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Unit 9 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“表达偏好”主题,写一篇校园专栏稿,介绍自己喜爱的音乐或电影类型及代表作,说明喜爱的原因,分享欣赏感受,达成以下目标:
1. 能正确使用本单元“音乐电影相关”核心词汇(如lyrics、instrument、director、dialog、humorous、smooth等)及短语;
1. 能熟练运用定语从句(that who which引导)描述偏好,用连词(because、so、while)衔接逻辑;
1. 能按“偏好类型→代表作介绍→喜爱原因”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“用英语表达个人审美与感受”的单元主题。
题目解析
1. 体裁:介绍类说明文,分享个人对音乐或电影的偏好;
1. 人称:第一人称(表达个人感受与选择);
1. 核心要求
○ 内容:覆盖“喜爱的音乐电影类型、1-2部代表作、2-3个喜爱的原因”3个要点;
○ 字数:80–100词,时态以一般现在时为主,灵活运用定语从句,突出个人审美倾向。
思路点拨
1. 开头:明确点明自己喜爱的音乐或电影类型(如能跟着唱的音乐、搞笑电影、有深度的纪录片等,参考课本对不同类型音乐电影的描述);
1. 中间:介绍该类型的代表作,用定语从句描述作品特点(如旋律、歌词、剧情、演员等),说明喜爱的原因(如放松心情、引发思考、带来快乐等);
1. 结尾:分享欣赏该类型作品的感受,推荐给同学,呼应“表达偏好、分享美好”的单元主题。
写作模板(逐段拆解)
第一段:偏好类型
基础句式:My favorite kind of music/movies is... I love it because... It always makes me...
示例:My favorite kind of music is the one that I can sing along with. I love it because the lyrics are meaningful and the melody is smooth. It always makes me relaxed after a long day of study.
第二段:代表作介绍
基础句式:My favorite movie is... It was... by... The... that/which... is/are amazing. What I like most about it is...
示例:My favorite song is You Raise Me Up by West life. The lyrics that express encouragement and the beautiful melody which touches people’s hearts are amazing. What I like most about it is that it gives me courage when I face difficulties.
第三段:感受与推荐
基础句式:Whenever I listen to watch it, I feel... I think everyone should listen towatch it because... It not only... but also...
示例:Whenever I listen to it, I feel full of energy. I think everyone should listen to it because it not only brings joy but also teaches us to keep going. It’s a piece of music that can heal people’s hearts!
范文
My Favorite Music Songs That Touch My Heart
My favorite kind of music is folk music that has deep meanings and simple melodies. I’m always moved by the true feelings in it.
My favorite folk song is Chengdu by Zhao Lei. The song that describes the peaceful life in Chengdu is full of warmth. The lyrics which are like daily conversations make me feel as if I’m walking on the quiet streets of Chengdu. What I love most is the smooth tune that can calm me down whenever I’m stressed.
Folk music is not just about sounds; it’s about stories and emotions. Whenever I listen to it, I feel close to life. I think you should also try listening to folk music—It not only relaxes your mind but also helps you find beauty in daily life!
范文中文翻译
我最爱的音乐:触动心灵的歌曲
我最爱的音乐类型是具有深刻内涵和简单旋律的民谣。我总是被其中真挚的情感所打动。
我最爱的民谣是赵雷的《成都》。这首描绘成都宁静生活的歌曲充满了温暖。那些像日常对话一样的歌词,让我仿佛走在成都安静的街道上。我最喜欢的是它舒缓的旋律,每当我压力大的时候,它都能让我平静下来。
民谣不仅仅是声音,更是故事和情感的载体。每当我聆听它,都能感受到与生活的亲近。我觉得你也应该试试听民谣——它不仅能放松心情,还能帮你发现日常生活中的美好!
素材积累
核心短语
folk music 民谣
pop music 流行音乐
classical music 古典音乐
action movies 动作片
comedy movies 喜剧片
meaningful lyrics 有意义的歌词
smooth melody 舒缓的旋律
touch people’s hearts 触动人心
calm down 平静下来
full of energy 充满能量
daily conversations 日常对话
relax one’s mind 放松心情
heal people’s hearts 治愈心灵
基础句型(含本单元重点)
基础句型仿写句子
I love music that/which...I love music that can cheer me up.
I prefer movies that/which...I prefer movies that have funny dialogs.
She likes musicians who...She likes musicians who play their own instruments.
What I like most about it is...What I like most about it is the surprising ending.
好句集锦
1. Good music is like a warm hug—it comforts you when you’re down.
1. Movies that make you think are more valuable than those just for fun.
1. Everyone has their own taste in music and movies, which shows our unique personalities.
谚语
1. Music is the universal language of mankind.(音乐是人类共同的语言)
1. A good book is like a good friend, and a great movie is like a wonderful journey.(一本好书如挚友,一部佳片似妙旅)
学生写作填空练习版
My Favorite Movie/Music
My favorite kind of movie/music is... I love it because... It can always make me...
My favorite movie/music is... It was... by... The... that/which... is really great. What I like most about it is...
Whenever I watch/listen to it, I feel... I think you should watch/listen to it too because... It not only... but also... Let’s enjoy the beauty of good movies/music together!
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