内容正文:
Unit 11 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“事物对情绪的影响”主题,写一篇班级分享稿,介绍身边人或事对自己情绪的影响及应对方式,分享成长感悟,号召同学正确面对情绪、积极调整心态,达成以下目标:
1.能正确使用本单元“情绪与影响”相关核心词汇(如nervous、relaxed、upset、courage、relief、disappoint等)及短语;
2.能熟练运用“make + sb. + adj.” “make + sb. + do sth.”等句型描述事物对情绪的影响,用连词(because、however、so)衔接逻辑;
3.能按“影响源→情绪反应→应对方式”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“理性面对情绪、积极成长”的单元主题。
题目解析
1.体裁:分享类记叙文,讲述事物对个人情绪的影响与应对;
2.人称:第一人称(描述个人经历与感受);
3.核心要求
○ 内容:覆盖“1-2个具体影响源(如音乐、事件、他人言行)、对应的情绪变化、积极的应对方法”3个要点;
○ 字数:80–100词,时态以一般现在时(描述常态影响)和一般过去时(描述具体事件)为主,准确运用情绪相关句型。
思路点拨
1.开头:点明某一事物(如嘈杂的环境、他人的鼓励、失败的经历等,参考课本音乐对情绪的影响、Peter输球后的情绪变化等案例)对自己情绪的具体影响;
2.中间:描述面对该事物时的情绪反应(如紧张、放松、失落等),结合课本核心知识点,说明自己如何调整心态、积极应对;
3.结尾:分享感悟(如“学会调节情绪是成长的必修课”),号召同学正确看待情绪影响,主动寻找积极的应对方式。
写作模板(逐段拆解)
第一段:影响源与情绪反应
基础句式:There are many things that can affect my feelings. For example, ... always makes me... When I... I usually feel... because...
示例:There are many things that can affect my feelings. For example, loud music always makes me nervous and impatient. When I fail an exam, I usually feel upset because I’m worried about letting my parents down.
第二段:应对方式
基础句式:To deal with these feelings, I try different ways. When... I often... Sometimes I... It helps me to...
示例:To deal with these feelings, I try different ways. When I feel nervous, I often listen to soft piano music—it makes me relaxed. Sometimes I talk to my best friend about my worries. Sharing my feelings helps me feel better and find solutions.
第三段:成长感悟与倡议
基础句式:I realize that feelings are part of life. What matters is how we... Let’s... Remember that...
示例:I realize that feelings are part of life. What matters is how we face and adjust them. Let’s learn to turn negative feelings into motivation. Remember that a positive attitude can help us overcome difficulties and grow better!
范文
How Things Affect My Feelings and How I Deal With Them
Many things around me can influence my mood deeply. Loud noises make me anxious, and I can’t focus on my study at all. On the other hand, my mother’s encouragement always makes me full of courage when I feel helpless.
I still remember failing the math test last term. It made me so disappointed that I didn’t want to talk to anyone. Later, my teacher talked to me and said, “Mistakes are chances to improve.” Her words cheered me up. I started to review carefully and ask for help when I got confused. Little by little, my math improved.
Now I know that both good and bad things can affect our feelings. The key is to stay positive. When we feel down, we can talk to others or do things we enjoy. Let’s learn to manage our feelings well and grow into strong people!
范文中文翻译
事物如何影响我的情绪及我的应对方式
身边很多事物都会深深影响我的心情。嘈杂的噪音会让我焦虑,根本无法专注学习。而另一方面,当我感到无助时,妈妈的鼓励总能让我充满勇气。
我还记得上学期数学考试失利的事。那让我非常失望,甚至不想和任何人说话。后来老师找我谈心,她说:“错误是进步的机会。”她的话鼓舞了我。我开始认真复习,遇到困惑就主动求助。渐渐地,我的数学成绩有了提升。
现在我明白,无论是好事还是坏事,都会影响我们的情绪。关键是要保持积极心态。当我们情绪低落时,可以和别人倾诉,或者做一些自己喜欢的事。让我们学会好好管理情绪,成长为内心强大的人!
素材积累
核心短语
affect one’s mood 影响某人的情绪
make sb. nervous/relaxed/upset 让某人紧张/放松/失落
deal with feelings 处理情绪
cheer sb. up 使某人振作
focus on 专注于
let sb. down 让某人失望
turn negative feelings into motivation 把负面情绪转化为动力
stay positive 保持积极
ask for help 求助
full of courage 充满勇气
feel helpless 感到无助
manage one’s feelings 管理情绪
基础句型(含本单元重点)
基础句型
仿写句子
... makes me + adj.
Soft music makes me relaxed after a long day.
... makes me want to + do
His encouraging words make me want to try harder.
When I + do, I feel + adj.
When I help others, I feel happy and proud.
To deal with..., I + do
To deal with stress, I often go for a walk.
好句集锦
1.Our feelings are like the weather—they change, but we can always find ways to “enjoy the sunshine”.
2.Small things can bring big changes to our mood— a kind word or a beautiful view can cheer us up easily.
3.Facing negative feelings bravely is not weakness, but a sign of growth.
谚语
1.Every cloud has a silver lining.(黑暗中总有一线光明)
2.A positive attitude leads to positive outcomes.(积极的心态带来积极的结果)
学生写作填空练习版
How Things Affect My Feelings
Many things around me can affect my feelings. For example, ... always makes me... When I... I usually feel... because...
To deal with these feelings, I have my own ways. When I feel..., I often... Sometimes I... It helps me to...
I realize that feelings are part of life. What matters is how we... Let’s... Remember that a positive attitude can help us...!
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