内容正文:
人物介绍
[素养提升]
一、文体特点
人物介绍属于说明文的一种,选择与人物相关的典型事例,从典型的角度出发,进行事迹刻画,描述人物形象,塑造人物形象。
二、结构特点
1.首段:介绍人物的身份、性格和外貌。
2.中段:阐述人物的典型事迹、成就。
3.尾段:表达尊敬和爱戴的感情。
三、知识储备
常用表达句式
1.There are lots of respectable people around us.
2.We have many respectable people around us.
3.Great people have made achievements,which make our life easier and better.
4. ...is a humorous person with great achievements.
5. ...is famous in the world...
6.No matter how busy..is,...is always ready to help...
7. ...success proves where there is a will,there is a way.
8. ...is a man with a pair of thick glasses.
9.Since...,...has devoted himself to...
10.Born into a ...family,...showed great interest in...during his childhood.
11. ...,he received...prize in ...because of his great contributions to our motherland.
12. ...is my best friend that I can tell everything to.
13.Such is...,a simple man with great...
14. ...will encourage us to overcome/challenge the difficulties bravely.
15. ...makes every effort to comfort and ...us.
[典题指导]
►[写作任务]
(2020·全国Ⅰ)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect
We have a lot of respectable people around us.
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►[审题谋篇]
题目要求介绍身边受人尊敬或爱戴的人。从题目上看,本文为应用文;从内容上看,本文宜用一般现在时;人称上以第三人称为主。事迹和人物的选择空间较大。可以是身边的亲人、朋友、老师等。结构上可采用总分法。
1.人物介绍
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因
►[佳作展示]
The person I respect
We_have_a_lot_of_respectable_people_around_us . They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.
When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and
encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.
►[名师点评]
本文要点全面,结构完整,叙述严谨,层次清晰,语言准确,句式多样。
(1)语言结构高档。...I respect most为定语从句,省略了who/that。
(2)...respected by his students为非谓语动词短语。
(3)as for me和so的使用,使文章连贯流畅。
[学以致用]
(2022·北京四中)母亲节快到了,假如你们学校的英语广播台正在征集以“我最感激的人——妈妈”为主题的英文稿,请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。
要点:
1.简要介绍妈妈;
2.感激妈妈的理由;
3.如何报答妈妈。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Everyone has a person he wants to say thank you to in his deep heart.________________________________________________________________________
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[参考范文]
Everyone_has_a_person_he_wants_to_say_thank_you_to_in_his_deep_heart.
My mother is a middle school teacher who graduated from Beijing Normal University.She is a merciful and kind mother as well as an excellent,patient and most importantly considerate teacher.She often cooks delicious and healthy dishes.What's more,she even accompany me deep into the night every time do my homework.What is the most important is that whenever I feel upset and lose confidence,she will comfort and encourage me until I cheer up.So now I study hard in order to be admitted to a famous university.Only in this way can I reward my mother.
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