Unit 1 A trip to the Silk Road 写作专项学案 2025-2026学年冀教版英语七年级下册

Unit 1 A trip to the Silk Road 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“丝绸之路之旅”主题，写一篇介绍丝绸之路沿线景点的短文或制定一份丝路旅行计划，描述旅行目的地、行程安排及文化意义，达成以下目标： 1.能正确使用本单元“旅行与丝路文化”相关核心词汇（如trip、Silk Road、attraction、scenery、journey、culture、history、guide、destination、ancient等）及短语（travel along、look forward to、show around、take photos、learn about、a place of interest、set off、come true等）； 2.能熟练运用一般将来时表达旅行计划，掌握“will+动词原形”的正确用法，用恰当句式描述景点特征与行程安排； 3.能按“旅行主题引入→核心细节（景点/行程）→文化感悟”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“探索丝路文明，感受文化魅力”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁：景点介绍类记叙文或旅行计划类说明文，兼具纪实性与实用性； 2.人称：第一人称（分享旅行计划、感受）或第三人称（客观介绍景点）； 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容：覆盖“1条核心路线（丝绸之路）、2-3个关键景点（如西安兵马俑、敦煌莫高窟）、1个文化意义或旅行感悟”3个要点； ￮ 字数：80–100词，描述具体生动或计划清晰可行，语言符合七年级学生水平，体现对丝路文化的探索兴趣与认知。 思路点拨 1.开头：明确引入核心主题（丝绸之路旅行），用简洁句式点明旅行目的（如“探索丝路文化” “感受古代文明”）或计划的核心目的地，用一般将来时引出下文具体描述； 2.中间：若介绍丝路景点，按“景点位置→核心特征→文化价值”展开，描述景点的独特之处（如兵马俑的历史悠久、莫高窟的艺术价值），结合单元核心短语补充细节（如“欣赏古代绘画” “了解历史故事”）；若制定旅行计划，聚焦“行程安排→每日活动→所需准备”，详细说明出发时间、途经城市、参观项目，用“will+动词原形”强化计划感； 3.结尾：分享旅行感悟（如“丝路是文明的桥梁”）或表达期待（如“期待旅程早日实现”），呼应单元“丝绸之路不仅是贸易之路，更是文化交流之路”的核心主题，传递对传统文化的热爱。 写作模板（逐段拆解） 模板一：介绍丝绸之路沿线景点（西安） 第一段：景点引入与整体印象 基础句式：The Silk Road is a famous ancient route. Among all the attractions along it, ________ (景点名称) is my favourite. It is in ________ (城市名称) and has a long history of over ________ (时间) years. 示例：The Silk Road is a treasure of ancient culture. Xi’an, an important stop on the Silk Road, is full of amazing places. My favourite is the Terra Cotta Warriors, which has a history of more than 2,000 years. 第二段：景点特征与文化价值 基础句式：The ________ (景点名称) is famous for ________ (核心特征，如its life-like statues/ancient paintings). Visitors can ________ (活动，如see the amazing army of warriors/learn about ancient artists’ skills) there. It is a symbol of ancient Chinese civilization and shows the wisdom of our ancestors. 示例：The Terra Cotta Warriors are famous for their life-like statues. Each warrior has a different face, which is really amazing. We can learn about the military culture of the Qin Dynasty there. Nearby, we can also visit the Big Wild Goose Pagoda, a famous ancient building that tells stories of ancient monks’ journeys. 第三段：感悟与总结 基础句式：Visiting these places helps us understand the Silk Road better. It is not just a trade route, but a bridge of culture. I hope more people can visit the Silk Road and feel its charm. 示例：Xi’an is a living museum on the Silk Road. Every attraction tells a story of ancient times. Visiting here makes me proud of Chinese culture. The Silk Road connects the past and the present, and I will always cherish this cultural treasure. 模板二：我的丝绸之路旅行计划 第一段：计划引入与核心目的 基础句式：I have always dreamed of travelling along the Silk Road. This summer, I will make my dream come true with my family. Our goal is to ________ (目的，如learn about ancient culture and see beautiful scenery). 示例：Travelling along the Silk Road has been my dream for a long time. This winter holiday, I will set off with my classmates. We want to explore the wonders of ancient civilizations and feel the charm of the Silk Road. 第二段：行程安排与每日活动 基础句式：We will start our journey in Xi’an. On the first day, we will visit the Terra Cotta Warriors and the Bell Tower. Then we will go to Dunhuang by train. There, we will ________ (活动1，如visit the Mogao Caves) and ________ (活动2，如ride camels on Mingsha Mountain). We will stay in each city for two days to fully experience the culture. 示例：Our trip will last for a week. On Day 1, we will arrive in Xi’an and visit the Shaanxi History Museum to learn about丝路 history. On Day 3, we will take a train to Lanzhou and walk across the Zhongshan Bridge over the Yellow River. On Day 5, we will reach Dunhuang and admire the ancient paintings in the Mogao Caves. 第三段：期待与准备 基础句式：I am looking forward to this trip. I will take a camera to take photos of the beautiful scenery and a notebook to record interesting stories. I believe this trip will help me learn more about Chinese culture and become a better explorer! 示例：I can’t wait to start this journey. We have prepared comfortable shoes for walking and books about the Silk Road to learn more along the way. This trip will not only be fun but also educational. I hope to share my experiences with my friends after coming back! 范文 A Trip to the Silk Road I have a wonderful plan to travel along the Silk Road this summer. My parents will go with me, and we are all very excited. We will start in Xi’an, the starting point of the Silk Road. First, we will visit the Terra Cotta Warriors—they are amazing ancient statues. Then we will go to Dunhuang by train. We will visit the Mogao Caves to see the beautiful ancient paintings and ride camels on Mingsha Mountain. Finally, we will go to Lanzhou and walk across the Zhongshan Bridge. This trip will help me learn more about ancient Chinese culture. The Silk Road is a bridge of history and culture. I am looking forward to this meaningful journey and can’t wait to experience the charm of the Silk Road! 范文中文翻译 丝绸之路之旅 今年夏天，我有一个很棒的计划——沿着丝绸之路旅行。我的父母会和我一起去，我们都非常兴奋。 我们将从丝绸之路的起点西安出发。首先，我们会参观兵马俑——它们是令人惊叹的古代雕像。然后我们会乘火车去敦煌，参观莫高窟，欣赏美丽的古代绘画，还会在鸣沙山骑骆驼。最后，我们会去兰州，走过中山桥。 这次旅行会让我更多地了解中国古代文化。丝绸之路是历史与文化的桥梁。我期待着这次有意义的旅程，迫不及待地想感受丝绸之路的魅力！ 素材积累 核心短语 travel along 沿着……旅行 look forward to 期待 show around 带领参观 take photos 拍照 learn about 了解 a place of interest 名胜古迹 set off 出发 come true 实现 start from 从……开始 ride camels 骑骆驼 walk across 穿过 ancient civilization 古代文明 cultural treasure 文化瑰宝 military culture 军事文化 trade route 贸易路线 基础句型（含本单元重点） 基础句型 仿写句子 I will travel along the Silk Road to ________. I will travel along the Silk Road to learn about ancient culture. ________ is a famous place of interest on the Silk Road. The Mogao Caves is a famous place of interest on the Silk Road. We will ________ in ________ (city) on the first day. We will visit the Bell Tower in Xi’an on the first day. Visiting ________ helps us ________. Visiting the Silk Road helps us understand ancient history. I am looking forward to ________ because ________. I am looking forward to the trip because I love ancient culture. 好句集锦 1.The Silk Road is not just a journey of distance, but a journey of culture and history. 2.Every stop along the Silk Road tells a wonderful story of ancient times. 3.Exploring the Silk Road helps us connect with the past and cherish the cultural heritage. 谚语 1.Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand li.（读万卷书，行万里路） 2.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.（千里之行，始于足下） 3.History is a mirror that helps us understand the present.（历史是一面镜子，帮助我们理解当下——适用于丝路文化感悟） 学生写作填空练习版 版本一：介绍丝绸之路沿线景点 The Silk Road is an ancient and famous route. Among its many attractions, ________ (景点名称) is the most impressive. It is in ________ (城市名称) and has a history of over ________ (数字) years. This attraction is famous for ________ (核心特征，如its ancient paintings/stone statues). Visitors can ________ (活动1，如admire the art works) and ________ (活动2，如learn about ancient stories) there. It shows the wisdom of ancient people and is a precious cultural treasure. Visiting this place makes me ________ (感受，如proud of Chinese culture). The Silk Road is a bridge of civilizations. I hope more people can visit it and ________ (行动，如feel its beauty). 版本二：我的丝绸之路旅行计划 I have always wanted to travel along the Silk Road. This ________ (季节/假期), I will go with ________ (同行者，如my family/my classmates). Our trip will last for ________ (天数) days. We will start from ________ (起点城市). On the first day, we will ________ (活动1，如visit the Terra Cotta Warriors). Then we will go to ________ (下一站城市) by ________ (交通方式，如train/bus). There, we will ________ (活动2，如visit the Mogao Caves) and ________ (活动3，如take photos of the scenery). I am looking forward to this trip. I will prepare ________ (物品，如a camera/a notebook) to ________ (用途，如record memories/learn more). I believe this trip will help me ________ (收获，如know more about history) and become more interested in Chinese culture! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $