Unit6 写作专项：Rules for Saving Electricity at Home 2025-2026学年沪教版英语七年级下册

沪教版七下英语 Unit 6 写作专项 Rules for Saving Electricity at Home 一、写作目标 结合本单元“了解电的重要性、掌握安全用电及节电方法”的核心目标，能写一篇80-120词的家庭节电规则短文，内容包括：节电的必要性，家庭中“应该做”和“不应该做”的节电行为，体现本单元情态动词（must/must not）的用法。 能正确使用情态动词（must/must not）表达节电的义务与禁忌（本单元核心语法）； 能运用本单元与用电、节电相关的词汇（如switch off, turn on, leave...open）撰写规则； 能按“总起-分述（Dos & Don’ts）-总结”的结构组织内容，语言简洁、逻辑清晰，贴合“家庭规则”的实用场景。 二、题目解析 体裁：应用文（规则清单），要求介绍家庭节电规则，契合本单元“节约用电”的写作要求； 人称：以第一人称复数（we）为主，表达家庭共同遵守的规则，符合规则类短文的人称规范； 时态：核心用一般现在时+情态动词（must/must not），明确日常行为规范，难度适配七年级下册学生水平； 核心要求 ￮ 内容：写清节电的必要性，分“应该做”“不应该做”两类列出2-3条具体节电规则； ￮ 格式：包含总起句、分类规则、总结句，语言简洁实用； ￮ 字数：80-120词，用祈使句+情态动词结构为主，分类排版增强可读性。 三、典型例题 电是生活中不可或缺的资源，节约用电是保护地球的重要方式。请你以“Rules for Saving Electricity at Home”为题，写一篇短文，分享你家的节电规则。 要点： 为什么要节约用电？ 家庭中“应该做”的节电行为有哪些？ 家庭中“不应该做”的用电行为有哪些？ 四、思路点拨 总起引入：点明电的重要性与节电的意义（如“Electricity is important in our life, so we must save it to protect the Earth”），引出“家庭节电规则”的主题； 分述规则：按“Dos（应该做）”和“Don’ts（不应该做）”分类，每条规则用“must/must not + 动作”的结构表述，搭配本单元核心词汇； 结尾总结：强调遵守规则的价值（如“Following these rules helps save energy and make our home greener”），呼应主题。 五、写作模板（逐段拆解，贴合单元目标） 第一段：总起引入 写作目的：点明节电的必要性，引出家庭规则主题； 必写要素：电的重要性+节电意义； 基础句式：Electricity is very important in our daily life. We must save it to protect our planet, so my family has some rules. 示例：Electricity is a precious resource in our life. To save energy and protect the Earth, my family follows these rules for saving electricity. 第二段：分述规则 写作目的：分类列出节电规则，运用情态动词（must/must not）和本单元核心词汇； 必写要素：Dos类规则+Don’ts类规则； 基础句式： Dos: We must _______. We must also _______. Don’ts: We must not _______. We must not _______ either. 示例： Dos: We must switch off the lights when we leave home. We must also turn off the computer if we don’t use it. Don’ts: We must not turn on the air conditioner when the window is open. We must not leave the fridge door open for a long time. 第三段：结尾总结 写作目的：强调规则的价值，呼吁坚持执行； 必写要素：规则的意义+行动呼吁； 基础句式：Following these rules helps save a lot of electricity. Let’s keep doing these small things every day. 示例：These rules help us save electricity easily. Let’s follow them to make our home greener. 六、范文 英文 Rules for Saving Electricity at Home Electricity is a precious resource in our life. To save energy and protect the Earth, my family follows these rules for saving electricity. Dos: We must switch off the lights when we leave home.（情态动词，本单元核心语法）We must also turn off the computer if we don’t use it. Don’ts: We must not turn on the air conditioner with the window open. We must not leave the fridge door open for too long. These small rules help save a lot of electricity. Let’s keep doing them to make our planet better. 中文翻译 家庭节电规则 电是我们生活中宝贵的资源。为了节约能源、保护地球，我家遵守这些节电规则。 应该做的事：我们离开家时必须关掉灯。不用电脑时，我们也必须关掉它。 不应该做的事：我们不能开着窗户开空调。我们不能让冰箱门长时间开着。 这些小规则能帮我们节约很多电。让我们坚持做这些事，让地球变得更好。 七、素材积累 短语 switch off the lights — 关掉灯 turn off the computer — 关掉电脑 turn on the air conditioner — 开空调 leave the fridge door open — 让冰箱门开着 save electricity — 节约用电 precious resource — 宝贵的资源 基础句型 基础句型 仿写句子 We must switch off the lights when we leave home. We must turn off the TV when we go to bed. We must not turn on the air conditioner with the window open. We must not leave the lights on in empty rooms. Following these rules helps save electricity. Following these rules makes our home greener. 好句集锦 Every small action to save electricity can make a big difference to our planet.（每一个节约用电的小举动，都能给地球带来大改变。） Saving electricity is not only good for the Earth but also helps reduce family costs.（节约用电不仅对地球有益，还能降低家庭开支。） 谚语 Save electricity, save the Earth.（节约用电，拯救地球。） 八、学生写作填空练习版 Rules for Saving Electricity at Home Electricity is a _______(名词，如precious resource) in our life. To save energy and protect the Earth, my family follows these rules for saving electricity. Dos: We _______(情态动词，如must) switch off the lights when we leave home. We _______(情态动词，如must) also turn off the computer if we don’t use it. Don’ts: We _______(情态动词，如must not) turn on the air conditioner with the window open. We _______(情态动词，如must not) leave the fridge door open for too long. These small rules help save a lot of electricity. Let’s keep doing them to _______(动词短语，如make our planet better). ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $