Unit 1 写作专项：Recommend a Song to the School Radio Station 2025-2026学年沪教版（五四学制）英语七年级下册

沪教英语(五四学制)七下Unit1 写作专项 Recommend a Song to the School Radio Station 一、写作目标 结合本单元“音乐与情感”的核心目标,能写一篇短文向学校广播站推荐喜欢的歌曲,内容包括:歌曲名称、歌曲特点、推荐理由及个人感受。 1. 能正确使用 both...and... not only...but also... 并列连词(本单元核心语法); 2. 能运用本单元与音乐、情感相关的词汇(如song, melody, lyrics, inspire, relax)撰写短文; 3. 能遵循推荐类短文的基本结构,语言流畅、逻辑清晰,贴合校园广播推荐的写作场景。 二、题目解析 1. 体裁:应用文(推荐文),要求向学校广播站推荐歌曲,需清晰说明推荐亮点,契合本单元“音乐影响生活”的写作要求。 2. 人称:以第一人称(I)为主,表达个人对歌曲的感受和推荐意愿,符合推荐类短文的人称使用规范。 3. 时态:核心用一般现在时描述歌曲的特点和个人常态感受;用现在完成时或一般过去时补充个人经历,重点运用 both...and... not only...but also... 并列连词(本单元重点语法),难度适配七下学生水平。 4. 核心要求 内容:写清推荐歌曲名称、歌曲特点(旋律、歌词等)、推荐理由(个人感受、带给他人的影响),体现本单元“音乐的力量”的目标。 格式:包含开头点明推荐对象、正文阐述理由、结尾总结呼吁三部分,无需书信格式,贴合广播推荐场景。 字数:80-120词,句子以简单句和并列句为主,穿插核心语法运用。 三、典型例题 音乐能给人力量、带来快乐。请你以“Recommend a Song to the School Radio Station”为题,写一篇短文向学校广播站推荐一首你喜欢的歌曲,内容需说明歌曲名称、歌曲特点,以及你推荐它的理由。 要点: 1. 你推荐的歌曲名称是什么? 2. 这首歌曲有哪些特点(如旋律、歌词等)? 3. 你为什么推荐这首歌曲(如带给你勇气、让人放松等)? 4. 希望大家听后的感受。 四、思路点拨 1. 开篇点题:首先明确点明要向学校广播站推荐的歌曲名称,开门见山引出推荐主题。 2. 阐述特点:接着介绍歌曲的核心特点,如旋律、歌词等,运用本单元并列连词让描述更生动。 3. 说明理由:然后结合个人感受说明推荐原因,比如歌曲如何激励自己、缓解压力等,增强推荐的说服力。 4. 结尾呼吁:最后总结歌曲的价值,表达希望大家喜欢的愿望,贴合广播推荐的场景需求。 五、写作模板(逐段拆解,贴合单元目标) 第一段:开篇点题 写作目的:明确推荐对象,引出歌曲名称,呼应本单元“音乐推荐”的目标。 必写要素:推荐场景 + 歌曲名称 基础句式:I want to recommend a song called [歌曲名] to our school radio station. It’s my favorite song. 示例:I’d like to recommend a song named Try Everything to our school radio station. It’s deeply loved by many teenagers. 第二段:阐述特点与推荐理由 写作目的:介绍歌曲特点,用并列连词说明推荐理由,运用本单元核心语法。 必写要素:歌曲特点 + 并列连词 + 个人感受/推荐价值 基础句式:This song not only has [特点1,如a catchy melody] but also has [特点2,如meaningful lyrics]. Every time I listen to it, I feel [感受]. It can help us [推荐价值,如cheer up when we’re down]. 示例:This song not only has a catchy melody but also has powerful lyrics that encourage us to keep trying. Every time I face difficulties in study, it makes me full of energy. It can also help my classmates relax after long classes. 第三段:结尾呼吁 写作目的:总结歌曲价值,表达希望大家喜欢的愿望,让推荐更完整。 必写要素:总结价值 + 呼吁倾听 基础句式:I believe this song will bring joy and courage to everyone. I hope all students will enjoy it. 示例:I’m sure this inspiring song will touch all of us. I really hope our school radio can play it soon. 六、范文 英文 Recommend a Song to the School Radio Station I’d like to recommend a song named Try Everything to our school radio station. It’s deeply loved by many teenagers. This song not only has a catchy melody but also has powerful lyrics that encourage us to keep trying.(not only...but also... 并列连词,本单元语法)Every time I face difficulties in study, it makes me full of energy. It both helps us relax after tiring classes and teaches us to be brave when we fail.(both...and... 并列连词,本单元语法) I’m sure this inspiring song will touch all of us. I really hope our school radio can play it soon. 中文翻译 向学校广播站推荐一首歌 我想向学校广播站推荐一首名为《尝试一切》的歌曲。它深受许多青少年的喜爱。 这首歌不仅旋律朗朗上口,还拥有鼓励我们不断尝试的有力歌词。每次我在学习中遇到困难时,它都会让我充满能量。它既帮助我们在疲惫的课程后放松,又教会我们失败时要勇敢。 我相信这首鼓舞人心的歌曲会打动我们所有人。我真的希望学校广播站能尽快播放它。 七、素材积累 短语 1. catchy melody — 朗朗上口的旋律 2. meaningful lyrics — 有意义的歌词 3. encourage sb. to do sth. — 鼓励某人做某事 4. full of energy — 充满能量 5. cheer up — 使振作起来 6. face difficulties — 面对困难 7. relax after classes — 课后放松 8. bring joy to sb. — 给某人带来快乐 基础句型 基础句型 仿写句子 This song not only has a catchy melody but also has meaningful lyrics. This book not only has interesting stories but also has useful knowledge. It both helps us relax and teaches us to be brave. This activity both improves our skills and strengthens our friendship. Every time I listen to it, I feel full of energy. Every time I read it, I feel inspired. 好句集锦 1. The lyrics of this song tell us that failure is not terrible, and we should keep moving forward.(这首歌的歌词告诉我们,失败并不可怕,我们应该继续前进。) 2. Its beautiful melody can calm us down when we’re stressed and cheer us up when we’re sad.(它优美的旋律能在我们压力大时让我们平静,在难过时让我们振作。) 3. This song is like a warm friend that always gives us support when we need it.(这首歌就像一位温暖的朋友,在我们需要时总能给予支持。) 谚语 1. Where there’s a will, there’s a way.(有志者事竟成。)—— 契合歌曲“鼓励尝试、不畏困难”的核心内涵 2. Nothing ventured, nothing gained.(不入虎穴,焉得虎子。)—— 呼应歌曲中“勇于尝试”的精神 3. Perseverance prevails where force fails.(毅力胜武力,坚持必成功。)—— 强化歌曲传递的“不放弃”理念 八、学生写作填空练习版 Recommend a Song to the School Radio Station I’d like to recommend a song named Try Everything to our school radio station. It’s deeply loved by many _(名词,如teenagers/students). This song not only has a _(形容词,如catchy) melody but also has _(形容词,如powerful) lyrics that encourage us to keep trying. Every time I face _(名词,如difficulties) in study, it makes me full of _(名词,如energy). It both helps us _(动词短语,如relax after classes) and teaches us to be _(形容词,如brave) when we fail. I’m sure this _(形容词,如inspiring) song will touch all of us. I really hope our school radio can _(动词短语,如play it soon). ( 1 ) 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $