内容正文:
专题15提纲作文
目录
第一部分 题型解码 高屋建瓴,掌握全局
第二部分 考向破译 微观解剖,精细教学
典例引领 方法透视 变式演练
考向01 演讲稿
考向02 留言稿
考向03 电子邮件
考向04 短文投稿
考向05 图表类
第三部分 综合巩固 整合应用,模拟实战
题型简介
近几年的高考书面表达写作大都是提纲式书信(电子邮件),这类作文特点是要点明确,范围具体,因此提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及,一个也不能遗漏。这类作文主要考查的内容有:说明主题、分析原因或解释做法;提纲作文的另一特点是思维空间灵活、开放。因此为了提高文章档次,考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
命题方式
天津历年高考英语的作文题材涉及到:
文化交流:包括中英文化交流活动、向外国友人介绍中国文化、与外国学校学生交流等;
学习与教育:包括学生学习方法、学校活动策划、学生辅导等;
个人发展与交往:包括个人规划、交换生互动、机器人技能竞赛等;
文学艺术:包括推荐书籍、讲座话题选择、观剧邀请等。
体裁主要有:信件、发言稿等
考点覆盖:词汇、语法、长难句
解题思路
第一步:审题。
1.审体裁:书信格式(电子邮件)
2.审人称:第一、二人称
3.审时态:(现在时、过去时):一般现在时、将来时
4.审结构(段落):Para. 1 开头;Para. 2 正文;Para. 3 结尾。
第二步:列提纲/要点,适当增加细节。
Para. 1 开头;Para. 2 正文;Para. 3 结尾:结束语。
第三步:连句成篇,注意:亮点呈现,句式升华。
第四步:注意润色修正文章的方式。
使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力:
1.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档;2.尝试多样化表达方式,如:强调句、名词性从句、定语从句、同位语从句等。
第五步:定稿(全面检查)。文章完成后,需要认真检查与修改,力求减少失误。
考向01 演讲稿
【例1-1】(2024·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,学校即将举办“低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题演讲活动,你要报名参加。请根据以下提示,写一篇演讲稿:
(1)指出校园中不符合低碳环保理念的现象;
(2)建议从身边小事做起,如……;
(3)号召大家行动起来。
试题词汇:低碳校园 low carbon campus
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
My fellow students,
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Thank you!
【变式1-1】(2025·天津·一模)假定你是晨光中学的李津,你校将于下周举办关于“如何利用DeepSeek提升英语学习效果(How to use DeepSeek to enhance English learning)”的演讲比赛。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:
(1)使用DeepSeek辅助英语学习的好处;
(2)利用DeepSeek学习英语的具体方法(听说训练、写作指导等等);
(3)表达期待和祝愿。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
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Thank you!
首段:抓住注意力
主题:建构论点
结尾:激发行动
考向02 留言稿
【例2-1】(2024·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。一位外国游客近日在Understanding China网站上发布短视频,赞叹科技在中国人购物、出行、学习等方面的广泛应用,一位名为 Chris的网友在评论区询问是否确实如此。请根据以下提示留言:
(1)对视频反映的情况予以肯定;
(2)介绍科技在你生活中的应用;
(3)希望国际友人来中国亲身体验。
试题词汇:短视频 video clip
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
Li Jin
@ Chris
Posted on Mar. 15, 202411: 00 AM
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【变式2-1】(24-25高一下·河北保定·月考)假定你是李华,你校拟在周末举办“名著读书会”。请你写一张留言条邀请交流生Lucy参加。内容包括:
1. 活动的时间和地点;
2. 活动内容。
Dear Lucy,
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Yours,
Li Hua
1. 开头:直接点明事由
2. 主体:清晰陈述事实
3. 结尾:明确行动与礼貌结束
考向03 电子邮件
【例3-1】(2023·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读,校方为加强中英文化交流,将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画,拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:
(1)申请参加本次活动;
(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解;
(3)结合个人兴趣和特长,说明拟教授何种技能,并阐述原因。
参考词汇:中国工坊 Chinese Workshop
中华美食 Chinese cuisine
手工艺 handicraft
书法 calligraphy
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【例3-2】(2023·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语,上周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。请根据以下提示回复邮件:
(1)解释“活雷锋”的意思;
(2)举一个身边“活雷锋”的例子;
(3)鼓励他继续学习汉语。
参考词汇:活雷锋 a living Lei Feng
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Happy to hear from you.
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Sincerely yours;
Li Jin
1. 首段:核心信息摘要
2. 中段:背景、细节与论据
3. 尾段:明确的行动号召
【变式3-1】(2025·天津河北·一模)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你校英国交换生Chris为校英语俱乐部策划“Exploring the Life of Chinese Students”栏目,打算拍摄短视频来向国外学生展现中国学生的校园生活,希望你提供一些建议。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)推荐拍摄的内容(从学习生活、体育锻炼、社团活动、校园志愿服务等内容中任选一项);
(2)说明推荐拍摄该内容的理由(至少 3点);
(3)表示愿意为拍摄提供帮助,并送上美好祝福。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
考向04 短文投稿
【例4-1】
(2021·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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1. 引人入胜的开头
2. 逻辑清晰的主题
3. 有力而余韵的结尾
【变式4--1】(2025·天津武清·模拟预测)假设你是李津,你校英文报社正在举办以“压力管理与心理健康”为主题的征文活动。请你以“How to Deal with Academic Pressure”为题,写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 学业压力的常见来源(如考试、作业、升学竞争等);
2. 应对学业压力的有效方法(如时间管理、运动、倾诉等);
3. 保持心理健康的重要性及你的建议。
注意:
(1)字数不少于100词;
(2)题目已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How to Deal with Academic Pressure
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考向05 图表类
【例5-1】
(2025高三上·全国·专题练习)假设你是实验中学校学生会主席李津。最近你所在的研究性学习小组围绕“AI对高中生学习的影响”这一课题,对高三年级500余名同学进行了问卷调查,以下饼状图是调查结果:
请你结合图表信息,为学校公众号写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.简要描述调查结果;2.分析不同态度的原因;3.你的个人观点及理由。
注意:
1.词数不少于120; 2.可适当补充细节,使文章更流畅完整;3.标题与开头已给出,不计入总词数。
AI and Learning: A Survey Among Peers
Our recent survey of 500 high school seniors conducted by our research group revealed striking differences in attitudes toward AI-assisted learning among senior three students.
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1. 审题:确定图表类型、主题时间单位
2. 规划:找出核心特征,规划主题段落内容
3. 写作:按结构完成,确保逻辑连贯
4. 检查
【变式5--1】(2026·天津南开·三模)假如你是晨光中学学生李津。学校英语报近期开展了一次学生英语活动的调查。调查结果公布之后,英语报设专栏,希望同学们分享自己的看法。请你使用图表中的调查结果,以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题,写一篇短文投稿。
主要内容包括:
1、简单陈述图表反映的调查结果,
2、分享你对这一结果的理解或看法:
3、介绍你自己最喜欢的学习英语的方法。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
As the chart shows,
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1.(2026·天津·一模)假如你是明启中学学生李华。你校即将举办名为“After-School Life”的主题论坛。你将作为学生代表在会上发言,分享你对当代高中生课余生活方式的观察与思考。请你写一篇英语发言稿,内容必须包括:
1. 将你所观察到的同学们的课余生活方式进行分类;
2. 具体描述每一类生活方式的特点及其对同学们的影响。
注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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2.(2025·天津武清·模拟预测)假设你是李津,你校英文报社正在举办以“压力管理与心理健康”为主题的征文活动。请你以“How to Deal with Academic Pressure”为题,写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 学业压力的常见来源(如考试、作业、升学竞争等);
2. 应对学业压力的有效方法(如时间管理、运动、倾诉等);
3. 保持心理健康的重要性及你的建议。
注意:
(1)字数不少于100词;
(2)题目已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How to Deal with Academic Pressure
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3.(2025·天津·模拟预测)假设你是李津,一名高三学生。你需要在毕业典礼上给高一学生介绍你在高中三年遇到的挑战,并号召高一同学积极面对高中生活。
文中包含以下内容:
1.你遇到的挑战的简要描述;
2.你克服挑战的过程
3.你的感悟和对高一新生的鼓励。
4.短文词数:11—120词。请书写工整,避免语法错误。
Dear freshmen,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
4.(2025·天津·三模)假设你是李津。你所在的城市将于9月28日,即孔子(Confucius)诞辰之日定为“汉字书写日”。请你根据以下要点写一封倡议书,发布在校园网上。
1. 设立“汉字书写日”的意义(写汉字的机会减少,人们提笔忘字,字迹潦草……):
2. 汉字具有悠久的历史,书法是一项传统的艺术,应被传承和保护:
3. 发出倡议。
注意:
1. 词数不少于100:
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
试题词汇:汉字书写日 Chinese Character Writing Day 书法 calligraphy
Dear fellow students,
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5.(2025·天津滨海新·模拟预测)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。高中生活即将结束,回顾过去的三年,看到了自己的成长进步,也忆起了师生的深切情谊。请用英语写一封感谢信内容要点包括:
1.感谢自己的坚持(努力学习、克服困难、成长成熟等);
2.感恩师生的情谊(老师的教导、同学的帮助等);
3.表达对未来的期许(相信自己、勇敢前行等)。
注意:在天津考生下载更多资料
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear me and others,
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Yours,
Li Jin
6.(2025·天津·二模)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。过去的一周你校举办了首届美国中学生来华交流文化营活动。作为学生会主席,你将在闭幕式上做总结发言。请根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿。要点包括:
(1) 回顾文化营的活动(体验中华文化、参与中美课程等);
(2) 你的收获;
(3) 你的展望。
注意:词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数),可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
文化营:cultural camp
Dear teachers and all the camp members,
It gives me a great honor to deliver the closing speech on behalf of everyone involved.
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That’s all for my speech. Thanks for your listening!
7.(2025·天津·二模)假定你是李津。你所在的学校的“跨文化交流社”将与校学生会共同组织“国际文化月”(International Culture Month)活动。请给刚来到你校的英国交流学生Chris写封邮件,邀请他参加活动。内容包括:
(1)活动的意义;
(2)活动的内容(如文化主题展览、语言角、电影赏析等);
(3)请他准备一项活动来促进中英学生的相互了解。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当增加细节,以使内容充实;(3)开头和结尾已写
好,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Jin from the Cross-Cultural Communication Club.
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Best regards,
LiJin
8.(2025·天津滨海新·三模)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,你校将举办“Self-discipline Leads to Progress”英语主题演讲比赛,你想报名参加。请根据以下提示,写一篇演讲稿,要点如下:
1.自律的含义及重要性;
2.举出自己或他人自律的例子;
3.呼吁同学们坚持自律,不断提升自我。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,文章中不能体现学生真实学校及姓名。
参考词汇:自律 self-discipline
Dear teachers and fellow students,
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Thank you for listening!
9.(2025·天津北辰·三模)假设你是天津外国语大学的学生李津,为迎接即将在天津举办的上海合作组织峰会(SCO),你校将承办主题为“Meet at SCO, Explore Tianjin Culture”的国际文化交流活动,届时将有许多国家和地区的外宾来天津参加该活动。请你作为非遗展区的讲解员,用英文写一篇讲解稿。内容包括:
(1)简要介绍本次活动的目的(如促进对多元文化的理解,呈现对天津非物质文化遗产的保护等);
(2)介绍基于科技的非遗体验项目(如邀请外宾扫描二维码,观看和体验杨柳青年画创作及泥人张彩塑工艺等);
(3)简要介绍天津传统曲艺并邀请外宾现场欣赏。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可透当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
天津非物质文化遗产Tianjin’s intangible cultural heritage
杨柳青年画 Yangliuqing New Year Painting
泥人张彩塑Zhang’s Clay Figures
天津曲艺节目Tianjin Quyi Programs
扫描二维码scan the QR code
Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to the featured exhibition area in Tianjin Foreign Studies University.
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Wishing you a pleasant visit today!
10.(2025·天津红桥·二模)近年来,盲盒 (mystery boxes) 在学生中受欢迎程度不断攀升。下图为你所在学校学生会对高中生购买盲盒情况的调查,根据调查结果为校报写一篇报道,内容包括:
(1) 简要描述调查结果;
(2) 分析造成此现象的原因(外型可爱、便于展示、不确定性)
(3) 你对购买盲盒的看法。
注意: (1) 词数不少于 100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
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11.(2025·天津·一模)假设你是晨光中学的李津,你校近期举办了“航天科技主题展”(Aerospace Technology Exhibition),通过图片和视频等多种方式,展示了中国航天事业的飞速发展和伟大成就。请你以“Reaching for the Stars”为题,为学校公众号英文栏目写一篇活动报道。
内容提示:
(1)主题展的主要内容(天宫空间站建设、月球探测成果、航天工作者贡献等);
(2)师生们对展览活动的反响;
(3)你参观展览后的感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇:月球探测 lunar exploration;自主创新 independent innovation
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12.(2025·天津·二模)假设你是李津,你校正在举办“感恩教育月,美好共前行(Gratitude in Motion, Together We Grow)”主题英文论坛活动,邀请同学们分享自己最想感谢的人或事,并说明你会以何种方式表达感恩。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.你想感谢的对象及原因;
2.你计划如何表达感恩;
3.你的感悟。
注意:
1.词数不少于100词;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
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Thanks for listening!
13.(2025·天津·二模)假设你是晨光中学的李津,你的英国朋友Chris计划制作一期向中国中学生介绍英国生活的短视频,现征求你的建议。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐拍摄主题(从节日传统、校园社团、家庭生活、科技教育任选其一);
2.说明推荐理由及关于该主题你感兴趣的内容;
3.希望通过该视频有何收获。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
It’s exciting to hear about your video project introducing British life to Chinese students!
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Good luck with your videos!
Yours,
Li Jin
14.(2025·天津·一模)假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校3月25日举行了主题为“非遗进校园(Intangible Cultural Heritage in Campus)”的文化活动。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文报道,向校园网投稿,内容包括:
1.活动的时间、目的;
2.活动的主要内容(民间艺术家讲座、非遗创作与展示等);
3.活动的反响。
注意:
(1)不少于100词;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
参考词汇:民间艺术家folk artist
Intangible Cultural Heritage in Campus
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15.(2025·天津南开·一模)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,学校下周一将举办中国传统文化展示活动,请你用英语写一份邀请函,邀请外教Chris参加活动,内容包括:
(1)活动内容;
(2)活动时间、地点;
(3)活动意义。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Best regards,
Li Jin
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专题15提纲作文
目录
第一部分 题型解码 高屋建瓴,掌握全局
第二部分 考向破译 微观解剖,精细教学
典例引领 方法透视 变式演练
考向01 演讲稿
考向02 留言稿
考向03 电子邮件
考向04 短文投稿
考向05 图表类
第三部分 综合巩固 整合应用,模拟实战
题型简介
近几年的高考书面表达写作大都是提纲式书信(电子邮件),这类作文特点是要点明确,范围具体,因此提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及,一个也不能遗漏。这类作文主要考查的内容有:说明主题、分析原因或解释做法;提纲作文的另一特点是思维空间灵活、开放。因此为了提高文章档次,考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
命题方式
天津历年高考英语的作文题材涉及到:
文化交流:包括中英文化交流活动、向外国友人介绍中国文化、与外国学校学生交流等;
学习与教育:包括学生学习方法、学校活动策划、学生辅导等;
个人发展与交往:包括个人规划、交换生互动、机器人技能竞赛等;
文学艺术:包括推荐书籍、讲座话题选择、观剧邀请等。
体裁主要有:信件、发言稿等
考点覆盖:词汇、语法、长难句
解题思路
第一步:审题。
1.审体裁:书信格式(电子邮件)
2.审人称:第一、二人称
3.审时态:(现在时、过去时):一般现在时、将来时
4.审结构(段落):Para. 1 开头;Para. 2 正文;Para. 3 结尾。
第二步:列提纲/要点,适当增加细节。
Para. 1 开头;Para. 2 正文;Para. 3 结尾:结束语。
第三步:连句成篇,注意:亮点呈现,句式升华。
第四步:注意润色修正文章的方式。
使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力:
1.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档;2.尝试多样化表达方式,如:强调句、名词性从句、定语从句、同位语从句等。
第五步:定稿(全面检查)。文章完成后,需要认真检查与修改,力求减少失误。
考向01 演讲稿
【例1-1】(2024·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,学校即将举办“低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题演讲活动,你要报名参加。请根据以下提示,写一篇演讲稿:
(1)指出校园中不符合低碳环保理念的现象;
(2)建议从身边小事做起,如……;
(3)号召大家行动起来。
试题词汇:低碳校园 low carbon campus
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
My fellow students,
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Thank you!
【答案】My fellow students,
Recently, some careless behaviors like wasting food and leaving lights on all day long at school have raised our concern, all of which are bad for the environment. To deal with such problems. I’d like to give the following proposals to promote awareness of green living.
Firstly, always turn off the lights in your classroom upon leaving. Secondly, don’t order more than you need in the school canteen to save every bit of food. After all, the production of food produces a large amount of greenhouse gases. Thirdly, take reusable water bottles along instead of bottled water to reduce plastic waste.
Small acts can make a big difference. So let’s do something to create a beautiful, low carbon campus.
Thank you!
【难度】0.65
【知识点】学校活动、环境保护
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生按要求写一篇演讲稿,参加学校即将举办的“低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题演讲活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
处理:deal with → tackle with
想要做某事:would like to do sth. → feel like doing sth.
关掉:turn off → switch off
减少:reduce → diminish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Thirdly, take reusable water bottles along instead of bottled water to reduce plastic waste.
拓展句:Thirdly, take reusable water bottles along instead of bottled water so that we can reduce plastic waste.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, some careless behaviors like wasting food and leaving lights on all day long at school have raised our concern, all of which are bad for the environment. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】To deal with such problems. I’d like to give the following proposals to promote awareness of green living. (运用了不定式形式作目的状语)
【变式1-1】(2025·天津·一模)假定你是晨光中学的李津,你校将于下周举办关于“如何利用DeepSeek提升英语学习效果(How to use DeepSeek to enhance English learning)”的演讲比赛。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:
(1)使用DeepSeek辅助英语学习的好处;
(2)利用DeepSeek学习英语的具体方法(听说训练、写作指导等等);
(3)表达期待和祝愿。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
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Thank you!
【答案】Dear friends,
I’m Lijin. I’m really excited to share with you how to use DeepSeek for better English learning.
DeepSeek, a powerful AI tool, brings numerous benefits. It offers instant translations, accurate pronunciation guides, and can explain grammar in an easy-to-understand way. It makes learning more efficient and interesting.
Here are some tips. First, use it to practice speaking by having conversations with the AI. Second, listen to English stories generated by DeepSeek to improve listening skills. Third, for writing guidance, DeepSeek can be of great help. You can use its grammar-checking tool and ask for suggestions to make your writing better.
I hope we can all make the most of DeepSeek and enhance our English capabilities. Looking forward to our great exchange.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李津的身份撰写一篇演讲稿,介绍如何利用DeepSeek提升英语学习效果,并分享具体方法及表达期待和祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的:excited → thrilled
准确的:accurate → precise
建议:suggestion → advice
充分利用:make the most of → make full use of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:DeepSeek, a powerful AI tool, brings numerous benefits.
拓展句:DeepSeek, which is a powerful AI tool, brings numerous benefits.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, listen to English stories generated by DeepSeek to improve listening skills.(运用了过去分词短语作后置定语和不定式短语作目的状语)
【高分句型2】I hope we can all make the most of DeepSeek and enhance our English capabilities.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
首段:抓住注意力
主题:建构论点
结尾:激发行动
考向02 留言稿
【例2-1】(2024·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。一位外国游客近日在Understanding China网站上发布短视频,赞叹科技在中国人购物、出行、学习等方面的广泛应用,一位名为 Chris的网友在评论区询问是否确实如此。请根据以下提示留言:
(1)对视频反映的情况予以肯定;
(2)介绍科技在你生活中的应用;
(3)希望国际友人来中国亲身体验。
试题词汇:短视频 video clip
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
Li Jin
@ Chris
Posted on Mar. 15, 202411: 00 AM
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【答案】Dear Chris,
What you see in the video clip is all true. Technology is indeed everywhere in our life.
Every day, I go to school by subway. I pay the fare with my mobile phone. In my school, every classroom is equipped with a big touch screen, so we don’t use blackboards anymore. If I need books for study, I will do shopping online. With a simple click, the books will be delivered to my door the next day. During holidays, my family usually go traveling by high speed train, which carries us to our destinations with speed and comfort.
If you have the chance to come to China, you can see for yourself. You will be amazed by the fact that Chinese people are so at ease with technology.
Best regards,
Li Jin
【难度】0.65
【知识点】日常生活 、科学技术
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外国游客在网站上发布短视频,赞叹科技在中国人购物、出行、学习等方面的广泛应用,对网友Chris在评论区询问一事进行留言。
【详解】1.词汇积累
地铁:subway→underground
配备:be equipped with→be furnished with
机会:chance→opportunity
惊讶的:amazed→astonished
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Technology is indeed everywhere in our life.
拓展句:It is certain that technology is indeed everywhere in our life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】During holidays, my family usually go traveling by high speed train, which carries us to our destinations with speed and comfort. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】You will be amazed by the fact that Chinese people are so at ease with technology. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【变式2-1】(24-25高一下·河北保定·月考)假定你是李华,你校拟在周末举办“名著读书会”。请你写一张留言条邀请交流生Lucy参加。内容包括:
1. 活动的时间和地点;
2. 活动内容。
Dear Lucy,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I am more than glad to tell you that our school will hold an interesting activity this week. I wonder whether you can join us.
The activity, to be held at 5: 00 pm this Friday in our school meeting hall, is called Classic Reading. The students who take part in the activity will make a public lecture on the classics that they have read recently. The classics include novels, plays and poems. I do believe that we can benefit a lot from the activity.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一张留言条邀请交流生Lucy参加你校拟在周末举办的“名著读书会”。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
举办:hold→host
活动:activity→event
参加:take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The activity, to be held at 5: 00 pm this Friday in our school meeting hall, is called Classic Reading.
拓展句:The activity, which is to be held at 5: 00 pm this Friday in our school meeting hall, is called Classic Reading.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am more than glad to tell you that our school will hold an interesting activity this week. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The students who take part in the activity will make a public lecture on the classics that they have read recently. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句和that引导的限制性定语从句)
1. 开头:直接点明事由
2. 主体:清晰陈述事实
3. 结尾:明确行动与礼貌结束
考向03 电子邮件
【例3-1】(2023·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读,校方为加强中英文化交流,将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画,拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:
(1)申请参加本次活动;
(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解;
(3)结合个人兴趣和特长,说明拟教授何种技能,并阐述原因。
参考词汇:中国工坊 Chinese Workshop
中华美食 Chinese cuisine
手工艺 handicraft
书法 calligraphy
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin, an exchange student from China. Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.
The theme of the activity involves Chinese food, traditional Chinese handicrafts, Chinese calligraphy and painting. So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. As a Chinese, I have a passion for making Chinese cuisine, for example dumplings. Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.
I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【难度】0.65
【知识点】中国文化与节日、学校活动
【导语】本文是应用文。假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读,校方为加强中英文化交流,将举办“中国工坊” 活动。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:(1)申请参加本次活动;(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解;(3)结合个人兴趣和特长,说明拟教授何种技能,并阐述原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→host
参加:take part in→participate in
有助于:be conducive to→contribute to
促进、推动:promote→facilitate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句: I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event.
拓展句:I would be very appreciative if you would enroll me in the event.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词Knowing作原因状语)
【高分句型2】 So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.(not only...but also连接句子时,not only位于句首引起的部分倒装)
【例3-2】(2023·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语,上周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。请根据以下提示回复邮件:
(1)解释“活雷锋”的意思;
(2)举一个身边“活雷锋”的例子;
(3)鼓励他继续学习汉语。
参考词汇:活雷锋 a living Lei Feng
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Happy to hear from you.
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Sincerely yours;
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
Happy to hear from you. I'm glad that you're interested in the expression “活雷锋”. In Chinese, “活雷锋” means a person who is kind, helpful, and selfless, just like the legendary hero Lei Feng. This expression is used to describe someone who is always ready to lend a helping hand to others without expecting anything in return.
To give you an example, let me introduce you to Zhang Jian, a student from our school. Zhang Jian is known as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers. He is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need. Whether it's helping a classmate with their studies, assisting a teacher with classroom duties, or volunteering for community services, Zhang Jian is always there to lend a hand.
I encourage you to continue your study of Chinese language. I wish you all the best in your studies and hope to hear more from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【难度】0.65
【知识点】语言与文化
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语,上周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。
【详解】1.词汇积累
期待:expect→anticipate
提供帮助:lend a hand→give a hand
高兴的:glad→delighted
继续:continue→carry on with
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Zhang Jian is known as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers. He is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need.
拓展句:Zhang Jian is known as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers because he is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This expression is used to describe someone who is always ready to lend a helping hand to others without expecting anything in return. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] He is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
1. 首段:核心信息摘要
2. 中段:背景、细节与论据
3. 尾段:明确的行动号召
【变式3-1】(2025·天津河北·一模)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你校英国交换生Chris为校英语俱乐部策划“Exploring the Life of Chinese Students”栏目,打算拍摄短视频来向国外学生展现中国学生的校园生活,希望你提供一些建议。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)推荐拍摄的内容(从学习生活、体育锻炼、社团活动、校园志愿服务等内容中任选一项);
(2)说明推荐拍摄该内容的理由(至少 3点);
(3)表示愿意为拍摄提供帮助,并送上美好祝福。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hope you are doing well. I’m thrilled to hear about your project “Exploring the Life of Chinese Students” and believe it will offer unique insights into our daily lives. I would like to recommend capturing the vibrant atmosphere during our school’s club activities.
Club activities are a significant part of our campus life, where students can pursue their passions outside of academics. From calligraphy and traditional music to robotics and debate clubs, these activities showcase the diverse interests and talents of Chinese students. They not only provide a platform for personal growth but also foster a sense of community and teamwork. Filming these moments will give your audience a glimpse into how we balance learning with leisure and the richness of our extracurricular culture.
If you need any assistance or have further questions, please don’t hesitate to ask. I wish you all the best with your project and am confident that it will be a valuable addition to understanding Chinese student life.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向Chris推荐拍摄中国学生校园生活的短视频场景,并说明推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
振奋的:thrilled→exhilarated
提供:offer→provide
不仅……而且……:not only...but also...→not just...but also...
平衡:balance→equilibrium
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:From calligraphy and traditional music to robotics and debate clubs, these activities showcase the diverse interests and talents of Chinese students.
拓展句:These activities showcase the diverse interests and talents of Chinese students, which range from calligraphy and traditional music to robotics and debate clubs.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Club activities are a significant part of our campus life, where students can pursue their passions outside of academics.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Filming these moments will give your audience a glimpse into how we balance learning with leisure and the richness of our extracurricular culture.(运用了动名词作主语和how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型3】If you need any assistance or have further questions, please don’t hesitate to ask.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
考向04 短文投稿
【例4-1】
(2021·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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【答案】A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】自然地理
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿,介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:说明文
时态: 一般现在时
结构:总分法
第一段是文章的总起段,说明四川省有很多著名的景点;第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程,第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。
要求:
1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点
①四川的地理位置:中国西南部
②著名景点:九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程
2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程
① 九寨沟是自然保护区
②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊,有很多珍稀动植物
③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前,现在仍然起着灌溉的作用
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受:九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be located in;world-famous;places of interest;a nature reserve ;impressive;multi-level waterfalls;have a chance to do…;rare animals;scenic spot;date from;play an important part in;be amazed by
第三步:连词成句
(1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China.
(2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
(3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province.
(4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.
(5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.
(6) There are many species of rare plants protected here.
(7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
(8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago.
(9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
(10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表递进关系:what is more
2.表转折关系:however
3.表示列举:such as, like
【点睛】[高分句型1]
What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.(what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2]
Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.(现在分词作状语)
1. 引人入胜的开头
2. 逻辑清晰的主题
3. 有力而余韵的结尾
【变式4--1】(2025·天津武清·模拟预测)假设你是李津,你校英文报社正在举办以“压力管理与心理健康”为主题的征文活动。请你以“How to Deal with Academic Pressure”为题,写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 学业压力的常见来源(如考试、作业、升学竞争等);
2. 应对学业压力的有效方法(如时间管理、运动、倾诉等);
3. 保持心理健康的重要性及你的建议。
注意:
(1)字数不少于100词;
(2)题目已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How to Deal with Academic Pressure
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【答案】
How to Deal with Academic Pressure
As we know, academic pressure has become a common challenge for students, especially in senior high school. It mainly comes from exams, heavy homework, and fierce competition for college admission.
To cope with this pressure, effective strategies are essential. First, time management can help us prioritize tasks and avoid procrastination. For example, making a daily study plan ensures efficiency. Second, physical activities like jogging or playing basketball can relieve stress by releasing endorphins. Additionally, talking to friends, teachers, or family members about our worries provides emotional support.
In my opinion, mental health is as important as academic success. Schools should offer counseling services, and students need to learn self-care techniques, such as mindfulness or journaling. Remember, a healthy mind is the foundation of achieving long-term goals.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写短文投稿,分析压力来源、提出应对方法并强调心理健康重要性。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力:pressure → stress
关键的:essential → crucial
基础:foundation → basis
目标:goal → target
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To cope with this pressure, effective strategies are essential.
拓展句:Effective strategies are essential so that we can cope with this pressure.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we know, academic pressure has become a common challenge for students, especially in senior high school. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】For example, making a daily study plan ensures efficiency. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
考向05 图表类
【例5-1】
(2025高三上·全国·专题练习)假设你是实验中学校学生会主席李津。最近你所在的研究性学习小组围绕“AI对高中生学习的影响”这一课题,对高三年级500余名同学进行了问卷调查,以下饼状图是调查结果:
请你结合图表信息,为学校公众号写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.简要描述调查结果;2.分析不同态度的原因;3.你的个人观点及理由。
注意:
1.词数不少于120; 2.可适当补充细节,使文章更流畅完整;3.标题与开头已给出,不计入总词数。
AI and Learning: A Survey Among Peers
Our recent survey of 500 high school seniors conducted by our research group revealed striking differences in attitudes toward AI-assisted learning among senior three students.
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【答案】
AI and Learning: A Survey Among Peers
Our recent survey of 500 high school seniors conducted by our research group revealed striking differences in attitudes toward AI-assisted learning among senior three students. About 65% believe AI improves efficiency by helping with grammar checks, problem explanations, and knowledge review. However, 35% worry about over-reliance and dishonesty, while 25% remain neutral due to limited experience.
Supporters value AI’s convenience and personalized support, especially during self-study. Critics fear it may weaken independent thinking or lead to plagiarism. Some also question the accuracy of AI-generated content.
Personally, AI is a useful tool if used responsibly. It offers instant feedback and broadens learning resources. But we must balance its use with critical thinking. Schools should guide students on ethical and effective AI use, ensuring it supports rather than replaces real learning.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。要求结合“AI 对高中生学习的影响”调查结果,描述数据、分析原因并阐述观点。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提高:improve → boost
然而:however → nevertheless
担忧:worry about → be concerned about
导致:lead to → result in
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Supporters value AI’s convenience and personalized support, especially during self-study.
拓展句:Supporters, who particularly appreciate AI’s convenience, also emphasize its value in providing personalized assistance during autonomous learning periods.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, 35% worry about over-reliance and dishonesty, while 25% remain neutral due to limited experience.(运用了while连接两个并列句表对比关系)
【高分句型2】Critics fear it may weaken independent thinking or lead to plagiarism.(运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句)
【高分句型3】Personally, AI is a useful tool if used responsibly.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
1. 审题:确定图表类型、主题时间单位
2. 规划:找出核心特征,规划主题段落内容
3. 写作:按结构完成,确保逻辑连贯
4. 检查
【变式5--1】(2026·天津南开·三模)假如你是晨光中学学生李津。学校英语报近期开展了一次学生英语活动的调查。调查结果公布之后,英语报设专栏,希望同学们分享自己的看法。请你使用图表中的调查结果,以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题,写一篇短文投稿。
主要内容包括:
1、简单陈述图表反映的调查结果,
2、分享你对这一结果的理解或看法:
3、介绍你自己最喜欢的学习英语的方法。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
As the chart shows,
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【答案】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
As the chart shows, students at our school learn English through different activities outside regular classes. The highest percentage, 65%, indicates that listening to English songs is the most popular activity. Following closely, 50% of students watch English movies, while 18% read English books. A smaller portion, 12%, engages in online English learning websites.
From my perspective, these results reflect a common trend: students prefer engaging, entertaining, and accessible ways to rigid study approaches. The relatively low percentage of reading suggests that students may find reading lengthy texts challenging or less engaging outside the classroom.
As for my personal favorite, I enjoy watching English movies and TV shows with subtitles. I believe a balanced mix of listening, watching, and reading-tailored to my interests helps me improve more quickly and keeps me motivated to learn every day.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题,写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
趋势:trend → tendency
激励的:motivated → stimulated
方法:approach → method
喜爱:enjoy → be fond of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As for my personal favorite, I enjoy watching English movies and TV shows with subtitles.
拓展句:As for my personal favorite, what I enjoy doing is watching English movies and TV shows that have subtitles.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The highest percentage, 65%, indicates that listening to English songs is the most popular activity.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】As for my personal favorite, I enjoy watching English movies and TV shows with subtitles.(运用了动名词作宾语)
1.(2026·天津·一模)假如你是明启中学学生李华。你校即将举办名为“After-School Life”的主题论坛。你将作为学生代表在会上发言,分享你对当代高中生课余生活方式的观察与思考。请你写一篇英语发言稿,内容必须包括:
1. 将你所观察到的同学们的课余生活方式进行分类;
2. 具体描述每一类生活方式的特点及其对同学们的影响。
注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Li Hua from Mingqi High School. Today, I’d like to share my observations on our after-school life, which I’ve grouped into three main types.
First, some students are deeply engaged in academics — attending tutoring classes or doing extra exercises. While this boosts their grades, it often leads to stress and burnout. Second, others spend most of their free time on digital devices — scrolling through social media or playing games. Though relaxing, this can harm eyesight and reduce face-to-face interaction. Finally, a growing number of students join clubs, sports, or volunteer work. This not only builds teamwork and confidence but also balances study with fun.
In my view, a healthy after-school life should mix relaxation, social connection, and personal growth. Let’s make our free time meaningful — not just busy, but truly enriching!
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以明启中学学生李华的身份,在“After-School Life”主题论坛上撰写英语发言稿,需对高中生课余生活方式分类,并描述各类方式的特点及影响。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
课余生活:after-school life → extracurricular activities
促进,提高:boost → enhance
将……分类:group → classify
在我看来:in my view → as far as I’m concerned
2. 句式拓展
句型转换
原句:This not only builds teamwork and confidence but also balances study with fun.
拓展句:Not only does this build teamwork and confidence but also balances study with fun.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Today, I’d like to share my observations on our after-school life, which I’ve grouped into three main types.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】While this boosts their grades, it often leads to stress and burnout. (运用了while引导的让步状语从句)
2.(2025·天津武清·模拟预测)假设你是李津,你校英文报社正在举办以“压力管理与心理健康”为主题的征文活动。请你以“How to Deal with Academic Pressure”为题,写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 学业压力的常见来源(如考试、作业、升学竞争等);
2. 应对学业压力的有效方法(如时间管理、运动、倾诉等);
3. 保持心理健康的重要性及你的建议。
注意:
(1)字数不少于100词;
(2)题目已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How to Deal with Academic Pressure
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【答案】One possible version:
How to Deal with Academic Pressure
As we know, academic pressure has become a common challenge for students, especially in senior high school. It mainly comes from exams, heavy homework, and fierce competition for college admission.
To cope with this pressure, effective strategies are essential. First, time management can help us prioritize tasks and avoid procrastination. For example, making a daily study plan ensures efficiency. Second, physical activities like jogging or playing basketball can relieve stress by releasing endorphins. Additionally, talking to friends, teachers, or family members about our worries provides emotional support.
In my opinion, mental health is as important as academic success. Schools should offer counseling services, and students need to learn self-care techniques, such as mindfulness or journaling. Remember, a healthy mind is the foundation of achieving long-term goals.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写短文投稿,分析压力来源、提出应对方法并强调心理健康重要性。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力:pressure → stress
关键的:essential → crucial
基础:foundation → basis
目标:goal → target
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To cope with this pressure, effective strategies are essential.
拓展句:Effective strategies are essential so that we can cope with this pressure.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we know, academic pressure has become a common challenge for students, especially in senior high school. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】For example, making a daily study plan ensures efficiency. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
3.(2025·天津·模拟预测)假设你是李津,一名高三学生。你需要在毕业典礼上给高一学生介绍你在高中三年遇到的挑战,并号召高一同学积极面对高中生活。
文中包含以下内容:
1.你遇到的挑战的简要描述;
2.你克服挑战的过程
3.你的感悟和对高一新生的鼓励。
4.短文词数:11—120词。请书写工整,避免语法错误。
Dear freshmen,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【答案】One possible version:
Dear freshmen,
I’m Li Jin, a senior 3 student. Looking back on the past three years, I faced many challenges, especially heavy schoolwork and pressure from exams. At first, I often felt stressed and even doubted myself.
But gradually, I learned to manage my time better, ask teachers for help, and stay positive. Every small step forward gave me confidence.
High school is not always easy, but it’s full of growth. My advice is to face difficulties bravely and never give up. Believe in yourselves — hard work will pay off.
Wish you a wonderful journey ahead!
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生在毕业典礼上向高一新生介绍高中三年遇到的挑战、克服过程、感悟及鼓励。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
压力:pressure → stress
怀疑:doubt → question
乐观的:positive → optimistic
建议:advice → suggestion
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Jin, a senior 3 student.
拓展句:I’m Li Jin, who is a senior 3 student.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Looking back on the past three years, I faced many challenges, especially heavy schoolwork and pressure from exams.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型 2】My advice is to face difficulties bravely and never give up. (运用了不定式短语作表语)
4.(2025·天津·三模)假设你是李津。你所在的城市将于9月28日,即孔子(Confucius)诞辰之日定为“汉字书写日”。请你根据以下要点写一封倡议书,发布在校园网上。
1. 设立“汉字书写日”的意义(写汉字的机会减少,人们提笔忘字,字迹潦草……):
2. 汉字具有悠久的历史,书法是一项传统的艺术,应被传承和保护:
3. 发出倡议。
注意:
1. 词数不少于100:
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
试题词汇:汉字书写日 Chinese Character Writing Day 书法 calligraphy
Dear fellow students,
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【答案】Dear fellow students,
Our city will set September 28th, the birthday of Confucius, as Chinese Character Writing Day.
Nowadays, due to the wide use of digital devices, we seldom write by hand. As a result, many people often forget how to write characters and their handwriting becomes poor.
As is known, Chinese characters, with a long history, play a significant role in our culture. Moreover, calligraphy, a traditional art of writing Chinese characters, is part of our precious cultural heritage.
Thus, let’s take this opportunity to write more, and we can start by writing neatly in our daily homework. Let’s work together to promote the beauty of Chinese characters.
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你所在的城市将于9月28日,即孔子(Confucius)诞辰之日定为“汉字书写日”这一情况,根据所给要点写一封倡议书,发布在校园网上。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
由于:due to → because of
很少,几乎不:seldom → hardly
重要的:significant → important
宝贵的:precious → valuable
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Moreover, calligraphy, a traditional art of writing Chinese characters, is part of our precious cultural heritage.
拓展句:Moreover, calligraphy, which is a traditional art of writing Chinese characters, is part of our precious cultural heritage.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is known, Chinese characters, with a long history, play a significant role in our culture.(运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Thus, let’s take this opportunity to write more, and we can start by writing neatly in our daily homework.(运用了祈使句型以及and连接的并列句。)
5.(2025·天津滨海新·模拟预测)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。高中生活即将结束,回顾过去的三年,看到了自己的成长进步,也忆起了师生的深切情谊。请用英语写一封感谢信内容要点包括:
1.感谢自己的坚持(努力学习、克服困难、成长成熟等);
2.感恩师生的情谊(老师的教导、同学的帮助等);
3.表达对未来的期许(相信自己、勇敢前行等)。
注意:在天津考生下载更多资料
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear me and others,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear me and others,
As high school life ends, I’m grateful for my perseverance. I studied hard, overcame academic challenges, and grew into a more mature person. I’ve learned to face difficulties independently, which has been a precious asset.
I also owe a debt of gratitude to my teachers and classmates. Teachers’ patient guidance broadened my knowledge. Classmates’ help in tough times made me feel warm. Their support accompanied me through these years.
For the future, I believe in myself. I’ll carry the lessons and friendships forward bravely, ready to embrace new challenges and create a brighter tomorrow.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于感谢信。要求考生以晨光中学学生李津的身份,回顾高中三年,感谢自己的坚持、感恩师生情谊,并表达对未来的期许。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
坚持:perseverance → persistence
感激的:grateful → thankful
克服:overcome → surmount
宝贵的:precious → valuable
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Teachers’ patient guidance broadened my knowledge.
拓展句:Teachers’ patient guidance broadened my knowledge, which has laid a solid foundation for my future study.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] As high school life ends, I’m grateful for my perseverance. (运用了从属连词as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型 2] I’ve learned to face difficulties independently, which has been a precious asset. (运用了关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句)
6.(2025·天津·二模)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。过去的一周你校举办了首届美国中学生来华交流文化营活动。作为学生会主席,你将在闭幕式上做总结发言。请根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿。要点包括:
(1) 回顾文化营的活动(体验中华文化、参与中美课程等);
(2) 你的收获;
(3) 你的展望。
注意:词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数),可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
文化营:cultural camp
Dear teachers and all the camp members,
It gives me a great honor to deliver the closing speech on behalf of everyone involved.
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That’s all for my speech. Thanks for your listening!
【答案】One possible version:
Dear teachers and all the camp members,
It gives me a great honor to deliver the closing speech on behalf of everyone involved.
Over the past week, we immersed ourselves in vibrant activities, from mastering Chinese calligraphy strokes to harmonizing with traditional guzheng melodies. When we rolled dumpling wrappers side by side, laughter bridged every cultural gap. In joint classes, we debated global issues and shared learning methods, deepening mutual understanding.
Personally, what began as cultural exchange blossomed into profound growth. The friendships forged, especially during our midnight mural-painting, taught me that understanding thrives when we listen earnestly. Your perspectives about Confucian values reshaped how I view my own heritage.
Looking ahead, I hope this camp is just the beginning. May our bond grow stronger, fostering more exchanges between Chinese and American youth.
That’s all for my speech. Thanks for your listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以学生会主席李津的身份,为美国中学生来华交流文化营活动的闭幕式写一篇演讲稿,需回顾文化营的活动,分享个人收获,并对该活动的未来进行展望。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
充满活力的:vibrant→lively, vigorous
讨论:debate→discuss
繁荣:thrive→flourish, prosper, bloom
促进:foster→promote
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In joint classes, we debated global issues and shared learning methods, deepening mutual understanding.
拓展句:In joint classes, we debated global issues and shared learning methods, which deepened mutual understanding.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When we rolled dumpling wrappers side by side, laughter bridged every cultural gap. (运用了When引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Personally, what began as cultural exchange blossomed into profound growth. (运用了what引导主语从句)
7.(2025·天津·二模)假定你是李津。你所在的学校的“跨文化交流社”将与校学生会共同组织“国际文化月”(International Culture Month)活动。请给刚来到你校的英国交流学生Chris写封邮件,邀请他参加活动。内容包括:
(1)活动的意义;
(2)活动的内容(如文化主题展览、语言角、电影赏析等);
(3)请他准备一项活动来促进中英学生的相互了解。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当增加细节,以使内容充实;(3)开头和结尾已写
好,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Jin from the Cross-Cultural Communication Club.
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Best regards,
LiJin
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m Li Jin from the Cross-Cultural Communication Club. I’m excited to invite you to our upcoming “International Culture Month” event, organized jointly with the Student Union. This event aims to foster cultural understanding and appreciation among students from different backgrounds.
The event will feature a variety of activities, including cultural theme exhibitions, language corners where you can practice different languages, and movie screenings that showcase diverse cultures. There will also be workshops and interactive sessions to deepen our cultural insights.
We would be thrilled if you could prepare an activity to share British culture with us. It could be a presentation, a mini-workshop, or even a traditional British game. This would greatly help Chinese students to better understand and appreciate British culture.
Looking forward to your participation and contribution!
Best regards,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李津的身份,向英国交流学生Chris发送一封英文邀请邮件,邀请其参加“国际文化月”活动,并说明活动意义、内容及请他准备一项活动促进文化交流。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的是做:aim to do→be intended to do
各种各样的:a variety of→a wide range of
帮助:help→assist
参加:participation→involvement
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m excited to invite you to our upcoming “International Culture Month” event, organized jointly with the Student Union.
拓展句:I’m excited to invite you to our upcoming “International Culture Month” event, which is organized jointly with the Student Union.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The event will feature a variety of activities, including cultural theme exhibitions, language corners where you can practice different languages, and movie screenings that showcase diverse cultures.(运用了where引导的定语从句和that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】We would be thrilled if you could prepare an activity to share British culture with us.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
8.(2025·天津滨海新·三模)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,你校将举办“Self-discipline Leads to Progress”英语主题演讲比赛,你想报名参加。请根据以下提示,写一篇演讲稿,要点如下:
1.自律的含义及重要性;
2.举出自己或他人自律的例子;
3.呼吁同学们坚持自律,不断提升自我。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,文章中不能体现学生真实学校及姓名。
参考词汇:自律 self-discipline
Dear teachers and fellow students,
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Thank you for listening!
【答案】Dear teachers and fellow students,
I’m LiJin. It’s my great honor to stand here to talk about the importance of self-discipline and how it leads to progress. Self-discipline means controlling impulses and staying focused on our goals. For students, it’s of vital significance. Without self-discipline, even the most talented person may fail to achieve their dreams.
In our daily lives, we can find many inspiring examples. My friend Zhang Ming used to struggle with maths. Last semester, he set a strict study schedule for himself on a daily basis. He stuck to the plan for three months and his academic performance in math improved dramatically. His secret wasn’t talent — it was consistency. His motto was “Small efforts, repeated daily, create miracles”.
Dear classmates, progress isn’t about being perfect. It’s about showing up, even when it’s hard. Let’s start cultivating self-discipline today. We can set small goals, resist distractions and celebrate small wins. Together, we can achieve excellence through perseverance.
Thank you for listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿,说明自律的含义及重要性,举出自己或他人自律的例子以及呼吁同学们坚持自律,不断提升自我。
【详解】1.词汇积累
导致:lead to→contribute to
学期:semester→term
实现:achieve→realize
重要性:significance→importance
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Last semester, he set a strict study schedule for himself on a daily basis. He stuck to the plan for three months and his academic performance in math improved dramatically.
拓展句:Last semester, not only did he set a strict study schedule for himself on a daily basis, but also he stuck to the plan for three months and his academic performance in math improved dramatically.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s about showing up, even when it’s hard.(运用了even when引导让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】It’s my great honor to stand here to talk about the importance of self-discipline and how it leads to progress.(运用了how引导宾语从句)
9.(2025·天津北辰·三模)假设你是天津外国语大学的学生李津,为迎接即将在天津举办的上海合作组织峰会(SCO),你校将承办主题为“Meet at SCO, Explore Tianjin Culture”的国际文化交流活动,届时将有许多国家和地区的外宾来天津参加该活动。请你作为非遗展区的讲解员,用英文写一篇讲解稿。内容包括:
(1)简要介绍本次活动的目的(如促进对多元文化的理解,呈现对天津非物质文化遗产的保护等);
(2)介绍基于科技的非遗体验项目(如邀请外宾扫描二维码,观看和体验杨柳青年画创作及泥人张彩塑工艺等);
(3)简要介绍天津传统曲艺并邀请外宾现场欣赏。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可透当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
天津非物质文化遗产Tianjin’s intangible cultural heritage
杨柳青年画 Yangliuqing New Year Painting
泥人张彩塑Zhang’s Clay Figures
天津曲艺节目Tianjin Quyi Programs
扫描二维码scan the QR code
Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to the featured exhibition area in Tianjin Foreign Studies University.
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Wishing you a pleasant visit today!
【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to the featured exhibition area in Tianjin Foreign Studies University.
This exhibition, which aims to showcase Tianjin’s intangible cultural heritage achievements and enhance cross-cultural understanding, holds great significance. To start with, you can experience the charm of Tianjin’s intangible cultural heritage through cutting-edge technology. It is here that you can scan the QR code to be immersed in the digital world of Yangliuqing New Year Painting and Zhang’s Clay Figures.
Moreover, there stands a performance area where you can enjoy Tianjin Quyi Programs, such as Tianjin Clapper Talk and crosstalk. These programs, reflecting Tianjin’s unique cultural style, are a feast for the ears and eyes.
We sincerely hope this activity will deepen your understanding of Tianjin’s culture and create a more culturally inclusive environment for the upcoming SCO summit. Wishing you a pleasant visit today!
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇演讲稿,要求考生作为非遗展区讲解员用英文写讲解稿,向外宾介绍“Meet at SCO, Explore Tianjin Culture”国际文化交流活动,内容涵盖活动目的、基于科技的非遗体验项目及天津传统曲艺并邀请外宾欣赏。
【详解】1.词汇积累
展示:showcase→display
增强:enhance→intensify
体验:experience→partake in
独特的:unique→distinctive
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:To start with, you can experience the charm of Tianjin’s intangible cultural heritage through cutting-edge technology.
拓展句:To commence, you have the opportunity to immerse yourself in the allure of Tianjin’s intangible cultural heritage, experiencing its depth and intricacy through the medium of cutting-edge technology.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This exhibition, which aims to showcase Tianjin’s intangible cultural heritage achievements and enhance cross - cultural understanding, holds great significance.(使用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句,先行词为This exhibition)
【高分句型2】These programs, reflecting Tianjin’s unique cultural style, are a feast for the ears and eyes.(使用现在分词作定语)
10.(2025·天津红桥·二模)近年来,盲盒 (mystery boxes) 在学生中受欢迎程度不断攀升。下图为你所在学校学生会对高中生购买盲盒情况的调查,根据调查结果为校报写一篇报道,内容包括:
(1) 简要描述调查结果;
(2) 分析造成此现象的原因(外型可爱、便于展示、不确定性)
(3) 你对购买盲盒的看法。
注意: (1) 词数不少于 100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
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【答案】
Recently, our student union has made a survey on the situation of our students buying mystery boxes. 53% of the students often buy mystery boxes, while 14% of the students never buy. Those who buy them occasionally account for 26%.
The reasons behind this may be as follows. Mystery boxes are popular in part because of their cute appearances. The typically cute cartoon figures come in small sizes, making them suitable for display almost anywhere. Even if mystery boxes are not their top choice for decorations, the mystery and uncertainty of the process also attracts students. It’s the main reason why students buy mystery boxes one after another.
In my opinion, although buying mystery boxes adds expectation and joy to our lives, most of the goods we buy may not be what we need. The obsession with mystery boxes makes us over consume, and we need to consume rationally.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据学校学生会对高中生购买盲盒情况的调查结果,为校报写一篇报道,内容包括简要描述调查结果、分析造成此现象的原因以及自己对购买盲盒的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
调查:survey→research
偶尔地:occasionally→sometimes
可爱的:cute→lovely
展示:display→show
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The typically cute cartoon figures come in small sizes, making them suitable for display almost anywhere.
拓展句:The typically cute cartoon figures come in small sizes, which makes them suitable for display almost anywhere. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【点睛】【高分句型1】Those who buy them occasionally account for 26%. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It’s the main reason why students buy mystery boxes one after another. (运用了why引导的定语从句)
11.(2025·天津·一模)假设你是晨光中学的李津,你校近期举办了“航天科技主题展”(Aerospace Technology Exhibition),通过图片和视频等多种方式,展示了中国航天事业的飞速发展和伟大成就。请你以“Reaching for the Stars”为题,为学校公众号英文栏目写一篇活动报道。
内容提示:
(1)主题展的主要内容(天宫空间站建设、月球探测成果、航天工作者贡献等);
(2)师生们对展览活动的反响;
(3)你参观展览后的感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇:月球探测 lunar exploration;自主创新 independent innovation
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【答案】One possible version:
Reaching for the Stars Our school recently held an Aerospace Technology Exhibition, showcasing China’s remarkable achievements in space exploration. The exhibition featured stunning images and videos of the Tiangong Space Station, highlighting its construction and scientific missions. Visitors also learned about lunar exploration, including the Chang’e missions, and the dedication of Chinese aerospace scientists through independent innovation.
Both teachers and students were deeply impressed. Many said they felt proud of China’s rapid progress in space technology. Some students even expressed interest in pursuing careers in aerospace after seeing the inspiring stories of scientists and astronauts.
Personally, I was amazed by how far China has come in space exploration. The exhibition not only broadened my knowledge but also strengthened my belief that with hard work and creativity, we can achieve even greater milestones in the future.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生以“Reaching for the Stars”为题,为学校公众号英文栏目写一篇活动报道,报道学校近期举办的“航天科技主题展”(Aerospace Technology Exhibition)的情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold →host
成就:achievement →accomplishment
强调:highlight →emphasize
以……为骄傲:feel proud of →take pride in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The exhibition featured stunning images and videos of the Tiangong Space Station, highlighting its construction and scientific missions.
拓展句:The exhibition featured stunning images and videos of the Tiangong Space Station, which highlighted its construction and scientific missions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Personally, I was amazed by how far China has come in space exploration. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The exhibition not only broadened my knowledge but also strengthened my belief that with hard work and creativity, we can achieve even greater milestones in the future.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
12.(2025·天津·二模)假设你是李津,你校正在举办“感恩教育月,美好共前行(Gratitude in Motion, Together We Grow)”主题英文论坛活动,邀请同学们分享自己最想感谢的人或事,并说明你会以何种方式表达感恩。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.你想感谢的对象及原因;
2.你计划如何表达感恩;
3.你的感悟。
注意:
1.词数不少于100词;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
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Thanks for listening!
【答案】Dear fellow students,
I’m honored to share my story of gratitude during this meaningful event. The person I want to thank most is my English teacher, Ms. Zhang. She not only taught me language skills but also inspired my confidence. When I struggled with speaking, she encouraged me with patience and organized group discussions to help me improve.
To express my gratitude, I plan to write her a heartfelt letter, telling her how much her guidance means to me. Additionally, I will study harder to achieve excellent results in the upcoming exams, which I believe is the best reward for her efforts.
By appreciating those who help us, we create a warmer and more supportive community. Let’s cherish kindness and pass it on!
Thanks for listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇发言稿,参加“感恩教育月,美好共前行”主题英文论坛活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢:gratitude→gratefulness
苦于,遇到困难:struggle with→grapple with
衷心的,真诚的:heartfelt→sincere
取得:achieve→attain
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:To express my gratitude, I plan to write her a heartfelt letter, telling her how much her guidance means to me.
拓展句:To express my gratitude, I plan to write her a heartfelt letter in which I want to tell her how much her guidance means to me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I struggled with speaking, she encouraged me with patience and organized group discussions to help me improve.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】I will study harder to achieve excellent results in the upcoming exams, which I believe is the best reward for her efforts.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
13.(2025·天津·二模)假设你是晨光中学的李津,你的英国朋友Chris计划制作一期向中国中学生介绍英国生活的短视频,现征求你的建议。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐拍摄主题(从节日传统、校园社团、家庭生活、科技教育任选其一);
2.说明推荐理由及关于该主题你感兴趣的内容;
3.希望通过该视频有何收获。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
It’s exciting to hear about your video project introducing British life to Chinese students!
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Good luck with your videos!
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
It’s exciting to hear about your video project introducing British life to Chinese students! For your next video, I recommend focusing on English holiday traditions, specifically Thanksgiving dinner customs. This topic is not only rich in cultural significance but also visually engaging, which would attract your audience.
The reason I chose this theme is that holidays are a window into a country and its value. Thanksgiving, in particular, highlights the importance of family, gratitude, and community in English culture. I’m most interested in how families gather to prepare and share a meal, the symbolic foods like turkey and pumpkin pie, and the tradition of expressing gratitude. These elements could help Chinese students understand the cultural uniqueness of British holidays and the emphasis on family bonds and appreciation.
Through this video, I hope we, Chinese students , can gain a deeper appreciation for the cultural diversity and values that shape British society. It could also spark curiosity about how different cultures celebrate and express gratitude in our own ways. Looking forward to seeing it!
Good luck with your videos!
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的英国朋友Chris计划制作一期向中国中学生介绍英国生活的短视频,现征求你的建议。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
推荐:recommend→suggest
吸引:attract→draw
表达:express→convey
帮助:help→assist
2.句式拓展:
同义句转换
原句:This topic is not only rich in cultural significance but also visually engaging, which would attract your audience.
拓展句:Not only is this topic rich in cultural significance but it is also visually engaging, and it will surely attract your audience.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】The reason I chose this theme is that holidays are a window into a country and its value.(运用了省略关系代词的定语从句 以及that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型 2】I’m most interested in how families gather to prepare and share a meal, the symbolic foods like turkey and pumpkin pie, and the tradition of expressing gratitude.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
14.(2025·天津·一模)假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校3月25日举行了主题为“非遗进校园(Intangible Cultural Heritage in Campus)”的文化活动。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文报道,向校园网投稿,内容包括:
1.活动的时间、目的;
2.活动的主要内容(民间艺术家讲座、非遗创作与展示等);
3.活动的反响。
注意:
(1)不少于100词;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
参考词汇:民间艺术家folk artist
Intangible Cultural Heritage in Campus
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【答案】 Intangible Cultural Heritage in Campus
On March 25th, our school, Chenguang High School, proudly hosted a cultural event themed “Intangible Cultural Heritage in Campus.” The purpose of this event was to raise awareness and appreciation among students for our rich cultural heritage.
The event featured lectures by renowned folk artists who shared their knowledge and experiences in preserving traditional arts. Students also participated in workshops where they created and displayed their own interpretations of intangible cultural heritage. The highlight was an exhibition showcasing various traditional crafts and performances.
The event was a great success, receiving positive feedback from both students and teachers. It not only educated but also inspired everyone to take an active role in preserving our cultural treasures. This initiative has sparked a renewed interest in our school community to learn more about and engage with our cultural heritage.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以晨光中学李津的身份就学校3月25日举行了主题为“非遗进校园(Intangible Cultural Heritage in Campus)”的文化活动写一篇英文报道。其内容包括:活动的时间目的、活动的主要内容和活动的反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的:purpose→goal
著名的: renowned→famous
参加:participate in →take part in
展示:display→showcase
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:On March 25th, our school, Chenguang High School, proudly hosted a cultural event themed “Intangible Cultural Heritage in Campus.” The purpose of this event was to raise awareness and appreciation among students for our rich cultural heritage.
拓展句: On March 25th, our school, Chenguang High School, proudly hosted a cultural event themed “Intangible Cultural Heritage in Campus”, whose purpose was to raise awareness and appreciation among students for our rich cultural heritage.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The event featured lectures by renowned folk artists who shared their knowledge and experiences in preserving traditional arts. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】The event was a great success, receiving positive feedback from both students and teachers. (运用了现在分词作状语)
15.(2025·天津南开·一模)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,学校下周一将举办中国传统文化展示活动,请你用英语写一份邀请函,邀请外教Chris参加活动,内容包括:
(1)活动内容;
(2)活动时间、地点;
(3)活动意义。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Best regards,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hope this message finds you well. I’m writing on behalf of Chenguang Middle School to warmly invite you to our upcoming Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition, which will be held next Monday.
The event will showcase a variety of cultural activities, including traditional music performances, calligraphy demonstrations, tea ceremony practices, and handicraft displays. You’ll also have the chance to try making paper-cutting or tasting traditional snacks during the interactive session. The exhibition will take place in the school auditorium from 3:00 p.m.5:00 p.m.
This activity aims to deepen students’ understanding of our cultural heritage while promoting cross-cultural communication. Your presence would not only encourage students but also foster mutual respect between Chinese and international communities. As our beloved foreign teacher, your participation would mean a lot to us!
Please let us know if you can attend. We sincerely hope you’ll join us for this vibrant celebration of tradition!
Best regards,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一份邀请函,邀请外教Chris参加中国传统文化展示活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会:chance→opportunity
举行:hold→host
培养:foster→develop
真诚地:sincerely→heartfeltly
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:The event will showcase a variety of cultural activities, including traditional music performances, calligraphy demonstrations, tea ceremony practices, and handicraft displays. You’ll also have the chance to try making paper-cutting or tasting traditional snacks during the interactive session.
拓展句:Not only will the event showcase a variety of cultural activities, including traditional music performances, calligraphy demonstrations, tea ceremony practices, and handicraft displays, but also you’ll have the chance to try making paper-cutting or tasting traditional snacks during the interactive session.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing on behalf of Chenguang Middle School to warmly invite you to our upcoming Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition, which will be held next Monday.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】We sincerely hope you’ll join us for this vibrant celebration of tradition!(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
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