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Unit 2 Amazing China
单元话题书面表达练习
单元话题:中国城市,旅游景点
本资料共10篇专题训练,从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练
基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础,巩固自我
重难语篇提升练 专注提升,挑战自我
◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练
1.假如你是李华,刚结束在英国为期一个月的交流学习。请你给你的房东Mr. Wilson写一封感谢信,感谢他对你在英国期间的照顾和帮助,并邀请他来中国旅游。
注意:
1. 词数80左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
Dear Mr. Wilson,
How is everything going?
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.中国西藏的雅鲁藏布大峡谷(Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon)不仅是世界上最长的峡谷,还是世界上最深的峡谷。请你根据下列提示内容,写一篇80-100词的英文短文,简要介绍雅鲁藏布大峡谷。
提示内容:
◆ 长度:500千米以上,比美国大峡谷长50多千米;
◆ 深度:6009米(最深处);
◆ 美誉:“植物博物馆(the plant museum)”、“动物王国(the animal kingdom)”;
◆ 最佳旅游季节:春季和夏季。
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3.假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mary听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人,因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
提示问题:Which place of interest should I visit? How can I get there? What’s it famous for?
要求:1.内容应包含所有提示,可适当发挥;
2.语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
3.100词左右。短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China.
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Yours,
Li Hua.
4.无锡,江南水乡的璀璨明珠,被选为2025年央视春晚分会场,展现了其独特的自然风光、文化魅力与现代化风貌。作为一名无锡学生,请写一篇演讲稿,号召更多的人来无锡游玩,体验无锡之美。
注意事项:1. 演讲稿须根据思维导图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于90个,讲稿开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
3. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear friends,
As one of the sub-venues for the 2025 Spring Festival Gala, Wuxi showed its great beauty in front of the world.
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Thank you for your listening.
5.“行万里路,读万卷书”,“身体和灵魂,总有一个在路上”,或翻越高山,或畅游书海,或城市漫步,或在线旅游……无一不是感知世界、体验生命的过程。假如你是米莉,请以“Enjoy the world, love our life”为题,写一篇演讲稿,谈谈你对读书或旅行的理解,选择其一举例说明,分享它带给你的变化,并倡议大家多读书,多户外,让身心多多受益。
注意事项:
1. 词数不少于80个。演讲稿首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 演讲稿内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
3. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Enjoy the world, love our life
Hello, I’m Millie. Today I’m really happy to be here sharing my thoughts on ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We only live once, but if we can try to make it meaningful, once is enough! Thank you for listening!
6.假如你是李华,你校英语社团将举办主题为“秀秀我的家乡”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图中的提示要点,写一篇英语短文向大家介绍一下你的家乡。
注意:
1. 词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 包含所有提示要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不能透露自己的真实姓名、校名等信息;
4. 不能抄袭试卷原文。
参考词汇:locate位于 places of interest名胜
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I’d like to say something about my hometown.
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Welcome to my hometown. I’m sure you will like it.
7.读万卷书,行万里路。你班下周英语课将举行一次以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题的演讲比赛。请根据以下思维导图中的信息写一篇演讲稿并对旅行的意义发表观点。
要求:(1)演讲稿必须包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节;
(2)文中不得提及真实的人名,校名等相关信息;
(3)词数: 80词左右。
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8.要么读书,要么旅行,身体和灵魂总有一个在路上。旅行能让我们增长见识,开拓视野。假设今年夏天你去了青岛度假, 请以“My Vacation in Qingdao”为题,写一篇游记。
提示:
(1) What was the weather like there?
(2) What did you do?
(3) How was your vacation?
注意:
(1)内容须涵盖提示中所有信息,全文连贯通顺;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Vacation in Qingdao
I went to Qingdao on vacation this summer with my parents.
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◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练
9.请根据以下提示,写一篇题为“Emperor Qinshihuang’s Mausoleum Site Museum” (秦始皇兵马俑博物馆) 的短文。约80词。提示要点:
1.兵马俑是世界著名文化遗产,它在西安附近。
2.它非常古老,有超过2000年历史。它是为中国的第一个皇帝——秦始皇建造的。
3.你能看到成千上万的陶制士兵和马,样子各不相同,它们看起来很壮观。
4. 参观时,请记住:不要触摸文物,不要吸烟,也不可以使用闪光灯 (flash) 拍照。(自行补充2条规则)。
5.你的感受和评价。
参考词汇: the Terracotta Army:兵马俑 cultural heritage:文化遗产 emperor:皇帝
soldiers and horses made of terracotta:陶制士兵和马
Emperor Qinshihuang’s Mausoleum Site Museum
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10.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 对中国的名胜古迹很感兴趣,他计划明年暑假来中国旅游,想请你给他推荐一处你最喜欢的名胜古迹。请你根据以下提示给他写一封邮件:
介绍你推荐的名胜古迹(名称、位置等);
说明你推荐的理由(历史、文化价值、景色等);
给出旅游建议(最佳旅游时间、注意事项等)。
要求:
词数 80-100;
语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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Unit 2 Amazing China
单元话题书面表达练习
单元话题:中国城市,旅游景点
本资料共10篇专题训练,从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练
基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础,巩固自我
重难语篇提升练 专注提升,挑战自我
◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练
1.假如你是李华,刚结束在英国为期一个月的交流学习。请你给你的房东Mr. Wilson写一封感谢信,感谢他对你在英国期间的照顾和帮助,并邀请他来中国旅游。
注意:
1. 词数80左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
Dear Mr. Wilson,
How is everything going?
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Wilson,
How is everything going? I have safely returned home and would like to express my sincere thanks for your care and help during my stay in England.
I really enjoyed the time we spent together. You cooked meals for me every day and patiently explained the bus routes to school. Moreover, you made my experience richer by sharing wonderful stories about British history and customs.
I sincerely invite you to visit China. I would be happy to show you around. I believe you will love it here.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:一般过去时(回顾经历)、一般现在时(邀请) ;
③提示:需包含感谢房东的照顾、回忆具体帮助、并发出旅游邀请。
[写作步骤]
第一步:礼貌问候后直接表达感谢;
第二步:回忆具体细节,并表达对过往时光的怀念;
第三步:正式发出邀请,说明愿意陪同游览中国。
[亮点词汇]
①express表达
②patiently耐心地
③sincerely真诚地
[高分句型]
①I really enjoyed the time we spent together.(运用了省略关系词的定语从句)
②I believe you will love it here.(运用了宾语从句)
2.中国西藏的雅鲁藏布大峡谷(Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon)不仅是世界上最长的峡谷,还是世界上最深的峡谷。请你根据下列提示内容,写一篇80-100词的英文短文,简要介绍雅鲁藏布大峡谷。
提示内容:
◆ 长度:500千米以上,比美国大峡谷长50多千米;
◆ 深度:6009米(最深处);
◆ 美誉:“植物博物馆(the plant museum)”、“动物王国(the animal kingdom)”;
◆ 最佳旅游季节:春季和夏季。
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【答案】范文
The Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon is in Xizang, China. The best time to visit it is spring and summer.
The Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon is not only the world’s longest canyon, but also the world’s deepest canyon. It is more than five hundred kilometres long, over fifty kilometres longer than the Grand Canyon in the United States. The deepest part of it reaches 6,009 metres.
The Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon is home to thousands of plants and animals. Some people call it “the plant museum” and “the animal kingdom”.
It’s a wonderful place for nature lovers.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时(描述客观事实);
③提示:根据题干和范文内容,介绍雅鲁藏布大峡谷的世界之最、具体数据、生态美誉及最佳旅游季节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍其地理位置与最佳游览时间。
第二步,描述其作为世界最长和最深峡谷的具体数据,并运用对比突出其规模。
第三步,介绍其丰富的动植物资源及获得的荣誉称号。
第四步,总结并评价其对自然爱好者的价值。
[亮点词汇]
①longest最长的
②deepest最深的
③home to……的家园
[高分句型]
①The Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon is not only the world’s longest canyon, but also the world’s deepest canyon.(运用了“not only…but also…”的并列结构)
②It is more than five hundred kilometres long, over fifty kilometres longer than the Grand Canyon in the United States.(运用了具体数字和“longer than”比较级结构)
3.假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mary听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人,因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
提示问题:Which place of interest should I visit? How can I get there? What’s it famous for?
要求:1.内容应包含所有提示,可适当发挥;
2.语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
3.100词左右。短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China.
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Yours,
Li Hua.
【答案】例文
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. I highly recommend visiting Qinghai Lake, one of China’s most stunning places.
Qinghai Lake is famous for its stunning blue waters and vast grasslands around it. Located in northeastern Qinghai Province, it covers over 4,500 square kilometers, being China’s largest inland saltwater lake. You can cycle along the 360-kilometer lakeside road, taste local yogurt or take a boat trip to Bird Island. From April to June, over 100,000 migratory birds, like bar-headed geese, gather there. Take a high-speed train to Xining, then a bus to the lake—it’s super convenient.
I’m sure this place will leave you with unforgettable memories. Looking forward to your arrival!
Yours,
Li Hua.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要求中的内容,不遗漏要点,充实细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明得知对方来中国的喜悦,提出推荐;
第二步,介绍青海湖的著名之处、位置、规模,游玩项目、最佳观鸟时段及交通方式;
第三步,表达对对方留下难忘回忆的期待,盼其到来。
[亮点词汇]
①recommend推荐
②located in坐落于
③inland saltwater lake内陆咸水湖
④migratory birds候鸟
⑤high-speed train高铁
[高分句型]
①Located in northeastern Qinghai Province, it covers over 4,500 square kilometers, being China’s largest inland saltwater lake.(过去分词作状语)
②I’m sure this place will leave you with unforgettable memories.(省略that的宾语从句)
4.无锡,江南水乡的璀璨明珠,被选为2025年央视春晚分会场,展现了其独特的自然风光、文化魅力与现代化风貌。作为一名无锡学生,请写一篇演讲稿,号召更多的人来无锡游玩,体验无锡之美。
注意事项:1. 演讲稿须根据思维导图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于90个,讲稿开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
3. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear friends,
As one of the sub-venues for the 2025 Spring Festival Gala, Wuxi showed its great beauty in front of the world.
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Thank you for your listening.
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
As one of the sub-venues for the 2025 Spring Festival Gala, Wuxi showed its great beauty in front of the world.
This season is perfect for visiting Wuxi because the weather is mild and pleasant. You can enjoy the beautiful scenery of Taihu Lake and the ancient charm of the Grand Canal. Wuxi is also famous for its traditional culture, such as the Huishan clay figurines and the local opera. Don’t miss the delicious Wuxi cuisine, especially the sweet and savory Wuxi ribs. During your visit, remember to wear comfortable shoes and bring a camera to capture the stunning views. For getting around, you can take buses or subways easily. They can take you to every corner of the city. The people there are very friendly. I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here! I hope all of you can come and enjoy the beauty of Wuxi.
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据给出的内容要点写作,可适当添加细节,自主合理发挥,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,号召大家来无锡游玩;
第二步,介绍无锡的主要景点和特色文化等;
第三步,给出旅行中的注意事项,并表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①mild and pleasant温和宜人
②ancient charm古老魅力
③be famous for因……而著名
[高分句型]
①This season is perfect for visiting Wuxi because the weather is mild and pleasant. (原因状语从句)
②I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here! (宾语从句)
5.“行万里路,读万卷书”,“身体和灵魂,总有一个在路上”,或翻越高山,或畅游书海,或城市漫步,或在线旅游……无一不是感知世界、体验生命的过程。假如你是米莉,请以“Enjoy the world, love our life”为题,写一篇演讲稿,谈谈你对读书或旅行的理解,选择其一举例说明,分享它带给你的变化,并倡议大家多读书,多户外,让身心多多受益。
注意事项:
1. 词数不少于80个。演讲稿首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 演讲稿内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
3. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Enjoy the world, love our life
Hello, I’m Millie. Today I’m really happy to be here sharing my thoughts on ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We only live once, but if we can try to make it meaningful, once is enough! Thank you for listening!
【答案】例文:
Enjoy the world, love our life
Hello, I’m Millie. Today I’m really happy to be here sharing my thoughts on reading. Books are like windows to the world. I used to be shy and quiet, but reading changed me. I started reading storybooks when I was young. Through books, I met brave heroes, kind friends, and wise teachers. I traveled to faraway lands and learned about different cultures.
Reading made me more confident. I began to share stories with my classmates and express my ideas freely. It also broadened my mind and enriched my life. I hope everyone can read more books and explore the world in this way. Let’s enjoy the world and love our life through reading!
We only live once, but if we can try to make it meaningful, once is enough! Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿,主题为“Enjoy the world, love our life”;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”,在举例说明时可灵活运用其他时态;
③提示:写作要点为对读书或旅行的理解,选择其一举例说明,分享变化,并倡议大家多读书、多户外活动。需注意不要遗漏这些提示要点,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明演讲主题。以“Enjoy the world, love our life”为题,引出对读书或旅行的理解;
第二步,具体阐述内容。选择读书或旅行其一进行举例说明,详细描述它带给自己的变化,如知识增长、视野开阔、心态改变等;
第三步,书写结语。发出倡议,鼓励大家多读书、多进行户外活动,让身心受益,并表达“生命只有一次,但我们可以努力让它变得有意义”的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① changed me 改变了我
② brave heroes 勇敢的英雄
③ faraway lands 遥远的地方
④ broadened my mind 拓宽了我的思维
[高分句型]
I hope everyone can read more books and explore the world in this way. (宾语从句)
6.假如你是李华,你校英语社团将举办主题为“秀秀我的家乡”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图中的提示要点,写一篇英语短文向大家介绍一下你的家乡。
注意:
1. 词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 包含所有提示要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不能透露自己的真实姓名、校名等信息;
4. 不能抄袭试卷原文。
参考词汇:locate位于 places of interest名胜
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I’d like to say something about my hometown.
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Welcome to my hometown. I’m sure you will like it.
【答案】例文:
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I’d like to say something about my hometown.
It is located in the south of our country. There are many nice places of interest here, like a quiet old park with beautiful lakes. The local food is great too—we have soft rice noodles that taste really delicious. We often eat them with fresh vegetable soup. The best time to visit my hometown is spring. The weather is not too hot or too cold, and you can see flowers everywhere.
Welcome to my hometown. I’m sure you will like it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:材料所给图示内容需完整表达,不得遗漏,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:引出话题,要介绍自己的家乡;
第二步:介绍家乡的位置、名胜、美食和最佳旅游时间;
第三步:总结全文,发出邀请。
[亮点词汇]
① be located in位于
② in the south of在……的南边
③ places of interest 名胜
④ the best time to do sth做某事的最佳时间
[高分句型]
① There are many nice places of interest here, like a quiet old park with beautiful lakes.(there be句型)
②The weather is not too hot or too cold, and you can see flowers everywhere.(and连接两个并列句)
7.读万卷书,行万里路。你班下周英语课将举行一次以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题的演讲比赛。请根据以下思维导图中的信息写一篇演讲稿并对旅行的意义发表观点。
要求:(1)演讲稿必须包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节;
(2)文中不得提及真实的人名,校名等相关信息;
(3)词数: 80词左右。
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【答案】范文:
Hello, everyone! Today I want to share an unforgettable trip with you.
Last summer, I went to a small village with my parents. There, I saw green hills and clear rivers. We walked in the countryside, picked fresh fruits, and ate delicious local food. I also tried fishing for the first time.
I felt so excited and relaxed during the trip. I think traveling is not just about having fun. It helps us learn about different places, understand new cultures, and become more open-minded.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:主要使用一般过去时;
提示:需包含旅行地点、活动内容、感受与观点,保持词数在80左右,避免透露真实信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,说明旅行地点;
第二步,描述旅行中的具体活动与所见所闻;
第三步,表达旅行中的感受;
第四步,对旅行的意义发表观点并结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①local food当地食物
②for the first time第一次
③open-minded思想开放的
[高分句型]
①I think traveling is not just about having fun. (宾语从句,not just about... 结构)
②It helps us learn about different places, understand new cultures, and become more open-minded. (help sb. do sth. 结构,并列不定式作宾补)
8.要么读书,要么旅行,身体和灵魂总有一个在路上。旅行能让我们增长见识,开拓视野。假设今年夏天你去了青岛度假, 请以“My Vacation in Qingdao”为题,写一篇游记。
提示:
(1) What was the weather like there?
(2) What did you do?
(3) How was your vacation?
注意:
(1)内容须涵盖提示中所有信息,全文连贯通顺;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Vacation in Qingdao
I went to Qingdao on vacation this summer with my parents.
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【答案】One possible version
My Vacation in Qingdao
I went to Qingdao on vacation this summer with my parents. The weather there was really nice—sunny most days, not too hot, and with a cool sea breeze in the afternoon.
Every morning, we walked on the beach, felt the soft sand and the clear sea, sometimes picking shells. In the afternoon, Dad and I tried surfing. It was a little hard at first, but I got better soon. We also ate a lot of delicious seafood.
This vacation was wonderful. I not only had great fun but also made many happy memories with my parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
时态:主要为“一般过去时”;
提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,说明时间、地点和人物,并描述天气情况;
第二步,按时间顺序描写具体活动,覆盖所有提示问题;
第三步,总结假期感受,表达情感和期望。
[亮点词汇]
①sea breeze海风
②not only...but also...不但……而且……
③at first起初
[高分句型]
I not only had great fun but also made many happy memories with my parents.(not only...but also...连接的并列结构)
◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练
9.请根据以下提示,写一篇题为“Emperor Qinshihuang’s Mausoleum Site Museum” (秦始皇兵马俑博物馆) 的短文。约80词。提示要点:
1.兵马俑是世界著名文化遗产,它在西安附近。
2.它非常古老,有超过2000年历史。它是为中国的第一个皇帝——秦始皇建造的。
3.你能看到成千上万的陶制士兵和马,样子各不相同,它们看起来很壮观。
4. 参观时,请记住:不要触摸文物,不要吸烟,也不可以使用闪光灯 (flash) 拍照。(自行补充2条规则)。
5.你的感受和评价。
参考词汇: the Terracotta Army:兵马俑 cultural heritage:文化遗产 emperor:皇帝
soldiers and horses made of terracotta:陶制士兵和马
Emperor Qinshihuang’s Mausoleum Site Museum
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【答案】
例文:
Emperor Qinshihuang’s Mausoleum Site Museum Emperor Qinshihuang’s Mausoleum Site Museum is a world-famous cultural heritage near Xi’an. It is over 2,000 years old and was built for the first emperor of China, Qinshihuang. You can see thousands of terracotta soldiers and horses there. They look different from each other and are very spectacular. When visiting, remember: don’t touch the relics, don’t smoke, and don’t use flash to take photos. Also, keep quiet and don’t litter. I think it is amazing and worth visiting. It shows the great history of ancient China.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文为材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时为主,描述历史事实用一般过去时;
③提示:根据所给要点介绍博物馆位置、历史、展品、参观规则及个人感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍博物馆基本信息和历史。
第二步:描述展品特点并补充两条参观规则。
第三步:表达个人感受与评价。
[亮点词汇]
①cultural heritage文化遗产
②spectacular壮观的
[高分句型]
①They look different from each other and are very spectacular. (运用了and连接的并列谓语)
②I think it is amazing and worth visiting. (运用了宾语从句和and连接的并列表语)
10.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 对中国的名胜古迹很感兴趣,他计划明年暑假来中国旅游,想请你给他推荐一处你最喜欢的名胜古迹。请你根据以下提示给他写一封邮件:
介绍你推荐的名胜古迹(名称、位置等);
说明你推荐的理由(历史、文化价值、景色等);
给出旅游建议(最佳旅游时间、注意事项等)。
要求:
词数 80-100;
语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Tom,
I’m really excited to know you’ll visit China next summer! I’d like to recommend the Great Wall in Beijing—it’s my favorite historic site. Stretching over 21,000 kilometers, it’s a world-famous wonder with a history of over 2,000 years, built to protect ancient China and to show amazing ancient Chinese wisdom.
July is good for visiting, as the summer sun makes the mountain views clear, but do take a hat to avoid sunburn. Wear comfy shoes (you’ll walk a lot on the steps) and book tickets online ahead—there are always many visitors. Also, don’t litter to keep this treasure clean. Hope you love it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文(电子邮件);
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主,“一般将来时”为辅。
③提示:需紧扣“介绍名胜基本信息、说明推荐理由、给出旅游建议”三大核心要点;语言要简洁自然,符合邮件的友好语气;控制词数在80-100之间,避免冗余,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇问候并点明主题,表达对笔友来访的期待,直接推荐所选名胜古迹。
第二步,介绍其位置、历史或文化价值,再补充景色亮点,阐述推荐理由;接着给出具体旅游建议,包括最佳时间和注意事项。
第三步,表达对笔友旅途愉快的祝愿,呼应开篇的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①historic site名胜古迹
②world-famous wonder世界著名奇观
③cultural heritage文化遗产
④ancient wisdom古代智慧
⑤stunning scenery迷人景色
⑥ideal time最佳时间
⑦book tickets ahead提前订票
⑧avoid sunburn避免晒伤
⑨keep clean保持整洁
[高分句型]
①Stretching over 21,000 kilometers, it’s a world-famous wonder with a history of over 2,000 years, built to protect ancient China and to show amazing ancient Chinese wisdom.(现在分词作状语)
②July is good for visiting, as the summer sun makes the mountain views clear, but do take a hat to avoid sunburn. (as引导原因状语从句)
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