内容正文:
题型04大作文15篇(长春专用)
【题型知识点细目表】
题号
难镀
知识点
1
较易
个人经历,精神品质
适中
个人经历
3
适中
个人经历,哲理感悟叙事忆旧
4
适中
个人经历,记叙文
5
较难
友谊记叙文
6
较难
个人经历,记叙文
7
适中
个人经历情感记叙文
较难
个人经历,记叙文
9
适中
个人经历,传统带日
10
较易
身心健康个人经历,精神品质
11
适中
好,个人经历
12
困难
个人经历
13
适中
精神品质个人经历
14
适中
个人经历
15
适中
方法/策略
【中考真题】
1.世界经典名著中有许多永不言弃的故事。请你结合生活实际,用英文写一篇不少于80词的短文,
向某英文报社投稿。
要求:
(1)讲述你或他人一个永不言弃的事:
(2)表达你的感悟:
(3)可适当增加细节,行文连贯;
(4)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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2.每个人都有自己的闪光点,请以“My Shining Point''为题,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
要求:
(1)讲述一个自己的故事;
(2)你的感悟:
(3)适当增加细节,行文连贯;
(4)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
3.某报正在以Challenge”为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语故事及体会
来投稿。
要求:1.写一个自身或其他人的故事;
2.适当增加细节,行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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【热点话题练习】
4.翻天覆地,焕然一新。现在某英语报社拟出版以Great Changes in My Life为主题的故事集,请你
写一篇不少于80词的短文投稿。
要求:
1.讲述一个你自己的变化的故事;
2.表达你的感悟;
3.适当增加细节,行文连贯;
4.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
Great Changes in My Life
5.友谊是人生必不可少的一份情谊,青少年时期的友谊以其纯真、无邪令人倍感珍惜。请以“Tu
Friendship Shines Bright'”为题,写一篇英语文章,分享你与朋友之间难忘的经历,要求字数不少于80词。
要求:
(1)讲述一个体现你与同学之间深厚情谊的故事,并表达你的感悟。
(2)内容要突出正向引领,传递积极力量,贴合当代青少年的素养提升方向。
(3)适当增添细节,字迹清晰,行文连贯。
(④)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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6.生活中总有很多爱包围着我们,父母的付出,老师的鼓励,朋友的支持,陌生人的帮助.我们
在用心感受这点点滴滴的爱。我校英语社团将举行主题为“Feel love,learn to love”的演讲比赛,请用英语写
一篇不少于80词的参赛演讲稿。
内容包括:
(1)讲述一个你或他人被爱的故事:
(2)表达你对爱的感悟:
(3)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
(4)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
7.生活中总会有一些令人难忘的事件,让你记忆犹新。或许它是幸福快乐的,或许它是悲伤难过
的..请以“An Unforgettable Event'”为题,结合自身经历描述一件这样的事情,以及你的感受。
提示:
1.What was the event?
2.When and where did it happen?
3.Why was it unforgettable?
4.How do you feel about it?
要求:1所给提示必须都用上;2.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰;3.字数:不少于80词,标
题不计入总词数。
An Unforgettable Event
8.“细微处见光芒”。生活中总有一些事对你产生了影响,促使你成长。你校微信公众号以That Made
a Difference to Me”为题征稿,请写一篇不少于80词的短文向公众号编辑部投稿。
要求:
(1)讲述你亲身经历的一件事:
(2)事情对你的影响;
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(3)可适当增加细节,行文连贯:
(4)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
9.春节是中华民族的传统节日,承载了中国人太多的美好回忆。某英文报社正在开展以“A sweet
memory about my Spring Festival''为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文参加投稿。
要求:
(1)讲述自己的故事:
(2)语言流畅,层次清晰,内容可以适当发挥;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
l0.守护心灵的阳光,让健康伴我们成长。现在你校英语报征集以Healthy Mind,Shining Kind为主
题的故事集。请你写一篇不少于80词的短文投稿。
要求:
(1)讲述你一个友善待人的温暖故事;
(2)表达你对健康的感悟;
(3)适当增加细节,行文连贯;
(4)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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1.兴趣是最好的老师,太多的人因为兴趣而成功,太多的伟大因为兴趣而诞生。某英文报刊计划
刊发“兴趣”主题学生英语习作,现征集稿件。请用英文写一篇不少于80词的短文投稿。
要求:1.讲述一段关于你某一兴趣的故事,并写出你的感受;
2语句通顺;层次清晰,书写规范,卷面整洁;
3可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名或校名。
12.生活中有很多值得我们珍惜的东西,如时间、健康、亲人、生命等。假设你是李华,你们学校
正在开展以“珍惜”为主题的征文活动,请结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文投稿。
提示词:cherish(珍惜)
要求;
1.适当增加情节、行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不少于80词。
13.现在长春博硕学校英语网站正在举办以“Responsibility”为主题的征文活动。请结合自身经历或他
人故事,写一篇与责任担当相关的征文,同时谈谈你从中获得的感悟与体会。
要求:
1)不少于80字:
2)文章不得出现真实名字或者学校。
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14.初中三年是人生中重要的成长阶段。回首初中生活,你收获了什么?是丰富的学识、优秀的学
习习惯、还是某种优秀的意志品质、亦或是某种有益的兴趣爱好,还是与人和谐相处的交往能力?请你以
“My Growth”为题写一篇英语短文,描述自身经历,讲述你在某一方面的成长,并谈谈你的感受。
要求:
1语言流畅,层次清晰,内容可以适当发挥;
2.书写规范,卷面整洁;
3词数不少于80词;
4.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
15.作为中学生,你一定参加过无数次考试,你是如何解决考试带给你的紧张感的?请结合自己的
亲身经历写一篇英语短文。
要求:(1)不得出现真实的学校名称和真实的学生姓名;
(2)语句连贯,不少于80词。
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题型04 大作文15篇 (长春专用)
【题型知识点细目表】
题号
难度
知识点
1
较易
个人经历,精神品质
2
适中
个人经历
3
适中
个人经历,哲理感悟,叙事忆旧
4
适中
个人经历,记叙文
5
较难
友谊,记叙文
6
较难
个人经历,记叙文
7
适中
个人经历,情感,记叙文
8
较难
个人经历,记叙文
9
适中
个人经历,传统节日
10
较易
身心健康,个人经历,精神品质
11
适中
爱好,个人经历
12
困难
个人经历
13
适中
精神品质,个人经历
14
适中
个人经历
15
适中
方法/策略
【中考真题】
1.世界经典名著中有许多永不言弃的故事。请你结合生活实际,用英文写一篇不少于80词的短文,向某英文报社投稿。
要求:
(1)讲述你或他人一个永不言弃的事;
(2)表达你的感悟;
(3)可适当增加细节,行文连贯;
(4)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】例文:
Never Give Up
Last year, I signed up for my first race, dreaming of finishing like a hero in Forrest Gump. However, after two weeks of training, my legs ached so badly that I wanted to quit. “Every champion was once a beginner who refused to stop,” my coach said when he saw me limping. His words made me think: If I give up now, I’ll never know what I could achieve.
I adjusted my plan—running shorter distances daily and stretching carefully. Gradually, my stamina improved. On race day, though tired, I crossed the finish line with a smile. Like Santiago in The Alchemist, who kept pursuing his dream despite obstacles, I learned that perseverance turns “impossible” into “I’m possible.”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要点齐全,可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出自己参加比赛的初衷和梦想。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“训练的困难、教练的鼓励、自己的调整以及比赛的结果”几个方面详细描述了整个过程。
第三步,书写结语。表达了自己从这次经历中学到的道理。
[亮点词汇]
①dream of梦想
②ache疼痛
③adjust调整
④stamina耐力
⑤perseverance力
[高分句型]
①However, after two weeks of training, my legs ached so badly that I wanted to quit. (so…that…引导的结果状语从句)
2.每个人都有自己的闪光点,请以“My Shining Point”为题,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
要求:
(1)讲述一个自己的故事;
(2)你的感悟;
(3)适当增加细节,行文连贯;
(4)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】例文
My Shining Point
I meet many excellent people every day and at the same time I also find myself really good. I can see the world with kind eyes. I think I don’t like to complain. I find it important to have a positive attitude.
Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise.
In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:以“My Shining Point”为题并结合提示进行写作,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,简要说明自己有哪些闪光点;
第二步,讲述一个自己的故事;
第三步,介绍自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时
②play a role in在……中扮演角色
③regard…as把……当作
[高分句型]
①However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. (which引导的定语从句)
②In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time. (强调句)
3.某报正在以“Challenge”为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语故事及体会来投稿。
要求:1.写一个自身或其他人的故事;
2.适当增加细节,行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】例文:
Challenge
Life is full of ups and downs. No one can lead a life without any challenges. However, I believe challenges make a better me. I was poor in English in Grade 7, which troubled me a lot. Then I made up my mind to learn English well. From then on I got up early to memorize new words and useful sentence patterns. Besides, I did many English exercises. Indeed it was not an easy job to catch up with my classmates, but I kept going and never gave up. At last, my hard work paid off, and I made great progress in English.
This taught me a lesson: Don’t be afraid of challenges, because they come hand in hand with achievements.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:题目要求以“Challenge”为题写短文投稿,结合自身或他人的故事来谈谈遇到的挑战及自己的感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步,讲讲自身应对挑战的经历;
第二步,谈谈自己从这次挑战中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of 充满
②make up one’s mind to do sth. 下定决心做某事
③catch up with 赶上
[高分句型]
①I was poor in English in Grade 7, which troubled me a lot.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
②Don’t be afraid of challenges, because they come hand in hand with achievements.(祈使句的否定形式;because引导原因状语从句)
【热点话题练习】
4.翻天覆地,焕然一新。现在某英语报社拟出版以Great Changes in My Life为主题的故事集,请你写一篇不少于80词的短文投稿。
要求:
1. 讲述一个你自己的变化的故事;
2. 表达你的感悟;
3. 适当增加细节,行文连贯;
4. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
Great Changes in My Life
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【答案】
Great Changes in My Life
A few years ago, I was extremely shy. When the teacher asked me a question, my voice shook so much that no one could hear me.
Then I joined the English corner. A senior smiled and asked me to say “Hello”. I tried, and everyone clapped. Slowly, I began to share short stories. Now, I can confidently give speeches in class.
This change teaches me that courage helps us grow. Don’t fear the first small try—it may lead to big surprises!
【总体分析】①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏其中的重要信息,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步,写过去自己十分害羞,被老师提问时声音发颤没人能听清;
第二步,写加入英语角后,在学长鼓励下逐渐敢开口,最终能自信课堂演讲;
第三步,写这段经历的感悟,即勇气助力成长,不要怕初次尝试。
【亮点词汇】①join the English corner参加英语角
②give speeches发表演讲
③lead to导致
【高分句型】①When the teacher asked me a question, my voice shook so much that no one could hear me. (when引导的时间状语从句、so...that...引导结果状语从句)
②This change teaches me that courage helps us grow. (that引导的宾语从句)
5.友谊是人生必不可少的一份情谊,青少年时期的友谊以其纯真、无邪令人倍感珍惜。请以“True Friendship Shines Bright”为题,写一篇英语文章,分享你与朋友之间难忘的经历,要求字数不少于80词。
要求:
(1)讲述一个体现你与同学之间深厚情谊的故事,并表达你的感悟。
(2)内容要突出正向引领,传递积极力量,贴合当代青少年的素养提升方向。
(3)适当增添细节,字迹清晰,行文连贯。
(4)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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【答案】
例文
True Friendship Shines Bright
Last year, I failed an important math exam. I felt so sad that I couldn’t stop crying. My best friend Lily noticed this and immediately came to comfort me. She not only helped me review the lessons but also encouraged me every day. With her support, I overcame the difficulty and made great progress in the next exam.
This experience made me realize that true friendship is about being supportive and kind. A friend in need is a friend indeed. I will always cherish our friendship.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:根据题干以及要求进行写作,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、简述事件背景(考试失败);
第二步、描写朋友的具体帮助行为(安慰、辅导、鼓励);
第三步、表达感悟并点题(友谊的真谛)。
[亮点词汇]
①couldn’t stop crying忍不住地哭泣
②not only…but also不仅……而且
③overcame the difficulty克服困难
[高分句型]
I felt so sad that I couldn’t stop crying.(so…that引导的结果状语从句)
6.生活中总有很多爱包围着我们,父母的付出,老师的鼓励,朋友的支持,陌生人的帮助……我们在用心感受这点点滴滴的爱。我校英语社团将举行主题为“Feel love, learn to love”的演讲比赛,请用英语写一篇不少于80词的参赛演讲稿。
内容包括:
(1)讲述一个你或他人被爱的故事;
(2)表达你对爱的感悟;
(3)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
(4)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】
Good morning, everyone!
I’d like to share a story about love. Last year, I was ill and missed many classes. My classmate Lily helped me every day after school. She explained lessons patiently and encouraged me. Her kindness made me feel warm and supported.
This experience teaches me that love is about giving and caring. We should not only receive love but also learn to spread it.
Let’s try to help others and make the world full of love.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态“一般过去时”(讲述故事)和“一般现在时”(表达感悟);
③提示:文章的写作要点已在题目中给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。、
[写作步骤]
第一步:开头问候并引入主题(如:Good morning! I’d like to share...)。
第二步:用一般过去时讲述具体故事(时间、人物、事件经过)。
第三步:用一般现在时表达对爱的理解,并呼吁行动。
[亮点词汇]
①share分享
②explain解释
③encourage鼓励
[高分句型]
①She explained lessons patiently and encouraged me.(运用了并列动词结构,使句子简洁有力)
②Her kindness made me feel warm and supported.(运用了“make sb. feel + adj.”结构,表达情感影响)
③We should not only receive love but also learn to spread it.(运用了“not only...but also...”并列结构,强调行动呼吁)
7.生活中总会有一些令人难忘的事件,让你记忆犹新。或许它是幸福快乐的,或许它是悲伤难过的……请以“An Unforgettable Event”为题,结合自身经历描述一件这样的事情,以及你的感受。
提示:
1. What was the event? 2. When and where did it happen?
3. Why was it unforgettable? 4. How do you feel about it?
要求:1.所给提示必须都用上;2.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰;3.字数:不少于 80 词,标题不计入总词数。
An Unforgettable Event
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【答案】例文
An Unforgettable Event
Last summer, I took part in a swimming competition at the city sports center. It was my first time to join such a big event, and I felt nervous but excited.
At first, I was afraid I couldn’t win, but my parents encouraged me. When the race started, I tried my best and finally won second place. I felt so proud at that moment.
It was unforgettable because it taught me to be brave and never give up when facing difficulties.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,主题为“难忘的事件”。
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主。
③提示:应围绕事件经过、时间地点、难忘原因和感受展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开头交代事件的时间、地点;
第二步:描述事件经过;
第三步:说明难忘的原因;
第四步:表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加
②at first 起初
③try one’s best 尽最大努力
④never give up 永不放弃
[高分句型]
①It was my first time to join such a big event. (it作形式主语结构)
②It was unforgettable because it taught me to be brave and never give up when facing difficulties. (原因状语从句)
8.“细微处见光芒”。生活中总有一些事对你产生了影响,促使你成长。你校微信公众号以“That Made a Difference to Me”为题征稿,请写一篇不少于80词的短文向公众号编辑部投稿。
要求:
(1)讲述你亲身经历的一件事;
(2)事情对你的影响;
(3)可适当增加细节,行文连贯;
(4)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】例文:
That Made a Difference to Me
Once, I was extremely shy and afraid to speak in public. When our class had a speech contest, I wanted to participate but lacked the courage. My teacher noticed my hesitation and had a talk with me. She encouraged me, saying, “You have unique thoughts. Just try, and you’ll do great.”
With her encouragement, I decided to give it a shot. I spent days preparing my speech, practicing in front of the mirror repeatedly. When the day of the contest came, I was nervous but managed to deliver my speech. Though I didn't win the first prize, the applause I received made me feel proud.
This experience changed me a lot. I became more confident and started taking part in more activities. It taught me that taking the first step, even when scared, can lead to wonderful things.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,围绕对我产生影响的事展开;
②时态:时态为一般过去时和一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意讲述亲身经历的一件事、说明事情的影响,适当添加细节,使故事完整且有感染力。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出经历的背景;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从想参加演讲比赛却缺乏勇气、老师鼓励、努力准备并参与、收获掌声几方面,讲述事件;
第三步,书写结语,说明影响与感悟,结束短文。
[亮点词汇]
①extremely极其
②hesitation犹豫
③unique独特的
④deliver发表
⑤applause掌声
[高分句型]
①When our class had a speech contest, I wanted to participate but lacked the courage. (when引导时间状语从句,说明事件背景)
②With her encouragement, I decided to give it a shot. (with one’s encouragement短语,说明行动的动力)
③It taught me that taking the first step, even when scared, can lead to wonderful things. (that引导宾语从句,阐述感悟)
9.春节是中华民族的传统节日,承载了中国人太多的美好回忆。某英文报社正在开展以“A sweet memory about my Spring Festival”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文参加投稿。
要求:
(1)讲述自己的故事;
(2)语言流畅,层次清晰,内容可以适当发挥;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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【答案】例文
A sweet memory about my Spring Festival
A sweet Spring Festival memory took me back to 2023. On New Year’s Eve, my whole family made dumplings together. My grandma patiently showed me how to wrap them. Although my first ones looked messy, everyone praised my efforts.
While eating, I felt something hard in my dumpling. To my surprise, I found a coin inside! My parents cheered, saying I’d have good luck. We laughed and shared stories, filling the room with warmth.
This memory reminds me that Spring Festival is all about family love and happiness. It’s the best time of the year!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,按题目讲述自己的春节故事。
第二步,叙述从这个春节故事中有什么感受。
[亮点词汇]
①how to do 如何做
②to my surprise 令我惊讶的是
③fill with 填满
[高分句型]
①Although my first ones looked messy, everyone praised my efforts.(Although引导的让步状语从句)
②This memory reminds me that Spring Festival is all about family love and happiness.(that引导的宾语从句)
10.守护心灵的阳光,让健康伴我们成长。现在你校英语报征集以Healthy Mind, Shining Kind为主题的故事集。请你写一篇不少于80词的短文投稿。
要求:
(1) 讲述你一个友善待人的温暖故事;
(2) 表达你对健康的感悟;
(3) 适当增加细节,行文连贯;
(4) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】例文
Healthy Mind, Shining Kind True health encompasses not only physical fitness but also a warm-hearted and helpful attitude.
Last week, I encountered a classmate named Tom who was struggling with a difficult math problem. Knowing how frustrating it could be to be stuck, I decided to offer help. I sat beside him and patiently explained the concepts step by step, using examples that I thought would make it easier for him to understand. As we worked through the problem together, his confused expression gradually faded away.
Through this experience, I realized that a healthy mind is closely linked to kindness. When we reach out to others with a helping hand, we not only assist them in solving problems but also build a positive connection. Each act of kindness is like a ray of sunshine, brightening both our own and others’ days. I firmly believe that if we all embrace kindness, our school and our lives will be filled with more love and warmth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本题是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文用一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:讲述自己友善待人的温暖故事,表达自己对健康的感悟,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,指出健康不仅包含身体,还包括心灵,引出下文;
第二步,讲述自己友善待人的温暖故事,注意用词准确,行文流畅;
第三步,阐述自己对健康的感悟,注意细节充分,三观正确。
[亮点词汇]
①not only… but also… 不但……而且……
②struggle with… 与……斗争
③step by step 一步步地
[高分句型]
①Last week, I encountered a classmate named Tom who was struggling with a difficult math problem.(定语从句)
②When we reach out to others with a helping hand, we not only assist them in solving problems but also build a positive connection.(时间状语从句)
11.兴趣是最好的老师,太多的人因为兴趣而成功,太多的伟大因为兴趣而诞生。某英文报刊计划刊发“兴趣”主题学生英语习作,现征集稿件。请用英文写一篇不少于80词的短文投稿。
要求:1.讲述一段关于你某一兴趣的故事,并写出你的感受;
2.语句通顺;层次清晰,书写规范,卷面整洁;
3.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名或校名。
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【答案】例文
When I was eight, I developed a strong interest in painting. At first, it was challenging to draw straight lines. I practiced every day after school, copying cartoon characters from books. Once I spent three days drawing a panda, but its eyes looked strange. My art teacher showed me how to use shading techniques. Gradually, my skills improved.
Last month, my painting of sunset clouds won first prize in our school competition. This experience taught me that interest is the best teacher. Even when I meet difficulties, the joy of creating beautiful pictures keeps me going. Now painting has become my way to relax and express feelings.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:考生应注意不要漏写你的感受,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明你的兴趣是什么;
第二步,讲述一段关于你这一兴趣的故事;
第三步,谈谈你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①develop发展
②technique技巧
③relax放松
[高分句型]
①When I was eight, I developed a strong interest in painting.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②This experience taught me that interest is the best teacher.(that引导的宾语从句)
12.生活中有很多值得我们珍惜的东西,如时间、健康、亲人、生命等。假设你是李华,你们学校正在开展以“珍惜”为主题的征文活动,请结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文投稿。
提示词:cherish (珍惜)
要求;
1. 适当增加情节、行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
The Phone Call I’ll Always Cherish
I used to think studying was my only priority. Every time my grandma called, I’d rush her off the phone: “Busy with homework, talk later!” But “later” never came.
One rainy evening, Mom told me Grandma was in hospital. My heart sank. Rushing to her bedside, I found her weakly smiling, holding an old photo of us. “I just wanted to hear your voice,” she whispered. Tears blurred my eyes as guilt washed over me.
Now, I call Grandma every sunset. We chat about her flowers, my school life, and even silly jokes. Her laughter has become my favorite sound.
This experience taught me: what we take for granted today might become the treasure we chase tomorrow. Let’s cherish every moment with loved ones—before “later” becomes “never”.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主,穿插“一般现在时”表达当前感悟;
③结构:采用“个人经历+情感转变+人生启示”的递进式结构。
[写作步骤]
第一步,用对比手法突出过去对亲情的忽视;
第二步,通过具体事件(奶奶住院)触发情感转折;
第三步,描写行为改变(每日通话)并升华珍惜主题。
[亮点词汇]
①priority 优先事项
②whisper 轻声说
③take for granted 认为理所当然
[高分句型]
①Every time my grandma called, I’d rush her off the phone… (every time引导的时间状语从句)
②What we take for granted today might become the treasure we chase tomorrow. (what引导的主语从句+省略that的定语从句)
13.现在长春博硕学校英语网站正在举办以“Responsibility”为主题的征文活动。请结合自身经历或他人故事,写一篇与责任担当相关的征文,同时谈谈你从中获得的感悟与体会。
要求:
1)不少于80字;
2)文章不得出现真实名字或者学校。
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【答案】例文
Responsibility It’s one of our traditional virtues to be responsible. A responsible person is ready to take on responsibility in critical situations and helps achieve success. As a responsible teenager, I try my best in everything that I am asked to do.
Last term, I joined the English Drama Club. The members were divided into different groups and each group acted out a story. I was asked to play a small role that had no lines. However, I took part in every rehearsal and watched others play attentively. In the end, our performance was a great success, which I knew I had also contributed to.
It’s the sense of responsibility that helps us do our work well. Everyone should try hard to play his own part well no matter how small the part is. Only when everyone does his part well can the whole team improve together and finally achieve success.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,属于话题作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:要求包含所有要点提示,行文时尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述责任的含义;
第二步,阐述关于责任担当的故事;
第三步,阐述自己关于责任的感悟和体会。
[亮点词汇]
①take on responsibility承担责任
②take part in参加
③the sense of responsibility责任感
④contribute to贡献
[高分句型]
①Only when everyone does his part well can the whole team improve together and finally achieve success. (倒装句)
②In the end, our performance was a great success, which I knew I had also contributed to. (定语从句)
14.初中三年是人生中重要的成长阶段。回首初中生活,你收获了什么?是丰富的学识、优秀的学习习惯、还是某种优秀的意志品质、亦或是某种有益的兴趣爱好,还是与人和谐相处的交往能力?请你以“My Growth”为题写一篇英语短文,描述自身经历,讲述你在某一方面的成长,并谈谈你的感受。
要求:
1.语言流畅,层次清晰,内容可以适当发挥;
2.书写规范,卷面整洁;
3.词数不少于80词;
4.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
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【答案】例文
My Growth
In the past three years, I have grown a lot.
I got along well with my classmates. We helped and learned from each other. I also received the Best Student Award. What pleased me the most was that I joined the school basketball team and achieved excellent results for many times. That’s my favorite. On the basketball team, I made some good friends and learned how to work together to play basketball well with others. I also realized that if we wanted to win the game, we should work together and learn from each other.
My growth makes me confident to face future challenges.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以一般过去时为主;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己的成长收获,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,具体描述三年里你的成长收获:赢得最好学生奖;参加学校篮球队并取得好成绩;打篮球时学会团队合作以及这项活动带给你的影响;
第三步,你的感悟——成长给你带来自信。
[亮点词汇]
①get along well with sb.和某人相处良好
②make friends交朋友
③face future challenges面对未来的挑战
[高分句型]
①What pleased me the most was that I joined the school basketball team and achieved excellent results for many times. (what引导的主语从句,that引导的表语从句)
②I also realized that if we wanted to win the game, we should work together and learn from each other. (that引导的宾语从句,if引导的条件状语从句)
15.作为中学生,你一定参加过无数次考试,你是如何解决考试带给你的紧张感的?请结合自己的亲身经历写一篇英语短文。
要求:(1)不得出现真实的学校名称和真实的学生姓名;
(2)语句连贯,不少于80词。
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【答案】例文:
I get very stressed before and during tests, but I have some great ways to manage it.
My best way to deal with it before the test is to eat. It gives energy to my body and it also takes my mind off the test. When I am sitting at my desk and the test is about to begin, I breathe in and out calmly to relax myself. During the test, I try to focus on the test and I will forget how nervous and stressed I am.
By focusing all my attention on my test, the time goes by quickly while I’m working out the questions.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
时态:一般过去时和一般现在时为主;
提示:结合自身经历,阐述如何解决考试带来的紧张感;
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明考试紧张这一现象;
第二步,重点阐述解决考试紧张感的方法;
第三步,收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with 处理
②focus on 专注于
③go by 流逝
[高分句型]
①I get very stressed before and during tests, but I have some great ways to manage it.(but连接表转折关系的并列句)
②When I am sitting at my desk and the test is about to begin, I breathe in and out calmly to relax myself.(when引导时间状语从句)
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