Unit 5 Action! 作文学案 -2025-2026学年沪教牛津版（2012）英语九年级上册

Unit 5 Action! 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Action!”为话题，属于“娱乐与休闲”主题范畴，核心聚焦“用英语描述电视节目录制、谈论影视娱乐、撰写节目主持脚本”，运用让步状语从句（although/though）、娱乐相关核心词汇及功能句型，提升叙事类与应用类写作的生动性和实用性。常见写作角度包括：① 描述一次影视相关经历（如参观电视台、参与节目录制）；② 谈论自己喜爱的电视节目及理由；③ 撰写校园活动（如才艺表演）的主持脚本；④ 分享参观影视基地的见闻与感受。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，适配九年级学生认知水平，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “撰写校园才艺表演主持脚本”。请根据课本“Writing”板块节目主持脚本范例，为学校即将举办的“校园才艺秀”撰写一份主持脚本，包括开场介绍、选手展示串联、互动环节及结束语，词数120-150左右，题目为“Host Script for School Talent Show”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Host Script for School Talent Show Host A: Good evening, dear teachers and classmates! Welcome to our school talent show—“Shine Your Light”! I’m your host, Lily. Host B: And I’m Tom. Tonight, we’ll witness amazing talents from our schoolmates—singing, dancing, magic shows and even poetry recitation. Although it’s their first time standing on this big stage for some of them, they’ve prepared carefully for weeks. Host A: Let’s welcome our first contestant, Lucy from Class 9(1)! She’ll bring us a beautiful piano solo called “Moonlight”. Let’s give her a big hand! (After Lucy’s performance) Host B: Wow! How wonderful that was! Lucy’s playing touched everyone’s heart, didn’t it? Next up is a group of dancers from Class 9(3). They’ll show us a dynamic hip-hop dance. Although hip-hop is challenging, they’ve practiced day and night to perfect every move. Let’s cheer for them! Host A: Now, let’s have an interactive game! Who can guess the name of the next performance based on a small clue? The winner will get a small gift! (Interactive session ends) Host B: What a fantastic night it is! All contestants have shown their best selves. Thanks to all the performers and audience. Although the show is coming to an end, our passion for talents will never stop. Host A: Let’s give one last big round of applause to everyone! Good night and see you next year! 【译文】 校园才艺秀主持脚本 主持人A：亲爱的老师、同学们，晚上好！欢迎来到我们的校园才艺秀——“闪耀你的光芒”！我是主持人莉莉。 主持人B：我是主持人汤姆。今晚，我们将见证同学们的精彩才艺——唱歌、跳舞、魔术表演，还有诗歌朗诵。尽管对部分同学来说，这是他们第一次站上这个大舞台，但他们已经精心准备了数周。 主持人A：让我们有请第一位选手，来自9（1）班的露西！她将为我们带来一首优美的钢琴独奏《月光》。让我们热烈鼓掌！ （露西表演结束后） 主持人B：哇！太精彩了！露西的演奏打动了每个人的心，不是吗？接下来是来自9（3）班的舞蹈小组，他们将为我们带来活力四射的嘻哈舞蹈。尽管嘻哈舞极具挑战性，但他们日夜练习，只为完善每一个动作。让我们为他们欢呼！ 主持人A：现在，让我们来玩一个互动游戏！谁能根据小线索猜出下一个表演的名称？获胜者将获得一份小礼物！ （互动环节结束） 主持人B：多么美妙的夜晚啊！所有选手都展现了最好的自己。感谢所有表演者和观众朋友们。尽管表演即将结束，但我们对才艺的热爱永不落幕。 主持人A：让我们再一次把热烈的掌声送给在场的每一个人！晚安，我们明年再见！ 亮点词块 1.witness amazing talents 见证精彩才艺 2.piano solo 钢琴独奏 3.dynamic hip-hop dance 活力嘻哈舞蹈 4.perfect every move 完善每一个动作 5.interactive game 互动游戏 6.round of applause 一轮掌声 7.come to an end 即将结束 8.give a big hand 热烈鼓掌 高分句子 1.Although it’s their first time standing on this big stage for some of them, they’ve prepared carefully for weeks.（运用让步状语从句，贴合单元语法重点，突出选手付出） 2.Lucy’s playing touched everyone’s heart, didn’t it?（用反义疑问句增强互动感，贴合口语表达场景） 3.Although the show is coming to an end, our passion for talents will never stop.（结尾用让步状语从句升华主题，让脚本更有感染力） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友对中国的影视基地很感兴趣，请你写一封邮件，分享你参观影视基地的经历，包括参观地点、所见所闻、参与的活动及感受，词数不少于90。 Dear Jack, You mentioned you’re curious about Chinese film parks. Let me share my amazing visit to Hengdian Film City last month! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Zhang Hao 【拓展1范文】 Dear Jack, You mentioned you’re curious about Chinese film parks. Let me share my amazing visit to Hengdian Film City last month! Hengdian Film City is one of the biggest film parks in China, where many famous historical dramas are filmed. Although it was a rainy day, we were still excited. We saw ancient palaces, old streets and even a replica of the Great Wall. The most surprising part was that we got to watch a film shooting scene—actors dressed in ancient costumes were performing a battle scene. We also tried some film-related activities. I put on a knight’s costume and took photos with the film sets. Although I didn’t get to act in a scene, just being there made me feel like I was in a historical story. The visit was unforgettable. It made me understand how much work goes into making a film. Have you ever visited a film park? What’s your favourite part of film-making? Yours, Zhang Hao 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的杰克： 你提到你对中国的影视基地很好奇，让我分享一下上个月我参观横店影视城的精彩经历吧！ 横店影视城是中国最大的影视基地之一，许多著名的历史剧都在这里拍摄。尽管当天下着雨，但我们仍然很兴奋。我们看到了古老的宫殿、老街，甚至还有一段长城的复制品。最令人惊喜的是，我们有幸观看了一场电影拍摄——穿着古装的演员们正在表演一场战争戏。 我们还体验了一些与电影相关的活动。我穿上了骑士服装，和影视布景合影留念。虽然我没有机会参演，但仅仅身处其中，就让我感觉自己置身于历史故事里。这次参观令人难忘，它让我明白了制作一部电影需要付出多少努力。 你有没有参观过影视基地？你最喜欢电影制作的哪个环节？ 你的， 张浩 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，描述你最喜欢的电视节目，运用让步状语从句和相关表达，词数100左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心内容 节目名称（《National Geographic》）、类型（纪录片）、内容（自然、动物、地理）、喜欢的原因（增长知识、画面震撼）、观看感受 语言要求 运用although/though引导让步状语从句，贴合单元语法重点 My favourite TV programme is 《National Geographic》. It’s not a reality show or a drama, but a documentary that opens up a wonderful world for me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 My favourite TV programme is 《National Geographic》. It’s not a reality show or a drama, but a documentary that opens up a wonderful world for me. The programme shows amazing scenes of nature, rare animals and different geographical landscapes around the world. Although each episode is only 45 minutes long, it’s packed with interesting knowledge. For example, I learned how penguins survive in the cold Antarctic and how volcanoes form. The camera work is breathtaking—every frame looks like a beautiful painting. Although I’m busy with my studies, I never miss an episode. It not only broadens my horizons but also teaches me to respect nature. This programme makes me want to travel around the world and explore the unknown! 【拓展2译文】 我最喜欢的电视节目是《国家地理》。它不是真人秀或电视剧，而是一部为我打开奇妙世界的纪录片。 这个节目展示了世界各地令人惊叹的自然景象、珍稀动物和不同的地理景观。尽管每集只有45分钟，但里面充满了有趣的知识。比如，我了解到企鹅如何在寒冷的南极生存，以及火山是如何形成的。摄影效果令人震撼——每一帧都像一幅美丽的画。 尽管我学习很忙，但我从不错过任何一集。它不仅开阔了我的视野，还教会我尊重自然。这个节目让我想去环游世界，探索未知的领域！ 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.影视与娱乐相关（单元重点） · 节目与活动：talent show 才艺秀；quiz show 智力竞赛节目；documentary 纪录片；reality show 真人秀；film park 影视基地；TV programme 电视节目；piano solo 钢琴独奏；hip-hop dance 嘻哈舞蹈；magic show 魔术表演；poetry recitation 诗歌朗诵 · 影视相关：film shooting 电影拍摄；film set 影视布景；costume 服装；camera work 摄影；episode 剧集；director 导演；cameraman 摄影师；make-up artist 化妆师；studio 演播室 · 语法相关：让步状语从句（although/though引导）；反义疑问句；互动类句型 · 动作与感受：witness 见证；perform 表演；prepare carefully 精心准备；touch one’s heart 打动人心；broaden horizons 开阔视野；respect nature 尊重自然；be packed with 充满 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 让步状语从句（although/though）： · 从句在前：Although it was rainy, we enjoyed the visit.（尽管下雨，我们还是很享受这次参观。） · 从句在后：We enjoyed the visit although it was rainy.（我们很享受这次参观，尽管下雨了。） · 注意：不能与but连用，例：Although he is young, he sings well.（√）/ Although he is young, but he sings well.（×） · 反义疑问句（增强互动）： · The performance was wonderful, wasn’t it?（表演很精彩，不是吗？） · You like this programme, don’t you?（你喜欢这个节目，不是吗？） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 逻辑连接：although/though 尽管；however 然而；for example 例如；not only...but also... 不仅……而且……；even 甚至 · 感悟表达：amazing 令人惊叹的；unforgettable 难忘的；breathtaking 震撼的；dynamic 活力四射的；packed with 充满；open up a wonderful world 打开奇妙世界 二、实用句型积累 1.撰写主持脚本（贴合单元核心） · Welcome to...! I’m your host... 欢迎来到……！我是主持人……，例：Welcome to our school talent show! I’m your host Amy. · Let’s welcome our first contestant... He/She will bring us... 让我们有请第一位选手……，他/她将为我们带来……，例：Let’s welcome our first contestant Tom. He will bring us a magic show. · Although..., ... has prepared... 尽管……，……已经准备了……，例：Although it’s his first performance, he has prepared for a month. · Let’s give him/her a big hand! 让我们为他/她热烈鼓掌！ · Thanks to... Although the show is ending, ... 感谢……，尽管表演即将结束，……，例：Thanks to all performers. Although the show is ending, our friendship will last. 1. 描述影视相关经历（贴合单元主题） · ...is one of the biggest...in China, where... ……是中国最大的……之一，在那里……，例：Hengdian Film City is one of the biggest film parks in China, where many dramas are filmed. · The most surprising part was that... 最令人惊喜的是……，例：The most surprising part was that we watched a real film shooting. · Although I didn’t..., just being there made me... 尽管我没有……，但仅仅身处其中就让我……，例：Although I didn’t act, just being there made me excited. 1. 谈论喜爱的节目（贴合单元内涵） · My favourite TV programme is..., which... 我最喜欢的电视节目是……，它……，例：My favourite TV programme is a documentary, which teaches me a lot. · Although each episode is..., it’s packed with... 尽管每集……，但它充满了……，例：Although each episode is short, it’s packed with knowledge. · It not only..., but also... 它不仅……，还……，例：It not only entertains me, but also broadens my horizons. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：What’s your favourite TV programme?；Have you ever visited a film park?；What talent shows have you watched?；Who is your favourite host?；Why do you like this programme? · 回答句型：My favourite TV programme is a quiz show.；Yes, I visited Hengdian Film City last year.；I have watched many talent shows, such as “The Voice”.；My favourite host is He Jiong.；I like it because it’s educational and interesting. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $