Unit 5 Action! 写作专项学案 2025-2026学年沪教牛津版（2012）英语九年级上册

Unit 5 Action! 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“电视节目与娱乐产业”主题,写一篇节目主持脚本或分享电视/影视相关体验的短文,描述节目流程、影视体验细节及个人感受,达成以下目标: 1.能正确使用本单元“影视与娱乐”相关核心词汇(如studio、contestant、director、script、host、prize、victory、audience、performance、talent等)及短语(pass out、keep still、ahead of、take part in、win the prize、TV viewing habits、film set等); 2.能熟练运用although/though引导的让步状语从句,正确使用表格呈现信息,用一般过去时叙述影视相关经历,用一般现在时介绍节目规则或常态习惯; 3.能按“节目/体验引入 核心流程/细节 总结与感受”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“娱乐丰富生活,参与创造快乐”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁:节目主持脚本或体验分享类记叙文,兼具实用性与纪实性; 2.人称:第一人称(分享体验、主持节目)或第三人称(介绍节目规则); 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容:覆盖“1个核心节目/影视体验、2-3个关键细节(节目流程、体验亮点、意外情况)、1个总结感受或节目意义”3个要点; ￮ 字数:80–100词,脚本逻辑清晰或描述具体生动,语言符合九年级学生水平,体现对影视娱乐的积极认知。 思路点拨 1.开头:明确引入核心对象(参考课本《Travel Quiz》 quiz show、电影公园参观等案例),用简洁句式点明节目类型(如才艺表演、知识竞赛)或体验地点(如电视台、电影公园),概括核心亮点(如“惊喜不断” “收获满满”),引出下文具体内容; 2.中间:若写节目脚本,按“开场介绍 选手介绍 规则说明 竞赛环节 结尾颁奖”的流程展开,用让步状语从句增加表达丰富度(如“Although the questions are difficult, our contestants are well-prepared”);若写体验分享,描述关键经历(如意外成为节目选手、参观电影拍摄现场),补充细节(如节目录制中的小插曲、影视场景的真实感受),用单元核心短语强化表达; 3.结尾:总结节目意义(如“展现才华、传递快乐”)或体验收获(如“了解影视制作、收获意外惊喜”),呼应单元“娱乐不仅是享受,更是参与和成长”的核心主题,传递积极的娱乐态度。 写作模板(逐段拆解) 模板一:节目主持脚本(校园才艺秀) 第一段:开场引入 基础句式:Good evening, everyone! Welcome to _ (节目名称), the most exciting talent show in our school! I’m your host _ (你的名字). Tonight, we have amazing contestants with great skills. Let’s give them a big hand! 示例:Good evening, teachers and classmates! Welcome to “Star Talent Show”! I’m your host Lily. Tonight, 8 talented students will show their skills—singing, dancing, magic and more. Get ready for a wonderful night! 第二段:选手与规则介绍 基础句式:First, let’s meet our contestants. They are _ (选手介绍,如Tom from Grade 9, who is good at playing the guitar). The rules are simple: although each performance is only 3 minutes, the judges will score based on skill and creativity. The winner will get a special prize—a chance to perform at the school celebration! 示例:Let’s welcome our first contestant, Amy. She’s a Grade 8 student and loves classical dance. Although she’s nervous, she’s prepared for weeks. Our judges will score from 1 to 10. After all performances, we’ll announce the winner. Remember to cheer for your favorite! 第三段:结尾与互动 基础句式:What a fantastic night! All contestants did a great job. Now, let’s announce the winner—_ (获胜者)! Congratulations! Thanks to everyone for coming. “Star Talent Show” ends here. See you next year! 示例:Wow! That was amazing! Although the competition was fierce, everyone showed their best. The winner is Tom with his wonderful guitar solo! He wins a music book and a guitar pick. Thank you all for your support. Let’s cheer for all contestants again. Good night! 模板二:影视体验分享(参观电影公园) 第一段:体验引入 基础句式:Last weekend, I visited _ (地点,如the Film Park) with my classmates. It was an unforgettable experience full of surprises. I’ve always been interested in how films are made, and this visit gave me the answer. 示例:Last Saturday, my school organized a trip to the Film Park. I was so excited because I’ve watched many films shot there. It turned out to be one of the most amazing days of my life! 第二段:核心体验细节 基础句式:First, we took a tour of the film sets. Although some scenes looked simple, they were really creative—like the Dinosaur Jungle, which felt so real that I almost screamed! Then, we watched a film being shot. The director asked for volunteers, and I was lucky to be an extra. It was tiring but fun! 示例:We visited different film sets—from ancient castles to modern cities. Although they were just props, they looked exactly like real places. The most exciting part was the “Great Wave” show: a huge wave seemed to rush at us, but we didn’t get wet at all! Later, we met a director who let us try acting as students in a school scene. 第三段:体验收获 基础句式:This visit taught me that making films is not easy—it needs teamwork and creativity. I also realized that entertainment brings joy, but behind it are people’s hard work. I hope to visit again and learn more about film making! 示例:I had a wonderful time at the Film Park. It taught me how interesting film making is. Although being an extra was a small role, it made me understand the effort behind every film. I’ll never look at films the same way again. It’s a trip I’ll always remember! 范文 My Unforgettable Visit to the Film Park Last weekend, I went to the Film Park with my friends. It was a dream come true for a film lover like me. Every corner of the park was full of surprises. We first visited the Dinosaur Jungle. Although the dinosaurs were just models, they looked so real that I almost ran away! Then we watched the “Great Wave” performance. A huge wave seemed to crash over us, but we stayed dry—what amazing special effects! Later, we visited a film set and the director asked us to be extras in a school scene. It was so fun to pretend to be students in a film. This visit taught me a lot. I realized that making films needs creativity and teamwork. Although the props and scenes look simple, they take a lot of work. I had a great time and hope to learn more about film making in the future. It’s an experience I’ll never forget! 范文中文翻译 我难忘的电影公园之旅 上周末,我和朋友们去了电影公园。对于像我这样的电影爱好者来说,这简直是梦想成真。公园的每个角落都充满了惊喜。 我们首先参观了恐龙丛林。虽然这些恐龙只是模型,但它们看起来太逼真了,我差点就跑掉了!然后我们观看了“巨浪”表演。一个巨大的波浪似乎向我们袭来,但我们却没有淋湿——多么惊人的特效啊!后来,我们参观了一个电影拍摄现场,导演让我们在一个学校场景中当临时演员。假装成电影里的学生真是太有趣了。 这次参观让我学到了很多。我意识到制作电影需要创造力和团队合作。虽然道具和场景看起来很简单,但它们需要付出很多努力。我玩得很开心,希望将来能学到更多关于电影制作的知识。这是一次我永远不会忘记的经历! 素材积累 核心短语 pass out 昏迷;失去知觉 keep still 保持静止 ahead of 领先 take part in 参加 win the prize 获奖 TV viewing habits 看电视习惯 film set 电影拍摄现场 special effects 特效 give a big hand 热烈鼓掌 based on 基于 fierce competition 激烈的竞争 classical dance 古典舞 guitar solo 吉他独奏 teamwork and creativity 团队合作与创造力 基础句型(含本单元重点) 基础句型 仿写句子 Although _, _. Although the performance was short, it was very wonderful. _ is a place where _. The Film Park is a place where many famous films are shot. We visited _ and _. We visited the film set and watched actors perform. The winner will get _ for _. The winner will get a book for his excellent singing. This experience taught me that _. This experience taught me that hard work makes perfect. 好句集锦 1.Entertainment is not just about watching—it’s about feeling the creativity and passion behind every show or film. 2.Even small roles in a show or film need effort; every detail makes the performance perfect. 3.Visiting the film park opened my eyes to how films are made—creativity and teamwork turn ideas into magic. 谚语 1.Practice makes perfect.(熟能生巧——适用于节目表演准备) 2.Teamwork makes the dream work.(团队合作成就梦想——适用于影视制作) 3.Seeing is believing.(眼见为实——适用于影视体验分享) 学生写作填空练习版 版本一:节目主持脚本(知识竞赛) Good evening, everyone! Welcome to _ (节目名称)! I’m your host _ (你的名字). Tonight, we have 6 contestants from different grades. They’ll compete in knowledge about _ (主题,如science and history). Let’s meet our contestants first. They are _ (简单介绍,如Lucy, who loves reading science books). The rules are simple: although the questions are difficult, _ (规则,如the first to press the button can answer). Correct answers get 10 points, and wrong answers lose 5 points. What a great competition! All contestants did well. The winner is _ (获胜者)! He/She wins _ (奖品). Thanks for coming. See you next time! 版本二:影视体验分享(电视台参观) Last _ (时间,如Sunday), I visited a TV station with my family. It was an amazing experience that I’ll never forget. We first watched a quiz show being recorded. Although the host looked calm, _ (细节,如he practiced a lot before the show). Then we visited the control room—there were many machines that controlled the lights and sound. I even met the director, who told us _ (分享的内容,如how to make a good show). This visit taught me that _ (感悟,如making TV programmes is not easy). I learned a lot about the entertainment industry. I hope to _ (未来计划,如visit again and learn more)! 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $