Unit2 写作专项：A Wonderful Trip 2025-2026学年沪教版英语七年级下册

沪教英语七下 Unit2 写作专项 A Wonderful Trip 一、写作目标 结合本单元“描述旅行经历”的核心目标，能写一篇短文介绍一次难忘的旅行，内容包括：旅行的时间、地点、同行人员、所见所闻及感受。 能正确使用一般过去时描述旅行中的具体事件（本单元核心时态）； 能运用本单元与旅行相关的词汇（如travel, visit, enjoy, beautiful, exciting）撰写短文； 能遵循短文的基本结构，语言流畅、逻辑清晰，贴合七年级学生的写作场景和表达水平。 二、题目解析 体裁：记叙文（旅行经历分享），要求介绍一次印象深刻的旅行，需贴合本单元“谈论旅行”的写作要求。 人称：以第一人称（I）为主，描述自己的旅行经历和感受，符合个人经历分享的人称使用规范。 时态：核心用一般过去时，描述旅行中的动作、场景和感受（本单元重点时态）；可适当用一般现在时补充对地点的客观评价，难度适配七年级学生水平。 核心要求 内容：写清旅行的时间、地点、同行人员、主要活动及个人感受，体现本单元“旅行经历描述”的目标。 结构：包含开头（点明旅行基本信息）、正文（描述旅行过程）、结尾（表达感受）三部分，逻辑连贯。 字数：80-120词，句子以简单句为主，适当加入并列句（and, but, so），提升表达流畅度。 三、典型例题 旅行能开阔眼界、带来快乐。在你的记忆中，一定有一次难忘的旅行。请你以“A Wonderful Trip”为题，写一篇短文，分享你的旅行经历。 要点： 你什么时候去的哪里旅行？和谁一起去的？ 旅行中你做了哪些事情？看到了什么？ 这次旅行给你带来了怎样的感受？ 四、思路点拨 开篇点题：首先明确交代旅行的时间、地点和同行人员，让读者快速了解旅行的基本信息，贴合本单元“描述旅行”的目标。 描述过程：接着按时间顺序或逻辑顺序，介绍旅行中的主要活动、所见的美景或特别的经历，运用本单元相关词汇，让旅行场景更生动。 表达感受：最后总结这次旅行的收获或感受，如开心、难忘、增长见识等，让短文情感更饱满，结构更完整。 五、写作模板（逐段拆解，贴合单元目标） 段落 写作目的 必写要素 基础句式 示例 第一段：开篇点题 交代旅行基本信息，开门见山 时间 + 地点 + 同行人员 Last _______(时间), I went to _______(地点) with _______(同行人员). It was a wonderful trip. Last summer holiday, I went to Qingdao with my family. It was a wonderful trip. 第二段：描述过程 介绍旅行中的活动和见闻，展现旅行亮点 主要活动 + 所见所闻 On the first day, we _______(活动1). We saw _______(所见1). On the second day, we _______(活动2). The _______(事物，如food/scenery) was _______(形容词). On the first day, we went to the beach. We played with sand and swam in the sea. On the second day, we visited a seafood market. The seafood was fresh and delicious. 第三段：表达感受 总结旅行感受，升华主题 个人感受 + 难忘程度 I felt _______(感受) during the trip. It was one of the most unforgettable experiences in my life. I felt very happy and relaxed during the trip. I will never forget this wonderful experience. 六、范文 英文 A Wonderful Trip Last summer holiday, I went to Qingdao with my parents.（一般过去时，本单元核心时态） It was my first time to visit the coastal city. On the first day, we went to the golden beach. The sea was blue and the sky was clear. We built sandcastles and swam in the cool sea.（并列句式，本单元重点表达） On the second day, we visited a local seafood market. We tasted fresh crabs and shrimps, which were really delicious. In the evening, we walked along the seaside and enjoyed the beautiful sunset. This trip made me feel relaxed and happy.（一般过去时，描述感受） I not only saw beautiful scenery but also tasted delicious food. I will always remember this wonderful trip. 中文翻译 一次美妙的旅行 去年暑假，我和父母一起去了青岛。这是我第一次去这座海滨城市。 第一天，我们去了金色的沙滩。大海蓝蓝的，天空万里无云。我们堆了沙堡，还在清凉的海水里游泳。第二天，我们参观了当地的海鲜市场。我们品尝了新鲜的螃蟹和虾，味道非常鲜美。晚上，我们沿着海边散步，欣赏了美丽的日落。 这次旅行让我感到放松又开心。我不仅看到了美丽的风景，还尝到了美味的食物。我会永远记得这次美妙的旅行。 七、素材积累 （一）短语 summer holiday / winter holiday — 暑假/寒假 go on a trip — 去旅行 visit a place — 参观一个地方 play with sand — 玩沙子 swim in the sea — 在海里游泳 taste delicious food — 品尝美味的食物 enjoy the sunset — 欣赏日落 beautiful scenery — 美丽的风景 local market — 当地市场 unforgettable experience — 难忘的经历 （二）基础句型（贴合单元，可直接仿写） 基础句型 仿写句子 Last _______, I went to _______ with _______. Last weekend, I went to Beijing with my classmates. We _______ and _______ during the trip. We visited the Great Wall and took many photos during the trip. The _______ was so _______ that I loved it very much. The scenery was so beautiful that I loved it very much. This trip was one of my most unforgettable experiences. This trip was one of my happiest memories. （三）好句集锦 The air there was fresh and the people were friendly, which made us feel at home.（那里的空气清新，人们很友好，让我们有宾至如归的感觉。） We took many photos to record the beautiful moments.（我们拍了很多照片，记录下这些美好的瞬间。） Although we felt a little tired, we were full of joy.（虽然我们有点累，但心里充满了快乐。） This trip not only broadened my horizons but also taught me to cherish the time with family.（这次旅行不仅开阔了我的眼界，还让我学会珍惜和家人在一起的时光。） （四）谚语 Travel is a good teacher.（旅行是一位好老师。） Seeing is believing.（百闻不如一见。） 八、学生写作填空练习版 A Wonderful Trip Last _______(时间，如summer holiday), I went to _______(地点，如Hangzhou) with _______(同行人员，如my best friend). It was a wonderful trip. On the first day, we _______(活动1，如visited the West Lake). We saw _______(所见1，如beautiful flowers and green trees) around the lake. On the second day, we _______(活动2，如tried local snacks). The _______(事物，如snacks) was so _______(形容词，如delicious) that we wanted more. I felt _______(感受，如excited) during the trip. I not only _______(收获1，如enjoyed the beautiful views) but also _______(收获2，如made more memories). It was an unforgettable trip that I will always remember. ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $