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【2025全国一卷】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned. Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I realized it was me who was at fault. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I realized it was me who was at fault. I had been so focused on keeping the party under control that I failed to consider how important Toby was to my brother during this difficult time. My pride had kept me from reaching out, and now months had passed without a proper conversation. One evening, I picked up the phone and left him a voice message, apologizing for my behavior and asking if we could meet. To my relief, he called back the next day, and we agreed to get together soon. With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. He opened it with a surprised smile, and for a moment, neither of us spoke. Then we hugged — something we hadn’t done since before his wife passed away. We sat on the porch with Toby resting beside us, and I handed him the box of biscuits. “Thank you,” he said quietly. We talked for hours, laughing, remembering old times, and slowly rebuilding what had been lost. As I watched Toby gently rest his head on my brother’s leg, I knew we were finally on the path to healing. 1、 文章分析 考点 原文分析 续写线索 人与社会（亲情） 主要讲述了作者为保障家庭聚会顺利，要求弟弟将狗 Toby 留在室外，后因天气突变导致弟弟不满离去，兄弟俩产生隔阂。两个月后作者换位思考，意识到自身过错，主动道歉并与弟弟和解，凸显亲情中理解、包容与主动沟通的重要性。 意识到自身过错 —— 反思忽视弟弟的艰难处境 —— 主动电话道歉 —— 约定见面 —— 带饼干登门拜访 —— 兄弟拥抱和解 —— 促膝长谈重拾亲情 —— 领悟亲情修复的意义 2、 范文句子分析及翻译练习 类别 英文 中文 心理描写 I realized it was me who was at fault. 我意识到是我错了。 反思描写 I had been so focused on keeping the party under control that I failed to consider how important Toby was to my brother during this difficult time. 我太过专注于维持聚会的秩序，却没能考虑到在这个艰难的时期，Toby 对弟弟来说有多重要。 心理 + 行为描写 My pride had kept me from reaching out, and now months had passed without a proper conversation. 自尊心让我迟迟不愿主动联系，如今几个月过去了，我们却没能好好聊过一次。 动作描写 One evening, I picked up the phone and left him a voice message, apologizing for my behavior and asking if we could meet. 一天晚上，我拿起电话给他留了一条语音信息，为自己的行为道歉，并询问我们能否见面。 情绪 + 动作描写 To my relief, he called back the next day, and we agreed to get together soon. 让我宽慰的是，他第二天就回了电话，我们约定尽快见面。 动作 + 神态描写 He opened it with a surprised smile, and for a moment, neither of us spoke. 他带着惊讶的笑容打开了门，有那么一瞬间，我们俩都没说话。 动作描写 Then we hugged — something we hadn’t done since before his wife passed away. 然后我们拥抱了彼此 —— 这是自他妻子去世后我们就再也没有做过的事。 场景 + 动作描写 We sat on the porch with Toby resting beside us, and I handed him the box of biscuits. 我们坐在门廊上，Toby 在旁边休息，我把饼干盒递给了他。 语言描写 “Thank you,” he said quietly. “谢谢你，” 他轻声说道。 动作 + 场景描写 We talked for hours, laughing, remembering old times, and slowly rebuilding what had been lost. 我们聊了好几个小时，笑着回忆往昔的时光，一点点重建那些曾经失去的情谊。 感悟描写 As I watched Toby gently rest his head on my brother’s leg, I knew we were finally on the path to healing. 看着 Toby 轻轻将头靠在弟弟的腿上，我知道我们终于踏上了治愈与和解的道路。 3、 英语作文高分素材整理表（口诀记忆） 分类 英文 中文 口诀记忆 情感心理描写（反思 / 情绪） realized it was me who was at fault 意识到是自己的过错 幡然醒悟己之过，反思开篇常用着 To my relief 让我宽慰的是 心中大石终落地，宽慰表达记心里 动作场景描写（互动 / 行为） picked up the phone and left a voice message 拿起电话留语音信息 拿起电话留讯息，主动沟通第一步 opened it with a surprised smile 带着惊讶的笑容开门 开门笑容含惊讶，重逢场景真融洽 hugged each other 拥抱彼此 紧紧相拥暖人心，破冰和解最真情 talked for hours, laughing, remembering old times 聊了数小时，笑着回忆往昔 畅谈数时忆旧岁，欢声笑语解误会 亲情主题升华（结尾 / 主旨） on the path to healing 踏上治愈之路 踏上治愈和解路，亲情修复迈大步 rebuilding what had been lost 重建曾经失去的东西 重拾往昔珍贵情，主题升华有深度 consider how important...was to sb. 考虑到…… 对某人的重要性 换位思考懂他人，亲情维系靠共情 逻辑句式（衔接 / 因果） had been so focused on...that... 太过专注于…… 以至于…… 太过专注某件事，忽略他人用此句 As I watched..., I knew... 看着……，我知道…… 目睹场景生感悟，结尾升华不含糊 something we hadn’t done since... 自…… 后就未做过的事 往昔旧事作铺垫，情感对比更明显 4、 高分句式跨场景仿写练习 高分句式类型 中文仿写（不同场景） 英文 强调句型（It was...who/that...） 1. 友情场景：我终于明白，是那次未说出口的道歉让我们的友谊渐渐疏远。 2. 师生场景：直到毕业那天，我才意识到，是老师耐心的鼓励给了我坚持的勇气。 3. 邻里场景：后来我才发现，是我当初的斤斤计较伤害了邻里间的和睦。 1. I finally realized it was the unspoken apology that had drifted our friendship apart. 2. It wasn’t until graduation day that I understood it was the teacher’s patient encouragement that gave me the courage to persist. 3. Later, I found out it was my excessive haggling that had harmed the harmony between neighbors. 现在分词作伴随状语 1. 友情场景：我拨通了久未联系的好友电话，诉说着思念之情并邀请她周末小聚。2. 师生场景：老师坐在办公桌前，认真倾听我的困惑并细心给出解决建议。3. 邻里场景：阿姨拿着自家做的饺子敲响我家门，笑着表达关心并分享美食。 1.I dialed the number of my long-uncontacted friend, expressing my longing and inviting her to meet up on the weekend. 2. The teacher sat at her desk, listening to my confusion carefully and offering practical suggestions. 3. Aunt Li knocked on my door with homemade dumplings, smiling to show her care and sharing the food. 定语从句（something we hadn’t done...） 1. 友情场景：我们手牵手逛着曾经常去的街道 —— 这是自从争吵后就再没做过的事。 2. 师生场景：老师拍了拍我的肩膀鼓励我 —— 这是自从我成绩下滑后就很少感受到的温暖。 3. 邻里场景：我们一起在小区花园散步聊天 —— 这是自从那次误会后就未曾有过的惬意。 1.We walked hand in hand along the street we used to frequent — something we hadn’t done since our quarrel. 2. The teacher patted me on the shoulder to encourage me — something I hadn’t felt much since my grades dropped. 3. We walked and chatted in the community garden together — something we hadn’t enjoyed since that misunderstanding. as 引导时间状语从句 1. 友情场景：看着好友眼里熟悉的笑容，我知道我们的友谊终于回到了从前。 2. 师生场景：当我读到老师写给我的毕业留言，我才懂得她的良苦用心。 1.As I looked at the familiar smile in my friend’s eyes, I knew our friendship had finally returned to what it used to be. 2. As I read the graduation message the teacher had written for me, I understood her sincere intentions. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 【2025全国一卷】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned. Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I realized it was me who was at fault. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1、 文章分析 考点 原文分析 续写线索 人与社会（亲情） 2、 范文句子分析及翻译练习 类别 英文 中文 心理描写 I realized it was me who was at fault. 反思描写 I had been so focused on keeping the party under control that I failed to consider how important Toby was to my brother during this difficult time. 心理 + 行为描写 My pride had kept me from reaching out, and now months had passed without a proper conversation. 动作描写 One evening, I picked up the phone and left him a voice message, apologizing for my behavior and asking if we could meet. 情绪 + 动作描写 To my relief, he called back the next day, and we agreed to get together soon. 动作 + 神态描写 He opened it with a surprised smile, and for a moment, neither of us spoke. 动作描写 Then we hugged — something we hadn’t done since before his wife passed away. 场景 + 动作描写 We sat on the porch with Toby resting beside us, and I handed him the box of biscuits. 语言描写 “Thank you,” he said quietly. 动作 + 场景描写 We talked for hours, laughing, remembering old times, and slowly rebuilding what had been lost. 感悟描写 As I watched Toby gently rest his head on my brother’s leg, I knew we were finally on the path to healing. 3、 英语作文高分素材整理表（口诀记忆） 分类 英文 中文 口诀记忆 情感心理描写（反思 / 情绪） 意识到是自己的过错 幡然醒悟己之过，反思开篇常用着 让我宽慰的是 心中大石终落地，宽慰表达记心里 动作场景描写（互动 / 行为） 拿起电话留语音信息 拿起电话留讯息，主动沟通第一步 带着惊讶的笑容开门 开门笑容含惊讶，重逢场景真融洽 拥抱彼此 紧紧相拥暖人心，破冰和解最真情 聊了数小时，笑着回忆往昔 畅谈数时忆旧岁，欢声笑语解误会 亲情主题升华（结尾 / 主旨） 踏上治愈之路 踏上治愈和解路，亲情修复迈大步 重建曾经失去的东西 重拾往昔珍贵情，主题升华有深度 考虑到…… 对某人的重要性 换位思考懂他人，亲情维系靠共情 逻辑句式（衔接 / 因果） 太过专注于…… 以至于…… 太过专注某件事，忽略他人用此句 看着……，我知道…… 目睹场景生感悟，结尾升华不含糊 自…… 后就未做过的事 往昔旧事作铺垫，情感对比更明显 4、 高分句式跨场景仿写练习 高分句式类型 中文仿写（不同场景） 英文 强调句型（It was...who/that...） 1. 友情场景：我终于明白，是那次未说出口的道歉让我们的友谊渐渐疏远。 2. 师生场景：直到毕业那天，我才意识到，是老师耐心的鼓励给了我坚持的勇气。 3. 邻里场景：后来我才发现，是我当初的斤斤计较伤害了邻里间的和睦。 现在分词作伴随状语 1. 友情场景：我拨通了久未联系的好友电话，诉说着思念之情并邀请她周末小聚。2. 师生场景：老师坐在办公桌前，认真倾听我的困惑并细心给出解决建议。3. 邻里场景：阿姨拿着自家做的饺子敲响我家门，笑着表达关心并分享美食。 定语从句（something we hadn’t done...） 1. 友情场景：我们手牵手逛着曾经常去的街道 —— 这是自从争吵后就再没做过的事。 2. 师生场景：老师拍了拍我的肩膀鼓励我 —— 这是自从我成绩下滑后就很少感受到的温暖。 3. 邻里场景：我们一起在小区花园散步聊天 —— 这是自从那次误会后就未曾有过的惬意。 as 引导时间状语从句 1. 友情场景：看着好友眼里熟悉的笑容，我知道我们的友谊终于回到了从前。 2. 师生场景：当我读到老师写给我的毕业留言，我才懂得她的良苦用心。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $