内容正文:
参观艺术展的通告/通知
[素养提升]
一、文体特点
通告是上级对下级、组织对成员或平行单位之间部署工作、传达事情等所使用的一种应用文文体。通告内容主要包括通告的对象、事由、时间、地点、注意事项及要求等。通告以言简意赅为主要特点,用词表达比较口语化。通告中提及的事情都是计划要做的,时态多用将来时。
二、结构特点
(1)开头写称呼语,即通告的对象(也可以省略)。常用:Ladies and gentlemen, Boys and girls,Teachers and students,Dear friends,Dear comrades等。
(2)通告的正文往往开门见山,直接说明通告的要点,即who,what,when,where,why等;关于参观展览的通告的主要内容常为:时间和地点、展览内容、展览亮点及注意事项等。
三、知识储备
常用表达句式
Attention,please.请注意。
May I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.请大家注意听我讲话,好吗?我有一个通告要宣布一下。
Please be quiet,everyone!I have something important to tell you.大家请安静一下!我有重要的事情要告诉你们。
In order to...,the Students' Union has decided to organise some students to see an art exhibition.为了……,学生会决定组织一些学生去参观艺术展览。
On...,we will go to see an art exhibition.
在……(时间),我们将去参观一次艺术展览。
The art exhibition will take place in ...这次艺术展览将在(某地)进行。
As we all know,it's a good chance/opportunity for us to get some art knowledge.正如大家所知,这是一个让我们了解一些艺术知识的好机会。
The highlights of the exhibition are...这次展览的亮点是……
We will exchange ideas after the visit.参观过后我们会交流想法。
Everyone should take...每个人都应该携带……
Please turn off/shut off/switch off your cellphone during the visit.请在参观过程中关闭手机。
We will gather/meet at the school gate at...
我们将于……(某时刻)在学校门口集合/见面。
Please tell it to each other and get there on time.请互相转告,准时到达。
That's all.Thank you.就这些。谢谢。
Everyone is required to attend it on time.每个人都必须按时参加。
[典题指导]
►[写作任务]
你校的艺术俱乐部正在举行名家艺术展览,请根据以下内容,写一篇口头通知。
(1)展出内容:徐悲鸿的名作,其中亮点是20世纪40年代的作品《六马图》。
(2)本周六早上8点在学校门口集合。
(3)观后要写艺术评论。
注意:(1)词数80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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►[审题谋篇]
(1)一审:确定写作体裁和主题
(2)二定:确定时态和人称(与体裁和主题息息相关)
(3)三明确
明确写作要点:口头通知的开头→概括介绍展览的内容→注意事项
(4)四分段(与写作要点息息相关)
结合写作要点分为三个段落。
►[佳作展示]
Attention,please.I have an announcement to make.
An exhibition on the works of Xu Beihong ①is being held in our school art club.The highlight of ②the works on display is The Six Horses,which was painted ③in the 1940s by Xu Beihong.There are six horses running towards you ④in the painting,looking wonderfully alive ⑤.Therefore,you will feel they are going out of the painting and into the room.
We are to get together at 8:00 a.m.this Saturday at the gate of our school.We are required to write ⑥a review about the works.Hence,make sure to observe and admire them carefully.
►[名师点评]
本文要点全面,结构流畅,词语多变,且句型使用较为高档。
①on the works of Xu Beihong,介词短语作定语,修饰an exhibition;
②highlight“亮点”,为高档词汇;
③which was painted...为定语从句,使用恰到好处,避免了单句的枯燥罗列;
④There be句型+非谓语动词running...,彰显了语言功底。
⑤动词ing形式作定语。
⑥be required to write为被动形式,巧妙地表达了参观后的要求,句型具有多变性。
[学以致用]
假定你是校学生会主席李华,为了让学生对中国传统艺术作品有所了解,你校将举办一个中学生艺术作品展览会,请你以校学生会的名义用英文拟一则通告。内容包括:
1.展览的时间和地点;
2.展览内容;
3.参观时的注意事项。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:艺术作品展览会art exhibition
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention,please?___________________________________________
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[参考范文]
Boys_and_girls,
_____May_I_have_your_attention,_please?
In order to make us get some art knowledge, our school has decided to hold a High School Students' Art Exhibition from next Monday to Friday. It will take place in our school's exhibition hall. Some extraordinary artworks created by high school students will be displayed, including Chinese paintings, calligraphy works as well as delicate craftwork.The highlight of the exhibition is a painting by a boy in Senior 2, which has won an international prize. All of the works will definitely give a clearer picture of the charm of our Chinese culture. By the way, photos are not permitted to take during the visit. It is also bad manners to talk loudly in the exhibition hall.I'm sure you will enjoy it.
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