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写作综训04:概要、翻译、作文套餐练(IV)
(满分:50分,推荐用时:60分钟)
Summary Writing
Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Art Gallery Visits
The lasting rainy winter is a season that feels heavy with depression. Luckily, I have a way to escape from the winter blues — visiting art galleries. Engaging with art closely, particularly in winter, is a life enhancer and a relief from loneliness, sadness, and frustration.
When viewing things we find beautiful, activity in the pleasure and reward centres of the brain goes up. So when I don't have the time, or energy to take on challenging new themes in the gallery, I return to the comfort of my favourites: the blue in David Hockney's swimming pool, Agnes Martin's faint, delicate lines, or John Constable's cloudy Brighton summers. The comforting properties of these artworks are best experienced during winter.
And did you know that even on the busiest of days, in the busiest galleries, there is potential for mindfulness? Mindfulness is hard to catch for me — my head feels like a mix of shopping lists, decade-old angers, and random song bits I can't name, but time spent in a gallery is the closest I get to being truly present. Part of this is down to "slow looking”, the practice of taking time to really absorb an artwork rather than giving it a glance, reading the accompanying description, having another quick look and moving on. The experience can be powerful and informative.
Often, I visit galleries alone to gather my thoughts. I just want the company of form, colour, material. But sometimes I'll take my daughter. To me, joy was walking her and watching as her eyes widened in curiosity, tiny fingers pointing: "Do you see what I see?” Telling her: "Yes ... but also no.” That we all see these things in a different way is such an important lesson that reaches into every part of our lives. Remembering that perception is personal is precious for me. This knowledge keeps me in a good state.
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Translation
Directions: Translate the following sentences into English, using the word given in the brackets.
1.但愿在百花齐放的时候,你不是最孱弱的一朵! (How)
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2.玫瑰的香气如此浓郁,弥漫了整个植物园。(So)
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3.这位作家凭借一部脍炙人口的小说斩获文学奖,其创作才华理应得到认可。(credit)
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4.摄影师细致记录了这栋精美的木构建筑,为这份文化遗产的修复提供了重要参考。(provide)
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Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
学校获拨一批专项经费用于对以下一项设施进行修缮更新:1、体育馆;2、图书馆;3、实验室,就此征求学生的意见。假如你是该校学生李华,请写一封信给校长,你的信必须包括:
1. 选择对哪一项进行修缮;
2. 选择的理由;
3. 就如何改进给出建议。
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写作综训04:概要、翻译、作文套餐练(IV)
(满分:50分,推荐用时:60分钟)
Summary Writing
Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Art Gallery Visits
The lasting rainy winter is a season that feels heavy with depression. Luckily, I have a way to escape from the winter blues — visiting art galleries. Engaging with art closely, particularly in winter, is a life enhancer and a relief from loneliness, sadness, and frustration.
When viewing things we find beautiful, activity in the pleasure and reward centres of the brain goes up. So when I don't have the time, or energy to take on challenging new themes in the gallery, I return to the comfort of my favourites: the blue in David Hockney's swimming pool, Agnes Martin's faint, delicate lines, or John Constable's cloudy Brighton summers. The comforting properties of these artworks are best experienced during winter.
And did you know that even on the busiest of days, in the busiest galleries, there is potential for mindfulness? Mindfulness is hard to catch for me — my head feels like a mix of shopping lists, decade-old angers, and random song bits I can't name, but time spent in a gallery is the closest I get to being truly present. Part of this is down to "slow looking”, the practice of taking time to really absorb an artwork rather than giving it a glance, reading the accompanying description, having another quick look and moving on. The experience can be powerful and informative.
Often, I visit galleries alone to gather my thoughts. I just want the company of form, colour, material. But sometimes I'll take my daughter. To me, joy was walking her and watching as her eyes widened in curiosity, tiny fingers pointing: "Do you see what I see?” Telling her: "Yes ... but also no.” That we all see these things in a different way is such an important lesson that reaches into every part of our lives. Remembering that perception is personal is precious for me. This knowledge keeps me in a good state.
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【答案】范文
Visiting art galleries helps me fight against low spirits (in winter). Viewing my favourite exhibits can boost my spirits and provide comfort. Besides, careful appreciation of an artwork enables me to focus on the present and achieve mindfulness. Time spent with art, alone or with others, reminds me that people see things from different perspectives.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说参观艺术画廊有助于对抗冬季的低落情绪。欣赏最喜欢的展品能振奋精神,带来慰藉。此外,仔细品味一件艺术品能专注于当下,达到心无旁骛的状态。无论是独自还是与他人一起与艺术相伴的时光,都提醒人们看待事物的角度各不相同。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①The lasting rainy winter is a season that feels heavy with depression. Luckily, I have a way to escape from the winter blues — visiting art galleries.
②When viewing things we find beautiful, activity in the pleasure and reward centres of the brain goes up.
③And did you know that even on the busiest of days, in the busiest galleries, there is potential for mindfulness?
④Often, I visit galleries alone to gather my thoughts. I just want the company of form, colour, material. But sometimes I’ll take my daughter. That we all see these things in a different way is such an important lesson that reaches into every part of our lives.
2.缜密构思 将第1个要点进行综述,将第2、3、4三个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
Visiting art galleries helps me fight against low spirits (in winter).
Viewing my favourite exhibits can boost my spirits and provide comfort.
Besides, careful appreciation of an artwork enables me to focus on the present and achieve mindfulness.
Time spent with art, alone or with others, reminds me that people see things from different perspectives.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Viewing my favourite exhibits can boost my spirits and provide comfort.运用动名词作主语对原文第二段进行了概括。
[高分句型2] Time spent with art, alone or with others, reminds me that people see things from different perspectives.用that引导宾语从句对最后一段进行了概括,表达非常高级。
Translation
Directions: Translate the following sentences into English, using the word given in the brackets.
1.但愿在百花齐放的时候,你不是最孱弱的一朵! (How)
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【答案】How I wish you would not be the weakest one when all flowers were in full bloom!
【详解】考查how引导的感叹句、宾语从句和时间状语从句。表示“愿你不是最孱弱的一朵”应用宾语从句I wish you would not be the weakest one表示,wish后接的是省略that的宾语从句,从句要用虚拟语气,表示对将来的虚拟,谓语动词应用would(could,might) do的形式;表示“在百花齐放的时候”应用时间状语从句when all flowers were in full bloom表示。本句还涉及how引导的感叹句型“How+主语+谓语!”。故翻译为How I wish you would not be the weakest one when all flowers were in full bloom!
2.玫瑰的香气如此浓郁,弥漫了整个植物园。(So)
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【答案】So strong was the fragrance of the roses that it permeated the entire botanical garden.
【详解】考查固定句型。“玫瑰的香气”表达为the fragrance of the roses;“如此……以至于”表达为so...that...;“浓郁”表达为strong ;“弥漫”表达为permeate;“整个植物园”表达为the entire botanical garden。根据句意可知,“玫瑰的香气如此浓郁”为主句,表达为the fragrance of the roses was so strong;“弥漫了整个植物园”为that引导的结果状语从句,表达为that it permeated the entire botanical garden。且主句可以将so strong放在句首,表达强调,引导倒装句。此句陈述过去发生的事情,故应用一般过去时,故翻译为:So strong was the fragrance of the roses that it permeated the entire botanical garden。
3.这位作家凭借一部脍炙人口的小说斩获文学奖,其创作才华理应得到认可。(credit)
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【答案】This writer, whose creative talent truly deserves credit, won a literary award by virtue of a popular novel.
【详解】考查固定搭配、定语从句。句子处理为主从复合句。主句主语“这位作家”译为this writer,“斩获文学奖”译为win a literary award,结合语境,“获奖”为过去发生的动作,用一般过去时,“凭借”译为by virtue of,“脍炙人口的小说”译为a popular novel。“其创作才华理应得到认可”处理为whose引导非限制性定语从句,修饰this writer,从句主句“创作才华”译为creative talent,“理应得到认可”用固定搭配deserve credit,主语creative talent为不可数名词,谓语动词用第三人称单数形式deserves。因此从句whose creative talent truly deserves credit。故翻译为:This writer, whose creative talent truly deserves credit, won a literary award by virtue of a popular novel.
4.摄影师细致记录了这栋精美的木构建筑,为这份文化遗产的修复提供了重要参考。(provide)
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【答案】The photographer recorded the exquisite wooden structure in detail, providing an important reference for the restoration of this cultural heritage.
【详解】考查名词、动词短语、介词短语、非谓语动词、名词短语和时态。根据句意以及句子提示词可知,表示“摄影师”为名词The photographer;表示“记录了这栋精美的木构建筑”应为动词短语record the exquisite wooden structure;表示“细致地”应为介词短语in detail;后接非谓语动词作状语,表示“提供”的动词provide和逻辑主语和前面整句话为主动关系,所以为现在分词形式providing;表示“修复这一文化遗产的重要参考”应为名词短语an important reference for the restoration of this cultural heritage;结合句意可知,该句应为陈述过去发生的事情,为一般过去时。故翻译为:The photographer recorded the exquisite wooden structure in detail, providing an important reference for the restoration of this cultural heritage.
Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
学校获拨一批专项经费用于对以下一项设施进行修缮更新:1、体育馆;2、图书馆;3、实验室,就此征求学生的意见。假如你是该校学生李华,请写一封信给校长,你的信必须包括:
1. 选择对哪一项进行修缮;
2. 选择的理由;
3. 就如何改进给出建议。
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【答案】Dear President,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to express my opinion on which facility should be renovated with the special funds. In my view, the library should be the first choice.
The library is the knowledge center of our school. It provides us with a wealth of learning resources. However, the current library facilities are relatively old, and the number of books is limited. Renovating the library can create a better learning environment for us. We can have more comfortable reading areas and a larger collection of books.
To make the renovation more successful, I suggest adding some modern facilities, such as e-books and audio-visual materials. At the same time, we can also improve the management of the library to ensure the orderliness and convenience of borrowing books.
Thank you for your attention. I hope my suggestions can be helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生李华的身份给校长写一封信,在体育馆、图书馆、实验室三项设施中选择一项进行修缮更新,并说明选择的理由和给出改进建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
修缮:renovate → repair
提供:provide → offer/supply
确保:ensure → guarantee/make sure
建议:suggestion → proposal
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Renovating the library can create a better learning environment for us.
拓展句:Renovating the library is an initiative that can create a better learning environment for us.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to express my opinion on which facility should be renovated with the special funds. (运用了which引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope my suggestions can be helpful. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
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