Unit 7 写作专项：Writing an Article about Someone You Admire Most 2025-2026学年沪教版英语七年级下册

沪教版七下英语 Unit 7 写作专项 Writing an Article about Someone You Admire Most 一、写作目标 结合本单元“介绍榜样人物、运用感叹句”的核心目标,能写一篇80-120词的短文,介绍你最敬佩的人,内容包括:人物身份、主要事迹、取得的成就,以及敬佩他/她的原因。 能正确使用感叹句(what/how引导)表达对榜样的赞美(本单元核心语法); 能运用本单元与人物事迹相关的词汇(如develop, achieve, devote to)撰写文章; 能按“人物介绍-事迹成就-敬佩原因”的结构组织内容,语言真挚、逻辑清晰,体现榜样的精神价值。 二、题目解析 体裁:记叙文(文章),要求介绍敬佩的榜样人物,契合本单元“理解时代榜样”的写作要求; 人称:以第一人称(I)为主,表达个人敬佩之情,以第三人称(he/she)描述人物事迹; 时态:核心用一般过去时(描述事迹)和一般现在时(表达评价),搭配感叹句增强情感,难度适配七年级下册学生水平; 核心要求 ￮ 内容:写清人物身份、1-2件核心事迹、取得的成就,以及敬佩的原因; ￮ 格式:包含标题、人物介绍、事迹描述、结尾感悟,语言符合初中生表达习惯; ￮ 字数:80-120词,用简单句+感叹句为主,适当运用衔接词(如because, so),使文章流畅。 三、典型例题 时代榜样能给我们带来力量与指引。请你以“The Person I Admire Most”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你最敬佩的人。 要点: 你最敬佩的人是谁?他/她的身份是什么? 他/她有哪些主要事迹和成就? 你为什么敬佩他/她? 四、思路点拨 开头介绍:点明敬佩的人物及身份(如“The person I admire most is Gu Fangzhou, a great scientist”),用感叹句引出对他的赞美; 中间描述:介绍人物的核心事迹与成就(如“他研发‘糖丸’预防小儿麻痹症”),结合本单元词汇; 结尾感悟:说明敬佩的原因(如“他的奉献精神值得学习”),升华对榜样的情感。 五、写作模板(逐段拆解,贴合单元目标) 第一段:开头介绍 写作目的:点明人物身份,用感叹句表达初步赞美; 必写要素:人物姓名+身份+感叹句; 基础句式:The person I admire most is _. He/She is a _. What a great person he/she is! 示例:The person I admire most is Gu Fangzhou. He was a People’s Scientist in China. What a wonderful and selfless person he was! 第二段:事迹与成就 写作目的:描述人物的核心事迹,体现其成就; 必写要素:主要事迹+取得的成果; 基础句式:He/She _ to _. For example, he/she _. This helped _. How amazing his/her work was! 示例:He devoted his life to fighting polio. He developed the “sugar pill” to stop children from getting this disease. Millions of kids were protected because of his work. How great his contribution was! 第三段:敬佩原因 写作目的:说明敬佩的原因,升华主题; 必写要素:精神品质+个人感悟; 基础句式:I admire him/her because he/she _. We should learn from his/her _. 示例:I admire him because he cared about children’s health more than his own. We should learn from his selfless spirit. 六、范文 英文 The Person I Admire Most The person I admire most is Gu Fangzhou. He was a People’s Scientist in China. What a selfless person he was!(本单元感叹句用法) He devoted his whole life to fighting polio. He developed the “sugar pill” to protect children from this terrible disease. Millions of kids stayed healthy because of his work. How great his contribution to our country was!(本单元感叹句用法) I admire him because he put others’ needs before his own. His spirit of devotion tells us to work hard for the people we care about. 中文翻译 我最敬佩的人 我最敬佩的人是顾方舟。他是中国的“人民科学家”。他是多么无私的一个人啊! 他把一生都奉献给了对抗小儿麻痹症的事业。他研发了“糖丸”来保护孩子们免受这种可怕疾病的侵害。因为他的工作,数百万孩子保持了健康。他对国家的贡献多么伟大啊! 我敬佩他,因为他把别人的需求放在自己之前。他的奉献精神告诉我们,要为自己关心的人而努力。 七、素材积累 短语 People’s Scientist — 人民科学家 devote one’s life to — 把一生奉献给 fight polio — 对抗小儿麻痹症 develop the “sugar pill” — 研发“糖丸” protect...from — 保护……免受 put others’ needs before one’s own — 把别人的需求放在自己之前 spirit of devotion — 奉献精神 基础句型 基础句型 仿写句子 He devoted his life to fighting polio. She devoted her time to helping old people. What a selfless person he was! What a brave teacher she is! How great his contribution was! How amazing her work is! 好句集锦 A role model is someone who uses their ability to help more people and make the world better.(榜样是用自己的能力帮助更多人、让世界更美好的人。) Gu Fangzhou’s “sugar pill” not only saved children’s health but also brought hope to thousands of families.(顾方舟的“糖丸”不仅拯救了孩子们的健康,也给千万家庭带来了希望。) 谚语 A good example is the best sermon.(身教重于言传。) 八、学生写作填空练习版 The Person I Admire Most The person I admire most is _(人名,如Gu Fangzhou). He/She was a _(身份,如People’s Scientist) in China. What a _(形容词,如selfless) person he/she was! He/She _(事迹,如devoted his whole life) to fighting _(事业,如polio). He/She developed _(成就,如the “sugar pill”) to protect children from this disease. Millions of kids stayed healthy because of his/her work. How _(形容词,如great) his/her contribution was! I admire him/her because he/she _(原因,如put others’ needs before his own). His/Her spirit of _(品质,如devotion) tells us to work hard for others. ( 1 ) 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $