内容正文:
冀教版八下英语 Unit 2 写作任务
描述一场事故
写作题目
假设你是文中的安(Ann),在事故一周后回到学校,请你向同学们简要讲述这次事故的经过,写一篇80-120词的短文。
写作目标
1. 能运用本单元安全、事故、急救类核心词汇,清晰描述事故的起因、经过与结果;
2. 正确使用过去进行时(描述事发时正在进行的动作)、一般过去时(描述事件先后顺序)等语法,表达逻辑连贯;
3. 遵循“起因-经过-结果-感悟”的叙事结构,传递安全意识。
题目解析
1. 体裁:记叙文,围绕“讲述事故经历”展开,契合本单元“Safety”主题;
2. 语法重点:过去进行时(was/were + v.-ing)与一般过去时结合,体现动作的延续性与先后性;
3. 内容要求:包含“事发背景、事故经过、他人帮助、个人感悟”四部分,结构完整;
4. 词数:80-120词,以简单句、复合句结合为主,语言简洁自然。
思路点拨
1. 开篇引入:交代时间、地点和事发前的状态,用1句话引出事故背景;
2. 正文叙事:用过去进行时描述事发时正在进行的动作,用一般过去时讲述事故的发生与经过;
3. 他人帮助:描述他人的救援行为,体现事件的完整性;
4. 结尾感悟:总结事故带来的教训,传递安全意识。
写作模板(逐段拆解,紧扣主题与语法)
段落
基础句式
示例句式
第一段:开篇引入
That day, I was [doing sth] with [sb] when [accident happened].
That day, I was walking to basketball practice with my brother when an accident happened.
第二段:正文叙事
Suddenly, [cause of accident]. I [action], and then [result].
Suddenly, my basketball rolled onto the street. I raced to get it, and a car hit me because the street was icy.
第三段:他人帮助
Luckily, [sb] helped me. He/She [action].
Luckily, the driver and a teacher helped me. The driver called an ambulance and stopped traffic.
第四段:结尾感悟
This experience taught me [lesson]. I will [promise] in the future.
This experience taught me to be more careful on the street. I will always watch for cars and never rush into the road.
范文
英文范文
That day, I was walking to early basketball practice with my brother James. We were in a hurry because we didn’t want to be late. Suddenly, my basketball rolled onto the icy street. I raced to get it without looking for cars. Just then, a car came and hit me — the driver couldn’t stop in time.
Luckily, a teacher nearby saw it and shouted to warn me, but I didn’t hear her. The driver, Mr Morin, called an ambulance and stopped traffic until it arrived. I broke my leg and stayed in hospital for a week.
This accident taught me a big lesson: always be careful on the street, especially when the road is icy. I will never rush into the road again!
中文翻译
那天,我和哥哥詹姆斯正赶去参加早间篮球训练。我们很着急,因为不想迟到。突然,我的篮球滚到了结冰的街上。我没看车就冲过去捡球。就在这时,一辆车开了过来撞到了我——司机没能及时停下。
幸运的是,附近的一位老师看到了,大声警告我,但我没听见。司机莫林先生叫了救护车,并在救护车到来前维持交通。我摔断了腿,在医院住了一周。
这次事故给了我一个深刻的教训:在街上一定要小心,尤其是路面结冰的时候。我再也不会冲进马路了!
素材积累
核心短语
be in a hurry 匆忙
roll onto the street 滚到街上
race to get sth 冲过去拿某物
icy street 结冰的街道
stop in time 及时停下
call an ambulance 叫救护车
break one’s leg 摔断腿
teach sb a lesson 给某人一个教训
好句集锦
1. We were walking to school when it began to rain heavily.
(我们正走在去学校的路上,突然下起了大雨。)
2. I was crossing the street when a bike hit me from behind.
(我正在过马路,这时一辆自行车从后面撞到了我。)
3. The driver couldn’t stop his car because the road was too icy.
(因为路面太滑,司机没能刹住车。)
4. This experience made me realize how important it is to follow traffic rules.
(这次经历让我意识到遵守交通规则是多么重要。)
基础句型
基础句型
仿写句子
I was [doing sth] when [accident happened].
I was riding my bike when I fell off.
Luckily, [sb] helped me by [doing sth].
Luckily, a policeman helped me by calling my parents.
This accident taught me that [lesson].
This accident taught me that I should always wear a helmet.
学生写作填空练习版
That day, I was walking to early basketball practice with my brother James. We were in a _______(1) (hurry/school) because we didn’t want to be late. Suddenly, my basketball _______(2) (rolled/walked) onto the icy street. I _______(3) (raced/ran) to get it without looking for cars. Just then, a car came and hit me — the driver couldn’t _______(4) (stop/run) in time.
Luckily, a teacher nearby saw it and shouted to warn me, but I didn’t _______(5) (hear/see) her. The driver, Mr Morin, _______(6) (called/visited) an ambulance and stopped traffic until it arrived. I _______(7) (broke/hurt) my leg and stayed in hospital for a week.
This accident taught me a big lesson: always be _______(8) (careful/happy) on the street, especially when the road is icy. I will never rush into the road again!
填空答案
1. hurry
2. rolled
3. raced
4. stop
5. hear
6. called
7. broke
8. careful
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