江苏苏北四市2026届高三第一次调研测试英语写作训练导学案（发言稿+读后续写之Hatch先生的温情）

江苏省苏北四市2026届高三第一次调研测试英语写作训练（发言稿+读后续写之Hatch先生的温情） 一、Daily Report发言稿（Let’s Do Our Share at Home） （一）题型核心考点 本题为应用文之发言稿，核心考查“家务意义+具体倡议”的清晰表达，兼顾亲切自然、积极昂扬的交际语气（对同学）。评分重点：内容完整性（意义+倡议）、行文逻辑、格式规范及语法多样性。 （二）写作任务 假定你是李华，在下周英语课上，你要做一个Daily Report，请结合自身经历，以 “Let’s Do Our Share at Home” 为主题写一篇发言稿。内容包括：1.家务劳动的意义；2.你的具体倡议。 注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Good morning, everyone! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! （三）语法亮点预判（可借鉴句式） 1. 动名词结构：表达家务意义，如“Doing housework not only helps relieve our parents’ pressure but also teaches us to be responsible.” 2. 情态动词：提出具体倡议，如“We should start with small things, such as cleaning our own rooms, washing dishes and sweeping the floor.” 3. 宾语从句：结合自身经历补充，如“I think doing housework has changed me a lot, making me more independent and caring.” （四）高分句子默写 1. 做家务不仅能减轻父母的负担，还能培养我们的责任感和独立性，让我们学会珍惜他人的付出。________________________________________________________________ 2. 结合我自己的经历，每天打扫房间、饭后洗碗，让我明白了父母的辛劳，也让我变得更自律。________________________________________________________________ 3. 我倡议同学们都行动起来，主动承担力所能及的家务，不抱怨、不偷懒，用实际行动回报父母。________________________________________________________________ 4. 让我们一起分担家务，让家变得更温暖，也让自己在劳动中成长进步。________________________________________________________________ （五）拓展表达练习（同义替换） 减轻负担：relieve pressure = _______ = _______ 承担：take on = _______ = _______ 倡议：advise = _______ = _______ 独立的：independent = _______ = _______ 二、读后续写（Hatch先生的温情主题） （一）主题分析与续写思路 核心主题：孤独与温暖的碰撞，善意的传递与回应，从“孤僻冷漠”到“融入群体”的心灵转变，诠释“善意无关初衷，温暖终有回响”的深层含义。 伏笔呼应：前文Hatch先生刻板孤独的生活、包裹带来的改变（微笑、助人、分享）、邻居的惊讶与接纳，为续写“包裹误送后的转折、邻里善意回馈”铺垫。 续写思路： Paragraph 1（邮差承认误送包裹）：描写Hatch先生的失落与沮丧→邮差道歉并解释缘由→Hatch先生陷入绝望，重回孤僻状态→邻里察觉他的变化。 Paragraph 2（邻居决定行动）：邻居们商议办法→用善意回应善意（送上真正属于他的“礼物”）→Hatch先生明白邻里心意→彻底融入群体，不再孤独，升华主题。 （二）写作任务 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mr. Hatch, a tall, thin man with a permanently serious face, had lived in a quiet neighborhood for years. He followed a rigid and predictable routine that never changed. Everyday, he left home at 6:00 for the shoelace factory, ate the same cheese-and-mustard sandwich at lunch, and stopped at the newsstand and grocery store on his way back. He read the paper and went to bed by 9:00 every night. A man of few words, he kept to himself, with no one knowing his family or entering his house. Everything changed on New Year’s Eve. When Mr. Hatch arrived home, he noticed a brown-paper package by the door. He rarely received anything except the newspaper. Just then, Postman Goober approached, smiling: “That’s for you.” Mr. Hatch, who had only ever nodded at him, mumbled a “Thanks”. Curiosity overwhelmed him. Tearing open the paper, he found a heart-shaped box tied with a pink bow, filled with colorful candies along with a tiny card that read “Somebody misses you.” Realizing it could be a New Year gift, which he had never dreamed of, the lonely man was excited and touched. His expression melted and a smile appeared on his face for the first time in years. He tasted the candies that filled his cold heart with sweetness. The next day, he dressed up in a clean shirt, tied a tie and set out cheerfully, hoping to meet his secret admirer. His smiling face surprised the neighbors, who were more shocked when he greeted everyone warmly. At lunch, he sat in the cafeteria’s center, sharing candies with others. On his way home, he offered to watch the newsstand for the cold-stricken owner, and then helped the grocer find his lost dog. That evening, he baked cakes using his mother’s old recipe. The pleasant chocolate smell drew neighborhood kids around. He served them cakes and lemonade. For the first time, he felt a sense of belonging. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Weeks later, Postman Goober knocked and admitted he had misdelivered the package. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The neighbors noticed his change and they decided to act. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三）高分亮点预判 细节描写：通过动作（如“dropped his head in disappointment”）、神态（如“eyes filled with sorrow”）、环境（如“cold and quiet house”）凸显情感变化。 语法结构：定语从句、分词作状语、宾语从句，提升句式复杂度与表达流畅度。 情感连贯：从“惊喜温暖”到“失落孤僻”再到“重拾温暖”，呼应前文伏笔，层层递进，升华善意传递的主题。 （四）高分句子默写 一、描写类（场景与动作） 1. 听到邮差的话，Hatch先生手里的杯子掉在了地上，他失望地低下头，眼里充满了悲伤，脸上的笑容瞬间消失了。________________________________________________________________ 2. 邻居们提着亲手做的食物和小礼物来到Hatch先生家门口，轻轻敲门，脸上带着温柔的笑容，眼里满是关切。________________________________________________________________ 二、情感类（感悟与联结） 1. Hatch先生终于明白，真正温暖他的不是那个误送的包裹，而是邻里间真诚的善意与接纳。________________________________________________________________ 2. 善意从来都不是单向的，Hatch先生用他的改变温暖了邻里，而邻里的回馈，也让他彻底告别了孤独，拥有了真正的家。________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、Daily Report发言稿（Let’s Do Our Share at Home） （一）题型核心考点 本题为应用文之发言稿，核心考查“家务意义+具体倡议”的清晰表达，兼顾亲切自然、积极昂扬的交际语气（对同学）。评分重点：内容完整性（意义+倡议）、行文逻辑、格式规范及语法多样性。 （二）写作任务 假定你是李华，在下周英语课上，你要做一个Daily Report，请结合自身经历，以 “Let’s Do Our Share at Home” 为主题写一篇发言稿。内容包括：1.家务劳动的意义；2.你的具体倡议。 注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Good morning, everyone! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! （三）高分范文（80词） Good morning, everyone! Today, I’d like to talk about doing housework with you. Doing housework is not a waste of time. It not only relieves our parents’ pressure but also teaches us to be responsible and independent. From my experience, cleaning my room and washing dishes every day helps me understand my parents’ hard work. I advise all of us to take on housework actively. Let’s start with small things and stick to it. In this way, we can grow up better and make our homes warmer. That’s all. Thank you! （四）语法亮点 1. 动名词作主语：Doing housework is not a waste of time. （替代简单句，提升句式复杂度，明确表达核心观点。） 2. 并列结构：It not only relieves our parents’ pressure but also teaches us to be responsible and independent. （“not only...but also...”结构，清晰阐述家务的双重意义，句式对称流畅。） 3. 现在分词短语：From my experience, cleaning my room and washing dishes every day helps me... （结合自身经历，衔接自然，增强发言稿的真实性和说服力。） （五）高分句子默写 1. Doing housework can not only relieve our parents’ burden but also cultivate our sense of responsibility and independence, letting us learn to cherish others’ efforts. 2. From my own experience, cleaning my room and washing dishes after meals every day makes me understand my parents’ hard work and become more self-disciplined. 3. I advise all students to take action actively, take on housework within our ability, never complain or be lazy, and repay our parents with practical actions. 4. Let’s share housework together, make our homes warmer, and grow and progress in labor. （六）拓展表达练习（同义替换） 减轻负担：relieve pressure = reduce burden = ease load 承担：take on = undertake = assume 倡议：advise = propose = advocate 独立的：independent = self-reliant = autonomous 二、读后续写（Hatch先生温情主题） （一）主题分析与续写思路 核心主题：孤独与温暖的碰撞，善意的传递与回应，从“孤僻冷漠”到“融入群体”的心灵转变，诠释“善意无关初衷，温暖终有回响”的深层含义。 伏笔呼应：前文Hatch先生刻板孤独的生活、包裹带来的改变（微笑、助人、分享）、邻居的惊讶与接纳，为续写“包裹误送后的转折、邻里善意回馈”铺垫。 续写思路： Paragraph 1（邮差承认误送包裹）：描写Hatch先生的失落与沮丧→邮差道歉并解释缘由→Hatch先生陷入绝望，重回孤僻状态→邻里察觉他的变化。 Paragraph 2（邻居决定行动）：邻居们商议办法→用善意回应善意（送上真正属于他的“礼物”）→Hatch先生明白邻里心意→彻底融入群体，不再孤独，升华主题。 （二）写作任务 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mr. Hatch, a tall, thin man with a permanently serious face, had lived in a quiet neighborhood for years. He followed a rigid and predictable routine that never changed. Everyday, he left home at 6:00 for the shoelace factory, ate the same cheese-and-mustard sandwich at lunch, and stopped at the newsstand and grocery store on his way back. He read the paper and went to bed by 9:00 every night. A man of few words, he kept to himself, with no one knowing his family or entering his house. Everything changed on New Year’s Eve. When Mr. Hatch arrived home, he noticed a brown-paper package by the door. He rarely received anything except the newspaper. Just then, Postman Goober approached, smiling: “That’s for you.” Mr. Hatch, who had only ever nodded at him, mumbled a “Thanks”. Curiosity overwhelmed him. Tearing open the paper, he found a heart-shaped box tied with a pink bow, filled with colorful candies along with a tiny card that read “Somebody misses you.” Realizing it could be a New Year gift, which he had never dreamed of, the lonely man was excited and touched. His expression melted and a smile appeared on his face for the first time in years. He tasted the candies that filled his cold heart with sweetness. The next day, he dressed up in a clean shirt, tied a tie and set out cheerfully, hoping to meet his secret admirer. His smiling face surprised the neighbors, who were more shocked when he greeted everyone warmly. At lunch, he sat in the cafeteria’s center, sharing candies with others. On his way home, he offered to watch the newsstand for the cold-stricken owner, and then helped the grocer find his lost dog. That evening, he baked cakes using his mother’s old recipe. The pleasant chocolate smell drew neighborhood kids around. He served them cakes and lemonade. For the first time, he felt a sense of belonging. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Weeks later, Postman Goober knocked and admitted he had misdelivered the package. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The neighbors noticed his change and they decided to act. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三）高分范文（149词） Weeks later, Postman Goober knocked and admitted he had misdelivered the package. He apologized sincerely, explaining the package was for the former neighbor. Mr. Hatch’s face turned pale, and the cup in his hand dropped to the floor. He dropped his head in disappointment, eyes filled with sorrow, and the smile vanished instantly. He thanked the postman and closed the door, returning to his cold, quiet life and refusing to greet anyone again. The neighbors noticed his change and they decided to act. They gathered and prepared hand-made food and small gifts. Knocking at his door gently, they smiled warmly and told him they cared about him. Mr. Hatch was deeply touched, tears rolling down his cheeks. He invited them in, and that night his house was filled with laughter. He finally understood that the real warmth came from their kindness, not the package. From then on, he lived a happy life with his kind neighbors. （四）高分亮点解析 1. 细节描写：dropped his head in disappointment, eyes filled with sorrow, tears rolling down his cheeks 等动作、神态描写，生动展现Hatch先生的情感起伏，画面感强烈。 2. 分词作状语：explaining the package was for the former neighbor, tears rolling down his cheeks （补充细节，衔接自然，避免简单句堆砌，提升语法层次。） 3. 伏笔呼应：呼应前文“cold, quiet house”和“smiling, greeting neighbors”，通过对比凸显Hatch先生的变化，为邻里善意回馈做铺垫，情节连贯。 4. 主题升华：以“the real warmth came from their kindness, not the package”点明核心，诠释善意传递的意义，贴合“温暖终有回响”的主题，传递积极情感。 （五）高分句子默写 一、描写类（场景与动作） 1. Hearing the postman’s words, the cup in Mr. Hatch’s hand fell to the ground. He dropped his head in disappointment, his eyes filled with sorrow, and the smile on his face disappeared instantly. 2. The neighbors came to Mr. Hatch’s door with home-made food and small gifts, knocked gently, with warm smiles on their faces and concern in their eyes. 二、情感类（感悟与联结） 1. Mr. Hatch finally realized that what really warmed him was not the misdelivered package, but the sincere kindness and acceptance from his neighbors. 2. Kindness is never one-way. Mr. Hatch warmed his neighbors with his change, and the neighbors’ feedback made him completely say goodbye to loneliness and have a real home. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $