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【2024新课标I&II卷】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
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Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考范文
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do. Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus to Prague, I’ll be late for the conference which is so important that I can’t afford to miss it!” I explained. “May I have your phone number? I will call you and return the money I owe you. I promise I will keep my word or you keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me. “Just keep your promise, Sir.” A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him. We chatted happily on the way to the airport. I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly. When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down. I also gave him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight. We became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. I felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter.
一、文章分析
考点
原文分析
续写线索
人与社会
讲述作者因航班延误匆忙搭乘出租车赶去布拉格的巴士,司机Gunter帮忙找到车站后,作者发现无现金、银行卡无法使用且取款机故障,最终通过承诺延迟付款成功赶车,返程后履约并与Gunter结为好友的故事。
作者给出解决办法——承诺还钱——冈特同意——作者登上公共汽车——履行承诺还钱——两人成为朋友
二、范文句子分析及翻译练习
类别
英文
中文
动作 + 神态描写
He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do.
他难以置信地看着我,询问我该怎么办。
神态 + 语言描写
Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment.
我又向他露出歉意的微笑,恳求他允许我延迟付款。
语言描写(解释原因)
“If I miss this last bus to Prague, I’ll be late for the conference which is so important that I can’t afford to miss it!” I explained.
“如果我错过了这最后一班去布拉格的巴士,我就会错过那个重要到我不能缺席的会议!”我解释道。
动作 + 语言描写
“May I have your phone number? I will call you and return the money I owe you. I promise I will keep my word or you keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card.
“我能要你的电话号码吗?我会打电话给你并归还欠款。我保证会遵守承诺,否则这手表就归你!”我补充道,同时递给了他我的手表和名片。
动作描写
Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me.
冈特收下了我的名片,却拒绝了我的手表。他写下自己的电话号码递给了我。
情感描写
A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words.
听到他的话,一股感激之情涌上心头。
动作描写
Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure.
我用力握了握他的手,跳下车,疯狂冲向巴士,在发车前一刻登上了车。
动作 + 神态描写
Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him.
一见到他,我就露出温暖的笑容,给了他一个大大的拥抱。
语言描写(表达感谢)
I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly.
我告诉他,多亏了他的慷慨和及时帮助,一切都很顺利。
动作描写
When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down.
当他把出租车停在机场外时,我支付了他“往返车费”——从机场到巴士站的来回费用,还附上了一笔他婉拒的丰厚小费。
动作描写
I also gave him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight.
我还送给了他一件在布拉格买的精美纪念品,他欣然收下了。
情感 + 总结描写
I felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter.
能有Gunter这样热心肠的朋友,我感到很幸运。
三、英语作文高分素材整理表(口诀记忆)
分类
英文
中文
口诀记忆
情感心理描写
(情绪变化)
in disbelief
难以置信地
难以置信表情显,意外场景常相见
a feeling of helplessness
一股无助感
无助之感漫心间,困境描写超贴切
a feeling of gratitude
一股感激之情
感激之情涌心头,受助场景必用够
felt blessed
感到幸运
心中倍感幸运味,收获美好结尾配
动作场景描写
(互动/行动)
flashed him an apologetic smile
向他露出歉意的微笑
歉意微笑递上前,犯错亏欠很自然
人际主题升华
(结尾/主旨)
generosity and timely help
慷慨与及时的帮助
慷慨相助解急难,人间温情暖心间
keep my word
遵守承诺
信守承诺重诚信,为人处世立根本
warm-hearted friend
热心肠的朋友
热心好友难寻觅,真挚情谊永铭记
kept in touch with each other regularly
定期保持联系
定期联络不疏远,友谊长存到永远
逻辑句式
(衔接/情节)
Just then I realised that…
就在那时我意识到……
彼时恍然有领悟,情节推进不突兀
A feeling of… washed over me as I…
当我……时,一股……之感涌上心头
某种情绪漫心间,场景氛围更浓烈
thanks to his…, everything had gone smoothly
多亏了他的……,一切都很顺利
多亏某人的助力,顺利结果有逻辑
四、万能套写模板(直接默写/替换关键词)
就在那时,我意识到自己陷入了困境,一股无助感涌上心头。我向对方露出歉意的微笑,诚恳地提出了解决办法,并承诺一定会遵守约定。令我感动的是,对方慷慨地同意了,还拒绝了我提出的抵押品。我用力握了握他的手,连忙赶去处理自己的事情,最终顺利完成了任务。几天后,我按照承诺联系了他,向他表达了深深的谢意,并履行了自己的约定。我还送上了一份精心准备的礼物,他欣然收下。多亏了他的热心帮助与信任,我们成为了好朋友,之后也一直定期保持联系。能遇到这样真诚善良的人,我感到无比幸运。
Just then, I realised I was in trouble and a feeling of helplessness washed over me. I flashed him an apologetic smile, sincerely put forward a solution, and promised to keep my word. To my surprise and gratitude, he generously agreed and even rejected the collateral I offered. I gave him a firm handshake, hurried to deal with my own matter, and finally completed the task smoothly. A few days later, I contacted him as promised, expressed my deep gratitude, and fulfilled my commitment. I also presented him with a carefully prepared gift, which he accepted with delight. Thanks to his warm help and trust, we became good friends and have kept in touch with each other regularly ever since. I felt extremely blessed to meet such a sincere and kind-hearted person.
可替换场景:遗失物品求助、旅行中遭遇突发状况、陌生人互助、团队合作应急等
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【2024新课标I&II卷】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、文章分析
考点
原文分析
续写线索
人与社会
二、范文句子分析及翻译练习
类别
英文
中文
动作 + 神态描写
He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do.
神态 + 语言描写
Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment.
语言描写(解释原因)
“If I miss this last bus to Prague, I’ll be late for the conference which is so important that I can’t afford to miss it!” I explained.
动作 + 语言描写
“May I have your phone number? I will call you and return the money I owe you. I promise I will keep my word or you keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card.
动作描写
Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me.
情感描写
A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words.
动作描写
Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure.
动作 + 神态描写
Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him.
语言描写(表达感谢)
I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly.
动作描写
When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down.
动作描写
I also gave him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight.
情感 + 总结描写
I felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter.
三、英语作文高分素材整理表(口诀记忆)
分类
英文
中文
口诀记忆
情感心理描写
(情绪变化)
难以置信地
难以置信表情显,意外场景常相见
一股无助感
无助之感漫心间,困境描写超贴切
一股感激之情
感激之情涌心头,受助场景必用够
感到幸运
心中倍感幸运味,收获美好结尾配
动作场景描写
(互动/行动)
向他露出歉意的微笑
歉意微笑递上前,犯错亏欠很自然
人际主题升华
(结尾/主旨)
慷慨与及时的帮助
慷慨相助解急难,人间温情暖心间
遵守承诺
信守承诺重诚信,为人处世立根本
热心肠的朋友
热心好友难寻觅,真挚情谊永铭记
定期保持联系
定期联络不疏远,友谊长存到永远
逻辑句式
(衔接/情节)
就在那时我意识到……
彼时恍然有领悟,情节推进不突兀
当我……时,一股……之感涌上心头
某种情绪漫心间,场景氛围更浓烈
多亏了他的……,一切都很顺利
多亏某人的助力,顺利结果有逻辑
四、万能套写模板(直接默写/替换关键词)
就在那时,我意识到自己陷入了困境,一股无助感涌上心头。我向对方露出歉意的微笑,诚恳地提出了解决办法,并承诺一定会遵守约定。令我感动的是,对方慷慨地同意了,还拒绝了我提出的抵押品。我用力握了握他的手,连忙赶去处理自己的事情,最终顺利完成了任务。几天后,我按照承诺联系了他,向他表达了深深的谢意,并履行了自己的约定。我还送上了一份精心准备的礼物,他欣然收下。多亏了他的热心帮助与信任,我们成为了好朋友,之后也一直定期保持联系。能遇到这样真诚善良的人,我感到无比幸运。
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可替换场景:遗失物品求助、旅行中遭遇突发状况、陌生人互助、团队合作应急等
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