Unit4 写作专项：Writing a Story about an Animal - 2025-2026学年沪教版英语七年级下册

沪教版七下英语 Unit 4 写作专项 Writing a Story about an Animal 一、写作目标 结合本单元“讲述动物帮助人类的故事、理解人与动物关系”的核心目标，能写一篇80-120词的动物故事短文，内容包括：故事的时间、地点、角色，动物帮助人类的具体事件，以及故事的感悟。 能正确使用一般过去时叙述过去发生的故事（本单元核心时态）； 能运用本单元与动物、事件描述相关的词汇（如save, help, appear, lead, care for）撰写故事； 能遵循“开头-发展-结尾”的故事结构，语言连贯、逻辑清晰，体现“动物是人类朋友”的主题。 二、题目解析 体裁：记叙文（故事），要求讲述动物帮助人类的经历，契合本单元“描述动物与人类关系”的写作要求； 人称：以第三人称（he/she/it）为主，叙述故事中的角色与事件，符合故事类短文的人称规范； 时态：核心用一般过去时（动词用过去式，如saved, appeared, led），描述过去发生的故事；用一般现在时表达感悟，难度适配七年级下册学生水平； 核心要求 ￮ 内容：写清故事的时间、地点、角色，动物帮助人类的具体过程，以及对“动物是人类朋友”的感悟，体现本单元主题； ￮ 格式：包含故事开头（背景引入）、发展（事件经过）、结尾（结果与感悟），语言符合初中生叙事习惯； ￮ 字数：80-120词，以简单句为主，适当运用then, suddenly, luckily等过渡词衔接，使故事流畅。 三、典型例题 动物是人类的好朋友，它们常常会用自己的方式帮助人类。请你以“Writing a Story about an Animal”为题，写一篇短文，讲述一个动物帮助人类的真实或虚构故事。 要点： 故事的时间、地点和主要角色是什么？ 动物是如何帮助人类摆脱困境的？ 这个故事让你有什么感悟？ 四、思路点拨 开头引入：交代故事的时间、地点和核心角色（人+动物），铺垫事件背景（如“某人在某地遇到麻烦”），开门见山引出故事； 故事发展：按事件顺序描述动物帮助人类的具体过程（如“人类陷入困境→动物出现→动物采取行动→困境解除”），用过渡词让情节更连贯； 结尾感悟：说明事件的结果，表达对动物的赞美和“人与动物应和谐相处”的感悟，总结全文，升华主题。 五、写作模板（逐段拆解，贴合单元目标） 第一段：开头引入 写作目的：交代故事背景与角色，引出核心事件，呼应本单元“动物帮助人类”的主题； 必写要素：时间+地点+角色+困境铺垫； 基础句式：Last [时间], [角色] was [做某事] in [地点] and suddenly got into trouble—he/she [具体困境]. 示例：Last Saturday afternoon, Grandma Wang was picking vegetables in the mountain and suddenly fell down, feeling too painful to move. 第二段：故事发展 写作目的：描述动物帮助人类的具体过程，运用一般过去时和本单元核心词汇、过渡词； 必写要素：动物出现→行动过程→帮助结果； 基础句式：Then, her pet [动物名称] appeared. It [动作1] to call for help and then [动作2] towards the village. Finally, it [动作3] a villager to [角色], who was rescued quickly. 示例：Then, her pet dog Dahei ran over. It barked loudly to attract attention and then rushed to the nearby village. Suddenly, it pulled a farmer’s clothes and led him to Grandma Wang, who was in danger. 第三段：结尾感悟 写作目的：说明事件结果，表达感悟，升华单元主题； 必写要素：结果+感悟； 基础句式：Luckily, [角色] was safe and sound. This story tells us that animals are our loyal friends and we should care for them. 示例：Luckily, Grandma Wang was sent to the hospital in time and recovered soon. We should love animals as they always help us when we need it. 六、范文 英文 Writing a Story about an Animal Last Saturday afternoon, Grandma Wang was picking vegetables in the mountain and suddenly fell down, feeling too painful to move.（一般过去时，本单元核心时态） Then, her pet dog Dahei ran over at once. It barked loudly to call for help and then rushed to the nearby village.（一般过去时）Suddenly, it pulled a farmer’s clothes tightly and led him to Grandma Wang. The farmer carried her to a safe place and contacted her family. Luckily, Grandma Wang was not seriously hurt and recovered soon. This story shows that animals are our loyal and helpful friends. We should treat them with kindness and care. 中文翻译 写一个关于动物的故事 上周六下午，王奶奶正在山里摘菜，突然摔倒了，疼得动弹不得。 这时，她的宠物狗大黑立刻跑了过来。它大声叫着求救，然后冲向附近的村子。突然，它紧紧拽住一个农民的衣服，把他带到了王奶奶身边。农民把她抱到安全的地方，并联系了她的家人。 幸运的是，王奶奶伤得不重，不久就康复了。这个故事告诉我们，动物是我们忠诚又乐于助人的朋友。我们应该友善地对待它们、关爱它们。 七、素材积累 短语 pick vegetables — 摘菜 fall down — 摔倒 too...to move — 太……而动弹不得 call for help — 求救 rush to the village — 冲向村子 lead sb. to... — 把某人带到…… carry sb. to a safe place — 把某人抱到安全的地方 contact one’s family — 联系某人的家人 recover soon — 很快康复 loyal friends — 忠诚的朋友 基础句型 基础句型 仿写句子 Grandma Wang fell down and felt too painful to move. Tom got lost and felt too scared to walk alone. The dog barked loudly to call for help. The cat meowed continuously to attract attention. This story shows that animals are our loyal friends. This experience tells us that pets can bring us warmth. 好句集锦 The animal’s quick action saved the owner from danger, showing the deep friendship between them.（这只动物的迅速行动把主人从危险中救了出来，展现了它们之间深厚的友谊。） When we are kind to animals, they will repay us with their loyalty and help.（当我们善待动物时，它们会用忠诚和帮助来回报我们。） 谚语 A dog is a man’s best friend.（狗是人类最好的朋友。） Kindness to animals is kindness to humanity.（善待动物，就是善待人类自己。） 八、学生写作填空练习版 Writing a Story about an Animal Last Saturday afternoon, Grandma Wang was _______(动作，如picking vegetables) in the mountain and suddenly _______(动作，如fell down), feeling too painful to _______(动作，如move). Then, her pet dog Dahei _______(动作，如ran over) at once. It _______(动作，如barked) loudly to call for help and then _______(动作，如rushed) to the nearby village. Suddenly, it pulled a farmer’s clothes tightly and _______(动作，如led) him to Grandma Wang. The farmer _______(动作，如carried) her to a safe place and contacted her family. Luckily, Grandma Wang was not _______(状态，如seriously hurt) and recovered soon. This story shows that _______(感悟，如animals are our loyal and helpful friends). We should _______(行动，如treat them with kindness and care). ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $