt [initial feeling] at first. 示例： Thursday, 15 October Sunny Dear Diary, Last week, my classmate laughed at my poor drawing. I felt upset and didn’t know what to do. 第二段：事件发展+情绪变化 写作目的：描述挑战的升级与情绪的转变，为“解决问题”做铺垫。 必写要素：挑战升级+情绪变化 基础句式：However, things got [worse/better]. I [felt a new feeling] and decided to [take action]. 示例： However, he laughed at me again in art class yesterday. I couldn’t stand it anymore! I took a deep breath and decided to talk to him firmly. 第三段：解决问题+收获感悟 写作目的：说明解决方法，表达最终感受与成长，贴合单元“坚强意志”的核心。 必写要素：解决做法+最终感受+收获 基础句式：I said, “[words to solve]”. He [reaction]. Finally, I felt [feeling]. I learned that [lesson]. 示例： I said, “It’s not nice to laugh at others’ efforts.” He felt sorry and said “sorry” to me. Finally, I felt relaxed. I learned that being brave to speak out helps solve problems. 六、范文 英文 A diary about facing a challenge Friday, 16 October Cloudy Dear Diary, Last week, I was afraid to join the class speech competition. I felt nervous and wanted to give up.（一般过去时，本单元核心时态） However, my teacher encouraged me to try. I practiced every night and wrote down my speech many times. Yesterday, I stood on the stage and spoke loudly.（事件发展+行动，体现“坚强意志”） I didn’t win the first prize, but I felt proud of myself. I learned that “Courage is the first step to success.” Facing challenges makes me stronger.（感悟收获，贴合单元主题） 中文翻译 一篇关于面对挑战的日记 10月16日 星期五 多云 亲爱的日记： 上周，我害怕参加班级演讲比赛。我感到很紧张，想要放弃。 但我的老师鼓励我尝试。我每晚都练习，把演讲稿写了很多遍。昨天，我站在讲台上，大声地完成了演讲。 我没有拿到一等奖，但我为自己感到骄傲。我明白了“勇气是成功的第一步”。面对挑战让我变得更坚强。 七、素材积累 短语 1. face a challenge — 面对挑战 2. feel nervous — 感到紧张 3. give up — 放弃 4. encourage sb. to do — 鼓励某人做 5. stand on the stage — 站在讲台上 6. be proud of — 为……感到骄傲 7. speak out — 勇敢说出 8. solve problems — 解决问题 基础句型 基础句型 仿写句子 I felt [feeling] and wanted to [action]. I felt scared and wanted to run away. However, [sb.] encouraged me to [action]. However, my friend encouraged me to keep trying. I learned that [saying]. I learned that “No pain, no gain.” 好句集锦 1. At first I wanted to hide, but I told myself to be brave.（一开始我想逃避，但我告诉自己要勇敢。） 2. Even though I didn’t do perfectly, I was happy that I tried my best.（虽然我做得不完美，但我很开心自己尽力了。） 3. Challenges are not scary if we face them with a strong mind.（只要我们用坚强的意志面对挑战，它们并不可怕。） 谚语 1. Courage is the first step to success.（勇气是成功的第一步。） 2. No pain, no gain.（一分耕耘，一分收获。） 3. A strong mind can overcome any difficulty.（坚强的意志能克服任何困难。） 八、学生写作填空练习版 A diary about facing a challenge [1] __________ (Date), [2] __________ (Weather) Dear Diary, Last week, I [3] __________ (meet) a challenge: I was afraid to join the class speech competition. I felt [4] __________ (nervous) and wanted to give up. However, my teacher [5] __________ (encourage) me to try. I [6] __________ (practice) every night and [7] __________ (write) down my speech many times. Yesterday, I [8] __________ (stand) on the stage and [9] __________ (speak) loudly. I didn’t win the first prize, but I felt proud of myself. I learned that “Courage is the first step to success.” Facing challenges [10] __________ (make) me stronger. ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $